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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMCZ3MFVF4T3GMVX3XZEBW
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Model:
GPT-4o, May 13th (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
14.2s
Cost:
$0.029805
Provider:
Azure
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stepped
cautiously
into the hidden clearing of the Fae Grove. The ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary
loomed
behind her, their gnarled surfaces whispering secrets of ages past. She glanced back at Nyx, the Shade, who moved with an eerie grace, their form a shifting silhouette of living shadow. Beside them, Isolde Varga, the Seer,
glided
forward, her silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight. The air within the grove was thick with enchantment, a heady mix of wildflowers and ancient magic. Time moved differently here, and Rory felt a strange disorientation, as if the minutes
were stretching
and folding in on themselves. She tightened her grip on the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, its deep crimson gem pulsing faintly with warmth. "Stay close," Isolde murmured, her voice a soft melody that
seemed to
blend with the rustling leaves. "The grove can be... capricious." Rory nodded, her bright blue eyes scanning the surroundings. The wildflowers b
loomed
in a riot of colors, their petals shimmering with an
otherworldly
glow. She could hear the distant hum of unseen insects and the gentle babble of a hidden stream. It was beautiful, but there was an underlying sense of unease, as if the grove itself
was watching
them. Nyx moved ahead, their faintly glowing violet eyes flickering with curiosity. "This place is... different," they whispered, their voice like a breeze through the trees. "It feels alive." "It is," Isolde replied, her pale lavender eyes distant. "The grove is a living entity, connected to the Fae realm. It breathes, it dreams." Rory shivered, not entirely comforted by the Seer's words. She had come to the grove seeking answers, but the place felt like a labyrinth of mysteries. She glanced at the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its slender, leaf-shaped form cold to the touch. Isolde had given it to her as a gift, a weapon forged in the Fae Courts, capable of cutting through magical wards and particularly effective against demons. She hoped she wouldn't need to use it. As they ventured deeper, the grove
seemed to
shift around them. The trees grew taller, their branches intertwining to form a canopy that filtered the sunlight into dappled patterns on the forest floor. The air grew cooler, and Rory could feel the
weight
of centuries pressing down on her. "Look," Nyx said, pointing to a cluster of mushrooms that glowed with a soft, bioluminescent light. "Fae fungi. They only grow in places touched by the Fae." Rory crouched down to examine them, marveling at their delicate beauty. "They're incredible," she said, reaching out to touch one. It felt cool and
slightly
damp, like touching a piece of the night sky. "Be careful," Isolde warned. "Some of them are poisonous, even to mortals." Rory withdrew her hand, a sense of caution settling over her. She stood up and continued walking, her senses on high alert. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of danger. They came to a small clearing where a pool of crystal-clear water lay nestled among the roots of an ancient oak. The water
shimmered
with a faint inner light, and Rory felt an inexplicable pull towards it. "Is this...?" she began, but Isolde nodded before she could finish. "The Heart of the Grove," the Seer said. "A place of great power. It is
said that those
who drink from it can glimpse the future." Rory hesitated, her mind racing. She had come seeking answers, but the idea of seeing the future was both tempting and terrifying. She glanced at Nyx, who
was watching
her with an inscrutable expression. "Do you want to know?" Nyx asked, their voice barely more than a whisper. Rory took a deep breath, her heart pounding. "I don't know," she admitted. "What if I see something I can't change?" Isolde stepped forward, her
ethereal
presence calming. "The future is not set in stone, Aurora. It is a
tapestry
of possibilities. What you see here is but one thread." Rory nodded, her resolve strengthening. She knelt by the pool and cupped her hands, scooping up the cool, shimmering water. She brought it to her lips and drank, the liquid tasting of starlight and ancient secrets. For a moment, nothing happened. Then, a vision unfolded before her eyes. She saw herself standing at the edge of a great chasm, the Heartstone Pendant glowing brightly around her neck. Across the chasm, a figure stood shrouded in shadow, their eyes burning with an
otherworldly
fire. She felt
a surge of fear
and determination, knowing that this was a pivotal moment, a choice that would shape her destiny. The vision faded, and Rory found herself back in the grove, the pool's light dimming. She looked up at Isolde, her mind reeling. "What did you see?" the Seer asked
