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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMEXKPHXFN64FCJ94RGEX81
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Model:
Stealth: Aurora Alpha
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
11.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The night air smelled of damp earth and something sweet, like the aftertaste of honeyed wine left to bloom in a cellar. Aurora Carter slipped the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant over her head, the deep‑crimson gem settling against her collarbone. It
throbbed
faintly, a warm pulse that
seemed to
sync with the rhythm of her own heart, as if the stone recognized the thin veil of the world that stretched before them. She walked between the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove, their bark twisted into grotesque faces that stared down with eyes of moss. The stones were taller than she expected, their tops disappearing into a sky that shifted from the usual London haze to a wash of warm amber, the color of late‑summer wheat under a sun that never quite set. The air here was thicker, as if the atmosphere itself held a breath, waiting. Nyx moved ahead, a silhouette of living shadow that
flickered
between solidity and vapor. When the wind caught the edge of their form, the outline rippled like ink in water, then coalesced into a human‑shaped figure with faintly glowing violet eyes. Their voice, when they spoke, was a whisper carried on the wind, barely louder than the rustle of leaves. “Do you feel it, Rory?” Nyx asked, the name slipping from their lips as if it were a secret they had been keeping for centuries. Aurora’s
eyes narrowed
, the bright blue of her irises catching the amber light. “The veil feels thin,” she replied, her voice steady despite the strange tremor in her chest. “Like a curtain that’s been pulled just enough to see the stage behind it.” Isolde Varga stepped out from behind a stone, her silver hair spilling over her shoulders in a waterfall that caught the moonlight and turned it to frost. Her pale lavender eyes
seemed to
hold a galaxy of hidden truths. She moved without leaving footprints, the grass bending around her as if it were a living thing that recognized her presence. “Time is a river that runs backward here,” Isolde said, her words spilling out in a riddle that felt like a puzzle wrapped in a poem. “You seek the feast that never ends, yet the banquet is but a mirror of your own hunger.” Aurora glanced at the pendant. The faint inner glow of the Heartstone intensified, a soft amber that pulsed in time with the distant hum emanating from the stones. It was a sound she could not name—a low, resonant vibration that
seemed to
come from the stones themselves, as if they
were breathing
. She reached out, fingers brushing the rough surface of a stone. The contact sent a shiver up her arm, a sensation like the first bite of cold water on a hot day. The stone’s surface was warm, contrary to its cold, weathered exterior, and a faint scent of citrus and burnt sugar rose from it, mingling with the earthy perfume of the grove. “Listen,” Nyx whispered, and the wind
seemed to
pause, holding its breath. “The veil is a wall of glass, thin where the sun kisses it, thick where shadows linger.” A low rumble rose from the ground, and the amber sky
flickered
, as if a distant storm was
being swallowed
whole. From the center of the stone circle, a light opened—a tear in the fabric of reality, a ripple of silver and violet that
seemed to
pulse with the heartbeat of another world. The Veil, a shimmering distortion that only those with supernatural sight could see,
wavered
at the edge of the opening. Aurora felt the pendant’s pulse quicken, the warmth spreading through her veins like liquid fire. She could see the faint outline of a realm beyond—a landscape of endless vineyards, orchards heavy with strange fruit, and towering kitchen halls that
seemed to
scrape the
very
heavens. The sky over that place was a deep, bruised violet, and the air carried a scent of spices and sugar that made her mouth water. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the light of the portal, turning it into a halo. “The feast is a promise,” she said, her voice a melodic
echo
. “But the price is a hunger that never sates.” Nyx’s form
flickered
, becoming more solid as they approached the portal. Their violet eyes glowed brighter, and a faint,
echo
ing laugh escaped them, like the sound of wind chimes in a storm. “Do you wish to cross, or merely to watch the banquet from the shadows?” Aurora’s mind raced. She thought of the abusive ex she had fled, of the deli
very
routes that took her through the city’s neon-lit streets, of the night she had received the Heartstone from an unknown benefactor. The pendant
seemed to
hum in agreement, urging her forward. She tightened her grip on the Fae‑forged blade she kept hidden beneath her jacket. The moon‑silver dagger was always cold to the touch, a thin leaf‑shaped weapon that glowed faintly when the moon rose. It was a gift from Isolde, a promise of protection against demons and wards. The blade’s edge caught the amber light, throwing a sliver of silver across the stones. “Remember,” Isolde said, their voice now a soft chant that
seemed to
