| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.525 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1051 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "slightly" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1051 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
| | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "crystal" | | 4 | "down her spine" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "otherworldly" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "enigmatic" | | 9 | "resonance" | | 10 | "intricate" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "flicked" | | 13 | "sanctuary" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "weight" | | 17 | "stomach" | | 18 | "beacon" | | 19 | "chill" | | 20 | "pounding" | | 21 | "trepidation" | | 22 | "resolve" | | 23 | "newfound" |
| |
| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
|
| | highlights | | 0 | "A shiver ran down her spine" | | 1 | "eyes narrowed" |
| |
| 85.32% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "g with unease" | | 1 | "felt a chill" | | 2 | "d with determination" |
| |
| 97.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1055 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 692 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.89 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 11 | | Rory | 20 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 14 | | Fae | 2 | | Seer | 2 | | Hells | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Seer" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.055 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift and flow before her eyes" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1055 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.97% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 32.97 | | std | 14.4 | | cv | 0.437 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 63 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 6 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory couldn't help but marvel at the intricate carvings etched into its surface - swirling patterns that seemed to shift and flow before her eyes." |
| |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 693 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crystal-clear pool," |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.027417027417027416 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017316017316017316 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 12.87 | | std | 6.22 | | cv | 0.483 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 6 |
| |
| 71.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.4268292682926829 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 65.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers instinctively moved to" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice like" | | 2 | "she breathed, the words barely" | | 3 | "She stiffened, one hand moving" | | 4 | "Her pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 5 | "she intoned, her voice soft" | | 6 | "she asked, forcing herself to" | | 7 | "She swept her hand towards" | | 8 | "They paused, violet eyes narrowing" | | 9 | "She turned, gesturing for them" | | 10 | "She spared a glance at" | | 11 | "Her lavender gaze flicked to" | | 12 | "She turned to face them" | | 13 | "She shook her head slowly" | | 14 | "She glanced down at the" | | 15 | "Her gaze flickered to the" | | 16 | "She swallowed hard, the weight" | | 17 | "She squeezed Rory's arm gently" | | 18 | "She fixed Rory with a" | | 19 | "she asked, her voice trembling" |
| | ratio | 0.387 | |
| 0.32% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory exhaled slowly as she" | | 1 | "Her fingers instinctively moved to" | | 2 | "they murmured, their voice like" | | 3 | "Rory nodded, gaze sweeping across" | | 4 | "Wildflowers bloomed in vibrant splashes" | | 5 | "Sunlight glimmered on a small," | | 6 | "she breathed, the words barely" | | 7 | "A shiver ran down her" | | 8 | "Nyx inclined their head, violet" | | 9 | "Rory opened her mouth to" | | 10 | "She stiffened, one hand moving" | | 11 | "Isolde Varga stepped into the" | | 12 | "Her pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 13 | "she intoned, her voice soft" | | 14 | "Rory glanced sidelong at Nyx," | | 15 | "she asked, forcing herself to" | | 16 | "Isolde inclined her head." | | 17 | "She swept her hand towards" | | 18 | "Nyx stirred, their voice a" | | 19 | "They paused, violet eyes narrowing" |
| | ratio | 0.919 | |
| 80.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "To stand against the Hells?" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory exhaled slowly as she emerged from the shadows, blinking against the dazzling sunlight that flooded the hidden grove." | | 1 | "Rory glanced sidelong at Nyx, who had shifted closer, their form flickering with unease." | | 2 | "She spared a glance at Nyx, who nodded almost imperceptibly, their shadowy form flowing after Isolde." | | 3 | "Rory felt her heart pounding in her chest, a maelstrom of emotions swirling within her." |
| |
| 29.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the words barely audible" | | 1 | "she intoned, her voice soft yet carrying a strange resonance" | | 2 | "she asked, her voice trembling slightly" | | 3 | "Nyx rumbled, their voice carrying a note of finality" |
| |
| 75.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.15 | |