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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMF8Z8PYK774ENT5B1QEJ0A
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Model:
Stealth: Aurora Alpha
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
12.9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
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Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn slipped the bone token into the rusted slot hidden behind a graffiti‑splashed service door and felt the ancient mechanism grind awake. The air beyond the door was thick with the metallic scent of damp stone and something sweeter—incense, rot, the faint tang of ozone. She paused, the leather strap of her
watch
creaking against her left wrist as she adjusted it, the worn timepiece ticking a steady rhythm that had become a metronome for her thoughts. The tunnel opened onto a cavernous space that could have been a forgotten tube station, its arches draped in tarpaulins and strings of flickering lanterns. Stalls made of reclaimed wood and rusted metal lined the perimeter, each bearing the sigils of a different trade: alchemical reagents, cursed talismans, jars of humming amber. The market’s heartbeat was a low murmur of bartering voices, punctuated by the occasional clink of glass and the soft rustle of cloth. She moved forward with military precision, her boots
echo
ing off the stone floor. The crowd parting instinctively, a ripple of nervous glances at the woman with the salt‑and‑pepper hair cropped close to her scalp, the sharp jaw that never
seemed to
soften. Her eyes, a clear brown, scanned the scene like a radar, cataloguing e
very
incongruity. At the center of the market lay a body, a man in a tattered coat, his throat slit, blood pooling in a dark, oily stain that
seemed to
absorb the lantern light. A brass compass lay near his hand, its casing a verdigris‑patinated circle of metal,
etched
with protective sigils that caught the lantern glow and threw it back in a faint, eerie shimmer. “Detective Quinn,” a voice called from the edge of the crowd. Eva Kowalski stepped forward, round glasses perched on the bridge of her nose, a leather satchel slung across her shoulder. Her curly red hair fell in a tumble of curls, a few strands already tucked behind her left ear in a nervous habit. “I didn’t expect you to be here so soon.” Harlow’s gaze lingered on the victim’s face, a thin scar running from his left cheek to his jaw, a scar that reminded her of the one she had never seen on DS Morris. “The market isn’t a place for a murder, Eva. It’s a place for secrets. What are we looking at?” Eva lifted the compass, turning it over in her hands. “This is a Veil Compass, crafted by a Shade artisan. It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. The needle is still moving, but it’s not pointing toward the body. It’s pointing… somewhere else.” Harlow’s brow
furrowed
. “A compass that points to a rift in a crime scene? That’s a stretch.” The younger woman’s eyes
flicked
to the crowd, then back to Harlow. “You’ve seen what the market sells. You know the kind of things that slip through the cracks of reality. This isn’t a coincidence. The victim was probably a vendor, someone who dealt in the forbidden. The compass could be a tool, or a trap.” Harlow knelt beside the corpse, her fingers brushing the edge of the leather coat. The fabric was damp, the blood already congealing into a dark, glossy sheen. She noted the angle of the wound, the clean slice that suggested a blade of exceptional sharpness, perhaps a ceremonial dagger. She traced the faint imprint of a shoe in the blood—size ten, a sturdy tread, the kind worn by someone who spent more time on the streets than in a lab. She glanced at the victim’s left wrist, where a
watch
should have been. The leather strap
was missing
, the clasp torn open. A faint scorch mark lingered on the skin, a ghost of heat that hinted at something burned. Harlow’s mind raced; the scorch could be a residual effect of a portal, a flare of energy that left a trace on flesh. “Did you find anything else?” she asked, her voice low, almost a whisper against the market’s din. Eva’s fingers
trembled
as she reached into her satchel, pulling out a notebook filled with cramped, ink‑stained pages. “I found a fragment of parchment tucked under a stack of alchemical vials. It’s in a language I can’t translate, but the symbols match the sigils on the compass. And there’s a smear of… something dark, not blood, on the floor near the vendor’s stall.” Harlow crouched, the her eyes to the stain. It was a black, oily residue that
seemed to
pulse faintly, as if alive. She inhaled, catching a scent of burnt ozone, the faint metallic tang of a copper wire short‑circuiting. She pressed a gloved finger to the edge of the stain, feeling a faint warmth, a vibration that
