Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMEY2YXYWW4QRAXYPFJ066F

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Duration:
13.7s
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$0.000000
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones of Soho, turning the neon glow of The Raven’s Nest sign into a smeared watercolor of green and amber. Detective Harlow Quinn pulled the collar of her coat tighter, the leather strap of her watch creaking against her left wrist as she stalked the slick pavement. The city’s night was a chorus of splashing tires, distant sirens, and the occasional clatter of a stray cat seeking shelter. Her eyes—brown, sharp, unblinking—scanned the shadows, each footfall measured with the precision of a soldier. She had learned to trust the rhythm of her own heartbeat more than the unreliable pulse of the city. The suspect—a lanky figure in a rain‑soaked hoodie—had slipped past the doorway of The Raven’s Nest just minutes before, clutching a small, silver token that glinted like a promise in the gutter. Quinn had seen him at the bar’s back entrance, his hand trembling as he slipped the token into a hidden compartment behind a bookshelf. The bar’s green neon sign flickered above the entrance, casting an eerie halo over the wet street. Inside, the dim light fell on walls plastered with old maps and black‑and‑white photographs, each one a silent witness to forgotten wars and whispered conspiracies. She had entered the bar only to find the place empty, the usual hum of conversation replaced by the low crackle of a jukebox playing a mournful jazz standard. The bartender—a gaunt man with a scar across his cheek—had turned his back, polishing glasses with a rag that had seen better days. Quinn’s gaze fell on a small wooden shelf, the edge of a book protruding just enough to hint at a concealed doorway. She knew the secret back room; it was a place where the city’s underbelly met its most discreet patrons. The token she had seen was a key, a silent invitation to a world she had never been allowed to see. Her breath fogged in the cold air as she stepped back onto the street, the rain now a relentless drum against her coat. The suspect was already a distance away, his silhouette swallowed by the maze of alleys that criss‑crossed Soho. Quinn’s mind flashed to DS Morris, her partner whose life had been ripped away three years ago under circumstances that still haunted her—an inexplicable darkness that seemed to seep from the very stones of the city. She could still hear the echo of his laugh, the way his eyes had lit up when they cracked a case together. That memory, sharp and painful, drove her forward. She followed the suspect’s erratic path, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the city’s neon veins. The rain turned the streets into a mirror, distorting the familiar and making every shadow a potential threat. She kept her hand on the grip of her service pistol, though she knew she would not fire unless forced. Her other hand brushed the worn leather strap of her watch, the small tick a reminder that time was both ally and enemy. The suspect darted into a narrow lane between a laundromat and a shuttered storefront. The alley was a canyon of damp brick, the walls slick with rain and graffiti that glowed faintly under the streetlights. Quinn’s eyes narrowed; she could hear the faint hiss of a pipe, the metallic scent of rain‑mixed oil. She pressed forward, each step deliberate, her mind cataloguing possible exits. The alley opened into a small courtyard, its stone floor broken by a manhole cover half‑buried under a mound of leaves. A faint, otherworldly hum rose from the darkness beyond the manhole, a low vibration that seemed to vibrate the very air. Quinn’s pulse quickened. The token she’d seen earlier was known to be a bone token—an artifact used to gain entry to the Veil Market, a hidden supernatural bazaar that surfaced only under the full moon in an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. She had heard whispers of it during late‑night interrogations, rumors that the market dealt in enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information that could topple governments. It was a place where the ordinary law could not reach, and where the supernatural thrummed like a living thing. The suspect hesitated, his shoulders slumping as if the weight of the token pressed against his chest. He glanced back, eyes darting to the darkness behind Quinn, then slipped his hand into the manhole cover, prying it open with a grunt. A cold draft escaped, carrying the scent of damp earth and something metallic, like blood. The manhole gave way to a spiral of stairs descending into the bow under the city. Quinn’s mind raced. She could call for backup, could retreat to the safety of the street, could file a report and let the bureaucracy handle whatever lay below. But the image of Morris’s lifeless eyes haunted her—a reminder that the supernatural had already claimed a life she cared for. The token was a clue, a thread that could unravel a web of crime that stretched far beyond a simple robbery. She could feel the pull of duty, the echo of her military training that taught her to move forward, to seize the moment. She glanced around the courtyard, noting the faint glint of a silver chain dangling from a lamppost—a possible weapon, a possible clue. She heard a soft rustle, a faint whisper that seemed to come from the shadows. The suspect’s voice, low and ragged, called out, “You shouldn’t be here, Detective. It’s not your world.