Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMF56GFKE5PM02QN48RY6G8

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Duration:
8.5s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned tube station was thick with the metallic tang of rust and the faint, sweet perfume of incense that clung to the cracked tiles like a memory. Harlow Quinn stepped through the flickering doorway, the worn leather watch on her left wrist ticking a steady, almost impatient rhythm against the muffled thrum of distant trains that never arrived. Her eyes, a steady brown, scanned the dimly lit stalls, each one draped in shadows that seemed to pulse with a life of their own. The market was a living thing, a maze of stalls that shifted with the moon’s tide, and tonight the full moon hung low, its silver light slipping through the cracked ceiling and painting the grime in ghostly bands. She moved with military precision, her tightly cropped salt‑and‑pepper hair brushing against the back of her neck as she descended the cracked steps. The stone walls bore the graffiti of past deals—symbols of protection, warnings, and the occasional crude sketch of a skull. The Veil Market was a place where the ordinary and the impossible met, a black market for the supernatural, where enchanted goods and banned alchemical substances changed hands under the watchful eyes of unseen patrons. A body lay sprawled across a stall of polished obsidian, the victim’s limbs twisted in a way that suggested a violent struggle, yet the face was calm, eyes closed as if in sleep. The corpse’s clothes were a simple leather coat, the kind a street vendor might wear, but the fabric was stained with a dark, oily residue that clung to the skin like a second layer. Harlow knelt, the weight of her badge pressing against her thigh, and brushed a gloved hand over the residue. It was warm, not the cold, dead feel of blood, and it gave off a faint, metallic scent that reminded her of old coins. “Looks like a typical hit, Quinn,” a voice said behind her. Eva Kowalski stepped forward, her round glasses catching the dim light, the lenses reflecting a kaleidoscope of colors. Her curly red hair fell in a loose tumble around her shoulders, a few strands escaping the bun she’d hastily tied. She tucked a lock behind her left ear, a nervous habit Harlow had come to recognize, and adjusted the worn leather satchel slung across her body. The satchel bulged with books, their spines cracked from heavy use, and a slim notebook peeking out, its pages filled with hurried scribbles and diagrams of sigils. “Eva,” Harlow said, her voice low, “what do you make of this?” Eva’s green eyes flicked over the corpse, then down to the ground where a small brass object lay half‑buried in the oily residue. She lifted it gently, the metal’s patina of verdigris catching the light. “It’s a Veil Compass,” she whispered, reverence threading her tone. “Made by a Shade artisan. The sigils on the face are protective, but the needle… it’s pointing nowhere.” Harlow turned the compass over, feeling the weight of it in her palm. The brass casing was cool, the markings etched with an intricate pattern that seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking directly. The needle, however, was still, its tip aimed at the ceiling as if it were waiting for something to appear. “Why would someone bring a compass like this into a market that’s already… hidden?” Harlow asked, her brow furrowing. “And why does the needle refuse to move?” Eva’s eyes narrowed. “The Veil Market moves locations every full moon. If the compass is attuned to the nearest supernatural rift, perhaps it’s stuck because there’s no rift… or it’s being suppressed.” Harlow’s mind raced. The market’s entry requirement was a bone token, a small carved piece that granted passage to those who possessed it. She examined the ground near the body, noticing faint scratches in the dust that formed a perfect circle, about the size of a coin. Inside the circle, a faint imprint of a bone token lay, its edges smoothed by use. Yet the token was missing. She stood, the watch on her wrist clicking as she adjusted her stance. “Someone stole the token,” she said, the words crisp. “But why leave the body here? And why the oily residue?” Eva glanced at the surrounding stalls, her fingers twirling a strand of hair behind her ear. “The residue isn’t blood. It’s a binding oil, used in alchemical rituals to seal portals. It’s meant to prevent a rift from opening, or to keep one closed.” A low murmur rose from the shadows as a figure stepped forward, cloaked in a dark coat that seemed to absorb the light. The person’s face was hidden, but the glint of a metal clasp on their wrist caught Harlow’s eye. The figure placed a hand on the corpse’s chest, and a faint, violet