| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice echoed oddly [oddly]" | | 1 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |
| 89.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 960 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 58.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 960 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "could feel" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "resonance" | | 4 | "charged" | | 5 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "happened to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 973 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.28% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 803 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 12 | | Greek | 1 | | Street | 2 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Camden | 1 | | High | 1 | | Underground | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Herrera | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Nest" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Saint" | | 5 | "Christopher" | | 6 | "Herrera" |
| | places | | 0 | "Greek" | | 1 | "Street" | | 2 | "Soho" | | 3 | "Camden" | | 4 | "High" |
| | globalScore | 0.753 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite bring into focus" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 973 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.82% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "off that night" | | 1 | "screamed that this" | | 2 | "lights that cast" |
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| 89.46% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 40.54 | | std | 18.77 | | cv | 0.463 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 57 | | 23 | 62 |
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| 75.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "been closed" | | 1 | "were lost" | | 2 | "was connected" | | 3 | "been transformed" | | 4 | "been disturbed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "were definitely moving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.2 | | matches | | 0 | "This runner knew something - she could feel it in her bones, the same way she'd felt something was off that night she lost her partner." | | 1 | "The figure ahead wasn't tiring - if anything, they seemed to be moving with renewed purpose." | | 2 | "But something about the darkness felt wrong - deeper than it should be, with an odd shimmer at its edges that made her eyes hurt." | | 3 | "The worn leather of her watch band pressed against her wrist as she checked the time - 23:47." | | 4 | "The beam of her torch caught something at the bottom of the stairs - a small white object that gleamed like bone." | | 5 | "Her instincts screamed that this was connected to Morris's case - to the inconsistencies in the evidence, the strange symbols found at the scene, the witnesses who seemed to forget critical details overnight." | | 6 | "A sound echoed up from below - footsteps, but with an odd resonance that suggested a much larger space than should exist here." | | 7 | "The air felt different - heavier, charged with something that made the hair on her arms stand up." | | 8 | "She caught movement ahead - her suspect, pushing through a crowd she couldn't quite bring into focus." | | 9 | "The lights flickered, and Quinn heard something moving in the tunnel behind her - something that sounded much larger than human footsteps." | | 10 | "She burst out onto the street, rain still falling, her watch showing 23:49 - only two minutes had passed." | | 11 | "But in her pocket, the bone token still felt warm against her thigh, and she could smell something on her clothes - like ozone and old books and secrets." | | 12 | "And she would be back - properly prepared next time." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 790 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.030379746835443037 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012658227848101266 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 14.97 | | std | 7.42 | | cv | 0.495 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 70.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.46153846153846156 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, stalls lined the curved" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "They emerged onto Camden High" | | 1 | "She cut off as she" | | 2 | "Her radio crackled with a" | | 3 | "Her instincts screamed that this" | | 4 | "She caught movement ahead -" | | 5 | "Her voice echoed oddly, and" | | 6 | "He wore medical scrubs under" | | 7 | "He smiled sadly, the scar" | | 8 | "He nodded toward the other" | | 9 | "Her tactical training warred with" | | 10 | "she said finally, backing toward" | | 11 | "She burst out onto the" | | 12 | "She pulled out her notebook" |
| | ratio | 0.228 | |
| 65.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Quinn's boots splashed through" | | 1 | "Rain pelted her face, but" | | 2 | "The green neon glow of" | | 3 | "The suspect darted left down" | | 4 | "Quinn followed, her practiced stride" | | 5 | "This runner knew something -" | | 6 | "They emerged onto Camden High" | | 7 | "Quinn's breath came in controlled" | | 8 | "The figure ahead wasn't tiring" | | 9 | "The suspect veered suddenly, disappearing" | | 10 | "Quinn slowed, hand moving to" | | 11 | "She cut off as she" | | 12 | "The padlocked gate at the" | | 13 | "This station had been closed" | | 14 | "Quinn drew her torch with" | | 15 | "The worn leather of her" | | 16 | "Her radio crackled with a" | | 17 | "The beam of her torch" | | 18 | "Her instincts screamed that this" | | 19 | "A sound echoed up from" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "But something about the darkness felt wrong - deeper than it should be, with an odd shimmer at its edges that made her eyes hurt." | | 1 | "Her instincts screamed that this was connected to Morris's case - to the inconsistencies in the evidence, the strange symbols found at the scene, the witnesses …" | | 2 | "The air felt different - heavier, charged with something that made the hair on her arms stand up." | | 3 | "The lights flickered, and Quinn heard something moving in the tunnel behind her - something that sounded much larger than human footsteps." | | 4 | "She burst out onto the street, rain still falling, her watch showing 23:49 - only two minutes had passed." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Herrera agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |