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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMCYV76DBKASTBGA4JWFZN
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
32.2s
Cost:
$0.000590
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the abandoned Tube platform, her boots
echoing
in the cavernous space.
The air was thick with
the musty scent of decay, mingling with a coppery tang that made her nose wrinkle. She glanced at the scattered bones near the tracks - remnants of the station's forgotten past, or perhaps something more
sinister
. Her partner, a young constable named Oliver, shifted
nervously
beside her. "This is the Veil Market, right? The place doesn't seem to have any vendors or customers." Quinn frowned as she surveyed the shadowy chamber. "It moves e
very
full moon. This must be a temporary location." Her gaze fell upon a small brass compass lying on the ground, its face
etched
with strange markings. She picked it up, turning it over in her gloved hand. "Interesting. Looks like a Veil Compass." Oliver blinked. "I've heard about those. They point towards the nearest supernatural rift or portal, right?" "Among other things," Quinn replied absently, studying the verdigris patina on the casing. "The sigils suggest it was crafted by a Shade artisan. We might need this later." She slipped the compass into her pocket. As they ventured deeper into the market, Quinn's sharp eyes caught sight of a crumpled form in the dimness. She approached
cautiously
, crouching down to examine the body. A young woman, her curly red hair splayed out around her face like a fiery halo. Her glassy green eyes stared into the void, a look of terror frozen on her freckled features. Quinn sighed heavily, the
weight
of her eighteen years on the force settling upon her shoulders. She had seen too many corpses, but the job never got easier. "What do you think happened here, Detective?" Oliver asked quietly, his voice trembling
slightly
. Quinn examined the scene with a critical eye, her mind whirring as she took in e
very
detail. The woman's satchel lay nearby, its contents spilled across the floor - books and papers, all bearing the marks of arcane knowledge. There was no obvious sign of injury, no blood or bullet casings. The cause of death was unclear, but something about the scene nagged at her, a discordant note
amidst
the eerie stillness. "I'm not sure yet," she admitted, rising to her feet. "But we need to find out more about our victim. She seems to be an occult researcher of some kind." As if on cue, a familiar figure emerged from the shadows, her own closely-cropped salt-and-pepper hair
glinting
in the dim light. Eva Kowalski, historian and fellow occult enthusiast, greeted them with a somber nod. "Detective Quinn. I see you've found poor Evie." Quinn raised an eyebrow. "You knew our victim?" Eva tugged
nervously
at her hair, tucking it behind her left ear. "Yes, we were childhood friends. I've been helping with the investigation into the Veil Market." "Well then, perhaps you can shed some light on what happened here," Quinn said, gesturing towards the body. "There's no obvious cause of death, and this isn't the usual clientele for a place like this." Eva knelt beside her fallen friend, her eyes welling with tears. "Evie was always pushing boundaries, trying to uncover the truth about the supernatural underworld. I suppose it finally caught up with her." Quinn watched her closely, weighing her words against the evidence before them. She glanced down at the scattered papers, noticing a pattern amid the chaos - a series of
intricate
sigils that
seemed to
call out to her, whispering secrets from beyond the veil. "What do you make of these markings?" she asked, pointing towards the symbols. Eva peered at them, her brow
furrowing
in concentration. "They appear to be protection wards, but they're unlike any I've seen before. It's almost as if they were drawn in haste, without proper care or precision." A thought
began to
form in Quinn's mind, a thread of an idea that tugged insistently at her consciousness. She turned to Oliver, her voice low and urgent. "What if our victim wasn't the target? What if she was trying to protect someone else, or something?" Oliver looked at her in confusion, but Eva's
eyes widened
with realization. "The Veil Compass," she whispered, nodding towards Quinn's pocket. "Evie must have been trying to hide it from whatever killed her." Quinn pulled out the compass, studying it once more as the pieces
began to
fall into place. The strange sigils on its face
seemed to
shimmer and
dance
in the dim light, their power calling out to her like a siren's song. She knew then that they
were dealing
with something far beyond the realm of ordinary crime, something that threatened to tear apart the
very
fabric of reality itself. She glanced back at the body of her fallen friend, a grim determination settling over her like a shroud. There was no turning back now, not when the stakes were this high. She would find the truth behind Evie's death, and bring those responsible to justice - no matter what it took, or where the trail might lead her. With a final nod to her colleagues, she set off into the darkness, the Veil Compass guiding her steps as she ventured forth into the unknown, ready to face whatever horrors lay ahead.
created_at
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2/17/2026, 1:46:25 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
77.7778%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Quinn replied absently, studying the verdigris patina on the casing [absently]"
42.6606%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
872
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"nervously"
count
2
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"nervously"
2
"slightly"
3
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
872
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"glinting"
count
1
1
word
"sinister"
count
1
2
word
"intricate"
count
1
3
word
"furrowing"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
1
5
word
"dance"
count
1
6
word
"amidst"
count
1
7
word
"echoing"
count
1
8
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"glinting"
1
"sinister"
2
"intricate"
3
"furrowing"
4
"weight"
5
"dance"
6
"amidst"
7
"echoing"
8
"etched"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
43
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
43
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
55
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
22
mean
39.68
std
20.09
cv
0.506
sampleLengths
0
57
1
27
2
54
3
16
4
35
5
89
6
14
7
72
8
30
9
42
10
8
11
27
12
35
13
33
14
44
15
13
16
36
17
46
18
33
19
70
20
59
21
33
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
43
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
104
matches
0
"were dealing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
631
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.03486529318541997
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.017432646592709985
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
55
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
55
mean
15.87
std
6.87
cv
0.433
sampleLengths
0
16
1
20
2
21
3
11
4
16
5
8
6
29
7
11
8
6
9
2
10
14
11
13
12
22
13
19
14
9
15
16
16
17
17
16
18
12
19
14
20
17
21
22
22
12
23
21
24
10
25
20
26
21
27
13
28
8
29
4
30
4
31
12
32
15
33
18
34
17
35
11
36
22
37
12
38
32
39
13
40
9
41
27
42
19
43
9
44
18
45
12
46
9
47
12
48
17
49
25
67.8788%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.41818181818181815
totalSentences
55
uniqueOpeners
23
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"Quinn replied absently, studying the verdigris patina on the casing (reply absently, study case)"
1
"she admitted, rising to her feet (admit, rise)"
2
"Quinn said, gesturing towards the body (say, gesture)"
3
"she whispered, nodding towards Quinn's pocket (whisper, nod)"
80.1951%