resonated
with the compass needle’s tremor. She stood, the compass now pointing toward a narrow passage hidden behind a curtain of discarded tarps. The needle
quivered
, then steadied, its tip aligning with the darkness beyond. Harlow’s gut tightened. The market moved locations e
very
full moon; tonight was a full moon. The veil between worlds was thin, and someone had exploited that. “Eva, you’re right about the compass,” she said, her voice steadier now. “But the victim didn’t die because of a rift. He died because someone wanted to hide the rift. Look at the scorch on his wrist—he
tried to
close it, but he was too late.” Eva’s
eyes widened
. “You think he was trying to seal a portal?” “Exactly.” Harlow’s jaw set. “He was a vendor, but also a keeper. He knew the compass could locate a rift, and he
tried to
use it to seal it. The knife—clean, ceremonial—was probably a tool to cut a binding rope or a sigil. He was killed before he could finish.” The market’s chatter faded as Harlow’s mind pulled together the fragments. The bone token she’d used to gain entry was a relic from a previous case, a token that had once opened a door to a forgotten crypt. The token’s bone had
been etched
with a rune that matched the sigils on the compass. The victim’s coat bore a faint imprint of a similar rune, barely visible under the blood. The market’s stalls, each one a repository of forbidden knowledge, were a perfect cover for someone to hide a portal. She turned to Eva. “We need to follow the compass. The rift is likely hidden in that passage. If we can locate it, we can find who did this and why.” Eva hesitated, her fingers twitching as she tucked a strand of hair behind her ear. “What if it’s a trap? The Shade artisans are known for misdirection. The compass could be pointing to a dead end, a lure.” Harlow’s
eyes narrowed
. “Then we’ll find out soon enough.” She lifted her
watch
, the worn leather strap creaking. The
watch
had stopped three years ago, the day DS Morris vanished. She had never repaired it, a silent promise to herself that she would never forget the moment the hands stopped moving. Now, the
watch
’s stopped hands
seemed to
echo
the stillness of the market, a reminder that time could be a weapon. She stepped toward the curtain, the compass needle trembling in her palm. The market’s patrons fell silent, the murmurs dying as if the darkness beyond the curtain
was swallowing
sound. A low hum rose, a
resonance
that
seemed to
vibrate through the stone floor and into Harlow’s bones. “Stay close,” she told Eva, her voice barely audible. “And keep your satchel ready. We may need something from those books.” Eva nodded, clutching her satchel tighter, the leather creaking. She adjusted her glasses, the lenses catching the lantern light and reflecting it back in a soft
glint
. The curtain peeled back with a sigh, revealing a narrow tunnel lined with ancient bricks, each
etched
with faint, glowing runes. The air grew colder, the scent of ozone intensifying. The compass needle pointed straight ahead, its tip glowing a faint, phosphorescent green. Harlow led the way, her boots
echo
ing in the tunnel. The walls
seemed to
pulse, the runes flickering like dying embers. She could feel a pressure building, a low thrum that
resonated
with the scar on the victim’s wrist. The tunnel opened into a cavernous chamber, its ceiling vaulted high above, the floor a
mosaic
of cracked tiles. In the center of the chamber stood a stone archway, its surface covered in swirling sigils that pulsed with a soft, amber light. The compass needle
quivered
, then steadied, pointing directly at the arch. Harlow stepped closer, the light from the arch reflecting off the brass casing, making the protective sigils on the compass flare briefly. “Someone’s been here,” she murmured, scanning the chamber. She noticed a faint residue of the same black oil on the floor, a trail leading from the arch to a hidden alcove. In the alcove lay a small, leather‑bound journal, its pages yellowed and brittle. Eva knelt, her glasses sliding down her nose. “This looks like a field notebook. Let’s see what it says.” Harlow lifted the journal, the cover bearing a single rune that matched the one on the victim’s coat. She opened it, the pages filled with cramped script, diagrams of portals, and notes in a language that
seemed to
shift as she read. The final entry was a hurried scrawl, ink smeared by a sudden burst of heat: “Compass aligned. Rift opening at midnight. Seal fails. Need to bind with blood of the keeper. If you find this… do not—” The last line trailed off, the ink smudged by a fresh smear of blood that matched the victim’s. Harlow’s heart hammered. The victim had been the keeper, the one who could seal the rift. He had
been killed
before he could complete the binding, his blood in
tended to