glow emanated from the area, as if a hidden wound were being illuminated. “Detective Quinn,” the cloaked voice said, smooth and unnervingly calm. “You’re too late. The rift has already closed.” Harlow’s jaw tightened, the sharp line of her jaw accentuated by the dim light. “What did you do?” The cloaked figure tilted their head, the motion revealing a small, intricate sigil tattooed on the back of their neck—a sigil that matched the protective markings on the compass. “I closed it,” the figure replied. “And I left a marker for anyone who thinks they can follow.” Eva’s eyes widened. “You’re using the compass as a lure. You want someone to find the rift and… what? Use it?” The cloaked figure laughed, a sound that seemed to echo off the stone walls and then die. “You think you understand the market, Detective. You think you can read the signs. The Veil Market is a conduit, a crossroads. The rift is a doorway, and the compass is a key. I simply turned the lock.” Harlow’s gaze snapped back to the compass. The needle, still motionless, now seemed to pulse faintly, a tiny tremor that matched the rhythm of her own heartbeat. She lifted the compass, feeling a faint hum against her palm, as if the metal were resonating with something unseen. “Tell me,” she said, her voice a whisper that cut through the stale air, “why the oil? Why the bone token?” The cloaked figure’s eyes glimmered behind the darkness. “The token is a key, but it also binds the wearer to the market. Without it, you’re an outsider, a threat. The oil… it’s a failsafe. If the rift opens, the oil seals it, preventing any… uninvited guests from slipping through.” “Uninvited guests,” Eva muttered, her fingers tightening around the satchel. “You’re talking about the Shade artisans. They craft these things, but they also know how to close them.” Harlow’s mind flipped through the case files she had accumulated over the past three years, the night her partner, DS Morris, vanished under circumstances that defied logic. She remembered the strange symbols that had appeared on his notebook, the way the shadows in his office had seemed to breathe. She had never understood the supernatural, but she had learned to recognize its fingerprints. The Veil Market was a fingerprint, and the compass was a thumbprint. She turned back to the corpse, noticing a faint, almost imperceptible glow at the base of the neck, a thin line of light that seemed to pulse in rhythm with the compass’s hum. She knelt again, this time placing her palm over the spot. The warmth of the oil seeped into her skin, and a whisper of wind brushed her cheek, though there was no breeze in the underground tunnel. “Someone performed a binding ritual,” she said, voice barely audible. “The victim was a conduit, a living anchor for the rift. The oil sealed the rift after the ritual, but the compass… it was meant to guide the conduit to the rift. The token was the key to open the market, but the token was taken to prevent anyone else from following.” Eva’s glasses slipped down her nose, and she pushed them back up with a trembling finger. “If the rift is sealed, why is the compass still pointing to nothing?” Harlow’s eyes narrowed. She lifted the compass, aligning it with the faint glow at the victim’s neck. The needle trembled, then snapped forward, pointing directly at a cracked tile near the back wall of the stall. She moved, the leather watch ticking louder in her ears, and pressed her boot against the tile. It gave way with a soft sigh, revealing a narrow shaft descending into darkness. A cold draft rose from the opening, carrying with it the faint scent of ozone and earth. Harlow peered into the abyss, the darkness swallowing the light, but the compass’s needle continued to point, unwavering. “Eva,” she said, “we need to go down.” Eva hesitated, her satchel clanking against her thigh. “Harlow, there could be… things down there. We don’t know what we’ll find.” Harlow’s jaw set, the sharp line of her jaw catching the dim light. “We already have a dead body and a missing token. We need to know what was sealed. If we don’t, someone else will open it again.” The cloaked figure stepped back, their coat rustling like dry leaves. “You’ll find nothing but darkness, Detective. The market will protect itself.” Harlow didn’t answer. She slipped a gloved hand into the shaft, feeling the cool stone walls, the faint hum of the compass vibrating through her palm. The shaft widened into a tunnel lined with ancient symbols, each one glowing faintly with a phosphorescent light. The symbols matched the sigils on the compass, their lines interlocking in a pattern that seemed to pulse like a heartbeat. She turned to Eva, who was watching her with a mixture of awe and terror. “Take the satchel,” Harlow said. “Leave the books. We