Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98GT3PK30S8SKTR9D8Z

Run Details

Duration:
1m 39s
Cost:
$0.001905
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn charged through the rain-soaked streets, her boots splashing against the wet pavement. Ahead, the suspect darted into an alley, their dark silhouette weaving between overstuffed dumpsters. Quinn's breath misted in the chilly air, but she pressed on, determined to catch this lead before it slipped away. She'd been tracking this suspect for weeks, certain they held the key to her investigation. The alley narrowed, the brick walls closing in. Puddles rippled as rain pattered down from the night sky. Quinn rounded a corner just in time to spot the suspect vanish into a rusted metal door. She sprinted to catch up, grabbing the handle right before it latched shut. The door groaned open, revealing a dark stairwell descending beneath the city streets. The suspect's footsteps echoed from below. Quinn hesitated at the threshold, warily eyeing the stairs. This case had led her to slowly unravel a hidden supernatural world existing within London. One wrong step could land her in grave danger. But she couldn't turn back now. Steeling her resolve, Quinn started down the stairs, one hand hovering near her concealed weapon. At the bottom, a dull red glow permeated the underground space. Brick archways stretched into the distance, housing stalls covered by heavy canvas tarps. The Veil Market. Quinn had only heard whispers of this place and the illicit goods traded here. She stuck close to the shadows along the edges, scanning for any sign of her quarry. Movement caught her eye - the suspect, slipping behind a bookshelf that swung inward to reveal a hidden room. Quinn crept closer, then followed them inside. The door sealed shut behind her with an ominous click. In the small back room, a man with close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair looked up from the table, his sharp jaw tensing. "You shouldn't have come here," he growled. "This world isn't meant for you, detective." "I go where the investigation leads me," Quinn replied evenly. "I know you're involved in this, Tomás Herrera. Don't make this harder than it needs to be." Herrera let out a bitter laugh. "Harder than it needs to be? You have no idea what you've stumbled into, Quinn. I'm the least of your problems." "Why don't you enlighten me then?" Quinn pressed. Tomás regarded her for a long moment, then sagged back in his chair. "The supernatural community in this city... it's not so black and white. Not all of us are the monsters you seem to think." Quinn crossed her arms. "And yet here you are, trading in illicit goods on the black market." "Survival often requires a few shades of gray, detective." Tomás shrugged. "The people I help... they have nowhere else to turn. No hospital will treat a vampire's bloodlust or a werewolf's silver burns. I do what I must." "And if that means breaking the law?" Quinn challenged. Tomás' expression hardened. "The law turns a blind eye to our kind. Pretends we don't exist. Someone has to fill that gap." He leaned forward. "You still don't get it, do you? You're meddling in affairs beyond your understanding. I've heard the whispers about you, Harlow Quinn. You've been marked by the supernaturals. That makes you vulnerable..." Quinn's eyes narrowed. "Is that a threat?" "A warning," Tomás corrected. "The deeper you dig, the more you risk bringing the wrong kind of attention. Be careful of what doors you open, detective. Not all of them can be closed again." Quinn weighed his words carefully. Despite his criminal actions, part of her knew he spoke the truth. Her last case had ended in tragedy, leaving her partner dead and too many questions unanswered. Against her better judgment, she found herself drawn to the enigmatic medic before her. "I'll take that under advisement," she replied at last. "But make no mistake, if I find evidence you're involved in something truly nefarious..." "You'll do your job. I'd expect nothing less." Tomás rose to his feet. "But until then... perhaps we could help each other." Quinn cocked an eyebrow. "How so?" "You're not the only one searching for answers, detective. The balance of power in the London underworld is shifting. Ancient grudges are resurfacing." Tomás met her gaze evenly. "I have eyes and ears in this community. I could share information... if you're willing to look the other way on some of my 'gray area' activities." Quinn considered the unlikely proposal. As much as it pained her to admit, she might need a guide like Tomás to navigate these treacherous new waters. And if his intel could help her solve the case... "I'm listening," she allowed carefully. "What do you know?" A hint of a smile tugged at Tomás' mouth. He gestured to the empty chairs. "Have a seat, detective. This is going to take a while..." Quinn sat, warily intrigued. Beneath the city streets, an unlikely alliance formed. And the tangled web of secrets drew them both deeper into the shadows.
created_at"2026-02-17T01:47:09.917133+00:00" 2/17/2026, 1:47:09 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn replied evenly [evenly]"
1"she allowed carefully [carefully]"
27.1845% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount824
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"warily"
count2
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"warily"
3"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.3204% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount824
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"enigmatic"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"navigate"
count1
4
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"enigmatic"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"navigate"
4"unravel"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"fill that gap"
1"\"Is that a"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean34.21
std19.03
cv0.556
sampleLengths
064
167
254
357
456
514
627
727
88
936
1017
1138
129
1357
147
1534
1647
1723
1822
196
2055
2145
2226
2325
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs90
matches(empty)
97.9592% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount490
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.0326530612244898
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.022448979591836733
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean12.07
std7.01
cv0.581
sampleLengths
015
114
220
315
48
510
617
713
813
96
109
1115
129
136
1415
1511
1613
173
1814
1916
2019
217
2210
2320
247
257
2610
2717
286
2921
308
3113
3223
334
3413
3511
3627
379
383
3922
4032
413
424
434
4430
455
4612
4716
4814
499
77.9412% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4852941176470588
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners33
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he growled (growl)"
1"Quinn replied evenly (reply evenly)"
2"pressed (pressed)"
3"Tomás corrected (correct)"
4"she allowed carefully (allow carefully)"
80.2722%