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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
40.0s
Cost:
$0.000760
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The night air was thick with the petrichor of a recent downpour as Detective Harlow Quinn raced down the rain-slicked streets of SoHo, her
footsteps
echoing
sharply
against the quaint shop facades. Her quarry, a figure draped in a long, dark coat, darted ahead of her, weaving through the mist and the sparse late-night pedestrians with an almost preternatural grace. She couldn't let him out of her sight. Not now. Not after everything she'd sacrificed to get this close to the truth. Harlow's
heart pounded in her chest
, a staccato rhythm that rivaled the staccato click of her heels. Her breath came in short, sharp bursts, the worn leather of her
watch
band creaking as she rounded a corner. She'd lost her partner, DS Morris, to the shadows that lurked in this city's underbelly. She wouldn't lose this lead, too. As the mystery man made a sharp turn into an alleyway, Harlow swore under her breath. She'd been in this area countless times, investigating the owners of The Raven's Nest and their questionable clientele. This was their turf, and she knew it like the back of her hand. But alleys were unpredictable. They were the veins of this city, carrying secrets and sins from one end to the other. She hesitated for a moment, the rainwater dripping from the brim of her hat, before plunging into the darkness after him. The chase continued, a relentless game of cat and mouse that
seemed to
span lifetimes rather than mere minutes. Buildings blurred into one another, their windows reflecting the intermittent bursts of lightning that split the sky. Harlow's sharp jaw
was clenched
, her mind racing almost as
quickly
as her body. And then, just as the chase
seemed to
reach its peak, the man in the dark coat made a final, desperate turn. Harlow
watch
ed as he vaulted over a rusted fence with inhuman agility, disappearing into the night. "No," she whispered, her voice cracking with frustration and something akin to fear. "No, you don't." She leapt over the fence, her body protesting the abuse, and found herself standing at the entrance to Camden's abandoned Tube station. The dilapidated façade was barely visible beneath layers of grime and graffiti, a far cry from the bustling, vibrant markets that sat just a few feet above it. Harlow knew what lay within: the Veil Market, a hidden bazaar that existed solely for the purpose of trading in the occult, the supernatural, and the downright dangerous. She'd heard whispers of its existence, rumors passed between the right and wrong hands, but she'd never been able to find it. Until now. With a bone token clenched
tightly
in her fist, Harlow descended into the bowels of the earth, her
footsteps
echoing
in the hollow darkness. The air grew colder, the walls seeming to press in on her from all sides. There was a hum of energy in the air, a feeling of being
watch
ed, of
being judged
by unseen eyes. She emerged into the market proper, and it was like stepping into another world. Stalls and booths lined every available inch of space, hawking wares that ranged from the simply unusual to the outright impossible. Enchanted weaponry nestled beside jars of preserved creatures, their eyes seeming to follow Harlow as she passed. Alchemists mixed elixirs that glowed with an
ethereal
light, while blacksmiths hammered out arcane runes onto armor and weapons. The market was alive with a
cacophony
of sounds and scents: the clank of metal on metal, the sharp tang of herbs and potions, the guttural chants of spells being cast. It was overwhelming, but Harlow didn't have time to be overwhelmed. Her suspect was still out there, somewhere among the chaos, and she would find him, no matter what it took. As she stalked through the market, her sharp gaze scanning left and right, she could feel the eyes of the stall owners on her. They knew she didn't belong, even without her badge. She wasn't one of them, not a part of their world. But that didn't mean she was helpless. Not by a long shot. She spotted her quarry at last, his dark coat just visible through the press of bodies. With a renewed sense of purpose, she surged forward, shoving her way through the crowd with single-minded determination. "Stop!" she called, her voice barely carrying over the din. "I need to talk to you!" But the man in the coat didn't stop. He
began to
run, darting between stalls with a nimbleness that defied belief. And Harlow, against her better judgement, her instincts, and every warning bell that screamed inside her head, gave chase. The pursuit was madness, sheer madness, but she couldn't stop. Not now. She'd come too far, risked too much. She didn't know how long she ran, her lungs burning with the effort, her heart pounding in her throat. All she knew
was that she
couldn't stop, wouldn't stop, until she'd caught him. And then,
suddenly
, the crowd
seemed to
part before them, revealing a small, secluded alcove nestled between stalls. The man in the dark coat skidded to a halt, his back pressed against the wall, nowhere left to run. Harlow approached