gently
. Rory took a deep breath, steadying herself. "A choice," she said. "A moment that will define everything." Isolde nodded, her expression thoughtful. "The future is always in motion, Aurora. Remember that you have the power to shape it." Rory stood, feeling a
newfound
sense of purpose. She didn't have all the answers, but she had a direction. She glanced at Nyx, who gave her a small, encouraging nod. "Let's keep moving," she said, her voice steady. "There's more to discover." As they continued their exploration, the grove
seemed to
open up before them, revealing hidden paths and secret glades. They found a grove of silver-leafed trees that sang
softly
in the breeze, their branches swaying in a hypnotic
dance
. They discovered a circle of standing stones
etched
with ancient runes, their surfaces glowing faintly with residual magic. Rory felt a sense of awe and wonder, tempered by the ever-present undercurrent of unease. The grove was a place of beauty and danger, a reminder of the delicate balance between the mortal world and the realms beyond. As they reached the edge of the grove, the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary once more, Rory turned to Isolde. "Thank you," she said, her voice filled with gratitude. "For everything." Isolde smiled, a hint of sadness in her eyes. "The path ahead will not be easy, Aurora. But you are stronger than you know. Trust in yourself, and in those who stand by your side." Rory nodded, feeling a sense of resolve settle over her. She glanced at Nyx, who gave her a reassuring smile, their form flickering like a shadow in the twilight. Together, they stepped out of the grove and back into the mortal world, the
weight
of their journey pressing down on them. The Fae Grove had given them a glimpse of the wonders and dangers that lay ahead, and Rory
knew that their
adventure was only just beginning.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
13
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
64.7577%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1135
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"gently"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
1
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"gently"
2
"slightly"
3
"softly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1135
totalAiIsms
12
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
1
1
word
"tapestry"
count
1
2
word
"shimmered"
count
1
3
word
"glided"
count
1
4
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
5
word
"loomed"
count
1
6
word
"newfound"
count
1
7
word
"weight"
count
2
8
word
"dance"
count
1
9
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"tapestry"
2
"shimmered"
3
"glided"
4
"otherworldly"
5
"loomed"
6
"newfound"
7
"weight"
8
"dance"
9
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
72
matches
0
"a surge of fear"
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
72
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"said that those"
1
"knew that their"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
33
mean
34.24
std
18.04
cv
0.527
sampleLengths
0
74
1
57
2
22
3
60
4
28
5
24
6
78
7
49
8
27
9
34
10
12
11
37
12
37
13
11
14
26
15
34
16
14
17
21
18
29
19
36
20
69
21
23
22
8
23
17
24
21
25
30
26
12
27
57
28
38
29
33
30
35
31
29
32
48
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
72
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
165
matches
0
"were stretching"
1
"was watching"
2
"was watching"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
952
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"slender, leaf-shaped form"
adverbCount
27
adverbRatio
0.028361344537815126
lyAdverbCount
15
lyAdverbRatio
0.015756302521008403
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
85
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
85
mean
13.29
std
6.07
cv
0.456
sampleLengths
0
18
1
20
2
21
3
15
4
17
5
21
6
19
7
17
8
5
9
9
10
15
11
17
12
19
13
11
14
14
15
3
16
9
17
15
18
9
19
17
20
17
21
27
22
8
23
11
24
22
25
16
26
16
27
11
28
11
29
9
30
14
31
4
32
8
33
11
34
11
35
15
36
21
37
16
38
11
39
8
40
18
41
5
42
17
43
12
44
14
45
8
46
5
47
8
48
7
49
22
47.4510%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.3411764705882353
totalSentences
85
uniqueOpeners
29
21.1538%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
13
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"Isolde murmured, her voice a soft melody that seemed to blend with the rustling leaves (murmur, voice seem blend)"
1
"they whispered, their voice like a breeze through the trees (whisper, like)"
2
"Isolde replied, her pale lavender eyes distant (reply, eye)"
3
"Nyx said, pointing to a cluster of mushrooms that glowed with a soft, bioluminescent light (say, point glow)"
4
"she said, reaching out to touch one (say, reach out touch)"
5
"Isolde warned (warn)"
6
"she admitted (admit)"
7
"she said, her voice filled with gratitude (say, fill)"
83.9625%