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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98C3YZ8NNJG5V9WBHWX
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
29.4s
Cost:
$0.001676
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape, her
footsteps
echoing
against the cold, tiled walls of the abandoned Tube station.
The air was thick with
the must of disuse and the metallic tang of old blood. She adjusted the collar of her trench coat, her sharp jaw set in a grim line as her brown eyes swept over the scene before her. The body lay at an unnatural angle, a
macabre
statue among the shadows and graffiti-tagged benches. A bone token,
etched
with runes that made her eyes ache to look at,
was clutched
in the victim's hand. The token was a pass to the Veil Market, a place Quinn knew only by reputation—a hidden bazaar for the occult and the supernatural. Eva Kowalski, her red hair a fiery halo in the flickering lights, looked up from her notes as Quinn approached. "Harlow," she greeted, pushing her round glasses up the bridge of her freckled nose. "I was hoping you'd get here soon." Quinn's worn leather
watch
ticked away the seconds as she knelt beside the body, her movements precise, her bearing that of military precision. "What have we got, Evie?" Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear, a nervous habit Quinn had come to know well. "Male, mid-thirties. No ID, but the market regulars know him as Thomas. He was a supplier of rare alchemical ingredients." She gestured to the body's outstr
etched
hand. "Found with that token. No visible wounds, no immediate cause of death." Quinn's gaze lingered on the bone token, the runes seeming to pulse with an
otherworldly
glow. "And the market?" "Gone," Eva replied, her voice a whisper. "Packed up and vanished like morning fog. They're careful, Harlow. They don't leave anything behind that could lead back to them." Quinn stood, her height giving her an
imposing
presence as she surveyed the scene. Something was wrong. The evidence was too neat, too controlled. "Who found the body?" "A couple of teenagers. They were urban exploring and stumbled across him," Eva said, her green eyes reflecting the tragedy of the scene. Quinn walked the perimeter, her mind racing. The Veil Market moved locations every full moon, yet Thomas
was found
here, in a place that should have been empty. She paused, her gaze falling on a small brass compass partially obscured by a discarded newspaper. The casing had a patina of verdigris, and the face
was etched
with protective sigils. A shadow compass—a tool for finding the supernatural. She picked it up, turning it over in her hands. The needle spun wildly before settling, pointing towards a seemingly solid wall. "Evie, did you know about this?" Eva joined her, her eyes widening at the sight of the compass. "I've read about them, but I've never seen one in person. They're crafted by Shade artisans, attuned to the energy of rifts and portals." Quinn's mind pieced together the puzzle. "This Tube station was the market's last location. Thomas must have used the compass to find his way back, but why?" Eva knelt, her fingers brushing over the etchings on the bone token. "Maybe he was running from something, or someone. If he knew he was in danger..." The detective's sharp jaw tightened. "Or he was lured here. Deliberately." A junior officer approached, his face pale beneath the harsh lighting. "Detective Quinn, we've finished canvassing the area. No one saw or heard anything unusual." Quinn nodded, her attention still on the compass. "Keep looking. There's more to this place than meets the eye." As the officer retreated, Quinn stepped towards the wall the compass needle indicated. She placed her hand against the cold tile, feeling for any irregularities. Her fingers found a hairline crack, a seam hidden within the grout. She pressed, and with a low rumble, a section of the wall swung inward, revealing a hidden passage. Eva's breath hitched as she followed Quinn into the darkness beyond. The passage was narrow, the air heavy with the scent of earth and old magic. They emerged into a cavernous space, the remnants of the Veil Market's last stand evident in the scattered crates and abandoned stalls. In the center of the room, a rift pulsed with a dark, violet light, the air around it shimmering like a heat mirage. The body of a Shade artisan lay nearby, his
ethereal
form dissipating into the ether. Quinn approached the rift, her detective's mind cataloging every detail. "This is how they travel, how they stay hidden. Thomas must have come through here, but he wasn't alone." Eva's eyes were wide with fear and fascination. "The market wouldn't leave one of their own behind. Something must have gone wrong." Quinn nodded, her gaze fixed on the rift. "An accident? A betrayal?" "Or a sacrifice," Eva whispered, her voice
