Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
737
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
20
adverbRatio
0.027137042062415198
lyAdverbCount
7
lyAdverbRatio
0.009497964721845319
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
54
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
54
mean
16.43
std
9.15
cv
0.557
sampleLengths
0
11
1
18
2
19
3
8
4
10
5
21
6
15
7
16
8
20
9
22
10
17
11
5
12
26
13
30
14
11
15
11
16
18
17
14
18
15
19
11
20
12
21
5
22
20
23
14
24
24
25
12
26
9
27
6
28
39
29
10
30
34
31
15
32
11
33
13
34
13
35
17
36
17
37
34
38
16
39
12
40
3
41
4
42
13
43
13
44
28
45
11
46
20
47
12
48
20
49
5
76.5432%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.48148148148148145
totalSentences
54
uniqueOpeners
26
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"she called, crossing the cramped flat (call, cross)"
1
"he purred, his French accent making the simple words sound like silk sliding over skin (pur, make sound like slide)"
2
"he said softly (say softly)"
3
"she snapped, trying to forget the way he'd held her, the way his lips had felt against her skin, the keening, desperate sound of his voice as he begged her to stay (snap, try forget hold feel keen, beg stay)"
4
"he snarled (snarl)"
5
"he murmured, his eyes cutting right through her (murmur, cutting right)"
6
"she whispered to herself, clinging to the words like a drowning woman clutching a spar (whisper cling like clutch)"