be the final seal. She turned to Eva, eyes hard. “We need to find the person who killed him. They’re still here, probably
watch
ing us. The compass led us to the rift, but the rift is a doorway. Whoever opened it could still be on the other side.” A sudden gust of wind rattled the stone walls, and the amber light of the arch flared, casting long shadows across the chamber. The black oil on the floor
began to
swirl, coalescing into a vortex that
seemed to
pull at the
very
air. The compass needle spun wildly, then snapped back to point at the arch, as if urging Harlow forward. She reached for the arch, her fingers brushing the sigils. The stone was warm, a heat that radiated outward, a pulse that matched the thrum in her chest. She felt a tug, a pull toward the other side, a whisper of voices she could not quite hear. “Hold on,” she whispered to Eva, who stepped back, clutching her satchel. “If this is a portal, we need to close it before more blood is spilled.” Harlow’s mind raced, recalling the victim’s notes, the mention of binding with the keeper’s blood. She glanced at the corpse’s coat, at the scorch on his wrist, at the faint imprint of a sigil on his skin. She realized the victim had
tried to
use his own blood as the seal, but the killer had interrupted him, using the compass to mislead. She pulled a small, silver dagger from her belt, the one she kept for emergencies—a relic from her military days, its blade honed to a razor’s edge. She pressed the tip to the scar on the victim’s wrist, feeling the faint heat still lingering. The dagger’s edge caught a drop of blood, a single bead that glowed faintly in the amber light. “Eva, give me the compass,” she said, her voice steady despite the growing hum of the portal. “We’ll use the blood as a conduit. If we can bind the rift with the keeper’s blood, we can close it.” Eva hesitated, then handed over the compass. The brass casing was cold, the needle trembling as if aware of its purpose. Harlow placed the compass on the stone arch, the needle pointing directly into the vortex. She pressed the dagger’s tip into the center of the compass, allowing the blood to seep into the protective sigils
etched
on its face. The compass reacted instantly, the protective sigils glowing brighter, the needle spinning faster until it stopped, pointing straight into the vortex. A low, resonant tone filled the chamber, a sound that
seemed to
vibrate through the
very
stones. The vortex
began to
contract, the black oil swirling tighter, the amber light dimming. The arch’s sigils flared, then faded, the stone turning cold under Harlow’s palm. The hum subsided, replaced by a deep, resonant click, as if a lock had
been engaged
. Harlow stepped back, breathing hard,
the weight of the moment
settling on her shoulders. She glanced at Eva, who
was watching
the arch with wide, frightened eyes. “It’s sealed,” Harlow said, her voice
barely above a whisper
. “For now.” Eva
let out a breath
she hadn’t realized she’d been holding. “What about the murderer?” Harlow’s
eyes narrowed
. “They’re still out there, hiding among the stalls. They thought the rift would give them a way out, a way to disappear. But they didn’t count on us finding the compass and using the keeper’s blood. The rift is closed, but the portal remains—somewhere in this market, someone can still open another.” She turned to the crowd, her gaze sweeping over the faces hidden in shadows. The market’s patrons, a mix of humans and things that lurked just beyond perception, stared back, some with curiosity, others with fear. The detective’s presence was a blade cutting through the veil of secrecy. “E
very
one, listen,” she called, her voice carrying across the stone. “The Veil Market is a place of bargains, but it’s also a place of danger. If you have information about who killed the vendor, now is the time to speak.” A murmur rose, then fell silent. A figure stepped forward from the shadows—a man in a tattered coat, his face obscured by a hood. He held a small, polished bone token, the same kind Harlow had used to enter. He lifted it, and the token’s surface glimmered with a faint, violet aura. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low and smooth. “You’ve done well to close the rift, but you’ve only bought yourself a little time. The Shade artisans will not be so easily thwarted.” Harlow’s jaw tightened. “Who are you?” The man chuckled, a sound that
seemed to
echo
off the stone walls. “I am a merchant of secrets. I sell what the world does not wish to know. And you, Detective, have just bought a
very
expensive lesson.” Eva’s
eyes widened
, her hand instinctively reaching for her satchel. “What do you want?” The merchant’s smile was a flash of teeth in the dim light. “I want the compass. It belongs to the Shade. It points to power. And I want the keeper’s blood, which you have just used. You have opened a door that cannot be closed again.” Harlow stepped forward, the brass compass still humming faintly in her palm. “You’re trying to use the rift for your own gain.” The merchant’s eyes
