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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMF1J7XJPJZKNYT1B3ZDFZS
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Model:
Stealth: Aurora Alpha
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
9.8s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
Detective Harlow Quinn slipped through the iron‑grated doorway of the abandoned Camden tube station as if she
were stepping
into a tomb.
The air was thick with
the metallic tang of rust and the faint, sweet perfume of incense that
seemed to
coil around the cracked tiles. A single
flicker
ing bulb hung from a low ceiling, casting a jaundiced halo over the rows of stalls draped in tarps and stitched‑together canvas. Shadows moved like living things, darting between the silhouettes of crates and broken benches. She checked the time on her worn leather
watch
, the strap frayed at the edges, the face smudged with grime. 02:13 a.m.—the night was deep, and the market
was supposed
to be empty. The Veil Market, a place that materialized only under the full moon, was a rumor among the precinct’s fringe officers, a myth that kept the more superstitious detectives up at night. Quinn had heard the whispers, the rumors of cursed artifacts and black‑market alchemists. She had never believed them—until now. A low murmur rose from a corner where a figure hunched over a wooden table, a brass compass lying open among a pile of cracked vellum. The compass’s casing was a dull green‑black brass, its face
etched
with protective sigils that caught the light in a way that made the metal
look
alive. The needle
quivered
, pointing not north but toward something unseen, a faint shimmer in the darkness that
seemed to
pulse with a rhythm of its own. “Detective Quinn,” a voice called, soft but edged with urgency. Eva Kowalski emerged from behind a stall piled with jars of powdered herbs, her round glasses catching the bulb’s light. The red curls that framed her face fell in a chaotic halo, a few strands already tucked behind her left ear, a habit she repeated whenever she
was nervous
. Her satchel, battered leather and heavy with books, thumped against her thigh as she moved. “Eva,” Quinn said, her voice flat, the tone of someone who had spent two decades learning to keep her emotions in check. She scanned the market, eyes flicking from the stalls to the shadows, noting the way the light fell on the cracked floor, the way the air smelled of ozone and old stone. “You said you’d be here by ten. What’s the situation?” Eva’s
eyes widened
, a
flicker
of panic crossing her freckled face. “There’s a body, Harlow. In the east tunnel, near the old signal box. The… the wound doesn’t make sense.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “What do you mean?” Eva lifted a thin, trembling hand, pointing toward a narrow passageway where a thin veil of mist clung to the walls. “The victim—someone we know. A vendor, I think. He was found with a deep laceration across his chest, but the blood is… it’s not human. And the compass—” She gestured at the brass instrument, the needle still trembling. “It’s pointing toward the tunnel, but it should be pointing toward a rift if there’s any supernatural activity. I think someone’s using it to mislead us.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had seen the compass before, a tool sold at a black‑market stall that claimed to guide the holder to the nearest portal. She had never trusted its claims, but the needle’s movement was undeniable. She slipped her left wrist into the pocket of her coat, feeling the
weight
of the
watch
, the familiar comfort of its tick against her skin. She adjusted the strap, a habit that steadied her thoughts. “Let’s go,” she said, her voice low, the cadence of a soldier’s command. “Show me the body.” They moved through the market’s labyrinthine aisles, the sound of their boots
echo
ing off the stone walls. The market’s patrons—shadowy figures draped in cloaks, their faces hidden—
watch
ed from the periphery, eyes
glint
ing like distant stars. The smell of incense grew stronger, mingling with a metallic scent that made Quinn’s stomach turn. At the end of the tunnel, a thin shaft of light filtered through a broken grating, illuminating a small alcove where a figure lay sprawled on the cold floor. The victim was a man in his thirties, his shirt torn, a deep gash across his sternum. Blood pooled around him, a dark, viscous fluid that
seemed to
absorb the light rather than reflect it. The edges of the wound were clean, too clean for a knife, as if the cut had
