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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
23.4s
Cost:
$0.001448
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The detective's boots clanged Against the cold iron of the abandoned Tube platform, the sound
echoing
through the hollow expanse. Detective Harlow Quinn's breath misted in the chill air, her eyes scanning the dimly lit scene with the precision of a hawk. The Veil Market, a place whispered about in the shadows of London's underworld, was usually bustling with the trade of enchanted goods and forbidden knowledge. But tonight, it was silent, save for the murmur of her colleague's voice. "DS Brennan," she greeted, her own voice a low growl. "What do we have?" Brennan, a young detective with a tendency to jump to conclusions, stood a few paces away, his hands stuffed into the pockets of his trench coat. "Looks like a simple overdose, guv. This bloke, he's got the marks of a Siren's Strain user. Probably bought a bad batch and couldn't handle it." Quinn's sharp jaw tightened as she approached the body. The man lay sprawled on the ground, his skin ashen, eyes vacant and staring into nothingness. She knelt beside him, her worn leather
watch
ticking away the seconds as she studied the scene. The man's attire
was disheveled
, his aura one of desperation rather than the ecstatic throes of overindulgence. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the man's wrist, feeling for a pulse that she knew wouldn't be there. "No," she said, standing up and dusting off her hands. "This wasn't an overdose." Brennan raised an eyebrow. "What makes you so sure?" Quinn's brown
eyes narrowed
as she gestured to the man's arms. "No fresh puncture wounds, no signs of injecting. And where are the paraphernalia? The needles, the vials? In my experience, users don't just tidy up after themselves before they croak." Brennan shrugged, unconvinced. "Maybe he was new to it. Or maybe someone cleaned up after him." Quinn's gaze drifted to the man's satchel, a worn leather bag that lay open, its contents spilled onto the ground. She crouched down, picking up a book with a familiar insignia on the cover—the British Museum's restricted archives. Her lips pressed into a thin line. This man wasn't just a user; he was a researcher, like Eva Kowalski, her best friend's confidant. As she sifted through the scattered papers and tomes, her hand closed around something cold and metallic. The Veil Compass. She turned it over in her hand, the brass casing cool against her skin, the needle spinning wildly before settling, pointing towards an alcove nestled in the shadowy recesses of the market. "What's
that, guv
?" Brennan asked, peering over her shoulder. "A lead," she replied, tucking the compass into her pocket. "Did you notice the entry requirement for the market? A bone token. Where's the victim's token?" Brennan's face went slack. "I—I didn't see one." Quinn nodded, standing up. "Exactly. Someone wanted this man here, and they didn't want him to leave." She
began to
walk towards the alcove, her steps measured and deliberate. The air grew colder as she approached, the shadows deepening until they
seemed to
swallow the light. She could feel the energy of the place, a humming undercurrent that set her teeth on edge. This was no mere market; it was a nexus, a place where the veil between worlds was thin. In the alcove, she found a small shrine, candles flickering around a statue of a many-limbed deity, its eyes set with gemstones that glinted in the dim light. Offerings of coin and trinkets lay at its feet, along with a single bone token, identical to the one she'd seen in Eva's possession. Quinn's mind raced, connecting the dots. The man was a researcher, likely
delving
into mysteries that were better left untouched. He'd come here, perhaps seeking answers or forbidden knowledge, and had fallen afoul of something dark and ancient. She turned to Brennan, who had followed her into the alcove. "This man was murdered," she declared, her voice
echoing
off the stone walls. "He was lured here and sacrificed to whatever entity this shrine is dedicated to." Brennan's
eyes widened
, the implications of her words settling in. "But...how can you be sure?" Quinn pulled the Veil Compass from her pocket, holding it up for Brennan to see. "This compass doesn't just point to rifts and portals. It's attuned to supernatural energy. And right now, it's going haywire because we're standing on hallowed ground." Brennan looked from the compass to the shrine, his face pale. "What do we do now?" "We find who's responsible," Quinn said, her voice steel. "We close the rift before something else comes through. And we make sure no one else ends up a sacrifice on the altar of someone else's greed." As she spoke, she felt the
weight
of her past, the loss of her partner, DS Morris, in a case that had eerie similarities to this one. She wouldn't let history repeat itself. She would uncover the truth, no matter how deep it
was buried
. With the Veil Compass as her guide, Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the darkness, ready to face whatever lay beyond.
created_at
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2/17/2026, 1:45:54 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
847
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
52.7745%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
847
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"weight"
count
1
1
word
"delving"
count
1
2
word
"echoing"
count
2
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"delving"
2
"echoing"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
2
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"eyes widened"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
45
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
45
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
1
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
59
matches
0
"that, guv"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
24
mean
35.17
std
21.7
cv
0.617
sampleLengths
0
80
1
14
2
52
3
79
4
14
5
9
6
41
7
16
8
62
9
52
10
9
11
26
12
8
13
17
14
64
15
52
16
38
17
38
18
15
19
41
20
16
21
36
22
45
23
20
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
45
matches
0
"was disheveled"
1
"was buried"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
103
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
638
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
11
adverbRatio
0.017241379310344827
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.006269592476489028
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
59
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
59
mean
14.31
std
7.72
cv
0.54
sampleLengths
0
20
1
22
2
25
3
13
4
10
5
4
6
26
7
26
8
9
9
16
10
17
11
17
12
20
13
10
14
4
15
4
16
5
17
11
18
30
19
3
20
13
21
20
22
18
23
7
24
17
25
17
26
3
27
32
28
9
29
10
30
16
31
4
32
4
33
4
34
13
35
12
36
17
37
17
38
18
39
28
40
24
41
6
42
14
43
18
44
11
45
13
46
14
47
10
48
5
49
15
61.5819%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.3898305084745763
totalSentences
59
uniqueOpeners
23
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"she greeted, her own voice a low growl (greet)"
1
"she said, standing up and dusting off her hands (say, stand up dust)"
2
"she replied, tucking the compass into her pocket (reply, tuck)"
3
"she declared, her voice echoing off the stone walls (declare, echo)"
87.6092%