flickered
, a flash of something ancient and hungry. “The rift is a gateway, Detective. It is a conduit for those who know how to harness it. I am merely a facilitator.” A sudden crackle of electricity filled the air, and the stone arch, though sealed,
began to
glow with a faint, pulsing light. The merchant raised his hand, and the token in his palm flared, sending a wave of energy through the chamber. “Enough,” Harlow said, her voice firm. “You will not take the compass. I will not let you open another portal.” She lunged, the brass compass clattering against the stone floor, the needle spinning wildly. The merchant moved with surprising speed, his hood falling back to reveal a face half obscured by ash and a scar that ran from his left cheek to his jaw—a scar that matched the one on the victim’s coat. He lunged, the bone token in his hand, but Harlow’s reflexes, honed by years of service, were quicker. She sidestepped, the token slipping from his grasp and clattering to the floor. Eva, seizing the moment, swung her satchel, the leather strap snapping against the merchant’s wrist, sending the token skittering across the stone. The merchant stumbled, the amber light of the arch flickering as the rift’s energy surged. “Drop the token,” Harlow commanded, her voice a blade of steel. “Give yourself up.” The merchant’s eyes darted to the compass, then to the arch, then back to Harlow. He raised his hands, a gesture of surrender, but his expression remained inscrutable. “You think you’ve won,” he said, his voice a whisper that
seemed to
carry a
weight
of centuries. “But the Veil Market is not a place you can simply police. It is a living thing, and it will always find a way to feed.” A sudden, deafening roar
echo
ed through the chamber as the arch’s sigils flared one last time, a burst of light that washed over the market. The black oil on the floor evaporated, the vortex collapsing into a thin, shimmering veil that slipped away like a sigh. When the light dimmed, the merchant lay on the stone floor, his breathing shallow, his eyes glazed. The compass, now inert, lay beside him, its needle still pointing toward the arch, now dark and silent. Harlow knelt, her gloved hand hovering over the merchant’s chest. She felt the faint pulse of a heart that had been racing too fast, a life that had
been lived
in the shadows. She placed a hand on his forehead, feeling the lingering heat of the portal’s energy. “Who sent you?” she asked, the question more for herself than for the dead man. The merchant’s lips moved, a whisper that barely rose above the stone’s
echo
. “The Shade… they will come for you, Detective. They will come for all of us.” His eyes closed, and the silence returned, heavy and
oppressive
. Harlow stood, the compass in her palm, the
weight
of the case pressing against her chest like a stone. Eva approached, her satchel swinging, her glasses catching the dim light. “What do we do now?” she asked, her voice trembling. Harlow looked at the compass, at the arch, at the remnants of the portal. She could feel the pull of the Veil, the whisper of unseen forces that lingered in the air. She could feel the memory of DS Morris, his loss a phantom that haunted her steps. “We take this to the precinct,” she said, her voice low but resolute. “We lock it away, study it, and make sure no one else can use it. And we keep an eye on the market. The Veil Market moves, but we’ll be
watch
ing.” Eva nodded, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear, her fingers trembling as she clutched her satchel. “I’ll bring the archives. Maybe there’s something in the restricted section that can help us understand the Shade.” Harlow placed the compass back into her satchel, the brass casing cool against her palm. She glanced once more at the arch, the sigils now inert, the stone cold. The market’s patrons
began to
stir, their eyes shifting, their whispers resuming. The veil between worlds had
been thinned
, but for now, it was sealed. She turned to the exit, the bone token she had used still clutched in her hand. The night outside was bright with the full moon, its light spilling over the streets of Camden. The city’s ordinary hum seemed distant, a world apart from the darkness she had just left behind. As she stepped back into the night, the
watch
on her left wrist ticked once more, its hands moving as if they had never stopped. The sound was a reminder that time, like the Veil, could be both a barrier and a bridge. And Harlow Quinn, with her sharp jaw set and her military precision, would walk the line between them, determined to uncover the truth hidden in the shadows.
