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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98EKVYE764H1SYQWK63
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
39.6s
Cost:
$0.000952
Provider:
DeepInfra
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
Aurora Carter stood at the boundary of the Fae Grove, her boots brushing against the ancient oak standing stones that marked the perimeter. The air hummed with an electric charge, as if the
very
atmosphere was thick with magic. She glanced back at her companions, Nyx and Isolde, their figures limned by the
ethereal
glow emanating from the clearing ahead. "Ready?" Aurora asked, her voice steady despite the fluttering of nerves in her stomach. Isolde nodded, a serene smile gracing her ageless features. Nyx's silhouette simply shifted, folds of living shadow coalescing into a posture of readiness. With a deep breath, Aurora stepped across the threshold, immediately feeling the shift in the world around her. The sound of London traffic faded away, replaced by a
symphony
of nature — the rustling of leaves, the chirping of birds, and something else... a
resonance
that
seemed to
vibrate through the ground itself, as if the earth
was singing
to her. The trio moved deeper into the grove, their path illuminated by the profusion of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors and patterns, their petals kissed by the ever-shifting rainbow light that filtered through the canopy above. Isolde's silver hair
dance
d around her as if caught in a breeze only she could feel, her pale lavender eyes wide with an expression that bordered on reverence and nostalgia. Nyx, by contrast, remained closed off, their form flickering between solid and incorporeal as they moved with the graceful uncertainty of a shadow given form. E
very
so often, they would reach out to touch a flower or leaf, only to have their fingers pass through the material, leaving a faint trail of darkness in their wake. Aurora marveled at the fact that time itself
seemed to
hold its breath here, the air thick with the
weight
of centuries. It was as if the grove
was caught
in a perpetual moment, isolated from the march of minutes and hours that governed the world outside. The realization
sent a shiver down
her spine, magnified by the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a memento from a childhood long past. As they ventured farther, the landscape
began to
change subtly. The trees grew taller, their trunks twisted into spirals that reached for the sky with an almost desperate urgency. The flora took on a more
otherworldly
aspect, with leaves that
shimmered
like metal and flowers that
seemed to
stare back at her with their own brand of sentient watchfulness. "Be on your guard," Isolde murmured, her voice laced with an uncharacteristic hint of warning. "Not all is peaceful within the grove's embrace." Aurora felt the
weight
of the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, a reassurance against the unknown. She had not asked for this weapon, but Isolde had insisted, pressing the cold moonsilver into her hands with a cryptic promise of its worth. Suddenly, the air ahead
shimmered
like the surface of a pond disturbed by a thrown stone. The disturbance grew, coalescing into a figure that Aurora recognized with a sinking heart — Prince Belphegor, ruler of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony. Except he was not supposed to be here. This was not his domain. "An interloper in the heart of the Grove," Belphegor purred, his eyes a warm amber that mirrored the skies of his own realm. "What an unexpected pleasure." His gaze fell upon Isolde, and his lips curled into a sneer. "And you, dear sister, consorting with mortals once again? How far you have fallen." Isolde's face remained impassive, but her voice carried the
weight
of untold centuries when she spoke. "Belphegor. Your presence here is unwelcome. By the laws of the Veil, you have no right—" "The Veil weakens, Seer," Belphegor cut her off, his smile sharp and cruel. "Even now, it thins, revealing the delicious possibilities of realms intertwined." Aurora felt a chill that had nothing to do with the ambient temperature. If the Veil was weakening, it meant the barriers between Earth, the Fae realms, and Hel were becoming dangerously unstable. She thought of the Heartstone Pendant hidden beneath her shirt, its deep crimson glow flickering with an intensity that matched the pounding of her heart. "Then it falls upon us to repair it," Isolde declared, stepping forward with an authority that belied her
ethereal
appearance. Belphegor laughed, a sound that was at once beautiful and terrible. "Do you
really
think you can stop what is to come? The age of the Fae is over. A new era dawns, one of change and chaos, and I will not let you or your pathetic mortal allies stand in my way." With a swiftness that belied his relaxed posture, he drew a blade of purest gold, the metal seeming to catch fire in the dappled light of the grove. Aurora acted on instinct, drawing her own Fae-Forged Blade and stepping in front of Isolde. The clash of metals filled the air, as gold met moonsilver in a
dance
of deadly elegance. Aurora felt the power of the Fae blade thrumming through her, its edges keening for demonic blood. Belphegor was fast, but she was faster, fueled by the adrenaline pumping through her veins and the
unwavering
resolve to protect those she cared for.
Time seemed to slow
as they fought, e
very
parry and thrust a
testament
to the skill of both combatants. But it was not enough. Belphegor, with a twist of his wrist, sent Aurora's weapon flying from her grasp. It landed in a bed of flowers, the blade winking out of sight. "Such a pity," Belphegor mused, his blade at Aurora's throat. "To come so far, only to fall at the hands of—" His words were cut off by a sound like tearing
silk
, followed by a gust of frigid wind that
seemed to
emanate from Nyx themselves. The Shade had done the impossible — they had ripped a hole in the Veil, tearing a rift between realms. Belphegor's
eyes widened
in shock as he
was dragged
towards the rift, the inexorable pull of the spaces between realms too much even for him to resist. With a final cry of rage, he disappeared into the void, leaving only the faintest
echo
of his presence lingering in the air. Nyx solidified fully, their form more substantial than Aurora had ever seen it. "I had to," they whispered, voice heavy with the
weight
of what they had done. "For the balance. For all of us." Isolde approached them, her hand outstretched as if to offer comfort. But before she could touch them, the Veil
began to
mend itself, the rift sealing with the sound of a thousand distant thunderclaps. Isolde's hand fell away, and she turned to Aurora, her expression one of grim resignation. "The Veil will hold for now," she said
softly
. "But there will be a price to pay for what has transpired here today." Aurora could only nod, her heart heavy with the knowledge that though they had won this battle, the war for the realms was far from over. And as she retrieved her Fae-Forged Blade from the wildflowers, she could not help but feel the bitter
weight
of destiny settling upon her shoulders. The Fae Grove had offered them a glimpse into the heart of the worlds, a beauty and danger that none could have imagined. And as they left, retracing their steps back to the mortal realm, Aurora
knew that this
was only the beginning of an adventure that would take them beyond the veil of reality itself.
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2/17/2026, 1:46:10 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
91.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she said softly [softly]"
68.0511%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1252
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
1
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
2
adverb
"really"
count
1
3
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"suddenly"
2
"really"
3
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1252
totalAiIsms
17
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
2
1
word
"symphony"
count
1
2
word
"testament"
count
1
3
word
"resonance"
count
1
4
word
"shimmered"
count
2
5
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
6
word
"silk"
count
1
7
word
"unwavering"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
5
9
word
"dance"
count
1
10
word
"echo"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"symphony"
2
"testament"
3
"resonance"
4
"shimmered"
5
"otherworldly"
6
"silk"
7
"unwavering"
8
"weight"
9
"dance"
10
"echo"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"time stood still"
count
1
2
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"Time seemed to slow"
2
"sent a shiver down"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
59
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
7
narrationSentences
59
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
67
matches
0
"knew that this"
46.2089%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
27
mean
46.3
std
14.43
cv
0.312
sampleLengths
0
60
1
37
2
61
3
66
4
56
5
71
6
59
7
23
8
41
9
53
10
53
11
32
12
24
13
58
14
20
15
53
16
43
17
59
18
51
19
21
20
45
21
50
22
35
23
49
24
23
25
51
26
56
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
59
matches
0
"was caught"
1
"was dragged"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
172
matches
0
"was singing"
1
"was weakening, were becoming"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1088
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.027573529411764705
lyAdverbCount
14
lyAdverbRatio
0.012867647058823529
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
67
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
67
mean
18.66
std
7.54
cv
0.404
sampleLengths
0
23
1
16
2
21
3
14
4
9
5
14
6
18
7
25
8
18
9
36
10
30
11
25
12
31
13
22
14
25
15
24
16
10
17
19
18
30
19
15
20
8
21
16
22
25
23
16
24
24
25
8
26
5
27
23
28
16
29
14
30
16
31
16
32
13
33
11
34
13
35
20
36
25
37
20
38
11
39
42
40
28
41
15
42
17
43
17
44
25
45
19
46
5
47
14
48
13
49
10
75.6219%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.4626865671641791
totalSentences
67
uniqueOpeners
31
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"Isolde murmured, her voice laced with an uncharacteristic hint of warning (murmur, lace)"
1
"Belphegor purred, his eyes a warm amber that mirrored the skies of his own realm (pur, mirror)"
2
"Belphegor cut her off, his smile sharp and cruel (cut)"
3
"Isolde declared, stepping forward with an authority that belied her ethereal appearance (declare, step bely)"
4
"Belphegor mused, his blade at Aurora's throat (muse)"
5
"they whispered, voice heavy with the weight of what they had done (whisper, voice have)"
6
"she said softly (say softly)"
77.3460%