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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMCT1Z1ZSA7F1AWCKQRW62
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Model:
GPT-4o, May 13th (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
16.4s
Cost:
$0.029060
Provider:
Azure
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
Rain pelted the streets of Soho, turning the cobblestones into a slick, treacherous path. Detective Harlow Quinn's breath came in sharp bursts, each exhale a puff of mist in the cold night air. Her worn leather
watch
, a relic of countless late-night stakeouts, ticked steadily against her wrist, a metronome to her pursuit. Ahead, the suspect darted through the narrow alleyways, a shadowy figure slipping in and out of the dim pools of light cast by the streetlamps. Quinn's eyes, sharp and unyielding, tracked every movement. She couldn't afford to lose him—not now, not when she was so close. The suspect glanced over his shoulder, his face momentarily illuminated by the neon glow of The Raven's Nest's distinctive green sign. Quinn recognized him immediately: Tomás Herrera, the former paramedic turned underground healer. His olive skin and short curly dark brown hair were unmistakable, even in the rain-soaked gloom. Quinn's jaw tightened. Herrera was a key link to the clique she had been investigating for months, a group she suspected of
being involved
in a web of criminal activities that stretched far beyond the mundane. She couldn't let him slip away. Herrera veered
suddenly
, disappearing into a side street. Quinn followed, her
footsteps
echoing
off the wet pavement. The alley opened up into a small courtyard, the entrance to The Raven's Nest
looming
ahead. She hesitated for a fraction of a second, then pushed forward, her military precision guiding her through the familiar territory. Inside, the bar was dimly lit, the walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs that
seemed to
watch
her every move.
The air was thick with
the scent of damp wood and spilled beer. Patrons huddled in dark corners, their conversations a low murmur beneath the hum of the jukebox. Quinn scanned the room, her eyes narrowing as she spotted Herrera slipping through a door at the back. She moved
quickly
, weaving through the tables and ignoring the curious glances from the bar's regulars. The door led to a narrow hallway, lined with more photographs and a single, inconspicuous bookshelf. She reached the bookshelf just in time to see it swing open, revealing a hidden passage. Herrera glanced back, his warm brown eyes meeting hers for a brief moment before he disappeared into the darkness beyond. Quinn's
heart pounded in her chest
. She knew about the secret room in The Raven's Nest, a place used for
clandestine
meetings and shady deals. But this was different. This passage led somewhere else, somewhere she had never ventured before. She hesitated, her instincts screaming at her to be cautious. But the memory of her partner, DS Morris, flashed through her mind. She couldn't let fear hold her back—not when the answers she sought were so close. Taking a deep breath, she stepped through the hidden doorway, the bookshelf closing behind her with a soft click. The passage was narrow and dark, the air cool and damp. She moved forward, her senses on high alert, every sound amplified in the confined space. The passage sloped downward, the walls rough and uneven. Quinn's fingers brushed against the cold stone, guiding her steps as she descended deeper into the unknown. The sound of dripping water
echoed
around her, mingling with the distant hum of the city above. After what felt like an eternity, the passage opened up into a vast underground chamber.
The air was thick with
the scent of earth and something else, something metallic and faintly sweet. Quinn's eyes adjusted to the dim light, revealing a bustling market spread out before her. The Veil Market. She had heard whispers of this place, a hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon. It
was said
to sell enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information—everything the clique could possibly need to operate in the shadows. Quinn's pulse quickened. She had stumbled into a world she barely understood, a world that had taken her partner from her. But she couldn't turn back now. She had to find Herrera, had to uncover the truth. The market was a maze of stalls and vendors, each one offering wares that defied explanation. A woman with eyes like molten gold hawked vials of shimmering liquid, while a man with a serpent tattoo coiled around his neck displayed an array of ancient tomes. The air buzzed with the energy of countless deals
being struck
, secrets exchanged in hushed tones. Quinn moved through the crowd, her eyes scanning for any sign of Herrera. She spotted him near a stall selling bone tokens, the entry requirement for the market. He
was speaking
with a tall, gaunt man whose eyes glowed faintly in the dim light. She edged closer, straining to hear their conversation. Herrera's voice was low and urgent, his words a rapid-fire stream of Spanish and English. The gaunt man nodded, slipping something into Herrera's hand before disappearing into the throng. Quinn's heart raced. She had to act
quickly
, before Herrera vanished again. She pushed through the crowd, her hand reaching for the small pistol holstered at her side. But as she closed the distance, Herrera turned, his eyes widening in surprise. "Detective Quinn," he said, his voice
