| 97.44% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he murmured around [around]" | | 1 | "Rory said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.487 | | leniency | 0.974 | | rawRatio | 0.105 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |
| 62.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 942 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 942 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "tinged" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "pounding" | | 4 | "furrowed" | | 5 | "constructed" | | 6 | "charged" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "unreadable" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "desire" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 943 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.52% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 723 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.49 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 16 | | Moreau | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | French | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Flipping | 1 | | Relief | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "French" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Relief" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.255 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 943 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.19% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 26.94 | | std | 10 | | cv | 0.371 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "The air between them crackled with the weight of history — the attraction, the hurt, the things left unsaid." |
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| 93.95% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 724 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.04005524861878453 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012430939226519336 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 10.97 | | std | 5.8 | | cv | 0.529 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 63.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3953488372093023 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 51.28% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, Lucien reached out, fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 78.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She froze, fingers still gripping" | | 1 | "His gaze sharpened." | | 2 | "She should have known her" | | 3 | "He leaned in, the faint" | | 4 | "He'd always had a way" | | 5 | "His gaze swept the cramped" | | 6 | "She glanced up, meeting his" | | 7 | "He reached into his suit" | | 8 | "he murmured around it, striking" | | 9 | "He took another drag, contemplative" | | 10 | "She chewed on her lip," | | 11 | "He took a step closer," | | 12 | "She shot him a pointed" | | 13 | "He took another drag, the" | | 14 | "She should have known there" | | 15 | "His gaze dropped to her" | | 16 | "She could feel the weight" | | 17 | "he murmured, voice low and" | | 18 | "She hated how her body" | | 19 | "she breathed, barely above a" |
| | ratio | 0.354 | |
| 21.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's heart leapt into her" | | 1 | "She froze, fingers still gripping" | | 2 | "A beat passed." | | 3 | "The air between them crackled" | | 4 | "Lucien's voice was low, tinged" | | 5 | "A small, wry smile played" | | 6 | "Rory swallowed hard, pulse pounding" | | 7 | "His gaze sharpened." | | 8 | "Rory's brow furrowed as she" | | 9 | "She should have known her" | | 10 | "Rory said, tone clipped" | | 11 | "Lucien's eyes narrowed slightly." | | 12 | "He leaned in, the faint" | | 13 | "Rory flinched, and in that" | | 14 | "He'd always had a way" | | 15 | "Lucien inclined his head, a" | | 16 | "His gaze swept the cramped" | | 17 | "Rory closed the door behind" | | 18 | "Lucien said at last, breaking" | | 19 | "Rory worried her lower lip," |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, tone clipped" | | 1 | "He took, contemplative" | | 2 | "She chewed, gaze darting away" | | 3 | "He took, the cigarette glowing in the dimly lit flat" | | 4 | "he murmured, voice low and rough" | | 5 | "Lucien murmured, his thumb caressing the delicate skin of her wrist" |
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| 21.79% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured around (murmur)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.205 | | leniency | 0.41 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.256 | |