Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98FKT0RKXZTZ0CZE1QB

Run Details

Duration:
40.7s
Cost:
$0.000733
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood frozen in the doorway of her flat, one hand still gripping the knob, the other raised to knock. Her bright blue eyes widened as they landed on the figure lounging against the frame of her open door. "Lucien Moreau," she breathed, the name feeling strange and familiar on her tongue all at once. He looked the same as the last time she'd seen him a year ago — slicked-back platinum hair, tailored charcoal suit, and an ivory-handled cane that concealed a thin blade. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, sparkled with a mixture of amusement and something darker, more dangerous. "What a pleasant surprise," Lucien drawled in his smooth French accent. "I was beginning to think you wouldn't return home tonight." He glanced at the watch on his wrist. "Or is it technically tomorrow?" Aurora finally found her voice. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" She straightened her shoulders, trying to calm the racing of her heart. He had a way of making everything feel unbalanced. "I'm here to see you, of course," he replied, as if it were the most obvious thing in the world. "May I come in?" She hesitated for a moment before stepping aside and allowing him to enter. He brushed past her, his scent — something spicy and expensive — washing over her. She closed the door behind him, her fingers lingering on the three deadbolts that secured it. "I see you still live above a curry house," Lucien remarked, glancing around the cramped one-bedroom flat. "I always did find that charming." His gaze landed on the tabby cat curled up on the back of the sofa. "And who is this?" "Ptolemy," Aurora replied, kneeling to scratch the cat between its ears. "He's Eva's cat, but she's letting me keep him while I'm staying here." "Ah, Eva," Lucien said with a wry smile. "How is she? I haven't seen her since —" "Since you disappeared," Aurora finished for him, rising to face him. "Without a word. Without a trace." Lucien had the grace to look sheepish. "About that —" "No," Aurora cut him off sharply. "You don't get to explain yourself. Not now. It's been a year, Lucien. A year since you walked out of my life — out of all our lives — without a single explanation." "And yet here I am," he said softly, taking a step closer to her. "Back in your life, whether you like it or not." "I don't like it," she snapped, even as her traitorous heart leaped at his proximity. "I don't want you here." "You never could lie very well," Lucien murmured, reaching up to tuck a stray lock of her black hair behind her ear. "I can see it in your eyes. You missed me." Aurora jerked away from his touch, her cheeks flaming. "You arrogant bastard. You have no idea what I feel." "Don't I?" he asked, his voice low and seductive. "I remember the way you used to look at me, Aurora. The way your body would respond to my touch —" "Stop," she gasped, her breath hitching in her throat even as her hands trembled with the desire to reach out and touch him. "Don't do this. Not now." "Or what?" Lucien challenged, his eyes darkening with desire. "What will you do if I kiss you right now, Aurora? Will you push me away? Or will you kiss me back, like you want to?" "I —" She swallowed hard, her eyes dropping to his lips. "I don't know." Lucien cupped her face with his hands, his thumbs stroking her cheekbones. "Yes, you do," he whispered. "You just don't want to admit it." And then he was kissing her, his lips hot and demanding on hers. Aurora felt herself melting into the kiss, her hands fisting in his suit jacket as she pulled him closer. She'd dreamed of this moment so many times over the past year, ached for his touch, his taste, the feel of his body against hers. But reality was so much better than her dreams. Lucien's hands slid down her back, pulling her flush against him as he deepened the kiss, his tongue tangling with hers. She could feel the heat of his body through his clothes, the hard planes of his chest and abdomen pressing against her. She was losing herself in the kiss, in the feel of him, when suddenly he pulled back, his breathing harsh and ragged. "Aurora," he said, his voice rough with desire, "I need you. I need to be inside you. Now." She nodded mutely, her own desire clouding her thoughts and making it difficult to think straight. She let him lead her to the bedroom, her heart pounding in anticipation. This was happening. After a year of dreaming about him, fantasizing about him, she was finally going to have him. Lucien wasted no time in stripping off her clothes, his hands roaming over her body with a feverish intensity. He kissed his way down her throat, his teeth scraping lightly over her pulse point, making her shiver with need. She reached for the buttons of his suit jacket, desperate to feel his skin against hers. They tumbled onto the bed together, their limbs intertwining as they lost themselves in each other's touch. Lucien's hands were everywhere, caressing, teasing, driving her wild with need. She could feel the hard length of his erection pressing against her thigh, and she ached to have him inside her. "Please," she gasped, wrapping her legs around his waist and urging him closer. "Lucien, please —" He froze above her, his eyes dark with lust and something else — regret? "Aurora," he said, his voice strained, "I can't do this. I can't be with you, not like this." She stared up at him in shock, her body still throbbing with unfulfilled desire. "What are you talking about?" she demanded, her voice trembling. "You just said you needed me —" "I do need you," he said, his voice rough with emotion. "I need you more than I've ever needed anyone or anything in my life. But I can't be with you. Not when I know I'm no good for you." Aurora felt tears prick at her eyes, but she refused to let them fall. "Get out," she whispered, her voice breaking. "Get out of my flat, and don't ever come back." Lucien looked down at her, his expression pained, but he nodded once before rising from the bed and quickly dressing. "I'm sorry," he said softly, his voice heavy with regret. "I never wanted to hurt you. I love you, Aurora. I've always loved you." And then he was gone, leaving her alone and aching in the bed they'd almost shared. She curled up into a ball, her body wracked with silent sobs as she buried her face in her pillow. She didn't know how long she lay there crying, but slowly, her tears began to subside, leaving behind a hollow, empty feeling in her chest. She loved him too. She'd always loved him, even when she'd hated him for leaving her. But loving someone wasn't always enough — sometimes, it just wasn't meant to be. And as much as it hurt, as much as she wished things could be different, she knew that she and Lucien were never going to be together. Not in the way she'd always wanted. It was over. Whatever they'd had, whatever they could have been, it was over now, and she needed to accept that. She needed to move on, to forget about him and the way he'd made her feel — the way he'd made her heart race and her body burn with desire.
created_at"2026-02-17T01:46:11.684752+00:00" 2/17/2026, 1:46:11 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"she breathed, the name feeling strange and familiar on her tongue all at once [once]"
1"he replied, as if it were the most obvious thing in the world [most]"
2"Lucien remarked, glancing around the cramped one-bedroom flat [around]"
3"Aurora cut him off sharply [sharply]"
4"he said softly, taking a step closer to her [softly]"
5"Lucien murmured, reaching up to tuck a stray lock of her black hair behind her ear [up to]"
6"he said softly, his voice heavy with regret [softly]"
37.5488% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1281
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count2
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"quickly"
2"sharply"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
6"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.3872% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1281
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"anticipation"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"feel "
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"knew that she"
78.4915% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean34.76
std14.76
cv0.425
sampleLengths
040
165
234
332
424
544
623
719
824
917
1017
1110
1239
1324
1420
1532
1619
1730
1828
1935
2014
2124
2257
2352
2440
2549
2655
2749
2816
2932
3031
3140
3231
3344
3461
3564
3651
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was kissing"
1"was losing"
2"was happening"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount932
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03862660944206009
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01072961373390558
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.83
std7.02
cv0.508
sampleLengths
021
119
216
330
419
511
618
75
85
918
109
1120
124
1313
1415
1516
1617
176
1815
194
2011
2113
228
239
2411
256
267
273
286
2933
3014
3110
3215
335
3422
3510
369
3710
389
3921
4023
415
429
4326
4411
453
4612
475
487
4913
45.5197% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.34408602150537637
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners32
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount17
fancyTags
0"she breathed, the name feeling strange and familiar on her tongue all at once (breathe)"
1"Lucien drawled in his smooth French accent (drawl)"
2"he replied, as if it were the most obvious thing in the world (reply, be)"
3"Lucien remarked, glancing around the cramped one-bedroom flat (remark, glance around)"
4"Aurora replied, kneeling to scratch the cat between its ears (reply, kneel scratch)"
5"Aurora finished for him, rising to face him (finish rise face)"
6"Aurora cut him off sharply (cut)"
7"he said softly, taking a step closer to her (say softly, take)"
8"she snapped, even as her traitorous heart leaped at his proximity (snap, leape)"
9"Lucien murmured, reaching up to tuck a stray lock of her black hair behind her ear (murmur, up to tuck)"
10"she gasped, her breath hitching in her throat even as her hands trembled with the desire to reach out and touch him (gasp, hitch tremble reach out touch)"
11"he whispered (whisper)"
12"she gasped, wrapping her legs around his waist and urging him closer (gasp, wrap urge)"
13"he said, his voice strained (say, strain)"
14"demanded (demand)"
15"she whispered, her voice breaking (whisper, break)"
16"he said softly, his voice heavy with regret (say softly)"
80.4806%