need to move quickly.” Eva swallowed, her red curls bouncing as she nodded. She lifted the satchel, the weight of the books a comforting anchor, and followed Harlow into the tunnel. The air grew colder, the glow of the symbols intensifying, casting eerie shadows that danced along the walls. The tunnel opened into a cavernous chamber, the ceiling high above, dripping with stalactites that glistened like crystal daggers. In the center of the chamber stood a stone pedestal, upon which a small, polished stone pulsed with an inner light. The stone was a rift, a doorway to something beyond, its surface rippling like water disturbed by a stone. Harlow approached, the compass needle now fixed directly at the stone, its tip glowing with a faint, amber hue. She lifted the compass, feeling the hum resonate through her bones, and placed it on the pedestal. The stone’s light flared, and a low, resonant tone filled the chamber, vibrating through the floor and up into Harlow’s spine. “Listen,” she whispered, more to herself than to Eva. “The rift is not closed. It’s… dormant. The oil sealed it, but the compass is a key that can reactivate it.” Eva’s eyes widened, her glasses fogging in the sudden warmth. “If someone can reactivate it, they could bring… whatever through.” The cloaked figure emerged from the shadows, their coat now illuminated by the stone’s glow. The sigil tattoo on their neck pulsed, matching the stone’s rhythm. “You don’t understand,” they said, voice a blend of reverence and warning. “The rift is a bridge. It can bring knowledge, power… and danger. The market protects the city, but it also feeds on the city’s secrets. The compass was never meant to be used by the untrained.” Harlow’s mind raced. She thought of DS Morris, his disappearance, the strange symbols that had haunted his last case. She thought of the bone token, the entry requirement that had kept the market hidden, and the oil that had sealed the rift. She thought of the evidence that didn’t add up—the body with no injuries, the oily residue, the missing token. “The token is the lock,” she said, voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. “If we can find a replacement, we can control the entry. If we can control the entry, we can control the flow of whatever comes through.” The cloaked figure’s eyes narrowed. “You think you can wield that power? You’re a detective, not a sorcerer.” Harlow lifted her gaze, the brass compass reflecting the stone’s light. “I’m a detective because I see patterns where others see chaos. I see that the market moves, that the rift opens and closes, that someone—someone—wanted to hide the token, to hide the rift. I see that you’re trying to protect something, but you’re also protecting a secret that could destroy us all.” The stone’s light surged, and the cavern trembled. The rift began to pulse, a slow, rhythmic expansion that seemed to inhale the very air of the chamber. The oil that had sealed it started to evaporate, a thin vapor rising like a ghostly mist. Eva clutched her satchel tighter, her knuckles white. “Harlow, what do we do?” Harlow’s eyes locked onto the compass, the needle still pointing unwaveringly at the stone. She could feel the weight of the decision pressing on her, the memory of her partner’s loss, the promise she’d made to uncover the truth. She took a deep breath, the cool air filling her lungs, and made a choice. “Seal it,” she said, voice low but resolute. “But not with oil. With knowledge. We’ll take the compass, the token, and the stone. We’ll lock the rift, and we’ll keep the market’s secrets safe, but we’ll also make sure no one can abuse them again.” The cloaked figure stepped back, the sigil on their neck dimming. “You cannot bind what is meant to be free.” Harlow lifted the compass, feeling the hum reverberate through her fingertips. She placed the stone into the compass’s casing, the brass forming around it, the sigils on the face glowing brighter. The needle, now aligned with the stone, began to spin, a slow, deliberate motion that seemed to draw the rift’s energy inward. The stone’s light dimmed, the pulse slowing until it was a faint glow, then nothing. The cavern fell silent, the only sound the soft ticking of Harlow’s watch. She slipped the compass into her satchel, the weight of it now a promise. Eva exhaled, her glasses slipping down her nose. “We… we did it?” Harlow nodded, her sharp jaw set, the brown of her eyes reflecting the dim light. “We closed it, but we also have a responsibility now. The token is gone, but the market will move. We’ll need to keep an eye on the Veil Market, make sure no one else tries to open it.” The cloaked figure turned away, disappearing into the shadows as if swallowed by the very darkness they had once guarded. Harlow watched them go, the