blend with the rustle of leaves, “the veil is strongest when the sun is low, weakest when the moon is high. Choose your hunger wisely.” Aurora stepped toward the portal, the Heartstone’s pulse now a steady thrum that
resonated
with the rhythm of the portal’s opening. The air grew warmer, the scent of exotic spices intensifying, and the sound of distant laughter—soft, melodic, and
slightly
unsettling—reached her ears. She paused at the threshold, feeling the
weight
of the blade in her hand and the pendant against her skin. The portal’s surface rippled like a pond disturbed by a stone. The amber sky above the grove
seemed to
tilt, casting a golden hue across the stone circle, while the violet sky beyond the portal glowed with an eerie,
otherworldly
light. “Do you feel it?” Nyx asked, now standing beside her, their shadow merging with hers. “The world beyond is a mirror of excess. It will feast on you as you feast on it.” Aurora swallowed, the taste of honeyed wine lingering on her tongue. She thought of the ancient oak standing stones, of the time that moved differently here, of the riddles that Isolde wove like
silk
. She thought of the scar on her left wrist, a crescent-shaped reminder of a childhood accident that had taught her to see beyond the obvious. She lifted the Heartstone, holding it up to the portal. The gem’s crimson glow flared, a
beacon
of warmth that
seemed to
push against the veil’s shimmering distortion. The portal responded, the violet light brightening, the edges of the tear becoming more defined, as if acknowledging her presence. “The veil weakens at the solstice,” Nyx murmured, their voice now a low hum that
seemed to
vibrate through the stones. “Winter’s breath will close it, summer’s heat will open it wider.” Isolde’s eyes, pale lavender,
flickered
with a strange light. “A feast for the gluttonous, a banquet for the brave,” she said, her words a riddle that wrapped around Aurora’s thoughts like ivy. “Will you eat, or will you starve?” Aurora’s hand tightened around the blade, the cold metal a comforting contrast to the heat emanating from the portal. She could feel the
weight
of destiny pressing against her shoulders, a pressure that was both terrifying and exhilarating. She stepped forward, the Heartstone’s pulse matching the rhythm of the portal’s hum. The moment her foot crossed the threshold, a wave of heat washed over her, a rush of flavors—cinnamon, citrus, smoked meat—flooded her senses.
The air was thick with
the perfume of ripe figs and spiced honey, and the distant clatter of silverware and laughter
echo
ed like a
symphony
of indulgence. The ground beneath her feet changed. The stone circle gave way to a floor of polished
marble
, veins of gold running through it like rivers of liquid light. The walls around her
were made
of crystal, each pane reflecting the amber sky above and the violet heavens beyond, creating a
kaleidoscope
of colors that danced with e
very
breath she took. She turned to Nyx, whose shadowy form now
seemed to
merge with the crystal walls, their violet eyes reflecting the
kaleidoscope
. “We are within the realm of Dymas,” Nyx said, their voice a whisper that
resonated
through the
marble
. “The sin of gluttony is a feast that never ends. The Prince Belphegor watches from his throne of sugar‑spun clouds.” Aurora’s
eyes widened
as she saw a banquet laid out on a long table of ebony wood, laden with dishes that defied description—glowing fruits that pulsed like heartbeats, soups that steamed with colors that shifted from emerald to ruby, pastries that
seemed to
melt into the air before she could taste them. The table stretched beyond the horizon, an endless spread that beckoned with promises of satisfaction and danger. Isolde stepped closer, her silver hair catching the crystal light, turning it into a cascade of moonbeams. “The feast is a test,” she said, her words a soft chant. “What you take will define you. What you leave behind will haunt you.” Aurora felt the blade in her hand vibrate, the moon‑silver edge humming with a low, resonant tone. The Heartstone’s warmth seeped into her palm, a steady beat that
seemed to
echo
the pulse of the realm itself. She could feel the ancient magic of the Fae Courts intertwining with the gluttonous energy of Hel, a delicate balance that threatened to tip at any moment. She took a cautious step toward the table, the
marble
under her boots cool and smooth. The scent of roasted figs and caramelized amber filled her nostrils, making her stomach
lurch
with a mix of hunger and dread. She reached out, her fingers brushing a silver goblet that held a liquid that
shimmered
like liquid sunrise. “Do not drink,” Nyx warned, their voice now a low warning that
seemed to
vibrate through the crystal walls. “The drink will bind you to this place, make you a part of the feast.” Aurora hesitated, the pendant’s pulse quickening as if urging her forward. She thought of the scar on her wrist, a crescent that had once marked a childhood accident, now a symbol of resilience. She thought of the deli
very
routes she had once taken, the streets of London that felt like a maze of shadows. She thought of the promise she had made to herself—to never be a victim again. She lifted the goblet, the liquid within swirling like a storm. The amber light of the sky above reflected off its surface, casting a golden hue across her face. She could see the faint outline of Prince Belphegor in the distance, a figure cloaked in sugar and spice, his eyes
