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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98B14GQ79G27ED99JYV
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
27.6s
Cost:
$0.001543
Provider:
Novita
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The door to Eva's flat swung open with a reluctant creak, and there stood Aurora Carter, her bright blue eyes wide with surprise. The sight of Lucien Moreau on the threshold, with his slicked-back platinum blond hair and heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black,
sent a jolt through
her. It had been months since they'd parted on those complicated terms, their last conversation a tangled mess of attraction and hurt. "Lucien," Rory breathed out, her voice steady despite the flutter in her chest. She leaned against the doorframe, her shoulder-length black hair catching the dim light of the hallway. "I didn't expect to see you here." Lucien's gaze traveled over her, taking in the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a relic of a childhood accident. His expression was
unreadable
, a mask honed by years in the supernatural underworld of London. "I needed to speak with you, Rory," he said, his accent a soft melody that danced around the hard edges of his words. She stepped aside, gesturing for him to enter. The flat was a chaotic
sanctuary
of knowledge, every surface cluttered with books, scrolls, and Eva's research notes. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, regarded Lucien with Sleepy disinterest from his perch atop a stack of ancient tomes. Lucien moved with an ease that belied his
imposing
height, his tailored charcoal suit fitting him like a second skin. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the hidden blade within a secret he carried close. The door clicked shut behind them, the sound
echoing
in the small space. "It's been a long time," Rory said, her cool-headedness
wavering
under the intensity of his gaze. She crossed her arms, a defensive gesture that did nothing to hide the tremor in her fingers. "Too long," Lucien admitted, his voice a low rumble. He watched her, the air between them thick with things left unsaid. "I've thought about you, wondered how you were managing in this city that's both yours and not." Rory scoffed, a weak attempt at nonchalance. "I manage just fine. London's been good to me." She omitted the nights she'd lain awake, memories of their time together haunting her thoughts. Lucien's eyes
flickered
to the scar on her wrist, a silent question hanging between them. His demonic heritage gave him an acute sensitivity to the
echoes
of pain and trauma. "And Evan?" he asked, the name tasting like ash on his tongue. "Gone," Rory said firmly, her chin lifted in a show of strength. "I'm done with that part of my life."
A wave of relief
washed over Lucien, though he was careful not to let it show. He had always seen the potential in Rory, her intelligence and quick thinking a
beacon
in the murky waters of the supernatural world. The thought of her with someone like Evan, who couldn't appreciate her light, had been a constant source of frustration. "I'm glad to hear it," he said sincerely. "You deserve better than what he could offer." Rory's eyes met his, and for a moment, the room
seemed to
shrink, the clutter fading into the background. There was a pull between them, an undercurrent of attraction that neither could deny, no matter how complicated their history. "Why are you
really
here, Lucien?" Rory asked, her voice
barely above a whisper
. She needed to know what drove him to seek her out after all this time. Lucien took a step closer, his gaze holding hers. "I came to warn you," he said, his tone grave. "There are forces at play that could put you in danger. Your connection to me, to Eva... it makes you a target." Rory's
heart pounded in her chest
, adrenaline mingling with the tension that simmered beneath the surface of their conversation. "What kind of forces?" she asked, her mind already racing with possibilities. "The kind that don't take kindly to half-demons meddling in their affairs," Lucien replied, his hand instinctively tightening on the handle of his cane. "And the kind that would exploit a human with your unique talents." A shiver ran down Rory's spine, but she refused to let fear take hold. She had faced down her own demons, both literal and figurative, and she would not be cowed by threats unseen. "I can take care of myself," she said, her voice steady. "I don't
doubt that," Lucien
said with a small smile. "But even the strongest among us need allies. I want to be that for you, Rory. If you'll let me." The air between them was electric, charged with the
weight
of their shared history and the undeniable chemistry that crackled whenever they were together. Rory knew the risks of getting entangled with someone like Lucien, a man who walked the line between the human world and the supernatural with ease. But she also knew the value of having an ally with his resources and knowledge. "I'll consider it," she said finally, her eyes never leaving his. "But only if you're honest with me. No secrets, Lucien. Not this time." He nodded, understanding the gravity of her words. "No secrets," he agreed, the promise hanging between them like a binding oath. They stood there, the silence comfortable despite the undercurrent of urgency that had brought Lucien to her door. Ptolemy leaped from his perch, winding his way around Lucien's legs in a silent show of approval. Rory let out a soft laugh, the sound breaking the tension. "I think Ptolemy has made his opinion known," she said, gesturing to the cat. Lucien glanced down, a genuine smile spreading across his face. "It seems I have at least one ally here," he mused, reaching down to scratch the tabby behind the ears. Rory rolled her eyes, but the corners of her mouth tugged upward in a smile. "Come on," she said, motioning toward the cluttered kitchen. "I'll make us some tea. We have a lot to discuss." As they moved through the flat, the barriers Rory had erected around her heart
began to
crumble. There was a connection between her and Lucien that refused to be ignored, a pull that was both exhilarating and terrifying. She knew the road ahead would be fraught with danger, but for the first time in a long time, she didn't feel alone. And as Lucien sat across from her, his heterochromatic eyes never straying from her face, Rory realized that perhaps some reunions were worth the risk.