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. She could feel the weight of her leather watch against her wrist, the worn strap a reminder of the countless hours she’d spent watching the city’s pulse. She stepped closer to the manhole, her boots splashing through the puddles that now seemed to pool like ink. The rain fell harder, as if the sky itself wanted to wash away the secrets hidden beneath. “Give it up,” she said, voice low, the words cutting through the rain. “You’re not going to slip away this time.” The suspect laughed, a short, bitter sound that bounced off the brick walls. “You think you can control what you don’t understand, Quinn? The market isn’t a place for police. It’s a sanctuary for those who have no other choice.” She could see the scar on his left forearm, a jagged line that caught the light as he moved. It reminded her of the countless injuries she’d seen in the line of duty, the physical marks that told stories louder than any report. She remembered the night she’d lost Morris, how the city had swallowed him whole, leaving behind only whispers and an unfilled badge. She could not let another loss happen because of fear. She lifted her hand, feeling the cool metal of her pistol, then lowered it, choosing instead to rely on the instincts that had kept her alive for eighteen years. The manhole’s darkness seemed to pulse, an invitation and a warning. She took a breath, the rain filling her lungs with cold, metallic air, and made her decision. She slipped into the manhole, the iron cover clanging shut behind her. The stairs were slick, each step echoing in the hollow space. The air grew colder, the smell of damp earth replaced by a faint perfume of incense and ozone. The hum grew louder, a low frequency that seemed to resonate in her bones. She could feel the presence of something ancient, something that had survived the city’s relentless modernization. At the bottom, the stairs opened into a cavernous chamber lit by phosphorescent fungi that painted the walls in shades of violet and green. The floor was a maze of stalls, each draped with fabrics that shimmered like liquid moonlight. Vendors—human, hybrid, and things that defied easy description—peddled wares that glowed, hissed, or whispered. A stall in the corner displayed a collection of bone tokens, each etched with sigils that pulsed faintly. Quinn’s eyes adjusted, taking in the scene. A figure stepped out from behind a curtain of black silk. He was a man in his late twenties, olive skin glistening with rain, a Saint Christopher medallion hanging around his neck. His hair was short, curly, dark brown, and a scar traced his left forearm, a reminder of a knife attack he had survived. He held a syringe in one hand, the barrel filled with a liquid that shimmered like liquid mercury. “Tomás,” she said, recognizing the paramedic she’d met at The Raven’s Nest weeks ago, the one who had offered off‑the‑books medical care to the clique. He had a reputation for treating supernatural injuries, his license revoked after he administered unauthorized treatments. He was a man who walked the line between the mundane and the uncanny. Tomás’s eyes widened, warm brown and flickering with a mix of surprise and caution. “Detective Quinn,” he replied, his voice low, “I didn’t expect to see you here. This isn’t a place for police.” She stepped forward, the rain still dripping from her coat, forming small rivulets that ran down the stone floor. “I’m not here for the market’s curiosities,” she said. “I’m after a man who’s using this place to move contraband. He’s got a token that could… that could be dangerous.” Tomás glanced toward the back of the chamber where a figure in a dark cloak slipped away, the silhouette disappearing into a doorway that seemed to shift like a mirage. He lowered his syringe, the liquid inside sloshing softly. “You’re in over your head, Harlow,” he warned. “The market isn’t just about illegal goods. It’s about power. The things that buy and sell there… they’re not human.” Quinn’s jaw set. She could feel the weight of her watch, the worn leather strap a reminder of the time she’d spent chasing shadows in the city’s underbelly. She thought of Morris, of the night his life had been taken by something she couldn’t name. She thought of the countless victims she’d seen, the people who looked to her for protection. She could not turn away now. “Then help me,” she said, the words sharp as a blade. “You know the layout. You know the people. I need to find that man before he disappears again.” Tomás hesitated, his eyes flickering to the stalls where a vendor sold vials of liquid that glowed like captured starlight. He seemed to weigh his options, the scar on his forearm catching the dim light. “You can’t just walk in and take what you want,” he said. “The market has its