Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMF17AFJ76F8H3ZRCK32KNM

Run Details

Duration:
10.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones of Soho, turning the night into a slick mirror that reflected the green flicker of The Raven’s Nest sign. Harlow Quinn moved through the down, her coat pulled tight against the wind, the worn leather watch on her left wrist ticking a measured beat that seemed louder than the thunder rolling overhead. Her brown eyes, sharp as a hawk’s, scanned the street for any sign of the figure she’d been tracking for the past half hour—a lanky man in a trench coat, his shoulders hunched against the storm, clutching something tight in his gloved hand. The city’s neon veins pulsed, a kaleidoscope of colors smeared by the rain, but Quinn’s focus was a laser. She could feel the pulse of the city under her boots, the rhythm of traffic, the distant wail of a siren, and the thrum of something older, something that hummed beneath the surface of ordinary life. She had learned to listen to those undercurrents during the last three years since DS Morris had vanished in a case that left a scar across her own psyche—a case that hinted at forces she could not yet name. The suspect darted into a narrow alley, the rain sluicing down the brick walls, turning the puddles into mirrors that showed a distorted version of the city’s underbelly. Quinn’s boots splashed, the sound a muted thud against the rhythm of the rain. She pressed forward, her mind replaying the details she’d gathered: the man’s gait, the way his coat flapped like a dark flag, the faint scent of incense that seemed to cling to his coat even in the downpour. She reached the entrance of The Raven’s Nest, the green neon sign buzzing above the door, a beacon for the night’s lost souls. The bar’s windows were fogged, the interior a dim glow of amber light spilling onto the rain‑slicked pavement. A low hum of conversation drifted out, punctuated by the occasional clink of glass. The suspect slipped inside, disappearing through the swinging doors as if the rain had opened a portal. Quinn hesitated. The bar was a known haunt for the city’s fringe, a place where the supernatural and the mundane tangled like the vines of a forgotten garden. She could feel the weight of her decision pressing against her ribs—a decision she’d been forced to make countless times since Morris’s death. To follow him here was to step into a world she barely understood, a world where the rules of law enforcement dissolved into whispers and shadows. She pushed the door open, the bell above it jingling like a warning. The interior was a collage of old maps and black‑and‑white photographs, each frame a relic of a different era, each map a reminder of the city’s labyrinthine arteries. The air was thick with the smell of stale beer and something else—an undercurrent of incense and ozone that made the hair on her arms stand up. Quinn’s eyes scanned the room, landing on a bookshelf that ran along the far wall, its spines lined with titles that seemed to belong to a different century. She remembered the rumors: a hidden back room behind those shelves, a place where clandestine meetings were held, where secrets were bar in the weight. She’s let’s stranger’s coat in the with a of the scent of his perfume, the faint metallic tang of blood that clung to his sleeves. She slipped past the bar, her coat flapping, the leather watch clicking against her wrist as she moved. The bartender, a gaunt man with a tattoo of a raven on his forearm, glanced up, his eyes narrowing. “You’re not from around here,” he muttered, voice low, as if afraid the walls might overhear. Quinn’s jaw tightened. “Just looking for a friend,” she replied, her tone flat, the words measured like a gunshot. “He’s got a habit of disappearing into the back.” The bartender’s gaze flicked toward the bookshelf, then back to her. “Back room’s off‑limits. You don’t want to get tangled in that.” He gestured toward the bar’s far end, where the shadows seemed to swallow the light. Quinn’s mind raced. She could turn back, return to the rain‑soaked streets, let the suspect slip away, but the weight of her partner’s unsolved fate pressed on her. She could feel the echo of Morris’s last words—“Don’t trust the shadows”—reverberating in her ears. Yet the case she was on, the clique she suspected of criminal activity, demanded she go deeper. She stepped toward the bookshelf, her fingers brushing the spines, feeling the rough wood under her skin. A faint click sounded, and a section of the shelf swung inward, revealing a narrow passage dimly lit by a single flickering bulb. The air beyond was cooler, carrying the faint scent