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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMCRJV7CF9GPMV4AX0NPJX
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
2m 12s
Cost:
$0.003047
Provider:
DeepInfra
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
Rory's boots sank into the soft earth as she stepped into the Fae Grove, her eyes wide as she took in the
ethereal
beauty surrounding her. Isolde
glided
ahead, her silver hair
cascading
down her back, while Nyx brought up the rear, their form shifting and
wavering
like living shadow. The air hummed with an
otherworldly
energy that made Rory's skin tingle. Wildflowers in vivid hues blanketed the ground, their petals seeming to shiver in a non-existent breeze. The standing stones enclosing the grove stood like ancient
sentinels
, their surfaces
etched
with
intricate
, glowing runes. As they ventured deeper, Rory
noticed that Isolde
left no footprints in the soft soil. The Half-Fae's presence was so light, it appeared she barely touched the ground at all. Nyx, in contrast, made no sound whatsoever, their shadowy form unnaturally silent. "This place is incredible," Rory breathed, her bright blue eyes drinking in every detail. "It's like stepping into a dream." Isolde turned, a secretive smile playing at her lips. "The grove exists between worlds, child. Here, the boundaries of reality blur." The seer's pale lavender eyes
flicked
to the Heartstone pendant resting against Rory's chest. The crimson gem pulsed with a faint, inner glow - a twin to the
softly
luminescent moonsilver dagger sheathed at Rory's hip. "Your gifts serve you well here," Isolde murmured cryptically. "But beware relying on them overmuch. True power lies within." Before Rory could question her meaning, they rounded a bend in the path and Isolde came to an abrupt halt. The seer's sudden stillness sent a prickle of unease up Rory's spine. In front of them
loomed
a massive stone archway, carved from some pearlescent material that glowed with its own inner light. Tendrils of shimmering mist curled and twisted in the opening, rippling like the surface of a wind-touched pond. "This is as far as I go," Isolde said, her voice tight with some
unreadable
emotion. "What lies beyond is not for me to know." Rory swallowed hard, her scarred wrist aching in the presence of so much wild magic. Nyx's form was tense beside her,
anticipation
rolling off them in waves. "I have to do this," Rory said, glancing at her companions. "I have to understand what I am. What I'm meant to do." Isolde inclined her head, a benediction and a warning all in one. "Then step through, Aurora Carter. Embrace your destiny." Rory glanced back at Nyx, but the Shade merely nodded, their faintly glowing eyes inscrutable. Heart pounding, Rory stepped up to the archway, took a deep breath, and walked through the swirling mist. The moment she passed through, Rory felt a strange wrenching sensation, as if she'd
been turned
inside out and realigned. She stumbled forward a few steps before catching her balance, blinking in the
suddenly
bright light. She stood in some kind of vast, underground cavern. Stalactites and stalagmites glittered with countless tiny crystals, making the whole place sparkle like it had
been dusted
with diamonds. A soft amber glow emanated from the ceiling high above, bathing everything in warm, golden tones. "Wow," Rory breathed, craning her neck to take it all in. "It's beautiful." "And treacherous," Nyx's voice whispered in her ear, startling her. The Shade had appeared beside her without a sound. "Stay alert." They picked their way
carefully
over the uneven ground, Nyx shifting back into shadow to avoid the jagged rocks. Rory called forth a globe of soft, silvery light to guide their way,
navigating
by instinct more than any sense of direction. As they
delved
deeper, Rory started noticing signs of habitation. Tools and equipment lay scattered about, half-buried under a layer of glittering dust. Whoever had made this place their home, they hadn't been here in a long, long time. "Who lived here?" Rory asked, holding up an ornate,
crystalline
chalice for Nyx to see. "And what happened to them?" The Shade shrugged, their form rippling. "Lost to time. But their absence is fortuitous for us." Eventually, the tunnel opened up into a cavern even larger than the first. Tiers of glittering balconies spiraled up the walls, connected by a network of delicate, filigreed walkways. Far below, a dark, still lake reflected the amber light back like a mirror. "I don't understand," Rory murmured, spinning in a slow circle to take it all in. "Why would anyone abandon a place like this?" "The Realms are full of mysteries," Nyx said quietly. "Not all of them have answers." As they approached the center of the walkway, Rory noticed a strange disturbance in the air. A shimmering distortion, like heat haze, that
seemed to
bend the light around it. "What
is that?" Rory
asked, moving closer to investigate. Nyx made a sharp, hissing sound and yanked her back by the arm. "Careful! That's a rift point. A tear in the Veil." Rory's
eyes widened
in realization. "Is that how we got here? We went through the Veil?" "In a manner of speaking," Nyx said, still holding tight to her arm. "But these rifts are unpredictable. Unstable. We must take care not to get too close." Rory nodded, but couldn't help but stare at the rift in fascination. The power involved in ripping a hole between worlds...it was unthinkable. "Come," Nyx said,
gently
drawing her away. "There is still much to explore. And we don't have much time." Reluctantly, Rory allowed herself to be led away, but she could still feel the pull of the rift like a tugging on her soul. She knew, with a deep, unshakable certainty, that she would be back. They spent hours wandering the glittering labyrinth of passages and chambers, yet barely
seemed to
scratch the surface of all there was to discover. Rory's head
was spinning
with questions and wonders by the time Nyx finally called a halt. "We've been gone too long," the Shade said, their voice heavy with regret. "But we can return, if you wish." "I do," Rory said immediately. "There's so much more to learn." Nyx inclined their head. "Then let us depart, for now. Reality will not wait on our explorations." Rory called forth another globe of light and followed Nyx back through the
crystalline
wonderland, her mind
churning
with all she had seen. Isolde's words
echoed
in her head: "True power lies within." And for the first time, Rory thought she understood what that
truly
meant. As they stepped back through the misty archway and into the Fae Grove, Rory knew she would never be the same. She had glimpsed the truth of the Realms, and she would never stop seeking it. No matter the cost.
