| 0.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Herrera called out, his Spanish accent more pronounced under stress [more]" | | 1 | "Herrera said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "he said, stepping backward through the rippling wall [backward]" |
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| 78.0461% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 911 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 89.0231% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 911 | | totalAiIsms | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" | | 2 | "tended to" |
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| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 59.6051% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 41.73 | | std | 14.96 | | cv | 0.359 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 58 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "been closed" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 819 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.030525030525030524 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004884004884004884 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 60 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 60 | | mean | 15.3 | | std | 6.49 | | cv | 0.424 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 80.5556% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.48333333333333334 | | totalSentences | 60 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 8.3333% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "shouted (shout)" | | 1 | "Herrera called out, his Spanish accent more pronounced under stress (call out, accent more)" | | 2 | "Herrera said softly (say softly)" | | 3 | "he said, stepping backward through the rippling wall (say, step backward)" |
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