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2/17/2026, 12:16:32 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
70.8333%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
16
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"she told Eva, her voice barely audible [barely]"
1
"she whispered to Eva, who stepped back, clutching her satchel [back]"
2
"Harlow said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
88.0952%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
3360
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
3
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
1
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
25.5952%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
3360
totalAiIsms
25
found
0
word
"mosaic"
count
1
1
word
"resonated"
count
2
2
word
"resonance"
count
1
3
word
"flickered"
count
1
4
word
"flicked"
count
1
5
word
"glint"
count
1
6
word
"trembled"
count
1
7
word
"quivered"
count
2
8
word
"oppressive"
count
1
9
word
"furrowed"
count
1
10
word
"weight"
count
3
11
word
"echo"
count
3
12
word
"echoed"
count
1
13
word
"echoing"
count
2
14
word
"etched"
count
4
highlights
0
"mosaic"
1
"resonated"
2
"resonance"
3
"flickered"
4
"flicked"
5
"glint"
6
"trembled"
7
"quivered"
8
"oppressive"
9
"furrowed"
10
"weight"
11
"echo"
12
"echoed"
13
"echoing"
14
"etched"
0.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
6
maxInWindow
4
found
0
label
"let out a breath"
count
1
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
4
2
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"let out a breath"
1
"eyes widened"
2
"eyes narrowed"
3
"the weight of the moment"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
164
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
17
narrationSentences
164
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tended to"
2
"began to"
3
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
198
matches
(empty)
82.8834%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
77
mean
43.52
std
19.15
cv
0.44
sampleLengths
0
79
1
75
2
56
3
64
4
63
5
52
6
45
7
17
8
56
9
79
10
62
11
17
12
63
13
63
14
55
15
46
16
12
17
50
18
90
19
31
20
38
21
72
22
48
23
21
24
27
25
43
26
81
27
33
28
44
29
19
30
57
31
22
32
52
33
44
34
62
35
47
36
27
37
62
38
62
39
38
40
60
41
38
42
43
43
27
44
12
45
15
46
55
47
48
48
40
49
52
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
5
totalSentences
164
matches
0
"been etched"
1
"been killed"
2
"been engaged"
3
"been lived"
4
"been thinned"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
412
matches
0
"was missing"
1
"was swallowing"
2
"was watching"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2553
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"inert, lay beside him,"
adverbCount
59
adverbRatio
0.023110066588327458
lyAdverbCount
18
lyAdverbRatio
0.007050528789659225
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
198
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
198
mean
16.92
std
8.49
cv
0.502
sampleLengths
0
24
1
23
2
32
3
25
4
27
5
23
6
13
7
29
8
14
9
32
10
32
11
11
12
20
13
23
14
9
15
33
16
19
17
10
18
35
19
3
20
14
21
12
22
44
23
14
24
13
25
21
26
31
27
13
28
9
29
17
30
23
31
17
32
18
33
45
34
8
35
14
36
17
37
24
38
17
39
12
40
3
41
12
42
11
43
12
44
34
45
3
46
9
47
4
48
46
49
11
36.3636%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
27
diversityRatio
0.1919191919191919
totalSentences
198
uniqueOpeners
38
96.8750%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
16
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"she murmured, scanning the chamber (murmur, scan)"
1
"she whispered to Eva, who stepped back, clutching her satchel (whisper step clutch)"
2
"she called, her voice carrying across the stone (call, carry)"
3
"Harlow commanded, her voice a blade of steel (command, voice)"
4
"he said, his voice a whisper that seemed to carry a weight of centuries (say, seem carry)"
82.0380%