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2/17/2026, 1:47:59 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
14.2857%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
14
adverbTagCount
5
adverbTags
0
"Rory breathed, her bright blue eyes drinking in every detail [bright]"
1
"Isolde murmured cryptically [cryptically]"
2
"Nyx said quietly [quietly]"
3
"Nyx said, gently drawing her away [gently away]"
4
"Rory said immediately [immediately]"
45.7014%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1105
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"gently"
count
1
2
adverb
"reluctantly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
1
4
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
5
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"gently"
2
"reluctantly"
3
"softly"
4
"suddenly"
5
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1105
totalAiIsms
18
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
1
1
word
"crystalline"
count
2
2
word
"sentinels"
count
1
3
word
"churning"
count
1
4
word
"flicked"
count
1
5
word
"glided"
count
1
6
word
"cascading"
count
1
7
word
"wavering"
count
1
8
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
9
word
"loomed"
count
1
10
word
"unreadable"
count
1
11
word
"intricate"
count
1
12
word
"anticipation"
count
1
13
word
"delved"
count
1
14
word
"echoed"
count
1
15
word
"etched"
count
1
16
word
"navigating"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"crystalline"
2
"sentinels"
3
"churning"
4
"flicked"
5
"glided"
6
"cascading"
7
"wavering"
8
"otherworldly"
9
"loomed"
10
"unreadable"
11
"intricate"
12
"anticipation"
13
"delved"
14
"echoed"
15
"etched"
16
"navigating"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
66
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
66
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"noticed that Isolde"
1
"is that?\" Rory"
76.7690%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
41
mean
26.88
std
11.25
cv
0.419
sampleLengths
0
50
1
45
2
42
3
20
4
21
5
36
6
19
7
32
8
39
9
25
10
27
11
23
12
20
13
33
14
36
15
45
16
13
17
21
18
41
19
39
20
20
21
16
22
43
23
23
24
15
25
30
26
9
27
23
28
16
29
28
30
23
31
19
32
36
33
40
34
20
35
11
36
17
37
33
38
13
39
36
40
4
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
66
matches
0
"been turned"
1
"been dusted"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
153
matches
0
"was spinning"
99.3665%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
884
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
36
adverbRatio
0.04072398190045249
lyAdverbCount
17
lyAdverbRatio
0.019230769230769232
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
85
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
85
mean
12.96
std
5.3
cv
0.409
sampleLengths
0
26
1
24
2
12
3
16
4
17
5
15
6
15
7
12
8
14
9
6
10
9
11
12
12
14
13
22
14
9
15
10
16
20
17
12
18
21
19
18
20
16
21
9
22
15
23
12
24
11
25
12
26
12
27
8
28
15
29
18
30
20
31
16
32
9
33
20
34
16
35
11
36
2
37
10
38
9
39
2
40
19
41
22
42
10
43
13
44
16
45
15
46
5
47
6
48
10
49
13
73.7255%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.47058823529411764
totalSentences
85
uniqueOpeners
40
14.2857%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
14
fancyCount
9
fancyTags
0
"Rory breathed, her bright blue eyes drinking in every detail (breathe)"
1
"Isolde murmured cryptically (murmur cryptically)"
2
"Rory said, glancing at her companions (say, glance)"
3
"Rory breathed, craning her neck to take it all in (breathe, craning take)"
4
"Nyx's voice whispered in her ear, startling her (whisper startle)"
5
"Rory murmured, spinning in a slow circle to take it all in (murmur, spin take)"
6
"Nyx said quietly (say quietly)"
7
"Nyx said, gently drawing her away (say, gently draw)"
8
"Rory said immediately (say immediately)"
77.8902%