of damp earth and something metallic, like blood on a blade. She slipped through, the door closing behind her with a soft thud. The passage led to a small room, the walls lined with crates and wooden tables cluttered with odd paraphernalia—vials of amber liquid, talismans etched with runes, and a single, ornate bone token lying on a cracked wooden slab. The token was polished to a sheen, its surface etched with symbols that seemed to pulse with an inner light. Quinn’s breath caught. The token was the entry requirement for the Veil Market, a place whispered about in the darker corners of the city, a market that moved locations each full moon, hidden beneath abandoned Tube stations. She had heard stories—of cursed artifacts, of alchemical substances banned by the Crown, of information sold for a price that could not be measured in coin. She knelt, the rain’s echo,, the token’s coldness seeping into her palm. A low hum resonated, a vibration that seemed to sync with the ticking of her watch. She could feel the pull of the market, the promise of answers, the danger of stepping into a realm where the supernatural held sway. A voice from the shadows startled her. “You shouldn’t be here,” it said, low and steady. She turned, her eyes narrowing as a figure stepped forward—a man with warm brown eyes, short curly dark brown hair, a scar running along his left forearm, and a Saint Christopher medallion hanging around his neck. He wore a leather jacket stained with faint traces of blood and oil, his hands clasped around a small, battered satchel. “It’s not a place for detectives,” he continued, his tone a mix of warning and curiosity. “You’re looking for someone, but you’re walking into a world that doesn’t answer to badge or badge.” Quinn’s mind flashed to the case file on her desk—a file marked with the name of a clandestine clique, a group that had been linked to a series of unexplained disappearances, to whispers of rituals performed in the shadows of the city. She had chased a lead that brought her here, to the back room of The Raven’s Nest, to this hidden passage, and now to the threshold of the Veil Market. She lifted her chin, the rain ticking droplets sliding off her coat, her leather watch ticking in rhythm with her heartbeat. “I’m Detective Harlow Quinn, Metropolitan Police. I’m looking for a man who stole a vial of something… something that could kill.” The man’s eyes flicked to the token, then back to her. “You’re playing with fire, Detective. The market isn’t a place for lawmen. It’s a place for those who understand the cost of what they trade. I’m Tomás Herrera. I’m not here to stop you, but I can’t let you walk in blind.” Quinn’s gaze hardened. “Tomás Herrera, the paramedic turned... whatever you are. I’ve heard your name. You’ve been treating patients the city can’t explain. You’re the one who’s been patching up the wounds of the supernatural.” Tomás gave a thin smile, the scar on his forearm catching the dim light. “I’ve been patching up more than flesh. I’ve seen things that would make a man question his own sanity. The market—” he gestured toward the token—“is a place where the line between the natural and the unnatural is blurred. If you go in, you’ll have to decide what you’re willing to trade for the answers you seek.” Quinn’s thoughts drifted to Morris, to the night his partner vanished, to the strange symbols that had been etched into the walls of an abandoned warehouse where they’d found a ritual circle. She remembered the cold that had seeped into her bones, the whisper that had brushed the back of her neck, the feeling that something unseen had been watching. She had never understood the supernatural, but she could not ignore the pattern that kept emerging—each disappearance, each crime, each whisper of a secret society that seemed to operate beyond the reach of ordinary law. She looked at the token again, the etched symbols now glowing faintly, as if reacting to her presence. The choice loomed: retreat to the rain‑soaked streets, keep the case on the surface, or descend into the underground market, where the answers might be found but at a cost she could not yet measure. She took a breath, the rain’s rhythm echoing in her ears, the ticking of her watch a metronome for her resolve. “I’m not turning back,” she said, her voice low but firm. “If this market holds the key to what’s happening, I’ll find it. Even if it means stepping into a world I don’t understand.” Tomás nodded, his eyes reflecting a mixture of respect and caution. “Very well. The market moves beneath Camden, an abandoned Tube station. You’ll need a token to enter. I can give you one, but it won’t be free. The market demands a price—something personal, something you’re willing to give.