glinting
with a hunger that matched the realm’s. She set the goblet down, the liquid spilling onto the
marble
, where it sizzled and evaporated into a fine mist that rose like a veil of smoke. The mist coalesced into shapes—faces of those who had once feasted here, their eyes pleading, their mouths silent. Isolde’s voice rose, a melodic chant that
seemed to
weave through the mist. “The veil is thin, the feast is a trap. The heart that beats within you is the key to the gate.” Nyx stepped closer, their shadowy form now solid enough to touch the
marble
. “The Heartstone will guide you,” they said, their violet eyes fixed on Aurora. “But the blade will cut the ties that bind you.” Aurora felt a surge of resolve. She drew the Fae‑forged blade, the moon‑silver edge catching the crystal light and scattering shards of rainbow across the hall. The blade sang, a soft, resonant tone that
seemed to
cut through the
very
air. She pressed the blade against the
marble
, and a line of light traced across the floor, carving a path that led away from the banquet table toward a darker corner of the realm. The pendant’s glow intensified, a deep crimson that pulsed like a heart. The veil at the edge of the portal
shimmered
, the amber sky above the grove flickering as if a wind were stirring. The distant laughter of the feast grew fainter, replaced by a low, throbbing rhythm that
seemed to
echo
the pulse of the Heartstone. Isolde’s
eyes narrowed
, the pale lavender now flashing with an inner fire. “The banquet is a mirror,” she said, her voice a riddle wrapped in a whisper. “What you see is what you become. Do you feast on your fears, or do you starve them?” Aurora looked at the blade, the pendant, the crystal walls, the endless spread of food that beckoned with promises of satisfaction. She thought of the scar on her wrist, a crescent that had once marked a childhood accident, now a symbol of resilience. She thought of the deli
very
routes she had once taken, the streets of London that felt like a maze of shadows. She thought of the promise she had made to herself—to never be a victim again. She turned to Nyx, whose violet eyes softened. “We must leave,” she said, her voice steady. “The feast is a trap, but the veil is our way out.” Nyx nodded, their shadowy form beginning to dissolve into a mist that swirled around Aurora’s feet. The mist rose, forming a vortex that pulled at the edges of the
marble
floor, drawing the crystal walls inward, as if the realm itself
were collapsing
around them. Isolde raised her hand, the silver hair catching the light, and whispered a chant that
resonated
through the
marble
. “The veil will close, the feast will end. The heart that beats within you will guide you home.” The Heartstone’s pulse reached a crescendo, a bright crimson flare that illuminated the entire hall. The portal at the center of the stone circle in the Grove, the amber sky above the grove flickering as if a wind were stirring. The distant laughter of the feast grew fainter, replaced by a low, throbbing rhythm that
seemed to
echo
the pulse of the Heartstone. Aurora stepped toward the portal, the blade in her hand humming with a cold, sharp note that cut through the lingering incense of the feast. The crystal walls crumbled, shards of light scattering like fireflies in the night. The
marble
floor beneath her feet gave way to a soft, mossy ground, the scent of wildflowers blooming year‑round filling her nostrils. She reached the threshold, the portal’s surface rippling like a pond disturbed by a stone. The amber sky above the grove
seemed to
tilt, casting a golden hue across the stone circle, while the violet sky beyond the portal glowed with an eerie,
otherworldly
light. She turned one last time, catching a glimpse of Nyx’s shadow merging with the mist, and Isolde’s silver hair catching the last of the crystal light before it vanished. The Heartstone’s glow softened, a warm pulse that steadied her breath. Aurora stepped through, the portal swallowing her whole, the warmth of the Heartstone enveloping her as the veil sealed behind her. The world she emerged into was the familiar streets of London, the neon signs of Yu‑Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress flickering in the distance, the hum of traffic a comforting lullaby. She felt the
weight
of the blade at her side, cold and steady, and the pendant against her chest, its crimson glow now a gentle ember. She looked up at the sky, the amber light of Dymas replaced by the grey clouds of a London night. The scent of wildflowers lingered on her skin, a reminder of the hidden grove that existed between realms. She smiled, the scar on her left wrist catching the streetlamp’s light, a crescent moon that had once marked a childhood accident, now a symbol of resilience. She walked home, the rhythm of her steps matching the pulse of the Heartstone, and the
echo
of Isolde’s riddles whispered in her mind: “The feast is a mirror, the hunger is a test.” She knew the world beyond the veil was still out there, waiting, and she would be ready. The blade in her hand, the pendant at her throat, and the shadows that followed her—Nyx—were her companions on a path that stretched beyond the ordinary, into the realm of wonder and unease, where e
very
step was a disco
very
and e
very
breath a promise.
