| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 989 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 989 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "glistening" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "palpable" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "glinting" | | 10 | "unreadable" | | 11 | "otherworldly" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "anticipation" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "down her spine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 38.79% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 6 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "felt nervous" | | 2 | "y with warmth" | | 3 | "d in awe" | | 4 | "g with anticipation" | | 5 | "felt a shiver" |
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| 68.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 989 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.57% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 828 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Isolde | 10 | | Aurora | 11 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Courts | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.836 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "melody that seemed to blend with the rustling leaves and distant bird calls" | | 1 | "looked like miniature dragons, their wing" | | 2 | "as if blending with the shadows" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 989 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 36.63 | | std | 19.35 | | cv | 0.528 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 15 |
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| 87.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "being stretched" | | 1 | "was made" | | 2 | "was filled" | | 3 | "was carpeted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "was calling" | | 1 | "was willing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 833 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger." |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.027611044417767107 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012004801920768308 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 14.33 | | std | 6.3 | | cv | 0.44 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 64.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4057971014492754 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 57.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the path opened up" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 95.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 2 | "She touched the small crescent-shaped" | | 3 | "They looked like miniature dragons," | | 4 | "It chirped softly, its eyes" | | 5 | "She smiled, feeling a sense" | | 6 | "they murmured, their form shifting" | | 7 | "They continued their journey, the" | | 8 | "She recognized it immediately as" | | 9 | "she asked, turning to the" | | 10 | "She felt a sense of" | | 11 | "They moved on, the grove" | | 12 | "She felt a strange connection" | | 13 | "She could feel the magic" | | 14 | "She gasped, pulling her hand" | | 15 | "she asked, turning to Nyx" | | 16 | "She had come to this" | | 17 | "She knew that whatever lay" |
| | ratio | 0.31 | |
| 54.83% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped through the" | | 1 | "The moment her foot crossed" | | 2 | "The bustling sounds of Richmond" | | 3 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice a" | | 5 | "Aurora nodded, her bright blue" | | 6 | "The grove was a hidden" | | 7 | "Wildflowers bloomed in a riot" | | 8 | "The air was thick with" | | 9 | "Nyx moved silently beside her," | | 10 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 11 | "Aurora couldn't help but agree." | | 12 | "She touched the small crescent-shaped" | | 13 | "The Heartstone Pendant around her" | | 14 | "The path was narrow, winding" | | 15 | "Aurora's breath caught in her" | | 16 | "They looked like miniature dragons," | | 17 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 18 | "Aurora watched in awe as" | | 19 | "It chirped softly, its eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 17.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the air shimmering around her as if the very fabric of reality was being stretched thin." | | 1 | "She glanced back at Nyx, their form a dark silhouette against the amber sky of the mortal realm, and then at Isolde, who moved with an ethereal grace, her silve…" | | 2 | "The air was thick with the scent of jasmine and honeysuckle, and the ground beneath her feet felt softer, almost springy, as if the earth itself was alive." | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant around her neck pulsed faintly with warmth, a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her." | | 4 | "The trees seemed to whisper secrets, their branches swaying in a rhythm that matched the beating of Aurora's heart." | | 5 | "She felt a strange connection to this place, as if it was calling to her, urging her to explore further." | | 6 | "She knew that whatever lay ahead, she would face it with the strength and determination that had brought her this far." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their form shifting slightly as if blending with the shadows" |
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| 32.35% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.235 | |