| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 70.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1191 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1191 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "tinged" | | 1 | "trepidation" | | 2 | "enigmatic" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "dancing" | | 10 | "ephemeral" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "lilt" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "crystal" | | 16 | "fractured" | | 17 | "chill" | | 18 | "down her spine" | | 19 | "sense of" | | 20 | "anticipation" | | 21 | "unravel" | | 22 | "pulse" | | 23 | "kaleidoscope" | | 24 | "searing" | | 25 | "tapestry" | | 26 | "depths" | | 27 | "racing" | | 28 | "newfound" | | 29 | "weight" | | 30 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of her realization" |
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| 94.70% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a chill" | | 1 | "the sense of anticipation" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1195 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.88% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1085 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.38 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 5 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Veil | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Realms | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.809 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "wildflowers that seemed to bloom in defiance of the season" | | 1 | "light that seemed to belong to another realm" | | 2 | "It was as if the very atmosphere was imbued with an energy that was both ancient and vigorous, a stark contrast to the mundane cityscape they had left behind" | | 3 | "hue that seemed to emanate from the very air itself" | | 4 | "lilt that seemed to harmonize with the ambient sounds of the grove" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1195 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.38% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "knew, that they" | | 1 | "knew that their" |
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| 39.13% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 47.8 | | std | 13.72 | | cv | 0.287 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 78 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 62 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 56 |
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| 73.37% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "was imbued" | | 1 | "was littered" | | 2 | "was said" | | 3 | "been driven" | | 4 | "being pulled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 2.34% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "Her heart thrummed with a mixture of trepidation and exhilaration as she adjusted the strap of her satchel, the contents within — a Heartstone Pendant and a Fae-Forged Blade — suddenly feeling heavier." | | 1 | "Rory felt a chill run down her spine as she remembered the lore of the Veil — the metaphysical barrier that separated Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms." | | 2 | "With a deep breath, she opened the book, and a kaleidoscope of images burst forth — visions of realms beyond imagining, of creatures that defied logic, of magic that twisted the very fabric of reality." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1084 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.023062730627306273 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011992619926199263 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 90.38% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 19.59 | | std | 7.36 | | cv | 0.376 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 57.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.3442622950819672 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 71.85% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Her heart thrummed with a" | | 1 | "They paused, casting no shadow" | | 2 | "Her footsteps made no sound," | | 3 | "It was as if the" | | 4 | "she said, her voice a" | | 5 | "It pulsed with a gentle" | | 6 | "She knew, without knowing how" | | 7 | "They came upon a clearing," | | 8 | "they said, their gaze fixed" | | 9 | "It was said to weaken" | | 10 | "She wondered if this place," | | 11 | "They emerged into a vast" | | 12 | "It was a tome, bound" | | 13 | "They reached out, fingers brushing" | | 14 | "She had always been driven" | | 15 | "Her hand hovered over the" | | 16 | "It was overwhelming, intoxicating, and" | | 17 | "She looked up at Nyx" | | 18 | "she said, her voice trembling" | | 19 | "she said, her words a" |
| | ratio | 0.37 | |
| 52.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The trio stepped through the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 2 | "Her heart thrummed with a" | | 3 | "They paused, casting no shadow" | | 4 | "Isolde Varga, the ageless Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Her footsteps made no sound," | | 6 | "The air here was alive," | | 7 | "It was as if the" | | 8 | "The trees here were unlike" | | 9 | "A soft rustling sound filled" | | 10 | "Nyx reached out, their hand" | | 11 | "Rory watched, mesmerized, as the" | | 12 | "Nyx murmured, their voice the" | | 13 | "Isolde nodded, her lavender eyes" | | 14 | "she said, her voice a" | | 15 | "Rory's fingers brushed against the" | | 16 | "It pulsed with a gentle" | | 17 | "She knew, without knowing how" | | 18 | "They came upon a clearing," | | 19 | "The ground around it was" |
| | ratio | 0.815 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Beside her, Nyx, the enigmatic Shade, glided silently, their violet eyes flickering with a light that seemed to belong to another realm." | | 1 | "They paused, casting no shadow upon the ground despite the dappled sunlight filtering through the leaves of trees that stretched impossibly high." | | 2 | "It was as if the very atmosphere was imbued with an energy that was both ancient and vigorous, a stark contrast to the mundane cityscape they had left behind." | | 3 | "Nyx reached out, their hand passing through a beam of sunlight, dispersing it into a spectrum of colors that flickered across their skin like living paint." | | 4 | "She knew, without knowing how she knew, that they were close to something significant, something that thrummed with the same energy as the pendant." | | 5 | "As her fingers broke the surface of the water, ripples spread outward, and the silver and gold flecks began to coalesce, forming a miniature galaxy that mirrore…" | | 6 | "Rory felt a chill run down her spine as she remembered the lore of the Veil — the metaphysical barrier that separated Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms." | | 7 | "As they continued their exploration, the grove seemed to change around them, the pathways shifting subtly, leading them through archways of intertwined branches…" | | 8 | "Upon the dais stood a pedestal, and upon the pedestal lay an object that caught the light and threw prismatic reflections across the walls of the amphitheater." | | 9 | "With a deep breath, she opened the book, and a kaleidoscope of images burst forth — visions of realms beyond imagining, of creatures that defied logic, of magic…" | | 10 | "It was overwhelming, intoxicating, and she felt as though she were being pulled into the infinite depths of the cosmos." | | 11 | "When the visions finally receded, Rory found herself gasping for breath, her heart racing with the enormity of what she had witnessed." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "she said, her voice trembling with the weight of her realization" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she explained (explain)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |