Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMF3B1KP9TZH30ET5TK270Z

Run Details

Duration:
12.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora slipped the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant over her head, feeling the faint pulse of warmth against her collarbone. The deep‑crimson stone throbbed just enough to remind her that something unseen lay close, a secret she could not yet name. She tugged the strap of her delivery bag tighter, the weight of the day’s orders pressing against her side, and stepped out onto the cobblestones of Silas’ bar’s back alley. The night was a thin veil of mist, the amber glow of streetlamps spilling like honey into the fog. A soft rustle behind her made her turn. Nyx emerged from the shadows, a silhouette that seemed to drink the darkness and give it back in a ripple of violet‑tinged vapor. Their eyes—faintly glowing violet—caught the streetlight and held it for a heartbeat before the world back into the night. “The gate is near,” Nyx whispered, voice a wind‑carried sigh that brushed her ear like a feather. Aurora’s bright blue eyes narrowed. “You’ve never been here before, have you?” Nyx’s form flickered, becoming semi‑transparent, then solid again as if testing the air. “I have walked the borders of the Veil many times, but the grove you seek is a pocket I have only glimpsed in dreams.” She followed Nyx down a narrow lane, the scent of wet stone and distant sea salt mingling with the faint perfume of night-blooming jasmine that seemed to emanate from nowhere and everywhere at once. The world narrowed to the rhythm of her own breath, the thudding of her heart against the scar on her left wrist that she could feel even through the thin cotton of her shirt. A line of ancient oaks rose before them, their trunks split by standing stones that rose like petrified fingers toward the sky. The stones were covered in a fine, silvery moss that glowed faintly under the moon, casting a pale lavender light that made the surrounding foliage look as though it were painted in watercolor. Aurora’s breath caught; the scene was familiar yet utterly alien, a place that seemed to exist between the ticking of a clock and the breath of a dream. “Isolde is waiting,” Nyx said, and the words seemed to echo from a place beyond the trees. Aurora pushed the hem of her coat against the chill that rose from the ground, feeling the cold seep into her bones. She stepped forward, the soft earth giving way beneath her boots, each footfall a muted thud that resonated with the low hum of the grove. The air tasted of rain and something sweeter—perhaps honey, perhaps the faint metallic tang of a distant feast. A figure emerged from the circle of stones, moving with a grace that made the wildflowers around them sway in time with her steps. She was taller than Aurora, her silver hair cascading to her waist, catching the moonlight and turning it into a cascade of liquid light. Her eyes, pale lavender, seemed to hold the whole of the grove within them, reflecting the ancient oak’s bark and the stars that never quite broke through the canopy. Isolde’s voice was a ripple in the wind. “The path you tread is a thread woven of night and day, of hunger and hope. To walk it is to taste the fruit of the world unseen.” Aurora swallowed, feeling the scar on her wrist throb in rhythm with the pulse of the pendant. “What… what is this place?” Isolde smiled, a curve of her lips that brushed the edges of a secret. “A garden of the in‑bound, where time folds like paper and the Veil thins. Here the world’s excess and its longing meet.” The words hung in the air, heavy with meaning. Aurora’s mind raced—she had heard of Dymas, of Prince Belphegor’s feasts, of souls bound to the kitchen of the damned. The Heartstone’s faint glow intensified, a soft ember of heat that seemed to sync with the beat of her own heart. She pressed a hand to the pendant, feeling the warmth seep into her palm. A rustle of leaves, a whisper of movement, and the grove seemed to shift. The standing stones pulsed, a low vibration that resonated through the soles of Aurora’s boots. The wildflowers, which had been a riot of colors—crimson, violet, gold—now seemed to bloom in slow motion, each petal unfurling like a secret being revealed. The scent grew richer, an intoxicating blend of honey, fresh rain, and the faint metallic tang of iron. Nyx’s form rippled, becoming a wisp of shadow that slipped between the stones, their eyes flickering with an inner violet fire. “The Veil is thin here,” they murmured, their voice a susurrus that seemed to come from the very bark of the trees. “You can feel it, the tug of worlds beyond.” Aurora closed her eyes, inhaling deeply. The world narrowed to a single point: the thrum of the pendant, the whisper of the wind, the faint echo of a distant feast. She could almost hear the clatter of plates, the murmurs of gluttons, the sigh of a soul bound to a kitchen she would never see. The thought made her stomach churn, but the warmth of the stone steadied her. She opened her eyes to find Isolde standing close, a slender blade glinting at her side. The weapon was forged of moonsilver, its leaf‑shaped dagger catching the moonlight and scattering it in a faint, ethereal glow. The blade was cold to the touch, sending a shiver up Aurora’s arm as she reached out to grasp it. “The Fae‑forged blade,” Isolde said, her voice a melodic riddle. “It cuts through the veil of lies, through the wards of demons. It will aid you when the darkness seeks to swallow you whole.” Aurora slipped the dagger into her belt, feeling the weight of the metal settle against her thigh. The blade’s chill contrasted with the pendant’s warmth, a balance of fire and ice that seemed to echo the very nature of the grove. A sudden rustle from the underbrush made Aurora’s head snap toward the sound. A cluster of small, luminescent insects swarmed a the ground, their bodies pulsing with a soft blue light that matched her eyes. They hovered, forming a vortex that rose like a living lantern, casting dancing shadows on the ancient oaks. Nyx’s form shifted again, this time becoming a silhouette that hovered just above the ground, their outline flickering between solid and incorporeal. “We are not alone,” they said, their voice a wind‑carried whisper. “The grove watches, and it remembers.” Aurora felt a prickling at the base of her skull, as if unseen eyes were scanning her, measuring her intentions. The air grew heavier, the scent of wildflowers intensifying until it was almost overwhelming. She could hear a faint humming, a low, resonant tone that seemed to come from the stones themselves, a song of centuries past. She took a step forward, the ground beneath her feet softening into a carpet of moss that seemed to breathe with each footfall. The moss gave way to a shallow pool, its surface perfectly still, reflecting the sky in a way that made it look like a portal to another realm. The water was dark, almost black, but within its depths a faint crimson glow pulsed—an echo of the Heartstone’s own heartbeat. Aurora knelt, the coolness of the water lapping at her calves. She lifted a hand, the silver chain of the pendant catching the moonlight, and watched as the stone’s glow intensified, rippling through the water like a stone dropped into a still pond. The surface rippled, and for a heartbeat she saw a flash of a grand banquet hall—long tables laden with exotic fruits, steaming dishes, and a sea of souls bound to the kitchen of a realm she barely understood. The vision was fleeting, but it left a lingering taste of salt and spice on her tongue. She pulled her hand back, the water returning to its calm state. The pool’s edge was lined with tiny, iridescent shells that sang when brushed, a soft, melodic chime that seemed to echo the heartbeat of the grove itself. Aurora’s breath caught, and she felt the scar on her wrist tighten, as if the stone’s pulse was syncing with the rhythm of the grove. Nyx moved closer, their form shifting to a more solid shape, their violet eyes fixed on the pool. “The Veil thins where the heart of the world beats,” they said, their voice a whisper that seemed to merge with the rustling leaves. “You can cross, but you must carry the weight of both worlds.” Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair brushing the moss as she walked. She placed a hand on Aurora’s shoulder, the touch cool as moonlight. “Remember, child of mortals, the gift you bear is both a key and a burden. The Heartstone will guide you, but the path is yours to choose.” Aurora felt a surge of determination. The scar on her wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident, now seemed to be a symbol of resilience—a mark of survival. She lifted her head, eyes bright blue, reflecting the moon and the faint glow of the pendant. “What must we do?” she asked, voice steady despite the tremor of excitement that ran through her. Isolde’s smile widened, a curve that seemed to hold a secret of the ages. “Seek the hidden well of Dymas, where the excess of the world gathers. There the Heartstone will reveal its true purpose. But beware the feast that lures the unwary, for gluttony is a hunger that never satisfies.” A low, resonant chuckle rose from the oak trees, as if the very forest were amused by the notion. The wind shifted, carrying with it the faint sound of distant laughter, the clink of crystal, the sigh of a thousand souls bound to a kitchen they could not escape. Aurora’s skin prickled, a mixture of awe and unease, as if the grove itself were breathing, watching, waiting. She turned to Nyx, who now hovered just above the ground, their form a living shadow that rippled with each breath. “Can you guide us?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx’s eyes glowed brighter, a violet flare that seemed to cut through the darkness. “I can slip between the cracks, but the path is yours to walk. The Veil will test you, and the stones will remember each step you take.” Aurora looked at the standing stones, their surfaces etched with ancient runes that pulsed faintly in the moonlight. She felt the weight of the Fae‑forged blade at her side, its cold metal a reminder of the battles ahead. The Heartstone’s warmth seeped into her palm, a steady thrum that matched the rhythm of her own heartbeat. She inhaled deeply, the scent of wildflowers, rain, and distant feasts filling her lungs. The grove seemed to pulse, a living entity breathing in time with her own. The air around her shimmered, a faint distortion that only those with supernatural sight could perceive—a ripple in the Veil that hinted at worlds beyond. “Let’s go,” Aurora said, her voice firm, the scar on her wrist now a beacon of resolve. “We’ll find the well, and we’ll see what the Heartstone truly wants.” Nyx’s form dissolved into a wisp of shadow, slipping through the standing stones as if they were nothing more than a ripple in water. Isolde’s eyes, pale lavender, glimmered with an ancient light as she turned, her silver hair flowing like a river of moonlight. Together, the three moved deeper into the grove, the path winding beneath ancient oaks that seemed to lean closer, their branches forming a vaulted canopy that filtered the moon into a soft, silver rain. The deeper they went, the more the grove transformed. The ground became a mosaic of polished stone and living moss, each step echoing with a soft, resonant tone that seemed to vibrate through their bones. The air grew cooler, the scent of wildflowers giving way to a sweet, metallic perfume that hinted at the presence of hidden veins of some unseen ore. A low hum rose from the stones, a song that seemed to be both a warning and an invitation. Aurora could feel the Veil’s presence thicken, a shimmering distortion that danced at the edge of her vision, like heat mirages on a summer road. The Heartstone’s glow intensified, pulsing in time with the hum, casting a deep crimson light that painted the surrounding foliage in shades of blood and fire. She paused, hand on the pendant, feeling the warmth surge through her. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder of the accident that had once left her scarred, now a conduit for something greater. She could hear, faintly, the whisper of a distant feast—plates clinking, voices laughing, a chorus of gluttony that seemed to echo from a realm of excess. Nyx reappeared, their silhouette solid for a moment before becoming a ripple of violet shadow. “The well is near,” they said, voice a breath that seemed to stir the very leaves. “But the path is guarded by the hunger of Dymas. Only those who can resist will pass.” Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the moonlight, and placed a hand on Aurora’s other shoulder. “The blade will cut through the wards,” she said, her voice a riddle wrapped in a lullaby. “But the heart must stay true, lest the feast devours you whole.” Aurora tightened her grip on the Fae‑forged blade, feeling its cold edge bite into her palm. The metal sang against her skin, a faint, crystalline tone that resonated with the hum of the stones. She could feel the weight of the worlds pressing upon her, the pull of the Veil, the hunger of Dymas, the promise of the hidden well. The trio moved forward, the path narrowing into a tunnel of ancient stone arches, each arch etched with symbols that glowed faintly with a lavender light. The air grew thick with a low, rhythmic thrum, like a heartbeat that seemed to echo the pulse of the Heartstone. Aurora’s steps were deliberate, each footfall a measured cadence that matched the rhythm of the grove. At the tunnel’s end, a cavern opened before them, its walls lined with crystalline formations that caught the moonlight and refracted it into a kaleidoscope of colors. In the center of the cavern lay a pool of liquid amber, its surface rippling with an inner fire that seemed to pulse in harmony with the pendant’s glow. The pool’s edge was rimmed with ancient runes, their lines shifting like living script. Aurora approached, the scar on her wrist tingling as the Heartstone’s warmth intensified. She knelt at the pool’s edge, the cool stone against her knees, and dipped her hand into the amber liquid. The water was warm, a paradox that sent a shiver up her spine. As she lifted her hand, a vision surged through her—a banquet of endless feasts, souls bound to a kitchen of fire, a prince of gluttony presiding over a table of excess. She gasped, the taste of iron and spice flooding her mouth. The vision faded, leaving a lingering sense of both dread and wonder. The Heartstone’s glow flared, a crimson beacon that illuminated the cavern, casting shadows that danced like specters on the walls. Nyx’s violet eyes widened, the shadowy form trembling. “The well of Dymas,” they whispered, “is a conduit of hunger. It can grant power, but it also devours the unguarded.” Isolde’s voice rose, a melodic chant that seemed to weave through the cavern’s stone. “To drink from the well is to taste the world’s excess. To resist is to keep the balance.” Aurora felt the weight of the blade at her side, the cold metal a reminder of the Fae’s warning. She lifted the pendant, its crimson glow now a steady flame, and placed it upon the amber pool. The water swirled, the crimson light merging with the amber, creating a vortex of color that spun faster, a whirlpool of fire and light. The cavern trembled, the ancient runes humming louder, their glow intensifying. A low, resonant voice rose from the depths, a chorus of unseen beings singing a song of hunger and restraint. Aurora’s breath caught, the scar on her wrist pulsing in time with the song. She closed her eyes, feeling the Heartstone’s warmth seep into her very soul, the pendant’s pulse aligning with the cavern’s rhythm. The vision of the banquet returned, but this time she could see beyond the gluttony—there were faces, eyes pleading for release, souls bound to the kitchen yet yearning for freedom. A surge of resolve rose within her. She tightened her grip on the blade, feeling its cold edge bite into her palm, a reminder that she could cut through the wards that bound the souls. She whispered a promise to the shadows, to the Veil, to the ancient stones: “I will not let the hunger consume us.” The vortex of light swelled, and with a sudden burst, the amber pool erupted in a cascade of crimson droplets that fell like rain, each drop sizzled as it hit the stone floor, leaving a faint scorch mark. The cavern filled with a bright, blinding light that seemed to push back the darkness, the Veil’s shimmering distortion receding as if pulled back into a hidden seam. When the light dimmed, the pool was gone, replaced by a smooth slab of obsidian that reflected Aurora’s face, the scar on her wrist, the pendant’s faint glow, and the blade’s cold sheen. The runes on the walls flickered, then settled into a soft lavender hue, as if satisfied. Nyx’s form reconstituted, their violet eyes now calm, a smile playing on their lips. “The well has spoken,” they said, voice a gentle wind. “It has given you a choice: to bind yourself to the hunger of Dymas, or to carry its warning forward.” Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair shimmering, and placed a hand upon Aurora’s shoulder. “The path you walk will be fraught with temptation,” she said, her voice a riddle that resonated in the cavern. “But remember, the heart that beats within you is stronger than any feast.” Aurora opened her eyes, the cavern now quiet, the only sound the faint rustle of leaves outside the standing stones. She felt the weight of the Heartstone against her chest, the cold of the blade at her side, and the scar on her wrist—a reminder of past wounds and present strength. She inhaled the scent of wildflowers, rain, and the lingering metallic tang of the amber pool, a mixture that seemed to embody the grove’s duality. She turned to Nyx and Isolde, her voice steady. “We will go back to the world above, but we will carry this place with us. The Veil may thin, but we will keep the balance.” The three figures moved toward the exit, the ancient oaks parting like guardians, the standing stones glimmering with a soft lavender light that seemed to guide them. As they stepped out of the grove, the night air felt different—crisper, charged with the memory of the cavern’s fire. The Heartstone’s glow dimmed to a gentle warmth, a pulse that matched Aurora’s own heartbeat. Behind them, the grove receded, its ancient stones fading into the mist, the wildflowers swaying in a silent lullaby. The Veil shimmered faintly, a distortion that only those who had walked its edge could see. Aurora felt the scar on her wrist tighten once more, a reminder that the journey was far from over, but that she now possessed a key to a world of excess and restraint. She lifted her head, the bright blue of her eyes reflecting the moonlight, and stepped forward, the Fae‑forged blade at her side, the Heartstone pulsing against her chest, and the promise of a path uncharted ahead. The night was alive with possibilities, and the ancient, otherworldly place she had just left lingered in her mind like a dream she could not quite forget.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.8889% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"they murmured, their voice a susurrus that seemed to come from the very bark of the trees [very]"
