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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMCZS44DXA33G0HJCQXNJD
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
26.7s
Cost:
$0.002221
Provider:
Novita
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The trio stepped through the archway of ancient oak standing stones, and the world shifted around them. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, felt the air change, grow denser,
tinged
with the sweet scent of wildflowers that
seemed to
bloom in defiance of the season. Her heart thrummed with a mixture of
trepidation
and exhilaration as she adjusted the strap of her satchel, the contents within — a Heartstone Pendant and a Fae-Forged Blade —
suddenly
feeling heavier. Beside her, Nyx, the
enigmatic
Shade,
glided
silently, their violet eyes flickering with a light that
seemed to
belong to another realm. They paused, casting no shadow upon the ground despite the dappled sunlight filtering through the leaves of trees that stretched impossibly high. Isolde Varga, the ageless Half-Fae seer, led the way, her silver hair shimmering like starlight as it cascaded down her back. Her
footsteps
made no sound, yet the group followed, trusting in her
otherworldly
guidance through this hidden grove within Richmond Park. The air here was alive, pulsing with a magic that Rory could feel prickling against her skin. It was as if the
very
atmosphere
was imbued
with an energy that was both ancient and vigorous, a
stark
contrast to the mundane cityscape they had left behind. As they ventured deeper into the grove, the light shifted, taking on a golden hue that
seemed to
emanate from the
very
air itself. The trees here were unlike any Rory had seen before, their bark a deep indigo, leaves shimmering with a metallic sheen. A soft rustling sound filled the air, like the whisper of
silk
against skin, as a gentle breeze set the leaves to
dancing
, casting
ephemeral
patterns of light and shadow upon the ground. Nyx reached out, their hand passing through a beam of sunlight, dispersing it into a spectrum of colors that
flickered
across their skin like living paint. Rory watched, mesmerized, as the colors swirled and faded, leaving Nyx's hand to reform from the dispersed light. "This place... it's between," Nyx murmured, their voice the softest of whispers, yet it carried clearly in the still air. "A pocket of existence not fully part of any one realm." Isolde nodded, her lavender eyes reflecting the
otherworldly
glow of the grove. "Time moves differently here," she said, her voice a melodic lilt that
seemed to
harmonize with the ambient sounds of the grove. "An hour within could be but a moment without, or it could be days." Rory's fingers brushed against the Heartstone Pendant nestled beneath her shirt. It pulsed with a gentle warmth, its faint inner glow barely visible through the fabric. She knew, without knowing how she
knew, that they
were close to something significant, something that thrummed with the same energy as the pendant. They came upon a clearing, where a crystal-clear spring burbled
softly
, the water sparkling with flecks of silver and gold. The ground around it
was littered
with petals from flowers that bloomed in vibrant hues, colors that had no name in the mortal world. Rory knelt by the water's edge, her reflection
fractured
by the
dancing
light upon the surface. Nyx drifted to the center of the clearing, their form rippling like a banner caught in the wind. "There is power here," they said, their gaze fixed on a point unseen by Rory or Isolde. "A nexus of sorts." Isolde approached the spring, her hand outstretched. As her fingers broke the surface of the water, ripples spread outward, and the silver and gold flecks
began to
coalesce, forming a miniature galaxy that mirrored the night sky. "This is a place of convergence," she explained. "Where the threads of fate and the strands of the Veil intertwine." Rory felt a chill run down her spine as she remembered the lore of the Veil — the metaphysical barrier that separated Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms. It
was said
to weaken during the winter solstice, a time when the boundaries between worlds grew thin. She wondered if this place, this wondrous grove, was somehow connected to that celestial event. As they continued their exploration, the grove
seemed to
change around them, the pathways shifting subtly, leading them through archways of intertwined branches that hummed with a sound like distant choirs. The air grew thick with the sense of
anticipation
, and Rory could feel the Heartstone Pendant's warmth intensifying against her skin. They emerged into a vast amphitheater, where stone seats encircled a central dais. Upon the dais stood a pedestal, and upon the pedestal lay an object that caught the light and threw prismatic reflections across the walls of the amphitheater. It was a tome, bound in what
appeared to
be leather of deepest midnight, the pages within edges with silver. Nyx moved towards it, their form solidifying as they approached. They reached out, fingers brushing against the cover, and a shockwave of energy rippled through the air, causing Rory's hair to stand on end. "This is an artifact of great power," Isolde said, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "A compendium of ancient knowledge, lost to the ages." Rory stepped forward, her curiosity piqued. She had always
been driven
by the pursuit of understanding, the need to
unravel
the mysteries that lay just beyond her grasp. Her hand hovered over the tome, the Heartstone Pendant thrumming in time with the pulse in her wrist. With a deep breath, she opened the book, and a
kaleidoscope
of images burst forth — visions of realms beyond imagining, of creatures that defied logic, of magic that twisted the
very
fabric of reality. The pages turned of their own accord, each new image
searing
itself into Rory's mind, a
tapestry
of the multiverse unfolding before her eyes. Nyx and Isolde watched in silent awe as Rory experienced the visions, her body a vessel for the knowledge that flowed from the tome. It was overwhelming, intoxicating, and she felt as though she were
being pulled
into the infinite depths of the cosmos. When the visions finally receded, Rory found herself gasping for breath, her heart racing with the enormity of what she had witnessed. She looked up at Nyx and Isolde, her eyes wide with
newfound
understanding. "This... this changes e
very
thing," she said, her voice trembling with
the weight of her realization
. "The Veil, Hel, the Fae Realms... they're all connected. And we... we have a role to play in what's to come." Isolde nodded, her expression solemn. "The threads of fate are woven
tightly
around us all," she said, her words a gentle reminder of the responsibility they now bore. As they left the amphitheater, the grove
seemed to
sigh around them, as if it too recognized the gravity of their disco
very
. The path back to the standing stones was clear, the light of the mortal world beckoning them home. But as they stepped through the archway, back into the world they knew, Rory couldn't shake the feeling that they had only scratched the surface of the wonders and terrors that lay hidden beyond the Veil. With the Heartstone Pendant's warmth a constant reminder against her skin, she
knew that their
journey had only just begun.
