Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98CX0MMGXMDEJS44HCY

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stepped cautiously into the hidden clearing of the Fae Grove. The ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary loomed behind her, their gnarled surfaces whispering secrets of ages past. She glanced back at Nyx, the Shade, who moved with an eerie grace, their form a shifting silhouette of living shadow. Beside them, Isolde Varga, the Seer, glided forward, her silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight. The air within the grove was thick with enchantment, each breath Rory took tinged with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed in defiance of the season. Time behaved strangely here; an hour inside could be mere minutes or days outside. Rory's bright blue eyes scanned the surroundings, taking in the ethereal beauty of the place. The wildflowers, vibrant and varied, seemed to hum with a life of their own, their petals shimmering in the dappled sunlight that filtered through the canopy above. "Stay close," Isolde's voice, soft and melodic, broke the silence. "The Grove can be... unpredictable." Rory nodded, her hand instinctively brushing against the Heartstone Pendant that hung around her neck. The deep crimson gemstone pulsed faintly with warmth, a reminder of its mysterious origins from Dymas, the realm of Gluttony. She felt a shiver run down her spine, not from fear, but from the sheer otherworldliness of the place. Nyx, their faintly glowing violet eyes scanning the grove, whispered, "This place is alive in ways the mortal realm cannot comprehend." Their voice, a whisper carried on the wind, sent a chill through Rory. As they ventured deeper, the grove seemed to shift around them. The path they followed twisted and turned, leading them through a labyrinth of ancient trees and blooming flora. Rory's eyes caught sight of a cluster of luminescent mushrooms growing at the base of a tree, their soft glow casting an otherworldly light on the forest floor. She knelt down, reaching out to touch one, but Isolde's hand on her shoulder stopped her. "Careful," Isolde warned, her pale lavender eyes serious. "Not everything here is as it seems." Rory withdrew her hand, standing up and brushing the dirt from her jeans. "What exactly are we looking for?" she asked, her voice steady despite the unease gnawing at her. Isolde's gaze turned distant, as if she were seeing something beyond the physical realm. "A rift in the Veil," she replied. "A tear that must be mended before it grows too large." Nyx's form flickered, their shadowy silhouette blending with the surrounding darkness. "The Veil weakens during the winter solstice," they murmured. "We must be vigilant." The trio continued their exploration, the grove revealing its secrets slowly. They came upon a small, crystal-clear pond, its surface reflecting the sky above. Rory knelt by the water's edge, dipping her fingers into the cool liquid. The ripples that spread out seemed to shimmer with a faint, magical light. "It's beautiful," she whispered, entranced by the sight. Isolde smiled, a rare expression on her usually enigmatic face. "The Grove holds many wonders," she said. "But also many dangers." As if to punctuate her words, a sudden rustling in the underbrush made Rory jump. She reached for the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, the slender, leaf-shaped dagger always cold to the touch. The blade, a gift from Isolde, glowed faintly in the moonlight that filtered through the trees. Nyx moved forward, their form solidifying as they approached the source of the noise. A small creature, no larger than a rabbit, emerged from the bushes. Its fur was a deep, iridescent blue, and its eyes glowed with an inner light. It regarded them curiously before darting away into the underbrush. "Even the smallest creatures here are touched by magic," Isolde remarked, her voice tinged with a hint of sadness. "This place is a sanctuary, but it is also a prison." Rory frowned, her mind racing with questions. "Why did you bring us here, Isolde?" she asked. "What are we really looking for?" Isolde's gaze softened, and she reached out to touch Rory's cheek. "You have a destiny, Aurora," she said gently. "One that is intertwined with the fate of this world and the realms beyond. The answers you seek lie within the Grove, but you must be patient." Rory sighed, her frustration evident. "I just want to understand," she said. "I want to know why all of this is happening." Nyx's voice, a whisper on the wind, interjected. "Understanding comes with time, Rory. For now, we must focus on the task at hand." They continued their journey, the grove growing darker as they ventured deeper. The trees seemed to close in around them, their branches forming a canopy that blocked out the light. Rory's heart pounded in her chest, the sense of unease growing with each step. Suddenly, they emerged into a clearing bathed in an eerie, silver light. In the center of the clearing stood a massive, ancient tree, its bark covered in intricate runes that glowed faintly. The air around the tree seemed to hum with power, and Rory could feel the energy pulsing through her veins. "This is it," Isolde said, her voice barely above a whisper. "The heart of the Grove." Rory approached the tree, her hand reaching out to touch the rough bark. As her fingers made contact, a surge of energy coursed through her, and she gasped, her vision blurring. She saw flashes of images—realms beyond her understanding, creatures of light and shadow, and a rift in the Veil, a tear that threatened to consume everything. She stumbled back, her breath coming in ragged gasps. "I saw it," she said, her voice trembling. "The rift... it's growing." Isolde nodded, her expression grave. "We must act quickly," she said. "The Veil is weakening, and if we do not mend the rift, it will tear open completely." Nyx stepped forward, their form solidifying as they placed a hand on Rory's shoulder. "We are with you," they said, their voice a comforting whisper. "Together, we can mend the Veil." Rory took a deep breath, steeling