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. She thought of the leather watch on her wrist, a relic from her early days on the force, a watch that had survived countless raids, countless arrests. She thought of the badge she wore, the weight of the city’s expectations, the memory of Morris’s laughter, and the emptiness left by his loss. “What do you want?” she asked, the rain’s patter muffled by the thick walls of the back room. Tomás lifted a hand, revealing a small vial of dark liquid, its surface swirling with an iridescent sheen. “Your story,” he said. “Your truth. The market feeds on stories, on secrets. Give me a story you’ve never told anyone, and the token is yours.” Quinn stared at the vial, at the man’s scar, at the token that pulsed like a heartbeat. She thought of the night she had found a note in a dead man’s pocket—a note that read, “The truth is a weapon.” She thought of the countless nights she’d spent chasing shadows, of the sleepless hours haunted by the echo of Morris’s last words. She thought of the price she’d already paid—her trust, her peace, her certainty. She took a breath, feeling the rain’s rhythm in her chest, the ticking of her watch a reminder that time was slipping away. “There was a night,” she began, her voice barely above a whisper, “when I was twenty‑seven, fresh out of the academy. I was on my first patrol, a routine call about a break‑in at a warehouse on the docks. The place was empty, but there was a strange smell—like ozone and old incense. I found a room lit by a single candle, the walls covered in symbols I didn’t recognize. In the center, there was a circle of salt, and in the middle, a small box. I opened it, and inside was a shard of glass that seemed to pulse with an inner light. I didn’t take it. I left, but that night I heard a voice—soft, distant—whisper my name. I never told anyone about that. I never told anyone because I thought it was a hallucination. But that night, I felt something… something that watched me, that followed me home. And I’ve been haunted by it ever since.” Tomás listened, his eyes never leaving hers. When she finished, he placed the vial on the table, the liquid swirling as if acknowledging the weight of her confession. He reached into his satchel and pulled out a small, polished bone token, its surface etched with the same symbols that had glowed in the back room. “Your story is enough,” he said, sliding the token across the table. “Now, if you’re truly willing, you can go down.” Quinn took the token, its coldness seeping into her palm, a reminder of the price she’d paid. She slipped it into her coat pocket, the leather watch ticking louder as if urging her forward. She stood, her coat flapping, her eyes fixed on the narrow passage that led deeper into the darkness. She stepped back into the hallway, the bookshelf swinging shut behind her with a soft thud, the hidden door sealing the secret back room. The rain outside had intensified, the city’s neon lights flickering through the wet streets, casting reflections that seemed to dance like ghosts. She emerged onto a stairwell that descended into the bow of the abandoned Tube station. The air grew colder, the sound of rain replaced by the distant hum of a city that never truly slept. The walls were lined with graffiti, the remnants of old posters, and the occasional flickering bulb that cast eerie shadows. At the bottom, a heavy iron gate stood ajar, a faint glow emanating from beyond. The gate bore an inscription in a language she could not read, but the symbols matched those on the token she now clutched. The gate opened onto a cavernous space, a market that seemed to pulse with life, despite the darkness that surrounded it. The Veil Market stretched out before her, a labyrinth of stalls and tables made from reclaimed wood, metal, and stone. Lanterns hung from the ceiling, their flames dancing with a blue hue that illuminated the faces of the patrons—figures cloaked in shadows, their eyes glinting with curiosity and caution. The air was thick with the scent of incense, of iron, of something sweet and metallic that made her throat tighten. She moved through the market, her boots echoing on the stone floor, her eyes scanning the stalls for any sign of the suspect she’d been chasing. The man in the trench coat was nowhere to be seen, but the market seemed alive, each vendor whispering in hushed tones, each transaction a secret exchanged for a price. She caught sight of a stall draped in black velvet, its proprietor a gaunt woman with silver hair and eyes that seemed to hold a galaxy of stars. On the table lay a small vial of liquid that