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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMF4EZ1SV16N9XT54Q3XHKS
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Model:
Stealth: Aurora Alpha
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
8.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
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Meta
AI
Aurora pressed the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant against her throat, feeling the faint thrum of heat against her skin. The deep crimson gem glowed a heartbeat brighter as the amber sky of Dymas str
etched
overhead, a molten horizon that
seemed to
melt into the vineyards that rolled like waves beyond the stone archway. She could taste the tang of ripe figs and a faint metallic sting, as if the
very
air were seasoned with the blood of countless feasts. Nyx slipped ahead, their silhouette a ripple of living shadow that folded into the darkness between the vines. The shade’s violet eyes
flickered
, catching the faint inner glow of the pendant and reflecting it back in a soft,
wavering
light. Their voice, a whisper carried on the wind, brushed Aurora’s ear. “The veil thins here, child of earth. Walk with care.” Isolde moved with a grace that
seemed to
bend the world around her. The half‑fae’s silver hair brushed the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the hidden grove, each step leaving no imprint on the mossy ground. Her pale lavender eyes stared into the distance, as if seeing beyond the present, and she spoke in riddles that dripped like honey. “Where the feast never ends, the hunger of the soul finds its mirror.” The trio stepped through the archway, the stone threshold humming with a low, resonant tone that vibrated through Aurora’s bones. The world beyond was not the sun‑lit vineyards she knew; it was a cavern of stone and crystal, walls veined with phosphorescent fungi that pulsed in rhythm with her heartbeat.
The air was thick with
the scent of fermenting honey, sweet and cloying, and a faint, metallic tang that hinted at something ancient and bound. Aurora’s boots sank into a carpet of soft, violet‑blue moss that
seemed to
breathe beneath her
weight
. Each step released a faint, melodic chime, as if the ground itself sang a lullaby to the wandering souls. The Heartstone Pendant
throbbed
in her throat, its warmth spreading outward, a compass pointing toward a doorway hidden among the mushroom‑lit pillars. She turned, catching Nyx’s form dissolve into a thin veil of darkness, slipping through a crack in the stone that widened like a mouth. The shade’s outline reassembled on the other side, solid for a heartbeat before melting back into the shadows. Nyx’s voice, barely audible, lingered in the cavern. “The walls remember the feast. Listen.” Aurora pressed her ear to the stone, and the cavern answered with a low, rumbling murmur—a distant clatter of plates, the soft sigh of a thousand diners, the faint clink of silver. It was a chorus of indulgence, a memory of gluttony that
seemed to
echo
from a realm of excess. The sound rose and fell, a tide of hunger that made her stomach twist with a mixture of awe and dread. A narrow passage opened before her, lined with vines heavy with fruit that glowed an unnatural amber, their skins pulsing like heartbeats. She reached out, fingertips brushing the skin of a fruit that was warm to the touch, as if it held a secret fire within. The moment her skin made contact, a flash of vision surged through her: a banquet hall of endless tables, a throne of bones, Prince Belphegor seated upon a chair of twisted vines, his eyes twin pits of darkness. The vision snapped away, leaving Aurora breathless, the scent of spiced meat lingering on her tongue. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the faint luminescence of the fungi, casting a pale halo around her. She lifted the Fae‑Forged Blade, its moonsilver edge catching the dim light and sending a cold ripple through the air. The dagger’s temperature was a
stark
contrast to the warm heat of the Heartstone, a chill that
seemed to
cut through the
very
fabric of the cavern. She held it aloft, and the blade sang a thin,
crystalline
note, a sound that
resonated
with the walls as if unlocking a hidden lock. The blade’s edge traced a line in the stone, and a seam split open, revealing a narrow corridor lined with ancient script
etched
in a language Aurora could not read. The script glowed faintly, each character a pulse of violet light that
seemed to
breathe. Aurora felt a tug at the back of her mind, a whisper of the Veil’s presence—an invisible barrier that
shimmered
like a heat distortion, only visible to those with sight beyond the mortal. She stepped closer, the Heartstone Pendant flaring against her throat, its warmth intensifying. The veil’s edge rippled, a thin veil of silver mist that curled around her ankles. The sensation was like walking through a cold draft on a summer night, a shiver that ran up her spine. Nyx hovered beside her, their form flickering between solid and incorporeal, eyes fixed on the seam. “Beyond lies the heart of gluttony,” Nyx murmured, voice a rustle of leaves in a storm. “The feast that never ends, the hunger that never sleeps.” Aurora swallowed, feeling the
weight
of the pendant and the cold of the blade. She reached into the pocket of her coat, pulling out a small, weathered map of Dymas that she had sk
etched
from rumors and half‑remembered tales. The map showed a single marked spot—“The Forgotten Vault”—a place whispered about in taverns, said to house the remnants of Prince Belphegor’s excesses. She realized they
were standing
