Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMCPD6VEXTCDXXYDY5EBG5

Run Details

Duration:
18.4s
Cost:
$0.007358

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could knock a second time, the scent of turmeric and cardamom curling out from the curry house below. Eva stood there, her dark curls piled messily atop her head, a smudge of ink on her cheek. Her eyes widened. "Rory? What the—" She cut herself off, stepping back as if the sight of her oldest friend required recalibration. "I wasn’t expecting you." Rory held up the brown paper bag from Golden Empress, the grease already seeping through the bottom. "Peace offering. Yu-Fei said you called in sick." Eva’s gaze flicked to the bag, then back to Rory’s face. A beat of silence. Then she sighed, stepping aside. "Fine. But only because I’m starving and too lazy to cook." The flat was exactly as Rory remembered—cluttered, warm, alive. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, uncoiled from the armchair and stretched, tail flicking in judgment before he deigned to wind himself around Rory’s ankles. The walls were still papered with notes, newspaper clippings, and what looked like a new map of London’s underground tunnels, pins stabbed into it like accusations. Eva snatched the bag and plopped onto the sofa, kicking her bare feet up onto the coffee table. "So. What’s the real reason you’re here?" Rory hesitated, then sank into the armchair. The springs groaned under her. "I needed to see you." "Bullshit." Eva tore into the bag, pulling out a container of dumplings. "You’ve been avoiding me for weeks. Now you show up with takeout like nothing happened?" Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the armrest. "It’s not that simple." "Sure it is." Eva’s voice was sharp, but her hands were gentle as she pried open the lid. "You either talk to me, or you don’t. You either trust me, or you don’t." The words hung between them, heavier than the steam rising from the dumplings. Rory exhaled, rubbing her thumb over the crescent scar on her wrist. "I saw Lucien." Eva’s fork paused halfway to her mouth. "Lucien Moreau?" "Yeah." "Where?" "Outside Silas’ bar. He was waiting for me." Eva set the fork down. "And?" "And he had information. About Evan." The name sat between them like a live wire. Eva’s expression darkened. "What kind of information?" Rory swallowed. "He knows where Evan’s been staying. Who he’s been working with." Eva’s fingers curled into fists. "You didn’t go to him, did you?" "No! Of course not. But Lucien—" Rory stopped, shaking her head. "He offered to help." Eva’s laugh was bitter. "Lucien doesn’t do anything for free. You know that." "I know." Rory’s voice was quiet. "But I’m running out of options." Eva studied her for a long moment, then sighed, reaching for the dumplings again. "You should’ve told me." "I know." Another silence. Ptolemy leapt onto the sofa, kneading Eva’s thigh before settling into a loaf. Eva absently stroked his fur, her gaze distant. "You still have feelings for him." Rory’s head snapped up. "What?" "Lucien." Eva’s eyes were too knowing. "You do." "That’s not—" Rory stopped, because it was. It had always been. Even when she’d tried to bury it, even when she’d told herself she was done, the pull of him was still there, a current beneath her skin. "It’s complicated." Eva snorted. "Everything with you is complicated." Rory opened her mouth to argue, but the words died on her lips as the doorbell buzzed. Eva frowned, pushing herself up. "Who the hell is that?" Rory followed her to the door, pulse quickening as Eva peered through the peephole. Then she went very still. "Rory," Eva said slowly. "You might want to step back." The door swung open before Rory could ask why. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, impeccable in a charcoal suit, his platinum hair catching the dim light. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, and for a heartbeat, the world narrowed to the space between them. "Bonjour, *chérie*," he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey. "Miss me?"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said slowly [slowly]"
69.8341% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount663
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.9170% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount663
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences47
matches
0"was bitter"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean18.31
std13
cv0.71
sampleLengths
045
123
225
331
457
525
617
727
813
933
1028
119
121
131
148
156
166
1716
1813
1912
2015
2113
2212
2318
242
2529
265
278
2840
297
3027
3119
3210
339
3438
3511
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs90
matches(empty)
98.0802% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount474
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.04219409282700422
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008438818565400843
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean8.45
std6.27
cv0.743
sampleLengths
024
118
23
319
44
517
68
711
84
95
1011
119
1222
1326
1418
157
167
175
185
1912
2015
219
224
2318
2415
2513
2612
273
287
292
301
311
328
335
341
356
369
373
384
392
4011
415
427
4311
444
454
469
476
486
4914
67.0940% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.41025641025641024
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners32
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"pried (pry)"
1"Eva said slowly (say slowly)"
2"he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey (say, voice age)"
84.8322%