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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98CATKTH53DYMCMTBBP
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
26.0s
Cost:
$0.001539
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape, her gaze sweeping across the chaotic tableau of the abandoned Tube station.
The air was thick with
the scent of damp concrete and something else, something that set her teeth on edge. It was the metallic tang of magic, a smell she had come to know all too well since Morris's disappearance. The crime scene was an assault on the senses. Chalk outlines marked the positions of three bodies, their forms grotesque in their stillness. The walls
were scrawled
with symbols that
seemed to
writhe in the dim glow of the police lights, a language that was decidedly not of this world. And yet, there was a precision to the chaos, a pattern that eluded her at first glance. Her colleague, Sergeant Alistair Crane, approached, his face a mask of weary confusion. "Quinn," he greeted, "I can't make heads or tails of this. The victims appear to have been killed by some sort of animal, but the forensics team found no trace of one." Harlow's sharp jaw tightened as she crouched beside one of the outlines, her military precision evident in the steadiness of her hands. "Animal attacks don't usually leave pentagrams
etched
into the floor," she observed dryly. Her brown eyes
flickered
to the symbols on the walls, noting the similarities to cases she and Morris had once worked. Crane ran a hand through his thinning hair, leaving it disheveled. "We're at a loss, Quinn. The Commissioner's breathing down our necks, and the press is going to have a field day with this." Harlow stood, brushing off her trousers. She glanced at her worn leather
watch
. Time was a luxury they didn't have. "Tell me everything," she said, her voice carrying the
weight
of her 18 years of service. As Crane relayed the findings, Harlow listened with half an ear, her attention drawn to the peculiar behavior of the shadows. They
seemed to
dance
at the edge of her vision, a trick of the light, perhaps, but she had learned to trust her instincts. She reached into her pocket, her fingers wrapping around the small brass compass she had acquired from the Veil Market. The needle spun wildly before settling, pointing toward a narrow service tunnel. Eva Kowalski, a childhood friend and an occult researcher, had given her the Veil Compass. Eva had warned her about the dangers of the supernatural underworld, but Harlow had always
been drawn
to the fire. She stepped toward the tunnel, her senses alert. "Quinn, where are you going?" Crane called after her, but she was already swallowed by the darkness. The tunnel was narrow, the walls slick with condensation. Harlow's
footsteps
echoed
, the sound muffled by the heavy air. The compass led her to a rusted metal door, the sigils on its surface barely visible beneath layers of verdigris. She pressed her hand against the cold surface, feeling the hum of energy beneath her fingertips. Inside, the room was a
stark
contrast to the chaos of the station. It was orderly, almost sterile, with a single table at its center. Upon the table lay a bone token, identical to the one required for entry into the Veil Market. Next to it, a leather-bound tome, its pages filled with the same arcane script that adorned the walls of the crime scene. Harlow's mind raced as she pieced together the puzzle. The victims weren't random. They were sacrifices, each one a part of a larger ritual. The animal-like wounds were a cover, a ruse to throw off the investigation. But to what end? She flipped through the tome, her eyes catching on a sketch of a familiar figure — a Shade artisan known for crafting objects of great power. The Veil Compass in her pocket grew warm, as if confirming her suspicions. With a
newfound
sense of urgency, Harlow returned to the crime scene. Crane
was questioning
a shell-shocked witness, his voice a low drone in the background. She interrupted him, holding up the bone token. "This is our key," she declared, her voice cutting through the sergeant's ramblings. "The killer is using the Veil Market to move around, to hide in plain sight. We need to get there before it disappears with the full moon." Crane's
eyes widened
in disbelief. "The Veil Market? But that's just a myth, a story for gullible tourists." Harlow fixed him with a steely gaze. "It's real, and we're running out of time." As they made their way to the surface, Harlow's mind was a whirlwind of thoughts. The pieces
were falling
into place, but the picture they formed was more terrifying than she could have imagined. The killer wasn't just using magic; they
were wielding
it with a skill that rivaled the most powerful practitioners she had encountered. The Veil Market was a hive of activity when they arrived, the air buzzing with the energy of a thousand whispered deals. Harlow's sharp jaw set in a determined line as she scanned the sea of faces, searching for the one that didn't belong. And then she saw him — a man with the telltale signs of a Shade, his aura flickering like a faulty light bulb. He
was haggling
over a stall filled with enchanted trinkets, his eyes darting
nervously
around the market. Harlow approached, her presence commanding attention. "You're coming with us," she stated, her hand resting on the handle of her pistol. The man's eyes
flickered
with fear, and for a moment, she saw the truth reflected in his gaze. He was just a pawn, a cog in a much larger machine. But with the right pressure, even the smallest gear could bring the whole operation to a grinding halt. As they escorted the Shade out of the market, Harlow
couldn't help but feel
a sense of satisfaction. She had seen what others had missed, had followed the breadcrumbs through the looking glass and emerged with the answers they sought. But the case was far from closed. The real mastermind was still out there, pulling the strings from the shadows. And Harlow Quinn would stop at nothing to bring them into the light.
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2/17/2026, 1:45:57 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
77.7778%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she observed dryly [dryly]"
90.2344%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1024
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"nervously"
count
1
highlights
0
"nervously"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
12.1094%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1024
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
2
1
word
"stark"
count
1
2
word
"newfound"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
1
4
word
"dance"
count
1
5
word
"footsteps"
count
1
6
word
"echoed"
count
1
7
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"stark"
2
"newfound"
3
"weight"
4
"dance"
5
"footsteps"
6
"echoed"
7
"etched"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
2
label
"couldn't help but"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"The air was thick with"
2
"couldn't help but feel"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
63
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
63
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
67
matches
(empty)
59.5907%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
24
mean
42.67
std
15.3
cv
0.359
sampleLengths
0
60
1
67
2
45
3
56
4
34
5
36
6
77
7
43
8
17
9
55
10
65
11
41
12
39
13
34
14
40
15
18
16
15
17
56
18
44
19
40
20
39
21
30
22
40
23
33
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
63
matches
0
"were scrawled"
1
"been drawn"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
4
totalVerbs
130
matches
0
"was questioning"
1
"were falling"
2
"were wielding"
3
"was haggling"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
897
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
21
adverbRatio
0.023411371237458192
lyAdverbCount
7
lyAdverbRatio
0.007803790412486065
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
67
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
67
mean
15.28
std
6.26
cv
0.41
sampleLengths
0
20
1
20
2
20
3
9
4
14
5
27
6
17
7
13
8
32
9
22
10
13
11
21
12
11
13
23
14
6
15
7
16
7
17
16
18
21
19
24
20
20
21
12
22
15
23
20
24
8
25
17
26
9
27
10
28
20
29
16
30
13
31
12
32
18
33
22
34
9
35
4
36
11
37
13
38
4
39
26
40
13
41
12
42
14
43
8
44
13
45
27
46
5
47
13
48
7
49
8
57.7114%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.373134328358209
totalSentences
67
uniqueOpeners
25
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"he greeted (greet)"
1
"she observed dryly (observe dryly)"
2
"she said, her voice carrying the weight of her 18 years of service (say, carry)"
3
"she declared, her voice cutting through the sergeant's ramblings (declare, cut)"
4
"she stated, her hand resting on the handle of her pistol (state, rest)"
80.2406%