Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98GT3PK30S8SKTR9D8Z

Run Details

Duration:
1m 39s
Cost:
$0.001905
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn charged through the rain-soaked streets, her boots splashing against the wet pavement. Ahead, the suspect darted into an alley, their dark silhouette weaving between overstuffed dumpsters. Quinn's breath misted in the chilly air, but she pressed on, determined to catch this lead before it slipped away. She'd been tracking this suspect for weeks, certain they held the key to her investigation. The alley narrowed, the brick walls closing in. Puddles rippled as rain pattered down from the night sky. Quinn rounded a corner just in time to spot the suspect vanish into a rusted metal door. She sprinted to catch up, grabbing the handle right before it latched shut. The door groaned open, revealing a dark stairwell descending beneath the city streets. The suspect's footsteps echoed from below. Quinn hesitated at the threshold, warily eyeing the stairs. This case had led her to slowly unravel a hidden supernatural world existing within London. One wrong step could land her in grave danger. But she couldn't turn back now. Steeling her resolve, Quinn started down the stairs, one hand hovering near her concealed weapon. At the bottom, a dull red glow permeated the underground space. Brick archways stretched into the distance, housing stalls covered by heavy canvas tarps. The Veil Market. Quinn had only heard whispers of this place and the illicit goods traded here. She stuck close to the shadows along the edges, scanning for any sign of her quarry. Movement caught her eye - the suspect, slipping behind a bookshelf that swung inward to reveal a hidden room. Quinn crept closer, then followed them inside. The door sealed shut behind her with an ominous click. In the small back room, a man with close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair looked up from the table, his sharp jaw tensing. "You shouldn't have come here," he growled. "This world isn't meant for you, detective." "I go where the investigation leads me," Quinn replied evenly. "I know you're involved in this, Tomás Herrera. Don't make this harder than it needs to be." Herrera let out a bitter laugh. "Harder than it needs to be? You have no idea what you've stumbled into, Quinn. I'm the least of your problems." "Why don't you enlighten me then?" Quinn pressed. Tomás regarded her for a long moment, then sagged back in his chair. "The supernatural community in this city... it's not so black and white. Not all of us are the monsters you seem to think." Quinn crossed her arms. "And yet here you are, trading in illicit goods on the black market." "Survival often requires a few shades of gray, detective." Tomás shrugged. "The people I help... they have nowhere else to turn. No hospital will treat a vampire's bloodlust or a werewolf's silver burns. I do what I must." "And if that means breaking the law?" Quinn challenged. Tomás' expression hardened. "The law turns a blind eye to our kind. Pretends we don't exist. Someone has to fill that gap." He leaned forward. "You still don't get it, do you? You're meddling in affairs beyond your understanding. I've heard the whispers about you, Harlow Quinn. You've been marked by the supernaturals. That makes you vulnerable..." Quinn's eyes narrowed. "Is that a threat?" "A warning," Tomás corrected. "The deeper you dig, the more you risk bringing the wrong kind of attention. Be careful of what doors you open, detective. Not all of them can be closed again." Quinn weighed his words carefully. Despite his criminal actions, part of her knew he spoke the truth. Her last case had ended in tragedy, leaving her partner dead and too many questions unanswered. Against her better judgment, she found herself drawn to the enigmatic medic before her. "I'll take that under advisement," she replied at last. "But make no mistake, if I find evidence you're involved in something truly nefarious..." "You'll do your job. I'd expect nothing less." Tomás rose to his feet. "But until then... perhaps we could help each other." Quinn cocked an eyebrow. "How so?" "You're not the only one searching for answers, detective. The balance of power in the London underworld is shifting. Ancient grudges are resurfacing." Tomás met her gaze evenly. "I have eyes and ears in this community. I could share information... if you're willing to look the other way on some of my 'gray area' activities." Quinn considered the unlikely proposal. As much as it pained her to admit, she might need a guide like Tomás to navigate these treacherous new waters. And if his intel could help her solve the case... "I'm listening," she allowed carefully. "What do you know?" A hint of a smile tugged at Tomás' mouth. He gestured to the empty chairs. "Have a seat, detective. This is going to take a while..." Quinn sat, warily intrigued. Beneath the city streets, an unlikely alliance formed. And the tangled web of secrets drew them both deeper into the shadows.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn replied evenly [evenly]"
1"she allowed carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.423
leniency0.846
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.154
63.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount820
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"warily"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"warily"
1"slowly"
2"carefully"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount820
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"determined"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"unravel"
count1
5
word"grave"
count1
6
word"resolve"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"enigmatic"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"navigate"
count1
11
word"treacherous"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"determined"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"unravel"
5"grave"
6"resolve"
7"scanning"
8"enigmatic"
9"eyebrow"
10"navigate"
11"treacherous"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords821
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount482
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.32
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn16
London1
Veil1
Market1
Herrera1
Tomás6
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Tomás"
places
0"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount821
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean34.21
std19.03
cv0.556
sampleLengths
064
167
254
357
456
514
627
727
88
936
1017
1138
129
1357
147
1534
1647
1723
1822
196
2055
2145
2226
2325
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs89
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences68
ratio0.015
matches
0"Movement caught her eye - the suspect, slipping behind a bookshelf that swung inward to reveal a hidden room."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount539
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.03153988868274583
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.016697588126159554
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean12.07
std7.01
cv0.581
sampleLengths
015
114
220
315
48
510
617
713
813
96
109
1115
129
136
1415
1511
1613
173
1814
1916
2019
217
2210
2320
247
257
2610
2717
286
2921
308
3113
3223
334
3413
3511
3627
379
383
3922
4032
413
424
434
4430
455
4612
4716
4814
499
77.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4852941176470588
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences47
matches
0"She'd been tracking this suspect"
1"She sprinted to catch up,"
2"She stuck close to the"
3"He leaned forward"
4"Her last case had ended"
5"she replied at last"
6"she allowed carefully"
7"He gestured to the empty"
ratio0.17
87.66% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences47
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn charged through"
1"Quinn's breath misted in the"
2"She'd been tracking this suspect"
3"The alley narrowed, the brick"
4"Puddles rippled as rain pattered"
5"Quinn rounded a corner just"
6"She sprinted to catch up,"
7"The door groaned open, revealing"
8"The suspect's footsteps echoed from"
9"Quinn hesitated at the threshold,"
10"This case had led her"
11"Brick archways stretched into the"
12"The Veil Market."
13"Quinn had only heard whispers"
14"She stuck close to the"
15"Movement caught her eye -"
16"Quinn crept closer, then followed"
17"The door sealed shut behind"
18"Quinn replied evenly"
19"Herrera let out a bitter"
ratio0.745
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"As much as it pained"
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Movement caught her eye - the suspect, slipping behind a bookshelf that swung inward to reveal a hidden room."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he growled (growl)"
1"Quinn pressed (press)"
2"Quinn challenged (challenge)"
3"Tomás corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.308
83.3999%