been made
by something that knew exactly where to strike. Quinn knelt, her knees sinking into the grime. She pulled a small notebook from her coat, flipping to a fresh page. She noted the victim’s name—Milan Varga, a vendor of rare herbs and occult trinkets, a regular at the market. She brushed a strand of hair from his forehead, feeling the slickness of the blood, the way it clung to his skin like a second coat. “Eva,” she said, her voice
barely above a whisper
, “what do you see?” Eva crouched beside her, the round lenses of her glasses reflecting the dim light. She traced a finger along the wound, her brow
furrowed
. “The incision is precise, almost surgical. And the blood… it’s not human. I ran a quick test with the reagent kit in my satchel. The reaction is… it’s not blood at all. It’s a kind of ectoplasm, a residue from a non‑corporeal entity.” Quinn’s
eyes narrowed
. “Ectoplasm? You think this is… a ghost?” Eva shook her head, her hair falling behind her ear in a frantic tuck. “Not a ghost. Something that feeds on life, perhaps. The compass—
look
.” She lifted the brass instrument, the needle still quivering. “It’s pointing toward the signal box, but the sigils on its face are meant to repel—” “The compass is a decoy,” Quinn interrupted, her mind already cataloguing possibilities. “Someone wants us to think there’s a portal here, to draw us away from the real target. The victim’s wound is too clean for a human hand. It’s either a blade forged from something supernatural or a manifestation of energy.” She stood, scanning the surroundings. The market’s stalls
were filled
with jars of powdered herbs, talismans, and cursed objects, each one humming with a low, almost imperceptible
resonance
. A stall at the far end displayed a row of bone tokens, each one polished to a glossy sheen. The token required for entry lay on a
velvet
cloth, its surface
etched
with a single rune. “Did you see anyone leave the market after the murder?” Quinn asked, her voice sharp. Eva’s eyes darted to the edge of the alcove, where a figure in a dark coat slipped away, the hem of the coat brushing the floor. “There was a man—tall, with a scar across his left cheek. He was carrying a satchel, similar to yours, but it was… heavier. He vanished into the shadows before I could get a clear
look
.” Quinn’s mind raced through the list of known vendors, the faces she had catalogued over the past years. She had a mental inventory of the market’s regulars—each with a distinct scent, a particular gait. The scar on the cheek was a clue, a mark that could be cross‑referenced with the precinct’s database. She pulled out her phone, its screen
flicker
ing with a low‑light interface. She typed a quick query, searching for any recent reports of a scarred individual in the Camden area. The result was a single entry: a suspect named “R. Hargreaves, known as ‘The Cutter’, a former paramedic turned black‑market enforcer, scar across his left cheek from a botched surgery. He was known to carry a satchel of contraband.” “Eva,” Quinn said, “we need to get that satchel. If it’s heavy, it’s probably full of something… something that could be used to create that wound. And we need to find out why the compass is pointing the wrong way.” Eva nodded, her fingers trembling as she reached into her satchel. She pulled out a small, leather‑bound notebook, the pages filled with cramped handwriting and sketches of sigils. She flipped to a page marked with a red ink. “The Veil Compass—crafted by a Shade artisan. The sigils are meant to protect the bearer from supernatural influence. If someone altered the sigils, the needle could be misdirected. It’s a form of magical interference.” Quinn’s eyes hardened. “Someone tampered with the compass to mislead us. That means they’re aware of our presence. They want us to chase a phantom while they do something else.” She turned her attention back to the body. The victim’s eyes were open, glazed, a faint twitch of his eyelid. A small, copper‑colored amulet lay beside his hand, its surface
etched
with a looping script. Quinn lifted it, feeling a faint vibration against her palm, as if the metal itself
were humming
. “Eva, do you recognize this?” she asked, holding the amulet up to the light. Eva leaned in, her glasses fogging
slightly
. “That’s a binding sigil for a ‘soul‑anchor’. It’s used to tether a spirit to the physical realm. It’s a rare artifact, usually kept in secure vaults. If someone stole it… they could be trying to anchor a spirit to a location, perhaps to use it as a weapon.” Quinn’s mind whirred. A soul‑anchor, a compass, a scarred enforcer—each piece a fragment of a larger puzzle. She felt the
weight
of the case settle on her shoulders, the familiar pressure of a mystery that refused to be solved by brute force alone. She stood, her boots thudding against the stone. “We need to secure the scene. I’ll take the body to the precinct for a full autopsy. Eva, you stay here. Check the stalls for any other compromised items. The compass—if it’s been tampered with, we need to find who did it before they can use it again.” Eva nodded, her fingers still trembling. “I’ll check the satchel. If the enforcer is still here, he might be trying to leave. I’ll set a trap.” Quinn slipped a small, folded piece of paper into her coat pocket—a note to the precinct, a reminder of the bone token, the evidence, the need for a forensic sweep. She stepped back into the market’s main corridor, the air thick with whispers and the faint clink of metal. The market’s patrons turned their heads, their eyes
glint
ing with curiosity and something else—perhaps fear, perhaps something darker. The shadows
seemed to
pulse, as if the
very
walls
were breathing
. Quinn moved with military precision, her steps measured, her gaze never
wavering
. She paused at a stall selling jars of powdered obsidian, the glass bottles catching the dim light, creating tiny prisms that danced across the floor. She lifted a jar, noting the label: “Nightshade Dust – 5g”. She set it down, her mind cataloguing each item, each possible clue. The market was a maze of secrets, each stall a potential trap, each vendor a possible accomplice. She heard a soft rustle behind her, a low chuckle that
seemed to
come from the darkness itself. She turned, her hand instinctively moving to the holster at her hip, though she knew there was no weapon there. The sound was a whisper of a voice, barely audible. “Detective Quinn,” the voice said, dripping with sarcasm, “you think you can solve this with your little
watch
and your pretty notebook?” Quinn’s
eyes narrowed
. She recognized the voice—R. Hargreaves, the Cutter, the scarred enforcer. He stepped into the dim light, his coat billowing, the scar on his cheek catching the faint glow. In his hand, he clutched a satchel that
seemed to
pulse with an inner light. “Mr. Hargreaves,” Quinn said, her voice steady, “you’re under arrest for interference with a crime scene and possession of contraband.” He laughed, a harsh, guttural sound. “You think you can arrest me? This market isn’t yours. It belongs to the Veil, to the shadows that crawl beneath the city. You’re in over your head, detective.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had no backup, no precinct lights, no reinforcement. She had only her wits, her training, and the evidence she’d gathered. She noted the satchel’s
weight
, the faint hum that
resonated
with the amulet she’d found. She glanced at the compass, its needle still trembling, pointing toward the signal box. “Why the compass?” she asked, her tone neutral, “Why point it away from the rift?” The Cutter’s eyes
flickered
, a flash of something beneath the scar—a
glint
of a darker purpose. “Because the rift is a gateway, a doorway for the Veil’s denizens. If you open it, you’ll unleash chaos. I’m protecting the city, in my own way.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “You’re a murderer, Hargreaves. You killed Milan to protect the city?” He shrugged, the motion deliberate. “Milan was a liability. He knew too much about the binding sigils. He could have tipped the balance. The soul‑anchor was his. I took it to keep it from being misused.” Quinn’s eyes
flicked
to the amulet, its script still humming. She felt the pulse of the Veil’s energy, a low thrum that
seemed to
vibrate through the stone. She realized the compass’s needle was not just misdirected—it was
being manipulated
, a
magnetic
field of magic pulling it away from the true rift. She took a step forward, her boots
echo
ing. “You’re wrong. The Veil isn’t a threat. It’s a place of balance. You’re the one who’s tipping it.” The Cutter lunged, his satchel swinging, the
weight
of it sending a shockwave through the air. Quinn ducked, feeling the satchel brush her shoulder, the hum of its contents resonating with the amulet she’d taken. She reached for the satchel, her fingers closing around the strap, and yanked it free. A burst of light erupted from the satchel, a cascade of silver threads that spiraled upward, forming a vortex of
ethereal
energy. The market’s shadows recoiled, the incense smoke swirling into a vortex of its own. The compass’s needle spun wildly, then steadied, pointing directly at the vortex. Quinn’s breath caught. The rift
was opening
, a thin tear in the fabric of reality, a shimmering doorway that pulsed with an
otherworldly
glow. She could see shapes beyond the veil—silhouettes of beings that defied description, their forms shifting like smoke. She turned to Eva, who had been
watch
ing from the edge of the alcove, her glasses reflecting the vortex. “Eva, we need to close this. The soul‑anchor—if we can use it to bind the rift, we can seal it.” Eva’s
eyes widened
, her hand trembling. “The anchor is meant to tether a spirit, not a portal. But perhaps we can reverse its function—use it as a seal.” Quinn nodded, her mind racing. She lifted the amulet, feeling the hum against her palm, and placed it on the edge of the vortex. The sigil glowed brighter, the copper surface turning a deep, molten gold. The vortex shuddered, the
ethereal
shapes within recoiling. She turned back to the Cutter, who was now scrambling, his movements frantic. “You’re too late, Hargreaves. You can’t stop this.” He snarled, lunging again, but Quinn was already moving. She grabbed a nearby stall’s rope, pulling it taut, and used it to fling the compass into the vortex. The brass casing spun, the protective sigils flashing as they collided with the rift’s edge. The needle, now free of any magical interference, pointed directly at the center of the vortex, its tip glowing with a pure, white light. The compass’s energy merged with the amulet’s, a surge of power that rippled through the market. The vortex contracted, the shimmering doorway shrinking, the
ethereal
shapes screaming in a sound that was both a whisper and a howl. The market’s shadows recoiled, retreating into the cracks of the stone. A final burst of light erupted, and then—silence. The rift sealed, the vortex snapping shut as if a lid had
been placed
on a jar. The compass’s needle fell still, pointing north now, its magical interference gone. The amulet’s glow faded, its copper surface returning to its original hue. Quinn stood panting, her heart hammering against her ribs. She
look
ed at the satchel, now empty, its contents scattered across the floor—powders, shards of glass, a single bone token, its surface cracked. She turned to Eva, whose breath came in short, ragged bursts. “Did you get the satchel?” Quinn asked, her voice low. Eva nodded, her eyes wide. “I… I think we stopped whatever was coming through. But there’s still… something else. The market… it’s still here, and the people—” Quinn glanced around, the market now eerily quiet, the stalls empty, the shadows receding. “We need to get out of here. The Veil Market moves with the moon. If we stay, we risk being caught in its next shift.” She turned to the body of Milan Varga, his chest still stained with the dark fluid. She placed a hand on his shoulder, feeling the faint
echo
of his life lingering. “You were a victim of something that wanted to stay hidden. We’ll make sure the city knows what’s out there, but we’ll also keep it hidden enough that it doesn’t cause panic.” Eva placed a gentle hand on Quinn’s arm, the round glasses slipping down her nose. “You always see what others miss, Harlow. You saw the compass, the sigils, the pattern. You’ve saved us all.” Quinn gave a small, almost imperceptible smile, the sharp jawline set in a determined line. “Just doing my job.” She turned, leading Eva toward the exit, the bone token clutched in her hand. The market’s doors creaked open, revealing the dimly lit tunnel that led back to the surface. As they emerged into the cool night air, the full moon hung low over Camden, its silver light casting long shadows across the streets. The city’s sounds—cars passing, distant sirens, the murmur of nightlife—filled the air. The Veil Market, hidden beneath the concrete, would retreat, its secrets buried once more. Quinn’s
watch
ticked, the seconds counting down to a new case, a new mystery. She glanced at the compass, now tucked safely in her coat pocket, its needle steady. She felt the
weight
of the amulet, now sealed in a small leather pouch, its power dormant but not destroyed. She knew the Veil would not stay silent forever, but for now, the city’s streets were safe. She took a deep breath, the cold night air filling her lungs, and walked toward the precinct, the
echo
of the market’s whispers fading behind her. The case was far from over, but the first piece of the puzzle had
been placed
, and Detective Harlow Quinn was ready to follow the trail wherever it led.