glowed faintly, the same iridescent sheen as the vial Tomás had shown her. The woman’s voice was a whisper, yet it carried across the market. “Looking for something that can kill or cure?” she asked, her tone both inviting and warning. Quinn’s hand tightened around the token in her pocket. She could feel the weight of her decision pressing against her ribs—the decision to step further into this realm, to confront the unknown, to risk everything for a clue that might bring her closer to the truth about the clique, about the supernatural forces that had taken her partner. She stared at the woman, at the vial, at the crowd of unseen eyes watching her. The rain outside seemed a distant memory, the city’s lights a faint echo. In this underground world, the rules were different; the law was a whisper, and the price of knowledge could be a soul. She inhaled, the scent of incense filling her lungs, the ticking of her watch a steady heartbeat in her ears. She stepped forward, the token in her pocket humming against her thigh, and the market’s shadows seemed to part, revealing a narrow alley that led deeper into the labyrinth. The chase continued, not just through rain‑soaked streets, but through the very fabric of the city’s hidden heart. Quinn’s resolve hardened, her mind a steel blade, her purpose a fire that refused to be doused by rain or darkness. She would follow the suspect, into the Veil Market, into the unknown, because the truth—no matter how terrifying—was a price she was finally willing to pay.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
72.7273% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she replied, her tone flat, the words measured like a gunshot [like]"
1"she began, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
81.6850% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2730
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"truly"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2730
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"resonated"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"clandestine"
count2
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"weight"
count6
9
word"dance"
count1
10
word"dancing"
count1
11
word"echo"
count4
12
word"echoing"
count2
13
word"etched"
count5
14
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"resonated"
2"flicker"
3"flicked"
4"glinting"
5"clandestine"
6"loomed"
7"velvet"
8"weight"
9"dance"
10"dancing"
11"echo"
12"echoing"
13"etched"
14"kaleidoscope"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count2
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
77.7517% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount9
hedgeCount10
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"feeling that something"
81.0125% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean60.27
std26.13
cv0.434
sampleLengths
099
194
280
372
477
568
678
753
828
937
1060
1160
1270
1363
1452
1516
1657
1733
1872
1942
2053
2135
2271
2395
2453
2555
2649
2755
2818
2944
3075
31182
3255
3321
3452
3546
3655
3759
3870
3956
4079
4158
4251
4349
4465
91.2913% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences111
matches
0"were fogged"
1"been forced"
2"were held"
3"was polished"
4"been linked"
5"been etched"
6"were lined"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs339
matches
0"was slipping"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2250
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.012888888888888889
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.0044444444444444444
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean22.6
std16.07
cv0.711
sampleLengths
023
133
243
319
436
539
628
714
838
923
1018
1114
1217
132
1426
1523
1626
1713
1828
1927
2028
2125
2225
2318
2419
2516
263
2716
289
2911
3026
313
3225
3315
3417
3517
3623
3720
3812
3938
4020
413
4234
4326
4412
4516
4624
477
489
4936
30.8333% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.23333333333333334
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners28
38.6364% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he muttered, voice low, as if afraid the walls might overhear (mutter, voice overhear)"
1"she replied, her tone flat, the words measured like a gunshot (reply, measure like)"
2"he continued, his tone a mix of warning and curiosity (continue)"
3"She thought of the night she had found a note in a dead man’s pocket—a note that read, She thought of the countless nights she’d spent chasing shadows, of the sleepless hours haunted by the echo of Morris’s last words. (think find read, think spend chasing haunt)"
4"she began, her voice barely above a whisper (begin)"
5"he said, sliding the token across the table (say, slide)"
80.8198%