| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.529 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 83.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1247 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1247 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "symphony" | | 3 | "resonance" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "marveled" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "otherworldly" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "carried the weight" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "intensity" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "dance" | | 15 | "pumping" | | 16 | "unwavering" | | 17 | "resolve" | | 18 | "testament" | | 19 | "silk" | | 20 | "echo" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "time stood still" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "Time seemed to slow" | | 2 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1250 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.94% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 67 | | wordCount | 1086 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.38 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 7 | | Grove | 2 | | Nyx | 5 | | Isolde | 11 | | Aurora | 15 | | London | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 8 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Prince" | | 6 | "Belphegor" | | 7 | "Pendant" | | 8 | "Shade" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.809 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "resonance that seemed to vibrate through the ground itself, as if the earth was singing to her" | | 1 | "It was as if the grove was caught in a perpetual moment, isolated from the march of minutes and hours that governed the world outside" | | 2 | "wind that seemed to emanate from Nyx themselves" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1250 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 46.21% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 46.3 | | std | 14.43 | | cv | 0.312 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 59 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 56 |
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| 93.37% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "was caught" | | 1 | "was dragged" |
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| 83.72% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "was singing" | | 1 | "was weakening" | | 2 | "were becoming" |
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| 14.93% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "The sound of London traffic faded away, replaced by a symphony of nature — the rustling of leaves, the chirping of birds, and something else..." | | 1 | "The disturbance grew, coalescing into a figure that Aurora recognized with a sinking heart — Prince Belphegor, ruler of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony." | | 2 | "The Shade had done the impossible — they had ripped a hole in the Veil, tearing a rift between realms." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1088 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.027573529411764705 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012867647058823529 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 18.66 | | std | 7.54 | | cv | 0.404 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 42 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 75.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4626865671641791 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 56.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the air ahead shimmered" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at her" | | 1 | "It was as if the" | | 2 | "She had not asked for" | | 3 | "His gaze fell upon Isolde," | | 4 | "She thought of the Heartstone" | | 5 | "It landed in a bed" | | 6 | "His words were cut off" | | 7 | "they whispered, voice heavy with" | | 8 | "she said softly" |
| | ratio | 0.153 | |
| 53.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood at the" | | 1 | "The air hummed with an" | | 2 | "She glanced back at her" | | 3 | "Aurora asked, her voice steady" | | 4 | "Isolde nodded, a serene smile" | | 5 | "Nyx's silhouette simply shifted, folds" | | 6 | "The sound of London traffic" | | 7 | "a resonance that seemed to" | | 8 | "The trio moved deeper into" | | 9 | "Isolde's silver hair danced around" | | 10 | "Nyx, by contrast, remained closed" | | 11 | "Every so often, they would" | | 12 | "Aurora marveled at the fact" | | 13 | "It was as if the" | | 14 | "The realization sent a shiver" | | 15 | "The trees grew taller, their" | | 16 | "The flora took on a" | | 17 | "Isolde murmured, her voice laced" | | 18 | "Aurora felt the weight of" | | 19 | "She had not asked for" |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 84.75% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "If the Veil was weakening," |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood at the boundary of the Fae Grove, her boots brushing against the ancient oak standing stones that marked the perimeter." | | 1 | "The air hummed with an electric charge, as if the very atmosphere was thick with magic." | | 2 | "The trio moved deeper into the grove, their path illuminated by the profusion of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors and patterns, their petals kissed…" | | 3 | "Isolde's silver hair danced around her as if caught in a breeze only she could feel, her pale lavender eyes wide with an expression that bordered on reverence a…" | | 4 | "The flora took on a more otherworldly aspect, with leaves that shimmered like metal and flowers that seemed to stare back at her with their own brand of sentien…" | | 5 | "She thought of the Heartstone Pendant hidden beneath her shirt, its deep crimson glow flickering with an intensity that matched the pounding of her heart." | | 6 | "Belphegor laughed, a sound that was at once beautiful and terrible." | | 7 | "With a swiftness that belied his relaxed posture, he drew a blade of purest gold, the metal seeming to catch fire in the dappled light of the grove." | | 8 | "Aurora felt the power of the Fae blade thrumming through her, its edges keening for demonic blood." | | 9 | "With a final cry of rage, he disappeared into the void, leaving only the faintest echo of his presence lingering in the air." | | 10 | "Isolde approached them, her hand outstretched as if to offer comfort." | | 11 | "And as they left, retracing their steps back to the mortal realm, Aurora knew that this was only the beginning of an adventure that would take them beyond the v…" |
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| 13.89% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Belphegor cut, his smile sharp and cruel" | | 1 | "they whispered, voice heavy with the weight of what they had done" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde declared (declare)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.294 | | leniency | 0.588 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.353 | |