slowly
, her hand resting on the handle of her gun. She didn't draw it, not yet, but she was ready. Ready for anything. "Why are you running?" she asked, her voice low and tense. "What are you hiding?" The man's eyes darted left and right, searching for an escape. But there was none. He was trapped, caught, and he knew it. "I haven't done anything wrong," he said, his voice trembling. "You have no right to chase me, to accuse me of anything." Harlow took a step closer, her eyes never leaving his face. "I have every right," she said. "I'm a police officer. And I believe you're involved in something dangerous. Something that could get a lot of people hurt." The man's face paled, but he held his ground. "You don't understand," he whispered. "You can't understand. This world, it's not what you think it is. There are things happening, things that you can't even begin to imagine..." Harlow's grip tightened on her gun, her mind racing with possibilities. "Tell me," she said. "Tell me everything, and maybe I can help." But the man just shook his head, a wild, desperate
look
in his eyes. "No," he said. "You can't help. No one can help. It's too late. Too late for all of us." And with that, he leapt forward, shoving past Harlow with a strength that sent her reeling. She staggered back, her gun slipping from her fingers, and
watch
ed as he bolted into the crowd, disappearing once again into the night. Harlow sank to her knees, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She'd lost him. Lost him, and with him, the chance to find out what he knew, what secrets he held. She
look
ed up at the sky, the stars barely visible through the haze of the city's lights, and felt a cold, bitter despair wash over her. She'd been so close, so close to finding the answers she'd been seeking for so long. She'd been so sure that this time, this chase, she would find the truth. But now? Now she had nothing. Nothing but a feeling of emptiness, of futility. The secrets of the Veil Market, of the supernatural world that existed just beneath the surface of her own, would remain just that: secrets. She stood,
slowly
, her body aching with the effort. She'd failed, but she wouldn't give up. She couldn't give up. There were still answers to be found, still mysteries to be solved. And she would find them. No matter what it took. With a final, lingering
look
at the Veil Market, Harlow Quinn turned and walked back into the night, the
echoes
of her
footsteps
fading into the darkness, like a promise and a threat all at once.
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2/17/2026, 1:46:26 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
54.7511%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1326
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
1
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
3
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
4
adverb
"tightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
1
"sharply"
2
"slowly"
3
"suddenly"
4
"tightly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
39.6682%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1326
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
1
1
word
"cacophony"
count
1
2
word
"footsteps"
count
3
3
word
"echoes"
count
1
4
word
"echoing"
count
2
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"cacophony"
2
"footsteps"
3
"echoes"
4
"echoing"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
89
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
89
filterMatches
0
"watch"
1
"look"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
97
matches
0
"was that she"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
35
mean
37.8
std
18.93
cv
0.501
sampleLengths
0
82
1
58
2
90
3
50
4
38
5
16
6
50
7
50
8
2
9
59
10
71
11
42
12
20
13
44
14
12
15
34
16
16
17
40
18
19
19
33
20
38
21
25
22
15
23
23
24
22
25
38
26
38
27
23
28
33
29
39
30
31
31
56
32
38
33
42
34
36
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
89
matches
0
"was clenched"
1
"being judged"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
201
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1211
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
37
adverbRatio
0.0305532617671346
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.00990916597853014
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
97
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
97
mean
13.64
std
7.68
cv
0.563
sampleLengths
0
32
1
28
2
8
3
2
4
12
5
17
6
20
7
15
8
6
9
16
10
18
11
14
12
4
13
17
14
21
15
19
16
17
17
14
18
22
19
16
20
13
21
3
22
22
23
28
24
28
25
22
26
2
27
24
28
15
29
20
30
14
31
21
32
17
33
19
34
31
35
11
36
20
37
24
38
9
39
11
40
7
41
5
42
16
43
18
44
10
45
6
46
8
47
13
48
19
49
10
41.9244%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.31958762886597936
totalSentences
97
uniqueOpeners
31
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"she whispered, her voice cracking with frustration and something akin to fear (whisper, crack fear)"
1
"he whispered (whisper)"
90.3732%