| 23.53% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured cryptically [cryptically]" | | 1 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "Rory said immediately [immediately]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.441 | | leniency | 0.882 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.176 | |
| 72.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "reluctantly" | | 5 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "cascading" | | 1 | "wavering" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "intricate" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "unreadable" | | 10 | "anticipation" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "treacherous" | | 13 | "navigating" | | 14 | "sense of" | | 15 | "delved" | | 16 | "crystalline" | | 17 | "churning" | | 18 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1102 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 881 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 3.18 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Nyx | 14 | | Rory | 28 | | Isolde | 8 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Shade | 4 | | Reluctantly | 1 | | Realms | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" | | 4 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared beside her without a sound" | | 1 | "haze, that seemed to bend the light around it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 76.77% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 26.88 | | std | 11.25 | | cv | 0.419 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 4 |
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| 94.63% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "been turned" | | 1 | "been dusted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem pulsed with a faint, inner glow - a twin to the softly luminescent moonsilver dagger sheathed at Rory's hip." |
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| 99.37% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 884 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04072398190045249 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019230769230769232 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 12.96 | | std | 5.3 | | cv | 0.409 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 73.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.47058823529411764 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Eventually, the tunnel opened up" | | 1 | "Reluctantly, Rory allowed herself to" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled forward a few" | | 1 | "She stood in some kind" | | 2 | "They picked their way carefully" | | 3 | "She knew, with a deep," | | 4 | "They spent hours wandering the" | | 5 | "She had glimpsed the truth" |
| | ratio | 0.091 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's boots sank into the" | | 1 | "Isolde glided ahead, her silver" | | 2 | "The air hummed with an" | | 3 | "Wildflowers in vivid hues blanketed" | | 4 | "The standing stones enclosing the" | | 5 | "The Half-Fae's presence was so" | | 6 | "Nyx, in contrast, made no" | | 7 | "Rory breathed, her bright blue" | | 8 | "Isolde turned, a secretive smile" | | 9 | "The seer's pale lavender eyes" | | 10 | "The crimson gem pulsed with" | | 11 | "Isolde murmured cryptically" | | 12 | "The seer's sudden stillness sent" | | 13 | "Tendrils of shimmering mist curled" | | 14 | "Isolde said, her voice tight" | | 15 | "Rory swallowed hard, her scarred" | | 16 | "Nyx's form was tense beside" | | 17 | "Rory said, glancing at her" | | 18 | "Isolde inclined her head, a" | | 19 | "Rory glanced back at Nyx," |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could question her" | | 1 | "Whoever had made this place" | | 2 | "No matter the cost." |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde glided ahead, her silver hair cascading down her back, while Nyx brought up the rear, their form shifting and wavering like living shadow." | | 1 | "In front of them loomed a massive stone archway, carved from some pearlescent material that glowed with its own inner light." | | 2 | "The moment she passed through, Rory felt a strange wrenching sensation, as if she'd been turned inside out and realigned." | | 3 | "She stumbled forward a few steps before catching her balance, blinking in the suddenly bright light." |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice tight with some unreadable emotion" | | 1 | "the Shade said, their voice heavy with regret" |
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| 2.94% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured cryptically (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx's voice whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.412 | | leniency | 0.824 | | rawRatio | 0.357 | | effectiveRatio | 0.294 | |