at the threshold of that legend. She turned to Isolde, whose eyes held the same lavender hue as the moonlit sea. “What do we find there?” Aurora asked, voice barely a whisper against the cavern’s hum. Isolde’s smile was faint, a curve that
seemed to
bend the air. “A mirror for the soul. A feast for the heart. But beware, child of earth—what you seek may devour you.” The words hung like a warning, and Aurora felt a chill crawl up her arms despite the blade’s cold. She stepped through the seam, the narrow corridor swallowing her whole. The walls narrowed, the air grew thicker, and the scent of fermented honey turned sour, like milk left too long in the sun. The corridor opened into a vast hall, its ceiling vaulted high above, supported by columns of blackened stone that
seemed to
drink the light. At the far end of the hall, a massive table str
etched
as far as the eye could see, laden with dishes that defied description—plates of shimmering gelatin that pulsed with inner light, goblets of liquid amber that swirled with tiny constellations, and a central platter of a meat that glowed with a faint, inner fire. The dishes
were arranged
in a perfect circle, each one a masterpiece of culinary excess, each one a promise of indulgence. Aurora’s eyes
were drawn
to a centerpiece—a crystal bowl filled with a liquid that reflected the amber sky above. As she approached, the liquid rippled, forming a mirror that showed not her reflection but a vision of herself standing alone, the Heartstone pendant hanging from her neck, its glow dimmed, her eyes empty of purpose. The vision shifted, showing her surrounded by faces—friends, enemies, strangers—each one a blur of color, each one a whisper of a life she could have lived. She shivered, the cold of the blade against her palm a reminder of the danger. Nyx slipped beside her, their form merging with the shadows that clung to the walls. The shade’s violet eyes glowed brighter, as if feeding off the hall’s excess. “The hunger is not of the stomach,” Nyx said, voice a susurrus. “It is of the soul.” Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the faint luminescence of the crystal bowls. She lifted the Fae‑Forged Blade, its edge slicing through the air with a sound like a sigh. The blade’s cold touched the surface of the crystal bowl, and the liquid within stilled, its surface flattening into a perfect mirror that reflected the trio’s faces back at them. In the reflection, Aurora saw the Heartstone pendant pulse, its crimson glow syncing with the faint inner glow of the bowl. The pendant’s warmth seeped into the hall, a gentle heat that
seemed to
push back against the
oppressive
hunger. The blade’s cold seeped into the stone, carving a thin line of frost across the blackened columns, a reminder that even in a realm of excess, there could be a chill that halted the feast. A sudden crack
echo
ed through the hall, and the walls
trembled
. From the shadows, a figure emerged—a gaunt, skeletal
being draped
in tattered robes, its eyes hollow pits of darkness. It raised a hand, and the banquet
began to
shift, dishes moving on their own, plates clattering, goblets spilling their amber liquid onto the floor. The scent of the feast turned sour, the sweet honey now a rancid stench. Aurora felt the Heartstone pulse faster, the warmth spreading through her veins. She clutched the pendant, the crimson gem now shining like a
beacon
. Nyx’s form
flickered
, their silhouette expanding, swallowing the darkness around the skeletal figure. The shade’s voice rose, a chorus of wind through trees, and the skeletal
being recoiled
, its form
wavering
like a candle in a storm. Isolde lifted the Fae blade, its edge cutting a clean arc through the air. The blade’s cold met the skeletal figure’s flesh, and a scream—half sound, half
echo
—rippled through the hall. The creature dissolved into a cloud of ash that drifted upward, disappearing into the amber sky like a dying star. The banquet hall fell silent, the only sound the faint hum of the Heartstone and the soft rustle of Nyx’s shadow moving through the darkness. Aurora stood still, her breath shallow, the pendant’s glow now steady, a warm pulse that
seemed to
sync with the
very
heart of the cavern. She turned to Isolde, who lowered the blade, the cold light dimming. “What
was that?” Aurora
asked, voice barely louder than a breath. Isolde’s eyes, pale lavender,
flickered
with a mixture of sadness and relief. “A hunger that feeds on the soul, a reminder that gluttony is not only of flesh but of desire. It was the guard of the vault, bound to the Veil’s edge. You have broken its hold, but the Veil still watches.” Nyx’s form hovered, the violet glow of their eyes dimming to a soft ember. “The veil thins where the Heartstone shines. You have opened a path, but the journey is not yet over.” Aurora felt a surge of resolve, the warmth of the pendant spreading through her chest like a fire. She looked around the hall, at the endless feast, at the crystal bowl that now reflected her own face—eyes bright, scar on her left wrist a faint crescent, a reminder of past accidents and present strength. She could feel the
weight
of the Fae‑Forged Blade at her side, its cold a counterbalance to the warmth within her. She stepped forward, her boots
echo
ing on the stone floor, and placed a hand on the crystal bowl. The liquid inside rippled, forming a new image—a doorway of silver mist, a portal that
seemed to
pulse with the same amber light that bathed the sky outside. The Heartstone’s glow intensified, a
beacon
that illuminated the path. Nyx whispered, their voice a wind through leaves, “The Veil will test you, child of earth. The path ahead is fraught with shadows and light.” Isolde nodded, her silver hair catching the faint luminescence of the bowl. “Remember, the gift of the Fae is both shield and key. Use it wisely, for the hunger of Hel is never
