Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC989VP3KZD0D4JQB4BMZ

Run Details

Duration:
16.3s
Cost:
$0.024065
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood in the narrow hallway of Eva's flat, her fingers brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she hadn't quite shaken. The air was thick with the scent of spices wafting up from the curry house below, mingling with the musty aroma of old books and parchment. She glanced at the three deadbolts on the front door, each one a testament to Eva's paranoia, and wondered if she should have called first. But it was too late for second-guessing now. She raised her hand and knocked, the sound echoing in the cramped stairwell. A moment later, she heard the shuffling of feet and the soft meow of Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat. The door creaked open, and there he stood — Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, looking as impeccably dressed as ever in a tailored charcoal suit. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, locked onto hers, and for a moment, the world seemed to hold its breath. "Rory," he said, his voice smooth and tinged with a hint of surprise. "What brings you here?" Aurora swallowed, her mouth suddenly dry. "I need to talk to Eva. Is she in?" Lucien stepped aside, allowing her to enter. "She's out running an errand. Should be back soon. You can wait inside if you like." She hesitated, then nodded, stepping past him into the flat. The familiar clutter of books, scrolls, and research notes greeted her, a chaotic comfort. Ptolemy wound his way around her ankles, purring softly. She bent down to scratch behind his ears, using the moment to gather her thoughts. Lucien closed the door behind her, the click of the deadbolts sliding into place a stark reminder of the barriers between them. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, watching her with an intensity that made her skin prickle. "It's been a while," he said, breaking the silence. "Yeah," she replied, straightening up. "It has." He moved to the small kitchenette, opening a cupboard and pulling out a bottle of red wine. "Would you like a drink? It might help... ease the tension." Aurora considered it, then nodded. "Sure. Why not?" Lucien poured two glasses, handing one to her. Their fingers brushed, and a jolt of electricity shot through her, a reminder of the chemistry that had always simmered between them. She took a sip, the rich, velvety taste of the wine grounding her. "So," he said, leaning against the counter, "what's so urgent that you had to come here unannounced?" She took a deep breath, meeting his gaze. "I need Eva's help with something. Something... personal." His eyes narrowed slightly, curiosity piqued. "Personal? Does this have anything to do with your ex?" Aurora flinched at the mention of Evan, memories of their tumultuous relationship flooding back. "No. It's not about him." Lucien studied her for a moment, then nodded. "Alright. But you know, you can always talk to me, Rory. I might be able to help." She shook her head, a bitter smile tugging at her lips. "I appreciate the offer, Lucien, but this is something only Eva can help with." He sighed, taking a sip of his wine. "Fair enough. But you should know, I still care about you. Despite everything." Her heart clenched at his words, the unspoken history between them hanging heavy in the air. "I know," she said softly. "I care about you too. But things are... complicated." He chuckled, a low, rueful sound. "Complicated seems to be our specialty." They lapsed into silence, the only sound the ticking of a clock on the wall and the distant hum of traffic outside. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flashing before her eyes — the stolen glances, the heated arguments, the nights spent talking until dawn. She had never been able to fully let go of him, and seeing him now, so close yet so distant, was like reopening an old wound. "Do you ever think about what might have been?" she asked suddenly, the words slipping out before she could stop them. Lucien's eyes darkened, a shadow passing over his face. "All the time," he admitted. "But we can't change the past, Rory. We can only move forward." She nodded, knowing he was right but wishing things could be different. "I just... I wish things hadn't ended the way they did." He reached out, his hand hovering just above hers, as if afraid to touch her. "So do I. But maybe... maybe we can start over. As friends, if nothing else." Aurora looked up at him, her bright blue eyes searching his face for any sign of deception. But all she saw was sincerity, and a glimmer of hope. "I'd like that," she said quietly. "I'd like that a lot." A small smile tugged at the corners of his mouth, and he finally let his hand rest on hers, a simple gesture that spoke volumes. "Then let's try. One step at a time." She nodded, feeling a weight lift off her shoulders. Maybe things could be different this time. Maybe they could find a way to navigate the complicated web of their past and build something new. Just then, the door creaked open, and Eva walked in, her arms laden with grocery bags. She paused, taking in the scene before her with a raised eyebrow. "Well, this is a surprise," she said, setting the bags down on the table. "What's going on here?" Aurora and Lucien exchanged a glance, a silent understanding passing between them. "Just catching up," Aurora said, a genuine smile spreading across her face. "It's good to see you, Eva." Eva looked between them, a knowing smile playing on her lips. "It's good to see you too, Rory. And you, Lucien. I hope you two are behaving yourselves." Lucien chuckled, raising his glass in a mock toast. "Always, Eva. Always." As they settled into the familiar rhythm of conversation, Aurora felt a sense of peace she hadn't felt in a long time. Maybe things were still complicated, but for the first time in a long time, she felt like they were heading in the right direction. And that was enough. For now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
51.4091% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1029
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.9728% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1029
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"testament"
count1
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"testament"
1"tinged"
2"unspoken"
3"stark"
4"weight"
5"echoing"
6"navigate"
33.3333% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
2"a glimmer of hope"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"like that,\" she"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean30.24
std18.96
cv0.627
sampleLengths
087
177
217
315
423
548
638
79
87
928
108
1143
1217
1316
1416
1519
1625
1725
1821
1930
2012
2173
2221
2326
2423
2530
2639
2733
2834
2946
3030
3128
3212
3352
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs134
matches
0"were heading"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount779
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.037227214377406934
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.012836970474967908
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean12.39
std6.61
cv0.533
sampleLengths
028
126
225
38
413
518
624
722
813
94
106
119
127
1316
1410
1514
169
1715
1822
1916
209
215
222
2317
2411
255
263
278
2822
2913
3017
318
328
336
3410
3514
365
378
3817
3911
4014
418
4213
4316
445
459
466
476
4822
4925
67.4699% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.43373493975903615
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners36
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"he said, his voice smooth and tinged with a hint of surprise (say, tinged)"
1"he said, breaking the silence (say, break)"
2"she replied, straightening up (reply, straighten up)"
3"she said softly (say softly)"
4"he admitted (admit)"
5"she said quietly (say quietly)"
6"she said, setting the bags down on the table (say, set)"
7"Aurora said, a genuine smile spreading across her face (say, spread)"
79.1089%