own rules. If you break them, you’ll be… consumed.” Quinn’s hand brushed the leather strap of her watch, feeling the familiar pressure. She could hear the rain above, the city’s heartbeat, the distant wail of a siren. She could feel the pulse of the underground, a rhythm that matched her own. She had spent years learning to read people, to anticipate moves before they happened. She had learned to trust her instincts, even when they led her into darkness. She stepped closer to Tomás, her voice low. “I’m not here to break rules. I’m here to stop a threat. If you help me, I’ll make sure the market’s secrets stay hidden from the police. I’ll keep my end of the bargain.” Tomás’s eyes softened for a moment, the medallion around his neck catching a stray glimmer of light. He seemed to recall the countless nights he’d spent patching up injuries in back alleys, the way the city had turned its back on those who needed help. He thought of the patients he’d treated—people whose wounds were not just flesh but something deeper, something that ailed beyond the scope of ordinary medicine. “Fine,” he said, his voice a whisper that barely rose above the hum of the market. “But you follow my lead. And you stay out of the back rooms. Those are off‑limits.” Quinn nodded, her eyes scanning the room. She could see a narrow passage behind a curtain of velvet, a door that seemed to pulse with a faint blue light. She could also see a figure in a dark cloak, the same one she’d glimpsed earlier, moving toward a stall where a vendor displayed a collection of bone tokens. The suspect’s hand lingered over a token that matched the one she’d seen at The Raven’s Nest—a silver disc etched with a sigil that glowed faintly. She moved with purpose, her steps echoing against the stone floor. The rain outside seemed a a distant memory, replaced by the hushed murmurs of the market’s patrons. She could feel the weight of her pistol at her side, though she kept it hidden beneath her coat. Her mind catalogued each detail—the scent of incense, the flicker of neon, the cold steel of the token, the scar on Tomás’s forearm. “Detective,” Tomás murmured, guiding her toward a stall where a woman with eyes like polished amber sold vials of black liquid. “That token is a key. It opens the secret back room in The Raven’s Nest. It also grants access to the Veil Market. But it’s not just a key; it’s a beacon. It draws the market’s attention. If you take it, you’ll be marked.” Quinn’s eyes narrowed. She could feel the weight of the decision pressing down on her like the rain on the city’s roofs. She could retreat, file a report, let the market’s mysteries remain hidden. She could stay above ground, let the suspect slip away, and risk another unsolved case. Or she could plunge deeper, into a world where the rules she’d lived by no longer applied. She thought of Morris, of the night he’d vanished, the strange lights that had flickered in the alley, the whisper of something unseen that seemed to pull at the edges of reality. She remembered the way his hand had brushed hers, the promise they’d made to protect the city, no matter the cost. She could not let his death be in vain. She turned to Tomás, her voice steady. “Give me the token. I’ll go to the back room. I’ll find out who’s pulling the strings. And I’ll bring them to justice.” Tomás hesitated, his eyes flickering to the figure in the dark cloak, who now stood at the edge of the market, his silhouette merging with the shadows. He reached into his pocket, pulling out a small, polished bone token, its surface etched with the same sigil. He handed it to Quinn, his fingers brushing hers for a brief instant. “Be careful,” he warned, his voice barely audible over the market’s hum. “The market doesn’t forget. It remembers.” Quinn took the token, feeling its cold weight against her palm. The rain outside seemed to pulse in her ears, a reminder that the city was still there, still alive, still dangerous. She slipped the token into the pocket of her coat, the leather strap of her watch tightening against her wrist, as if the watch itself were urging her forward. She turned toward the back room of The Raven’s Nest, the secret doorway hidden behind a bookshelf of old maps. The market’s hum faded behind her, replaced by the echo of her own footsteps. The rain outside intensified, a torrent that hammered the city’s veins, but she felt a strange calm settle over her. She was no longer just a detective chasing a suspect; she was a hunter entering a lair of shadows, a woman who had learned to trust her instincts even when the world turned strange. She stepped through the hidden doorway, the bookshelf swinging open on a creak that sounded like a sigh. The back room was dim, lit by a single lamp that cast a warm amber glow over a table cluttered with papers, a glass of whiskey, and a small, leather‑bound notebook. A man in a dark coat sat at the table, his back to the door, a cigarette smoldering between his fingers. He turned, his face obscured by shadows, but his eyes—cold, calculating—met hers. Quinn’s breath caught. The man’s gaze seemed to pierce through her, as if he could see the weight of her past, the loss of her partner, the scars she carried. He smiled, a thin, unsettling grin. “You’ve come far, Detective,” he said, his voice low and smooth. “But you’re still in the dark.” She stepped forward, the rain still drumming against the walls of the hidden room, a reminder that the city’s storm raged beyond these walls. “I’m here for the token,” she said, her voice steady. “And for the truth.” He raised a hand, the cigarette ash falling onto the polished wood. “The token is just the beginning,” he replied. “The Veil Market is a place where the ordinary meets the extraordinary. You think you can walk in with a badge and a gun and expect to control it? You’re out of your depth.