Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
74
glossingSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"sound that seemed to echo louder than the cramped hallway of Eva’s flat"
1
"suit that seemed to absorb the dimness, the fabric crisp despite the night’s damp chill"
2
"felt like a cracked vase"
3
"felt like a paradox in the presence of"
4
"sound that seemed to vibrate the dust motes in the air"
5
"promise that seemed to settle into the very walls of Eva’s flat, into the stacks of books that bore witness to centuries of knowledge, into the cat’s contented purr"
"She had been scrolling through a stack of legal briefs on her phone, the glow of the screen casting a pale halo on the scar that traced a crescent on her left wrist, when the knock came—soft, deliberate, the kind that meant someone was already on the other side of the deadbolt."
1
"He meowed once, a warning or a greeting—Aurora couldn’t tell which."
2
"His hair, slicked back in a platinum sheen, caught the light, and his cane—an ivory‑handled thing that concealed a thin blade—tapped lightly against the floorboards as he shifted his weight."
3
"She felt a flicker of something she hadn’t allowed herself to feel in months—hope, perhaps, or maybe the ghost of the attraction that had once burned between them."
4
"Aurora looked down at the cat, then back at Lucien, and saw the reflection of her own conflicted heart in his eyes—one amber, one black, each a different shade of the night she had learned to navigate."
5
"She could feel the heat of his breath on her cheek, the faint scent of his cologne—citrus and something darker, like incense."
6
"The night was still, the city’s lights flickering like distant stars, and the future—uncertain, dangerous, full of shadows—felt a little less intimidating when faced hand in hand."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
56
technicalSentenceCount
21
matches
0
"The door clicked open, a thin metal sound that seemed to echo louder than the cramped hallway of Eva’s flat."
1
"She had been scrolling through a stack of legal briefs on her phone, the glow of the screen casting a pale halo on the scar that traced a crescent on her left w…"
2
"She turned, the black hair at her shoulders catching the dim light from the single bulb hanging over the doorway."
3
"The figure standing in the doorway was taller than she remembered, his silhouette framed by the streetlight that spilled through the cracked window."
4
"His hair, slicked back in a platinum sheen, caught the light, and his cane—an ivory‑handled thing that concealed a thin blade—tapped lightly against the floorbo…"
5
"She felt the scar on her wrist pulse, a faint reminder of the accident that had taught her to be careful with her hands, with her heart."
6
"Then came the argument, the accusation that his demon blood made him dangerous, the night he vanished into the fog, leaving her with a half‑finished case and a …"
7
"Lucien’s eyes flicked to the scar on her wrist, as if he could read the story etched there."
8
"She stepped back, the floorboards creaking under her weight, and the cat leapt onto the windowsill, his tail flicking."
9
"The room seemed to close in, the walls lined with books about ancient rites, demonology, and legal statutes that felt like a paradox in the presence of a half‑d…"
10
"She felt the scar on her wrist throb, a reminder of the accident that had taught her to be careful with her hands, with her heart."
11
"The cat, Ptolemy, let out a soft meow, his ears perking as if to signal his approval or perhaps to remind them that the world outside the flat was still moving."
12
"He stepped even closer, the cane now resting against the doorframe, his hand hovering near the deadbolt."
13
"The tiny creature’s presence was a grounding force, a reminder that even in the chaos of supernatural politics and broken hearts, there were simple truths that …"
14
"Lucien smiled, a genuine curve of his lips that reached his eyes, making the amber flicker like a candle flame."
15
"He reached out, his hand hovering over the scar on her wrist, his fingers brushing the skin lightly."
16
"He spoke of the council’s plans, of the demon blood that pulsed in his veins, of the fear that had driven him to the shadows."
17
"She felt the scar on her wrist pulse in rhythm with his heartbeat, a silent metronome that marked the passage of time and the possibility of redemption."
18
"He pulled Aurora closer, their bodies fitting together as if the cramped space had been designed for this very intimacy."
19
"The cat, Ptolemy, curled up at their feet, his purr a steady rhythm that matched the beating of their hearts."
20
"Outside, the rain fell harder, drumming against the windows, but inside, the world seemed to narrow to the space between two people who had once been torn apart…"