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2/17/2026, 12:12:26 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
77.7778%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
1
"Quinn interrupted, her mind already cataloguing possibilities [already]"
90.3413%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
3106
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"barely above a whisper"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
6.6323%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
3106
totalAiIsms
29
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
3
1
word
"resonated"
count
1
2
word
"resonance"
count
1
3
word
"flickered"
count
1
4
word
"flicker"
count
1
5
word
"flicked"
count
1
6
word
"glint"
count
1
7
word
"glinting"
count
2
8
word
"wavering"
count
1
9
word
"quivered"
count
1
10
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
11
word
"velvet"
count
1
12
word
"magnetic"
count
1
13
word
"furrowed"
count
1
14
word
"weight"
count
5
15
word
"echo"
count
2
16
word
"echoing"
count
2
17
word
"etched"
count
3
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"resonated"
2
"resonance"
3
"flickered"
4
"flicker"
5
"flicked"
6
"glint"
7
"glinting"
8
"wavering"
9
"quivered"
10
"otherworldly"
11
"velvet"
12
"magnetic"
13
"furrowed"
14
"weight"
15
"echo"
16
"echoing"
17
"etched"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
5
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
4
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"eyes narrowed"
2
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
155
matches
0
"was nervous"
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
3
hedgeCount
7
narrationSentences
155
filterMatches
0
"watch"
1
"look"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
184
matches
0
"get that satchel. create that wound"
84.8256%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
69
mean
44.71
std
19.98
cv
0.447
sampleLengths
0
85
1
83
2
79
3
74
4
64
5
30
6
7
7
49
8
36
9
74
10
17
11
51
12
91
13
66
14
13
15
67
16
10
17
50
18
52
19
64
20
15
21
61
22
52
23
69
24
40
25
72
26
30
27
52
28
14
29
55
30
43
31
56
32
26
33
49
34
67
35
40
36
48
37
22
38
46
39
20
40
35
41
53
42
15
43
43
44
14
45
36
46
52
47
26
48
50
49
48
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
6
totalSentences
155
matches
0
"was supposed"
1
"been made"
2
"were filled"
3
"being manipulated"
4
"been placed"
5
"been placed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
4
totalVerbs
370
matches
0
"were stepping"
1
"were humming"
2
"were breathing"
3
"was opening"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2265
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
53
adverbRatio
0.023399558498896248
lyAdverbCount
14
lyAdverbRatio
0.006181015452538631
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
184
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
184
mean
16.77
std
8.76
cv
0.523
sampleLengths
0
22
1
25
2
24
3
14
4
20
5
13
6
31
7
13
8
6
9
26
10
27
11
26
12
10
13
20
14
29
15
15
16
22
17
32
18
10
19
11
20
19
21
3
22
4
23
21
24
28
25
10
26
26
27
3
28
23
29
12
30
26
31
10
32
13
33
4
34
17
35
18
36
16
37
29
38
17
39
18
40
27
41
8
42
13
43
19
44
26
45
13
46
14
47
10
48
43
49
3
29.3478%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
38
diversityRatio
0.1793478260869565
totalSentences
184
uniqueOpeners
33
91.6667%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"a voice called, soft but edged with urgency (call, edge)"
1
"Quinn said, her voice flat, the tone of someone who had spent two decades learning to keep her emotions in check (say, spend keep)"
2
"Quinn interrupted, her mind already cataloguing possibilities (interrupt, already catalogue)"
3
"the voice said, dripping with sarcasm (say, drip)"
85.1328%