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. She could feel the weight of her watch, the worn leather strap a reminder of the time she’d spent chasing shadows. She could feel the pulse of the city above, the rain, the neon, the sirens. She could feel the echo of Morris’s voice, a whisper that urged her on. “I’m not here to control,” she said, her voice a blade. “I’m here to stop whatever you’re doing. And I won’t leave until I’ve done it.” The man chuckled, a sound that seemed to echo off the walls of the hidden room. “Very well, Detective. Let’s see if you can survive the Veil.” He stood, the candlelight flickering across his face, revealing a scar that ran from his cheek to his jaw—a mirror of the one on Tomás’s forearm. He turned toward the bookshelf, pulling a hidden lever that revealed a narrow stairwell descending into darkness. Quinn followed, her boots echoing on the stone steps. The air grew colder, the scent of rain replaced by a metallic tang that seemed to cling to her skin. The stairs opened into a cavernous underground chamber, the Veil Market in all its eerie splendor. The neon green sign of The Raven’s Nest was nowhere to be seen; instead, the market was lit by phosphorescent fungi and lanterns that floated like fireflies. She could see stalls lined with artifacts—crystals that pulsed with inner light, bottles of liquid that swirled with colors she could not name, and a table where a cloaked figure sold bone tokens, each one etched with sigils that glowed faintly. The hum of the market was a low, resonant vibration that seemed to seep into her bones. Tomás appeared beside her, his Saint Christopher medallion catching the dim light. He handed her a small vial, its contents a silvery liquid that seemed to swirl on its own. “This will help you see what’s hidden,” he whispered. “But be careful. The market sees everything.” Quinn took the vial, feeling the cool glass against her palm. She could feel the weight of her decision pressing down—whether to step further into this realm of the unknown, whether to risk everything for a case that could finally bring closure to the loss of her partner. The rain above continued to fall, a relentless rhythm that reminded her of the city’s pulse. She lifted the vial, pouring a drop onto her palm. The liquid spread, shimmering, and her vision sharpened. The market’s shadows peeled away like layers of cloth, revealing hidden glyphs etched into the stone, symbols that pulsed with an ancient energy. She could see the outline of a figure moving behind a stall—a figure that matched the description of the suspect she’d chased through the rain. She turned, her eyes locking onto the silhouette. The suspect was a man with a scar on his forearm, the same scar she’d seen on Tomás, but his face was hidden beneath a hood. He clutched a small, silver token, the same one she’d seen at The Raven’s Nest. He turned, his eyes meeting hers, and for a moment, the world seemed to hold its breath. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice a low rasp. “You’ve come far. But the Veil is not a place for mortals. You’ll be consumed.” Quinn’s hand tightened around the token she’d taken from the hidden room, the cold metal biting into her palm. She could feel the rain’s echo in the underground, the city’s heartbeat still pulsing above. She could feel the weight of her watch, the leather strap a reminder of the time she’d spent chasing shadows. She could feel the ghost of Morris, his presence a silent urging. She stepped forward, the rain’s rhythm echoing in her ears, and whispered, “I’m not afraid of the dark. I’m afraid of the things that hide in it.” The suspect’s eyes flickered, a flash of something ancient and powerful. He raised his hand, the token glowing brighter, and the market’s hum rose to a deafening crescendo. The air rippled, and for a heartbeat, the world seemed to tilt. Quinn felt a surge of energy, a pulse that resonated with the token in her hand. She could see the silhouettes of the market’s patrons—creatures of shadow and light—watching, waiting. She could feel the weight of her decision, the line between law and chaos blurring. She could hear the rain outside, a reminder that the city still existed, still needed her. She took a breath, the cool air of the underground filling her lungs, and made her choice. She would not retreat. She would not let the market’s darkness swallow another life. She would chase the truth, even if it meant stepping into the unknown. She lunged, the token in her hand clashing against the suspect’s, and the two objects sparked, sending a flash of light through the cavern. The market’s hum shifted, a chorus of unseen voices rising in a crescendo. The rain above seemed to intensify, as if the city itself was holding its breath. In that instant, Quinn felt the past, present, and future converge. She felt the loss of her partner, the weight of the city’s secrets, the pull of the supernatural that had always lingered at the edge of her world. She felt the resolve of a detective who had spent eighteen years learning to read the city’s pulse, now learning to read the pulse of something far older. She held the token, the silver disc warm against her skin, and whispered, “It ends now.” The market’s shadows recoiled, the hum faded, and the rain outside seemed to wash away the darkness, leaving only the steady beat of a city that never sleeps.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.7018% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said, his voice a whisper that barely rose above the hum of the market [barely]"
1"he warned, his voice barely audible over the market’s hum [barely]"
2"She held the token, the silver disc warm against her skin, and whispered, The market’s shadows recoiled, the hum faded, and the rain outside seemed to wash away the darkness, leaving only the steady beat of a city that never sleeps. [only]"
89.3927% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount3771
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount3771
totalAiIsms46
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"resonated"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count3
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count2
6
word"glistening"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"otherworldly"
count1
9
word"uncanny"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"calculating"
count1
13
word"weight"
count12
14
word"footfall"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
16
word"echo"
count6
17
word"echoing"
count4
18
word"etched"
count5
19
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"sanctuary"
2"resonated"
3"flickered"
4"flicker"
5"shimmered"
6"glistening"
7"glint"
8"otherworldly"
9"uncanny"
10"velvet"
11"silk"
12"calculating"
13"weight"
14"footfall"
15"footsteps"
16"echo"
17"echoing"
18"etched"
19"unravel"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count3
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences194
matches(empty)
84.9395% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount8
hedgeCount22
narrationSentences194
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"try to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences212
matches
0"find that man"
67.5964% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean59.49
std23
cv0.387
sampleLengths
0105
198
2114
3107
478
585
6109
772
893
954
1066
1121
1240
1375
1457
1571
1672
1780
1855
1934
2049
2167
2267
2329
2460
2570
2642
2770
2832
2984
3070
3165
3266
3362
3430
3559
3618
3761
3888
3982
4036
4117
4238
4354
4453
4526
4627
4743
4872
4958
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences194
matches
0"been allowed"
1"been ripped"
2"was known"
3"been taken"
4"was lit"
5"was hidden"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs528
matches
0"were urging"
1"was holding"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3344
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount65
adverbRatio0.019437799043062202
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.005382775119617225
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences212
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences212
mean17.68
std7.83
cv0.443
sampleLengths
023
127
221
315
419
532
624
717
825
929
1023
1122
1219
1321
1423
1518
1636
1722
188
1917
2018
2120
2223
2314
2421
2518
2611
2721
2821
293
3039
3126
3220
3317
3424
3515
3616
373
3825
3921
4021
4123
4222
4315
4417
453
4627
4719
4817
4913
25.4717% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats52
diversityRatio0.12735849056603774
totalSentences212
uniqueOpeners27
43.4211% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"The suspect’s voice, low and ragged, called out, (call out)"
1"she said, voice low, the words cutting through the rain (say, voice cut)"
2"she said, recognizing the paramedic she’d met at The Raven’s Nest weeks ago, the one who had offered off‑the‑books medical care to the clique (say, recognize meet offer)"
3"he warned (warn)"
4"Tomás murmured, guiding her toward a stall where a woman with eyes like polished amber sold vials of black liquid (murmur, guide like sell)"
5"he warned, his voice barely audible over the market’s hum (warn)"
6"she said, her voice a blade (say, voice)"
7"he whispered (whisper)"
8"She stepped forward, the rain’s rhythm echoing in her ears, and whispered, (step echo whisper)"
9"She held the token, the silver disc warm against her skin, and whispered, The market’s shadows recoiled, the hum faded, and the rain outside seemed to wash away the darkness, leaving only the steady beat of a city that never sleeps. (hold whisper, recoil, fade, seem wash away leave only does not never sleep)"
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