tinged
with both fear and defiance. "I didn't expect to see you here." "You're not the only one full of surprises, Herrera," Quinn replied, her tone cold and steady. "You're coming with me." Herrera's gaze
flicked
to the crowd around them, then back to Quinn. "You don't understand what you're getting into," he said, his voice low. "This place—it's not like anything you've ever seen." "I don't care," Quinn snapped. "You're a key to
unraveling
this whole mess, and I'm not letting you slip away." Before Herrera could respond, a commotion erupted nearby. A group of figures in dark cloaks pushed through the crowd, their eyes glowing with an unnatural light. Quinn's grip tightened on her pistol, her instincts screaming danger. "Herrera," she said, her voice a harsh whisper. "What's going on?" "They're enforcers," Herrera replied, his voice tense. "They keep the peace in the market, but they're not above using force to do it." Quinn's mind raced. She
was outnumbered
and outgunned, deep in unfamiliar territory. But she couldn't back down now. She had to find a way out, had to get Herrera to safety. "Follow me," Herrera said
suddenly
, his voice urgent. "I know a way out." Quinn hesitated for a split second, then nodded. She had no choice but to trust him—for now. They moved
quickly
, weaving through the stalls and slipping into a narrow side passage. The sounds of the market faded behind them, replaced by the
echoing
drip of water and the distant rumble of the city above. The passage twisted and turned, a labyrinth of stone and shadow. Quinn's
heart pounded in her chest
, her senses on high alert. She could feel the enforcers closing in, their presence a dark cloud on the edge of her awareness. Finally, they emerged into a small chamber, a single ladder leading up to a rusted metal grate. Herrera climbed first, pushing the grate aside and helping Quinn up. They emerged into an abandoned Tube station, the air thick with dust and the scent of decay. Quinn took a deep breath, her mind racing. She had ventured into the unknown and come out the other side, but the danger was far from over. She turned to Herrera, her eyes hard. "Start talking," she said. "And don't leave anything out." Herrera nodded, his expression grim. "There's a lot you don't know, Detective. But if you want to take down the clique, you're going to need my help." Quinn's jaw tightened. She didn't like relying on anyone, especially not someone with as many secrets as Herrera. But she had no choice. The truth was out there, buried in the shadows, and she
was determined
to uncover it—no matter the cost.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
91.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Herrera said suddenly, his voice urgent [suddenly]"
62.1785%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1322
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
3
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
2
highlights
0
"quickly"
1
"suddenly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
31.9213%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1322
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"tinged"
count
1
1
word
"flicked"
count
1
2
word
"clandestine"
count
1
3
word
"looming"
count
1
4
word
"footsteps"
count
1
5
word
"echoed"
count
1
6
word
"echoing"
count
2
7
word
"unraveling"
count
1
highlights
0
"tinged"
1
"flicked"
2
"clandestine"
3
"looming"
4
"footsteps"
5
"echoed"
6
"echoing"
7
"unraveling"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
4
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
2
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
2
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
94
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
94
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
103
matches
(empty)
65.1519%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
36
mean
36.42
std
13.77
cv
0.378
sampleLengths
0
53
1
46
2
49
3
42
4
53
5
51
6
50
7
36
8
40
9
37
10
45
11
43
12
47
13
3
14
40
15
37
16
61
17
44
18
37
19
41
20
19
21
20
22
32
23
20
24
36
25
11
26
23
27
31
28
13
29
54
30
40
31
45
32
34
33
9
34
27
35
42
97.8723%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
5
totalSentences
94
matches
0
"being involved"
1
"was said"
2
"being struck"
3
"was outnumbered"
4
"was determined"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
195
matches
0
"was speaking"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1208
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"former paramedic turned underground healer."
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.028973509933774833
lyAdverbCount
16
lyAdverbRatio
0.013245033112582781
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
103
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
103
mean
12.73
std
6.07
cv
0.477
sampleLengths
0
14
1
19
2
20
3
25
4
8
5
13
6
21
7
12
8
16
9
3
10
33
11
6
12
8
13
9
14
16
15
20
16
22
17
13
18
16
19
18
20
16
21
16
22
16
23
20
24
6
25
19
26
4
27
11
28
10
29
12
30
15
31
19
32
11
33
15
34
9
35
17
36
17
37
15
38
17
39
15
40
3
41
18
42
22
43
3
44
18
45
6
46
10
47
16
48
29
49
16
45.1456%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.27184466019417475
totalSentences
103
uniqueOpeners
28
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"he said, his voice tinged with both fear and defiance (say, tinged)"
1
"Quinn snapped (snap)"
2
"she said, her voice a harsh whisper (say, voice)"
3
"Herrera said suddenly, his voice urgent (say suddenly)"
80.6629%