truly
sated.” Aurora turned to the portal, feeling the cold of the blade against her palm, the warmth of the pendant against her throat. She inhaled the scent of the hall—sweet honey, sour ash, the metallic tang of ancient blood—and exhaled, a steady breath that
seemed to
steady the
very
air around her. She stepped through the portal, the silver mist enveloping her, the Heartstone’s pulse a steady drum in her ears. The world shifted, the amber sky of Dymas giving way to a new realm—one of twilight, where shadows danced with light, where the Veil was a shimmering curtain that
fluttered
in a breeze she could not feel. On the other side, the air was cooler, the scent of pine and earth mingling with the faint
echo
of distant laughter. The ancient oak standing stones of the Fae Grove
loomed
ahead, their bark
etched
with runes that glowed faintly in the dim light. The grove’s wildflowers swayed, their colors vivid against the twilight, a reminder that even in places of excess, life could bloom. Aurora felt Nyx’s shadow slip beside her, a silent companion, and Isolde’s presence lingered like a soft hum in the wind. The Heartstone pulsed, its warmth a compass, while the Fae‑Forged Blade rested at her side, its cold a promise of protection. She walked forward, each step a promise, each breath a pact with the worlds she straddled. The ancient,
otherworldly
place behind her faded into memory, its feast and hunger a lesson
etched
into her soul. Ahead, the grove awaited, a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, a place where time bent and the Veil’s whisper could be heard. Aurora’s
eyes narrowed
, the bright blue of them reflecting the twilight, and she smiled—cool‑headed, intelligent, ready. The journey had begun, and the ancient hall of gluttony, the veil of shadows, and the hidden grove all awaited the next chapter of her story.
created_at
"2026-02-17T00:14:00.604144+00:00"
2/17/2026, 12:14:00 AM
model
"openrouter/aurora-alpha"
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182717
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(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
2722
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
7976
tokens_prompt
1590
tokens_completion
3389
native_tokens_prompt
1471
native_tokens_completion
2770
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0
router
(null)
provider_responses
(null)
api_type
"completions"
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"gen-1771287231-lUHK1OSarCOysr5ruqpP"
upstream_id
"gen-1771287231-lUHK1OSarCOysr5ruqpP"
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0
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Stealth"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
77.9347%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
2266
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"truly"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
4
highlights
0
"truly"
1
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
2266
totalAiIsms
28
found
0
word
"crystalline"
count
1
1
word
"beacon"
count
2
2
word
"throbbed"
count
1
3
word
"resonated"
count
1
4
word
"flickered"
count
3
5
word
"shimmered"
count
1
6
word
"wavering"
count
2
7
word
"trembled"
count
1
8
word
"fluttered"
count
1
9
word
"oppressive"
count
1
10
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
11
word
"loomed"
count
1
12
word
"stark"
count
1
13
word
"weight"
count
3
14
word
"echo"
count
3
15
word
"echoed"
count
1
16
word
"echoing"
count
1
17
word
"etched"
count
3
highlights
0
"crystalline"
1
"beacon"
2
"throbbed"
3
"resonated"
4
"flickered"
5
"shimmered"
6
"wavering"
7
"trembled"
8
"fluttered"
9
"oppressive"
10
"otherworldly"
11
"loomed"
12
"stark"
13
"weight"
14
"echo"
15
"echoed"
16
"echoing"
17
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
102
matches
(empty)
96.7604%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
13
narrationSentences
102
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"was that?” Aurora"
51.6371%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
38
mean
59.21
std
19.58
cv
0.331
sampleLengths
0
81
1
61
2
76
3
75
4
58
5
56
6
72
7
100
8
91
9
78
10
64
11
26
12
73
13
30
14
32
15
53
16
100
17
81
18
60
19
61
20
75
21
69
22
61
23
51
24
50
25
23
26
53
27
33
28
75
29
56
30
25
31
35
32
51
33
56
34
66
35
42
36
59
37
42
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
102
matches
0
"were arranged"
1
"were drawn"
2
"being draped"
3
"being recoiled"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
302
matches
0
"were standing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2078
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
34
adverbRatio
0.016361886429258902
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.0038498556304138597
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
111
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
95.8301%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
111
mean
20.27
std
7.9
cv
0.39
sampleLengths
0
21
1
34
2
26
3
18
4
22
5
11
6
10
7
13
8
27
9
23
10
13
11
20
12
30
13
25
14
17
15
19
16
22
17
24
18
18
19
8
20
6
21
32
22
19
23
21
24
22
25
24
26
38
27
16
28
19
29
20
30
27
31
25
32
30
33
15
34
33
35
13
36
15
37
20
38
16
39
16
40
10
41
14
42
25
43
23
44
11
45
15
46
15
47
12
48
20
49
19
35.5856%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
16
diversityRatio
0.18018018018018017
totalSentences
111
uniqueOpeners
20
25.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"Nyx murmured, voice a rustle of leaves in a storm (murmur, voice leave)"
1
"Nyx said, voice a susurrus (say, voice)"
2
"Nyx whispered, their voice a wind through leaves, (whisper)"
81.3381%