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2/17/2026, 1:46:20 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
38.0952%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Nyx murmured, their voice the softest of whispers, yet it carried clearly in the still air [clearly]"
1
"Isolde said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
41.3735%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1194
totalAiIsmAdverbs
7
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
1
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
2
adverb
"tightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
4
adverb
"very"
count
3
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"suddenly"
2
"tightly"
3
"barely above a whisper"
4
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1194
totalAiIsms
21
found
0
word
"ephemeral"
count
1
1
word
"tapestry"
count
1
2
word
"enigmatic"
count
1
3
word
"tinged"
count
1
4
word
"searing"
count
1
5
word
"flickered"
count
1
6
word
"glided"
count
1
7
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
8
word
"silk"
count
1
9
word
"stark"
count
1
10
word
"fractured"
count
1
11
word
"newfound"
count
1
12
word
"trepidation"
count
1
13
word
"anticipation"
count
1
14
word
"weight"
count
1
15
word
"dancing"
count
2
16
word
"footsteps"
count
1
17
word
"unravel"
count
1
18
word
"kaleidoscope"
count
1
highlights
0
"ephemeral"
1
"tapestry"
2
"enigmatic"
3
"tinged"
4
"searing"
5
"flickered"
6
"glided"
7
"otherworldly"
8
"silk"
9
"stark"
10
"fractured"
11
"newfound"
12
"trepidation"
13
"anticipation"
14
"weight"
15
"dancing"
16
"footsteps"
17
"unravel"
18
"kaleidoscope"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"the weight of her realization"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
55
matches
(empty)
88.9328%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
8
narrationSentences
55
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
2
"appeared to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
61
matches
0
"knew, that they"
1
"knew that their"
39.1341%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
25
mean
47.8
std
13.72
cv
0.287
sampleLengths
0
80
1
44
2
42
3
46
4
78
5
44
6
31
7
48
8
50
9
60
10
39
11
57
12
62
13
52
14
60
15
34
16
24
17
46
18
59
19
44
20
35
21
36
22
28
23
40
24
56
72.7273%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
5
totalSentences
55
matches
0
"was imbued"
1
"was littered"
2
"was said"
3
"been driven"
4
"being pulled"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
178
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1084
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.023062730627306273
lyAdverbCount
13
lyAdverbRatio
0.011992619926199263
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
61
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
90.3797%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
61
mean
19.59
std
7.36
cv
0.376
sampleLengths
0
17
1
30
2
33
3
22
4
22
5
21
6
21
7
17
8
29
9
24
10
21
11
33
12
26
13
18
14
20
15
11
16
12
17
22
18
14
19
11
20
15
21
24
22
20
23
24
24
16
25
18
26
17
27
4
28
7
29
30
30
8
31
12
32
29
33
18
34
15
35
31
36
21
37
13
38
27
39
20
40
10
41
24
42
15
43
9
44
6
45
22
46
18
47
35
48
24
49
24
57.3770%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.3442622950819672
totalSentences
61
uniqueOpeners
21
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"Nyx murmured, their voice the softest of whispers, yet it carried clearly in the still air (murmur, carry clearly)"
1
"she said, her voice a melodic lilt that seemed to harmonize with the ambient sounds of the grove (say, voice seem harmonize)"
2
"they said, their gaze fixed on a point unseen by Rory or Isolde (say, fix)"
3
"she explained (explain)"
4
"she said, her voice trembling with the weight of her realization (say, tremble)"
5
"she said, her words a gentle reminder of the responsibility they now bore (say, bear)"
72.2365%