created_at
"2026-02-17T00:10:18.619119+00:00"
2/17/2026, 12:10:18 AM
model
"openrouter/aurora-alpha"
app_id
182717
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(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
2501
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
11135
tokens_prompt
1590
tokens_completion
4123
native_tokens_prompt
1471
native_tokens_completion
3324
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0
router
(null)
provider_responses
(null)
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771287006-FTjxhe2VGD5oxtZv0HA3"
upstream_id
"gen-1771287006-FTjxhe2VGD5oxtZv0HA3"
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0
cache_discount
(null)
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0
provider_name
"Stealth"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
88.8889%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
15
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Isolde said, her words spilling out in a riddle that felt like a puzzle wrapped in a poem [like]"
1
"she said, her words a riddle that wrapped around Aurora’s thoughts like ivy [around]"
89.1697%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
2770
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
2
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
2770
totalAiIsms
39
found
0
word
"symphony"
count
1
1
word
"beacon"
count
1
2
word
"lurch"
count
1
3
word
"throbbed"
count
1
4
word
"resonated"
count
3
5
word
"flickered"
count
4
6
word
"shimmered"
count
2
7
word
"glinting"
count
1
8
word
"wavered"
count
1
9
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
10
word
"silk"
count
1
11
word
"marble"
count
9
12
word
"weight"
count
3
13
word
"echo"
count
5
14
word
"echoed"
count
1
15
word
"echoing"
count
1
16
word
"kaleidoscope"
count
2
highlights
0
"symphony"
1
"beacon"
2
"lurch"
3
"throbbed"
4
"resonated"
5
"flickered"
6
"shimmered"
7
"glinting"
8
"wavered"
9
"otherworldly"
10
"silk"
11
"marble"
12
"weight"
13
"echo"
14
"echoed"
15
"echoing"
16
"kaleidoscope"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
4
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
3
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"eyes widened"
2
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
125
matches
(empty)
82.6087%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
20
narrationSentences
125
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
141
matches
(empty)
41.8213%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
52
mean
52.98
std
15.7
cv
0.296
sampleLengths
0
74
1
80
2
60
3
25
4
43
5
60
6
44
7
52
8
63
9
29
10
73
11
70
12
38
13
46
14
46
15
63
16
37
17
43
18
61
19
33
20
59
21
48
22
32
23
39
24
38
25
63
26
60
27
59
28
69
29
42
30
64
31
56
32
34
33
69
34
58
35
45
36
34
37
36
38
74
39
57
40
45
41
79
42
28
43
45
44
37
45
63
46
60
47
45
48
40
49
77
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
125
matches
0
"being swallowed"
1
"were made"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
366
matches
0
"were breathing"
1
"were collapsing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2434
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
48
adverbRatio
0.01972062448644207
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.0036976170912078883
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
141
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
141
mean
19.54
std
8.12
cv
0.416
sampleLengths
0
22
1
20
2
32
3
28
4
38
5
14
6
14
7
27
8
19
9
25
10
13
11
16
12
14
13
27
14
12
15
21
16
26
17
18
18
5
19
23
20
24
21
11
22
21
23
31
24
12
25
17
26
21
27
32
28
20
29
15
30
30
31
25
32
17
33
12
34
9
35
11
36
21
37
14
38
3
39
33
40
10
41
14
42
20
43
14
44
15
45
37
46
21
47
22
48
20
49
11
30.1418%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
28
diversityRatio
0.15602836879432624
totalSentences
141
uniqueOpeners
22
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
15
fancyCount
10
fancyTags
0
"Isolde said, her words spilling out in a riddle that felt like a puzzle wrapped in a poem (say, spill out feel like wrap)"
1
"Nyx whispered, and the wind seemed to pause, holding its breath (whisper, seem pause, hold)"
2
"she said, her voice a melodic echo (say, voice)"
3
"Isolde said, their voice now a soft chant that seemed to blend with the rustle of leaves (say, seem blend)"
4
"Nyx murmured, their voice now a low hum that seemed to vibrate through the stones (murmur, seem vibrate)"
5
"she said, her words a riddle that wrapped around Aurora’s thoughts like ivy (say, wrap around)"
6
"Nyx said, their voice a whisper that resonated through the marble (say, resonate)"
7
"Nyx warned, their voice now a low warning that seemed to vibrate through the crystal walls (warn, seem vibrate)"
8
"they said, their violet eyes fixed on Aurora (say, eyes fixed)"
9
"she said, her voice a riddle wrapped in a whisper (say, voice wrap)"
74.9586%