| 42.11% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said coolly [coolly]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "he said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.395 | | leniency | 0.789 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.158 | |
| 78.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1161 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "coolly" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1161 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shattered" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "glinting" | | 3 | "unreadable" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "charm" | | 6 | "fluttered" | | 7 | "desire" | | 8 | "yearning" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1156 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 827 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.85 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Lucien | 7 | | Moreau | 1 | | Tears | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Moreau" | | 5 | "Tears" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 84.07% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 33.03 | | std | 14.67 | | cv | 0.444 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | |
| 29.70% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter—Rory to her friends—froze, her hand hovering over the worn pages of a musty leather-bound tome." | | 1 | "She wasn't expecting company; few people knew where she lived, let alone dropped by unannounced." | | 2 | "She remembered that night vividly—the damnable mistake that drove her from his embrace, his flat, his life." | | 3 | "But there was only sincerity, and a hint of something else—longing." |
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| 92.32% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 835 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "musty leather-bound tome." |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.041916167664670656 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017964071856287425 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 11.45 | | std | 6.35 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 52.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.37623762376237624 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She wasn't expecting company; few" | | 1 | "She hesitated, then undid the" | | 2 | "She hadn't seen Lucien since" | | 3 | "She still remembered the heat" | | 4 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 5 | "She hesitated a moment longer," | | 6 | "He brushed past her, his" | | 7 | "She shut the door behind" | | 8 | "He picked up a scroll" | | 9 | "He sighed, sinking onto the" | | 10 | "His mismatched eyes met hers" | | 11 | "She remembered that night vividly—the" | | 12 | "She should've known better than" | | 13 | "She'd been drawn in by" | | 14 | "she said coolly" | | 15 | "he said quietly" | | 16 | "She laughed, a short, sharp" | | 17 | "Her breath caught." | | 18 | "He'd never needed anyone, not" | | 19 | "He was the fixer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.622 | |
| 47.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The sharp rap of knuckles" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter—Rory to her friends—froze," | | 2 | "She wasn't expecting company; few" | | 3 | "The knocking sounded again, more" | | 4 | "Ptolemy meowed plaintively, his tail" | | 5 | "Rory swallowed hard and rose" | | 6 | "She hesitated, then undid the" | | 7 | "The door swung open to" | | 8 | "Rory's heart thudded against her" | | 9 | "She hadn't seen Lucien since" | | 10 | "She still remembered the heat" | | 11 | "The sting of his parting" | | 12 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 13 | "A smirk played at the" | | 14 | "She hesitated a moment longer," | | 15 | "He brushed past her, his" | | 16 | "She shut the door behind" | | 17 | "Lucien's gaze swept the cluttered" | | 18 | "He picked up a scroll" | | 19 | "Rory snatched it back, rolling" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, they terrified her." | | 1 | "To believe him." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 61.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "He brushed past her, his arm grazing hers, sending an electric jolt up her spine." | | 1 | "She remembered that night vividly—the damnable mistake that drove her from his embrace, his flat, his life." | | 2 | "She stiffened for an instant, then melted into the kiss, her arms snaking around his neck, pulling him closer." | | 3 | "But the rest of her, the part that had spent months yearning for his touch, his warmth, silenced the doubts." |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, voice thick with emotion" | | 1 | "He pressed, chastely" |
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| 71.05% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he agreed (agree)" | | 1 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "He pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.211 | | leniency | 0.421 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.158 | |