echoing
in the vast space. The detective turned the shadow compass over in her hand, the sigils glowing
softly
in the presence of the rift. "We need to understand how this works, Evie. It's the key to solving this case." Eva stepped forward, her worn leather satchel thumping against her hip. "I'll take it to the British Museum, consult the restricted archives. If there's information to be found, I'll find it." Quinn's
watch
ticked on, a steady rhythm
amidst
the uncertainty. She looked back at the hidden entrance, the body of Thomas, and the rift that connected worlds. "I'll have forensics go over the market with a fine-tooth comb. We need to know everything about Thomas's last hours." Eva nodded, her hand reaching out to
gently
touch the rift's energy field. "I'll be careful, Harlow. I know what's at stake." Quinn's eyes softened for a moment, a rare show of vulnerability. "I can't lose anyone else to this darkness, Evie. Not again." Eva met her gaze, her own resolve hardening. "We'll find the truth. Together." With a final glance at the rift, Quinn turned away, ready to face the long night ahead. The Veil Market had left its mark on London, and it was up to her to
unravel
its secrets. She would follow the evidence, no matter how deep it took her into the supernatural underworld. For now, the shadow compass would guide them, a
beacon
in the darkness. But the real question remained—who
was pulling
the strings, and to what end? Quinn stepped back into the abandoned Tube station, her mind already
churning
with theories and questions. The crime scene was a puzzle, and she
was determined
to solve it, one piece at a time. She would not rest until the truth
was laid
bare, no matter how unsettling it might be. For in the shadows of the Veil Market, the line between the living and the dead was perilously thin, and Harlow Quinn was the only one standing in defense of that fragile boundary.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
73.6842%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1140
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"deliberately"
count
1
1
adverb
"gently"
count
1
2
adverb
"softly"
count
1
highlights
0
"deliberately"
1
"gently"
2
"softly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1140
totalAiIsms
13
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
1
1
word
"beacon"
count
1
2
word
"churning"
count
1
3
word
"macabre"
count
1
4
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
5
word
"imposing"
count
1
6
word
"footsteps"
count
1
7
word
"amidst"
count
1
8
word
"echoing"
count
2
9
word
"etched"
count
2
10
word
"unravel"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"beacon"
2
"churning"
3
"macabre"
4
"otherworldly"
5
"imposing"
6
"footsteps"
7
"amidst"
8
"echoing"
9
"etched"
10
"unravel"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
59
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
59
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
81
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
32
mean
35.44
std
19.07
cv
0.538
sampleLengths
0
63
1
60
2
41
3
28
4
56
5
19
6
28
7
28
8
23
9
67
10
28
11
36
12
27
13
27
14
11
15
25
16
19
17
55
18
48
19
38
20
29
21
22
22
12
23
12
24
35
25
31
26
47
27
22
28
22
29
13
30
78
31
84
76.8362%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
5
totalSentences
59
matches
0
"was clutched"
1
"was found"
2
"was etched"
3
"was determined"
4
"was laid"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
126
matches
0
"was pulling"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
835
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
21
adverbRatio
0.025149700598802394
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.010778443113772455
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
81
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
81
mean
14
std
6.2
cv
0.443
sampleLengths
0
21
1
16
2
26
3
16
4
20
5
24
6
20
7
14
8
7
9
23
10
5
11
17
12
27
13
12
14
16
15
3
16
7
17
21
18
14
19
3
20
7
21
4
22
23
23
7
24
21
25
16
26
15
27
8
28
10
29
12
30
6
31
12
32
24
33
6
34
21
35
12
36
15
37
5
38
6
39
11
40
14
41
8
42
11
43
13
44
12
45
12
46
18
47
11
48
15
49
22
61.7284%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.37037037037037035
totalSentences
81
uniqueOpeners
30
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"she greeted, pushing her round glasses up the bridge of her freckled nose (greet, push)"
1
"Eva replied, her voice a whisper (reply, voice)"
2
"Eva said, her green eyes reflecting the tragedy of the scene (say, reflect)"
3
"Eva whispered, her voice echoing in the vast space (whisper, echo)"
83.0735%