1"they said, voice a breath that seemed to stir the very leaves [very]"
73.2063% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount3359
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count5
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"utterly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"truly"
4"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount3359
totalAiIsms46
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"crystalline"
count2
2
word"beacon"
count2
3
word"mosaic"
count1
4
word"churn"
count1
5
word"tinged"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count2
8
word"resonated"
count4
9
word"flickered"
count2
10
word"shimmered"
count2
11
word"glinting"
count1
12
word"cascading"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"otherworldly"
count1
15
word"yearning"
count1
16
word"weight"
count7
17
word"dancing"
count1
18
word"footfall"
count3
19
word"echo"
count7
20
word"echoing"
count1
21
word"etched"
count2
22
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"crystalline"
2"beacon"
3"mosaic"
4"churn"
5"tinged"
6"throb"
7"throbbed"
8"resonated"
9"flickered"
10"shimmered"
11"glinting"
12"cascading"
13"trembled"
14"otherworldly"
15"yearning"
16"weight"
17"dancing"
18"footfall"
19"echo"
20"echoing"
21"etched"
22"kaleidoscope"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
62.9139% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount29
narrationSentences151
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences170
matches
0"runes that pulsed"
47.8601% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean54.8
std17.4
cv0.318
sampleLengths
091
167
212
337
468
583
617
765
877
936
1022
1136
1264
1372
1452
1569
1656
1734
1841
1953
2039
2157
2272
2398
2464
2554
2651
2762
2851
2967
3033
3141
3256
3353
3429
3579
3662
3770
3861
3948
4046
4160
4263
4370
4477
4543
4629
4732
4861
4945
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences151
matches
0"were covered were painted"
1"being revealed"
2"was forged"
3"was lined"
4"were amused"
5"was rimmed"
6"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs434
matches
0"were scanning"
1"was fleeting"
2"was syncing"
3"were breathing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2923
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount63
adverbRatio0.021553198768388643
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.005473828258638385
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences170
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
86.7631% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences170
mean19.66
std7.22
cv0.367
sampleLengths
021
121
230
319
48
523
619
717
85
97
1013
1124
1234
1334
1422
1533
1628
1717
1822
1925
2018
2124
2224
2329
248
2528
2617
275
2814
2922
309
3120
3221
3314
3414
3515
3625
3718
3821
3922
409
416
4224
4325
4414
4516
4620
4720
4810
4924
39.4118% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.15294117647058825
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners26
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered, voice a wind‑carried sigh that brushed her ear like a feather (whisper, voice wind‑carry brush like)"
1"Nyx said, and the words seemed to echo from a place beyond the trees (say, seem echo)"
2"they murmured, their voice a susurrus that seemed to come from the very bark of the trees (murmur, seem come)"
3"Isolde said, her voice a melodic riddle (say, voice)"
4"they said, their voice a wind‑carried whisper (say, wind‑carry)"
5"they said, their voice a whisper that seemed to merge with the rustling leaves (say, seem merge)"
6"Aurora said, her voice firm, the scar on her wrist now a beacon of resolve (say, firm)"
7"they said, voice a breath that seemed to stir the very leaves (say, voice seem stir very leave)"
8"she said, her voice a riddle wrapped in a lullaby (say, voice wrap)"
9"they whispered (whisper)"
10"whispered (whisper)"
11"they said, voice a gentle wind (say, voice)"
12"she said, her voice a riddle that resonated in the cavern (say, voice resonate)"
74.4536%