| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.609 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1021 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1021 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "lilt" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "navigating" | | 10 | "practiced ease" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "wavering" | | 13 | "testament" | | 14 | "silence" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "potential" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "electric" | | 19 | "simmering" | | 20 | "trepidation" | | 21 | "resolve" | | 22 | "newfound" | | 23 | "sanctuary" | | 24 | "complex" | | 25 | "tapestry" | | 26 | "pulse" | | 27 | "echoing" | | 28 | "solace" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | matches | | |
| 53.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1017 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.35% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 868 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.61 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 2 | | Lucien | 14 | | Moreau | 2 | | French | 1 | | London | 2 | | Rory | 10 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | East | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Moreau" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" | | 3 | "East" |
| | globalScore | 0.694 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "thud that seemed to echo through the cramped one-bedroom flat filled with books, scrolls, and the musky scent of old parchment" | | 1 | "quite decipher" | | 2 | "as if giving her time to pull away, Lucien leaned in, his lips meeting hers in a kiss that was both a homecoming and a new beginning" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1017 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.79% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 39.12 | | std | 13.92 | | cv | 0.356 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 31 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 57 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien leaned against the doorframe, his cane—ivory handle gleaming under the dim hallway light—resting beside him." | | 1 | "\"Nor I, you,\" Lucien responded, his eyes tracing the line of her jaw, the slight upturn of her nose, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a memento from a childhood accident that he knew all too well." | | 2 | "\"Why?\" The question hung in the air, laced with the remnants of their history—attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 879 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.03526734926052332 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009101251422070534 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 57 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 57 | | mean | 17.84 | | std | 7.45 | | cv | 0.418 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 66.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.42105263157894735 | | totalSentences | 57 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 69.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, as if giving her" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 78.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes flickered" | | 1 | "He'd always been striking, even" | | 2 | "he greeted, the French lilt" | | 3 | "she replied, her tone cool" | | 4 | "She stepped inside, the door" | | 5 | "It was these details, the" | | 6 | "she informed him, her voice" | | 7 | "He took a step closer," | | 8 | "Her eyes widened slightly, the" | | 9 | "he said, his voice low," | | 10 | "he interrupted, his hand reaching" | | 11 | "She closed her eyes, leaning" | | 12 | "he said, his gaze dropping" | | 13 | "she echoed, the words a" | | 14 | "It was tentative at first," | | 15 | "he asked, giving her one" | | 16 | "he said, the words a" |
| | ratio | 0.354 | |
| 12.08% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "The door to Eva's flat" | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes flickered" | | 2 | "Lucien leaned against the doorframe," | | 3 | "He'd always been striking, even" | | 4 | "he greeted, the French lilt" | | 5 | "Rory's gaze dropped to the" | | 6 | "she replied, her tone cool" | | 7 | "She stepped inside, the door" | | 8 | "The tabby cat, Ptolemy, wound" | | 9 | "Lucien reached down to scratch" | | 10 | "Rory said, shrugging off her" | | 11 | "Lucien responded, his eyes tracing" | | 12 | "It was these details, the" | | 13 | "Rory moved further into the" | | 14 | "she informed him, her voice" | | 15 | "Lucien admitted, his gaze never" | | 16 | "He took a step closer," | | 17 | "Her eyes widened slightly, the" | | 18 | "The question hung in the" | | 19 | "Lucien took another step, closing" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped inside, the door closing with a soft thud that seemed to echo through the cramped one-bedroom flat filled with books, scrolls, and the musky scent o…" | | 1 | "She closed her eyes, leaning into his touch for a brief, unguarded moment before stepping back, putting distance between them once more." | | 2 | "Lucien's lips curled into a half-smile, his amber eye reflecting a determination that bordered on recklessness." | | 3 | "The silence that followed was heavy with possibility, with the weight of their shared past and the potential of a future they could barely imagine." | | 4 | "Lucien closed the remaining space, his hand cupping her cheek, his thumb tracing the contour of her lips." | | 5 | "The touch was electric, a spark that ignited the simmering embers of their attraction." | | 6 | "Slowly, as if giving her time to pull away, Lucien leaned in, his lips meeting hers in a kiss that was both a homecoming and a new beginning." | | 7 | "Lucien's arm wrapped around her waist, drawing her even closer, the cool-headed intelligence that defined her melting away under the heat of their reunion." |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice low, almost a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien responded (respond)" | | 1 | "she informed (inform)" | | 2 | "Lucien admitted (admit)" | | 3 | "he interrupted (interrupt)" | | 4 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.478 | | leniency | 0.957 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.435 | |