herself for the task ahead. She reached for the Heartstone Pendant, feeling its warmth against her skin. The deep crimson gemstone glowed faintly, a beacon of hope in the darkness. "Let's do this," she said, determination in her voice. Isolde began to chant, her voice melodic and haunting. The runes on the tree glowed brighter, and the air around them seemed to vibrate with energy. Nyx joined in, their voice blending with Isolde's, creating a harmony that resonated through the grove. Rory closed her eyes, focusing on the pendant and the energy it held. She could feel the power of the Grove flowing through her, connecting her to the ancient magic that protected this place. She reached out with her mind, seeking the rift in the Veil. There it was, a tear in the fabric of reality, pulsing with dark energy. She could feel its malevolent presence, threatening to consume everything in its path. But she also felt the strength of the Grove, the ancient magic that had endured for centuries. Drawing on that power, she focused her energy on the rift, willing it to close. The pendant grew warmer, its glow intensifying as she poured her strength into the task. She could feel the rift resisting, but she pushed harder, determined to mend the tear. Slowly, the rift began to close, the dark energy dissipating as the Veil repaired itself. Rory could feel the strain, her body trembling with the effort, but she refused to give up. She could hear Isolde and Nyx's voices, their chants growing louder, bolstering her resolve. Finally, with a surge of energy, the rift closed completely, the Veil mending itself. Rory collapsed to the ground, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She felt drained, but also triumphant. Isolde knelt beside her, a proud smile on her face. "You did it, Aurora," she said softly. "The Veil is mended." Nyx's form flickered, their violet eyes glowing with approval. "You have proven yourself, Rory," they said. "The Grove is safe, for now." Rory managed a weak smile, her body aching from the effort. "Thank you," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I couldn't have done it without you." Isolde helped her to her feet, her touch gentle and reassuring. "You are stronger than you know, Aurora," she said. "And this is only the beginning." As they made their way back through the Grove, Rory felt a sense of peace settle over her. She knew there would be more challenges ahead, but she also knew she was not alone. With Isolde and Nyx by her side, she felt ready to face whatever came next. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, marking the boundary of the Grove. As they stepped through, Rory glanced back one last time, the beauty and magic of the place etched into her memory. She took a deep breath, feeling the weight of her destiny, but also the strength of her resolve. The journey was far from over, but she was ready to face it head-on. With her friends by her side, she knew she could overcome anything.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
53.9683% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Nyx, their faintly glowing violet eyes scanning the grove, whispered, Their voice, a whisper carried on the wind, sent a chill through Rory. [faintly]"
1"she said gently [gently]"
2"Isolde said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
3"she said softly [softly]"
4"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
21.6710% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count2
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
7
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
8
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"completely"
2"gently"
3"quickly"
4"slowly"
5"softly"
6"suddenly"
7"barely above a whisper"
8"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"beacon"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"enigmatic"
count1
4
word"tinged"
count2
5
word"resonated"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"glided"
count1
8
word"otherworldly"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count2
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"beacon"
2"sanctuary"
3"enigmatic"
4"tinged"
5"resonated"
6"flickered"
7"glided"
8"otherworldly"
9"loomed"
10"intricate"
11"weight"
12"etched"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"sent a chill through"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"on that power"
90.2952% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean36.36
std16.94
cv0.466
sampleLengths
074
182
215
354
434
573
615
730
832
924
1050
118
1221
1349
1451
1530
1622
1746
1822
1923
2044
2152
2216
2357
2421
2528
2631
2736
289
2942
3046
3144
3245
3346
3431
3521
3622
3728
3826
3949
4034
4144
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs222
matches
0"were seeing"
88.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1277
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crystal-clear pond,"
1"slender, leaf-shaped dagger"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.025058731401722788
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.015661707126076743
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean12.94
std5.6
cv0.433
sampleLengths
018
120
221
315
426
514
615
727
810
95
1015
1120
1219
1334
1411
1518
1628
1716
188
197
2013
2117
2214
237
2411
2511
269
274
2811
2913
3013
3113
328
3310
347
354
3615
3718
3816
3914
4012
4115
4210
4319
4411
457
469
476
4811
498
48.8701% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3135593220338983
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners37
79.7619% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Isolde's voice, soft and melodic, broke the silence (break)"
1"Nyx, their faintly glowing violet eyes scanning the grove, whispered, Their voice, a whisper carried on the wind, sent a chill through Rory. (faintly glow scan whisper, carry on send)"
2"Isolde warned, her pale lavender eyes serious (warn, eye)"
3"they murmured (murmur)"
4"she whispered, entranced by the sight (whisper, entrance)"
5"Isolde remarked, her voice tinged with a hint of sadness (remark, tinged)"
6"she said gently (say gently)"
7"she said softly (say softly)"
79.3667%