| 42.11% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said firmly [firmly]" | | 1 | "he said sincerely [sincerely]" | | 2 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.679 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.158 | | effectiveRatio | 0.158 | |
| 90.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1068 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1068 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "unreadable" | | 1 | "chaotic" | | 2 | "sanctuary" | | 3 | "imposing" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "wavering" | | 6 | "intensity" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "echoes" | | 9 | "firmly" | | 10 | "potential" | | 11 | "beacon" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "grave" | | 14 | "tension" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "electric" | | 17 | "charged" | | 18 | "weight" | | 19 | "silence" | | 20 | "comfortable" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "wave of emotion" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "A wave of relief" | | 2 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 96.75% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "e with surprise" | | 1 | "A wave of relief" |
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| 94.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1068 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.65% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 857 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.87 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Lucien | 16 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 1 | | Sleepy | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Moreau" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.567 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1068 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.81% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 38.14 | | std | 13.84 | | cv | 0.363 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 862 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.018561484918793503 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0069605568445475635 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 73.77% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 15.71 | | std | 5.25 | | cv | 0.334 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 50.98% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3235294117647059 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 43.73% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been months since" | | 1 | "She leaned against the doorframe," | | 2 | "His expression was unreadable, a" | | 3 | "he said, his accent a" | | 4 | "She stepped aside, gesturing for" | | 5 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 6 | "She crossed her arms, a" | | 7 | "He watched her, the air" | | 8 | "She omitted the nights she'd" | | 9 | "His demonic heritage gave him" | | 10 | "he asked, the name tasting" | | 11 | "He had always seen the" | | 12 | "he said sincerely" | | 13 | "She needed to know what" | | 14 | "he said, his tone grave" | | 15 | "she asked, her mind already" | | 16 | "She had faced down her" | | 17 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 18 | "she said finally, her eyes" | | 19 | "He nodded, understanding the gravity" |
| | ratio | 0.441 | |
| 2.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The door to Eva's flat" | | 1 | "The sight of Lucien Moreau" | | 2 | "It had been months since" | | 3 | "Rory breathed out, her voice" | | 4 | "She leaned against the doorframe," | | 5 | "Lucien's gaze traveled over her," | | 6 | "His expression was unreadable, a" | | 7 | "he said, his accent a" | | 8 | "She stepped aside, gesturing for" | | 9 | "The flat was a chaotic" | | 10 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, regarded" | | 11 | "Lucien moved with an ease" | | 12 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 13 | "The door clicked shut behind" | | 14 | "Rory said, her cool-headedness wavering" | | 15 | "She crossed her arms, a" | | 16 | "Lucien admitted, his voice a" | | 17 | "He watched her, the air" | | 18 | "Rory scoffed, a weak attempt" | | 19 | "She omitted the nights she'd" |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 3.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien moved with an ease that belied his imposing height, his tailored charcoal suit fitting him like a second skin." | | 1 | "She crossed her arms, a defensive gesture that did nothing to hide the tremor in her fingers." | | 2 | "The thought of her with someone like Evan, who couldn't appreciate her light, had been a constant source of frustration." | | 3 | "Rory's heart pounded in her chest, adrenaline mingling with the tension that simmered beneath the surface of their conversation." | | 4 | "The air between them was electric, charged with the weight of their shared history and the undeniable chemistry that crackled whenever they were together." | | 5 | "They stood there, the silence comfortable despite the undercurrent of urgency that had brought Lucien to her door." | | 6 | "There was a connection between her and Lucien that refused to be ignored, a pull that was both exhilarating and terrifying." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory breathed, her voice steady despite the flutter in her chest" | | 1 | "Rory said, her cool-headedness wavering under the intensity of his gaze" | | 2 | "Lucien admitted, his voice a low rumble" | | 3 | "Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "she asked, her mind already racing with possibilities" | | 5 | "Lucien replied, his hand instinctively tightening on the handle of his cane" | | 6 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 7 | "he agreed, the promise hanging between them like a binding oath" |
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| 61.76% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Lucien admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "he agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.607 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.176 | | effectiveRatio | 0.176 | |