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2/17/2026, 1:45:58 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
40.7407%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
18
adverbTagCount
5
adverbTags
0
"he said, his accent a soft melody that danced around the hard edges of his words [around]"
1
"Rory said firmly, her chin lifted in a show of strength [firmly]"
2
"he said sincerely [sincerely]"
3
"Lucien replied, his hand instinctively tightening on the handle of his cane [instinctively]"
4
"she said finally, her eyes never leaving his [finally]"
81.3780%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1074
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
1
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
1
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
16.2011%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1074
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"beacon"
count
1
1
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
2
word
"flickered"
count
1
3
word
"wavering"
count
1
4
word
"imposing"
count
1
5
word
"unreadable"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
1
7
word
"echoes"
count
1
8
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"beacon"
1
"sanctuary"
2
"flickered"
3
"wavering"
4
"imposing"
5
"unreadable"
6
"weight"
7
"echoes"
8
"echoing"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"wave of emotion"
count
1
2
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"A wave of relief"
2
"sent a jolt through"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
59
matches
0
"A wave of relief"
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
59
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"doubt that,\" Lucien"
60.8147%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
38.14
std
13.84
cv
0.363
sampleLengths
0
70
1
36
2
59
3
44
4
48
5
33
6
38
7
31
8
42
9
20
10
59
11
16
12
39
13
29
14
41
15
31
16
36
17
45
18
30
19
65
20
24
21
21
22
35
23
25
24
30
25
35
26
61
27
25
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
59
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
135
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
862
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
15
adverbRatio
0.01740139211136891
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.0069605568445475635
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
68
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
73.7745%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
68
mean
15.71
std
5.25
cv
0.334
sampleLengths
0
23
1
26
2
21
3
13
4
16
5
7
6
21
7
15
8
23
9
8
10
18
11
18
12
20
13
15
14
13
15
16
16
17
17
9
18
12
19
17
20
7
21
24
22
15
23
15
24
12
25
12
26
8
27
16
28
23
29
20
30
8
31
8
32
19
33
20
34
14
35
15
36
9
37
10
38
22
39
19
40
12
41
24
42
12
43
14
44
20
45
11
46
10
47
20
48
24
49
26
50.9804%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.3235294117647059
totalSentences
68
uniqueOpeners
22
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
18
fancyCount
12
fancyTags
0
"Rory breathed out, her voice steady despite the flutter in her chest (breathe)"
1
"he said, his accent a soft melody that danced around the hard edges of his words (say, dance around)"
2
"Rory said, her cool-headedness wavering under the intensity of his gaze (say, waver)"
3
"Lucien admitted, his voice a low rumble (admit)"
4
"Rory said firmly, her chin lifted in a show of strength (say firmly, lift)"
5
"he said sincerely (say sincerely)"
6
"Lucien replied, his hand instinctively tightening on the handle of his cane (reply, instinctively tighten)"
7
"she said finally, her eyes never leaving his (say finally, do not never leave)"
8
"he agreed, the promise hanging between them like a binding oath (agree, hang like)"
9
"she said, gesturing to the cat (say, gesture)"
10
"he mused, reaching down to scratch the tabby behind the ears (muse, reach scratch)"
11
"she said, motioning toward the cluttered kitchen (say, motion)"
74.0915%