Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
932
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
36
adverbRatio
0.03862660944206009
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.01072961373390558
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
93
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
93
mean
13.83
std
7.02
cv
0.508
sampleLengths
0
21
1
19
2
16
3
30
4
19
5
11
6
18
7
5
8
5
9
18
10
9
11
20
12
4
13
13
14
15
15
16
16
17
17
6
18
15
19
4
20
11
21
13
22
8
23
9
24
11
25
6
26
7
27
3
28
6
29
33
30
14
31
10
32
15
33
5
34
22
35
10
36
9
37
10
38
9
39
21
40
23
41
5
42
9
43
26
44
11
45
3
46
12
47
5
48
7
49
13
45.5197%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.34408602150537637
totalSentences
93
uniqueOpeners
32
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
21
fancyCount
17
fancyTags
0
"she breathed, the name feeling strange and familiar on her tongue all at once (breathe)"
1
"Lucien drawled in his smooth French accent (drawl)"
2
"he replied, as if it were the most obvious thing in the world (reply, be)"
3
"Lucien remarked, glancing around the cramped one-bedroom flat (remark, glance around)"
4
"Aurora replied, kneeling to scratch the cat between its ears (reply, kneel scratch)"
5
"Aurora finished for him, rising to face him (finish rise face)"
6
"Aurora cut him off sharply (cut)"
7
"he said softly, taking a step closer to her (say softly, take)"
8
"she snapped, even as her traitorous heart leaped at his proximity (snap, leape)"
9
"Lucien murmured, reaching up to tuck a stray lock of her black hair behind her ear (murmur, up to tuck)"
10
"she gasped, her breath hitching in her throat even as her hands trembled with the desire to reach out and touch him (gasp, hitch tremble reach out touch)"
11
"he whispered (whisper)"
12
"she gasped, wrapping her legs around his waist and urging him closer (gasp, wrap urge)"
13
"he said, his voice strained (say, strain)"
14
"demanded (demand)"
15
"she whispered, her voice breaking (whisper, break)"
16
"he said softly, his voice heavy with regret (say softly)"