faint echo of their footsteps a reminder that the market was still alive, still shifting, still dangerous. She turned to Eva, who was now holding the satchel tighter, her red curls bouncing with each breath. “Let’s get back to the surface,” Harlow said, her voice a mix of relief and determination. “We have a lot of reporting to do, and a lot of questions to answer.” Eva smiled, a nervous, relieved smile, and tucked a stray curl behind her ear. “And maybe… a new chapter for the archives.” Harlow stepped back into the tunnel, the stone’s faint glow fading behind her. As she emerged into the abandoned tube station, the full moon’s silver light spilled across the cracked tiles, illuminating the market’s hidden stalls. The Veil Market, ever‑moving, seemed to hold its breath, waiting for the next full moon, the next token, the next secret. She glanced at her watch, the second hand moving with relentless precision. The night was far from over, but for the first time in years, the pieces were falling into place. The evidence that had seemed contradictory now formed a pattern—a pattern she could follow, a pattern she could control. She turned to Eva, the satchel now heavy with the compass and the knowledge of the rift. “Let’s go,” she said, her voice a quiet command. “We have a city to protect, and a market that will never stop moving.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.2593% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"the cloaked voice said, smooth and unnervingly calm [unnervingly]"
1"Eva muttered, her fingers tightening around the satchel [around]"
2"she said, voice barely audible [barely]"
3"she whispered, more to herself than to Eva [more]"
81.5566% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2711
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"quickly"
2"tightly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.6038% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2711
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count2
3
word"unwavering"
count1
4
word"intricate"
count2
5
word"furrowing"
count1
6
word"weight"
count5
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"echo"
count2
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"glint"
2"trembled"
3"unwavering"
4"intricate"
5"furrowing"
6"weight"
7"footsteps"
8"echo"
9"etched"
10"kaleidoscope"
33.3333% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count5
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
89.5652% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount14
narrationSentences125
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"started to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences157
matches
0"wield that power"
1"see that the closes, that someone—see that you’re"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean45.85
std24.05
cv0.525
sampleLengths
0125
178
2110
3103
412
563
654
727
832
968
1033
1144
1267
1318
1418
1547
1621
1755
1847
1921
2049
2128
2275
2370
2462
2529
2667
2735
288
2921
3039
3122
3265
3328
3445
3559
3657
3730
3820
3974
4061
4141
4218
4363
4444
4513
4654
4745
4820
4953
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"was hidden"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs333
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"were waiting"
2"were being"
3"were resonating"
4"was watching"
5"were falling"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1981
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.02170620898536093
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.009591115598182737
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean17.23
std9.07
cv0.526
sampleLengths
031
131
225
338
423
520
635
733
834
919
1024
1111
1218
1321
1426
1527
1612
1723
1812
1910
2018
2113
2221
2320
2419
258
263
2729
283
2920
3024
3116
325
3313
349
3511
3616
3728
3823
3918
4026
4110
428
4314
444
4529
466
4712
483
4918
36.6242% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.1910828025477707
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners30
22.2222% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"she whispered, reverence threading her tone (whisper, thread)"
1"the cloaked voice said, smooth and unnervingly calm (cloak say)"
2"she said, her voice a whisper that cut through the stale air (say, voice)"
3"Eva muttered, her fingers tightening around the satchel (mutter, tighten around)"
4"she said, voice barely audible (say, voice barely)"
5"she whispered, more to herself than to Eva (whisper)"
6"they said, voice a blend of reverence and warning (say, voice warn)"
7"she said, voice steady despite the tremor in her hands (say, voice)"
8"she said, voice low but resolute (say, voice)"
9"Harlow said, her voice a mix of relief and determination (say, voice)"
10"she said, her voice a quiet command (say, voice)"
79.7744%