Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMD24S6DGKYXQBG60366JG

Run Details

Duration:
26.7s
Cost:
$0.002230
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The path beneath Aurora's boots was a tapestry of moss and stone, winding ever deeper into the heart of Richmond Park, where the city's clamor gave way to the whispers of ancient trees. The sky above was a canvas of twilight hues, the sun's last breath painting the clouds in shades of fiery orange and deep purple. Beside her, Nyx's shadowy form seemed to dance with the gathering darkness, while Isolde's silver hair shimmered like a beacon in the dimming light. They had been walking for hours, the air growing denser with the scent of earth and the subtle, sweet perfume of flowers that bloomed out of season. Aurora's hand instinctively reached for the Heartstone Pendant nestled against her skin, its deep crimson hue hidden beneath her shirt. She could feel its faint pulse, a steady rhythm that seemed to align with the beating of her own heart. As they approached the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, time itself seemed to hesitate, caught in the threshold between worlds. The air grew heavy, and the sounds of the park faded to a hushed silence, broken only by the soft rustle of leaves and the distant hoot of an owl. Isolde paused, her pale lavender eyes gazing into the space beyond the stones. "We stand upon the cusp of a realm untouched by mortal steps," she said, her voice a melody that seemed to harmonize with the whispering winds. "Within this grove, the Veil is thin, and the wonders—and perils—of the Fae are many." Aurora exchanged a glance with Nyx, whose violet eyes glowed faintly in the twilight. Together, they stepped forward, crossing into the grove. The air shifted around them, charged with a palpable energy that sent a shiver down Aurora's spine. The world outside seemed to slip away, and they were enveloped by the ethereal beauty of the Fae Grove. The trees here were impossibly tall, their leaves a vibrant kaleidoscope of colors that shimmered with an inner light. The ground was carpeted with wildflowers that glowed with a soft luminescence, casting the grove in a dreamlike radiance. Aurora reached out to touch one, its petals cool and velvety against her skin. It was as if every plant, every stone, was alive with a quiet, ancient magic. Nyx moved with a grace that belied their solid form, their fingers trailing over the bark of a tree, leaving behind a faint trail of shadow. "This place... it is both familiar and foreign," they murmured, their voice the rustle of leaves, the gentle whisper of the wind. "I have not walked in a realm such as this since my days as Aldric." Aurora's attention was drawn to a small brook that cut a winding path through the grove, its waters clear and sparkling, as if flecked with stardust. She knelt beside it, cupping her hands to take a sip. The water was cool and sweet, filling her with a sense of calm and clarity. As she stood, she noticed the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its moonsilver surface gleaming in the ambient light, a silent sentinel against the unknown. Isolde led them deeper into the grove, her steps silent upon the soft earth. She moved with the confidence of one who knew the secrets of this place, her presence a bridge between the human world and the enchantment of the Fae. "Behold," she said, gesturing to a clearing where a grand banquet table was laid out, laden with fruits and pastries that looked too perfect to be real. "A feast awaits, but beware the appetite of indulgence. Gluttony is a sin that can ensnare even the most disciplined soul." Aurora's gaze was drawn to the sky, which now shimmered with a warm amber light, reminiscent of the descriptions of Dymas she had read in the codex. It was as if the grove was a mirror reflecting the essence of that distant realm, a taste of its opulence and excess. As they ventured further, they encountered creatures of myth and legend—a parliament of owls whose eyes held the wisdom of ages, a sprightly procession of fauns playing delicate pipes, and a solitary unicorn that watched them with a regal, discerning gaze. Each encounter was a revelation, a testament to the diversity and splendor of the Fae realm. Yet, despite the beauty that surrounded them, there was an undercurrent of unease that tugged at the edges of Aurora's consciousness. The air was thick with enchantment, and she knew that not all magic was benevolent. The Fae Grove was a place of balance—light and darkness intertwined, joy and sorrow in a delicate dance. They came upon a circle of standing stones, each one carved with ancient runes that pulsed with a quiet power. The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer against Aurora's skin, its pulse quickening as they approached the center of the circle. Here, the Veil was at its thinnest, a gauzy curtain that shimmered with the possibility of other worlds. Nyx reached out a shadowy hand, passing it through the Veil with ease. "This is but one of many gateways," they said, their voice echoing with the weight of centuries. "A crossing point for those who dare to traverse the boundaries of reality." Isolde nodded, her eyes reflecting the glow of the stones. "It is here that the fabric of our world intersects with others. It is here that one must tread with caution, for the paths are many, and not all lead to safe destinations." Aurora felt a thrill of fear and excitement mingle in her chest. The Fae Grove was a nexus of power, a crossroads between worlds. With the Heartstone Pendant and the Fae-Forged Blade, she had the tools to navigate these paths, to explore realms beyond her wildest dreams—or her most harrowing nightmares. As night fully descended upon the grove, the trio found themselves at a crossroads, both literal and metaphorical. The path to the left was lined with will-o'-the-wisps, their flickering lights beckoning with the promise of hidden knowledge and ancient secrets. The path to the right was shrouded in darkness, the air heavy with the scent of earth and growth, hinting at untamed wilderness and the untold dangers that lurked within. Isolde turned to Aurora, her expression enigmatic. "The choice is yours, Rory of Cardiff," she said, her voice a soft chime in the stillness. "Which road will you take? The path of knowledge or the path of the unknown?" Aurora's gaze lingered on each path in turn, her mind racing with possibilities. She could feel the weight of her decision, the gravity of the journey ahead. With a deep breath, she clasped the Heartstone Pendant in her hand and let its warmth guide her. "We go forward," she said with determination, her voice cutting through the silence of the grove. "Together, we will face whatever lies ahead, and we will emerge stronger for it." And so, with the stars above as their witness, they stepped onto the path of shadows, the Fae Grove at their backs and the unknown stretching out before them. The Veil shimmered in response, a silent acknowledgment of their choice, and the adventure that awaited was as vast and wondrous as the realms themselves.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.7778% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said, gesturing to a clearing where a grand banquet table was laid out, laden with fruits and pastries that looked too perfect to be real [too]"
100.0000% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1217
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1217
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"ethereal"
count1
2
word"tapestry"
count1
3
word"testament"
count1
4
word"beacon"
count1
5
word"enigmatic"
count1
6
word"sentinel"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count5
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"solitary"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"dance"
count2
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"navigate"
count1
14
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"ethereal"
2"tapestry"
3"testament"
4"beacon"
5"enigmatic"
6"sentinel"
7"shimmered"
8"gleaming"
9"solitary"
10"weight"
11"dance"
12"echoing"
13"navigate"
14"kaleidoscope"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"runes that pulsed"
27.1687% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean57.48
std14.09
cv0.245
sampleLengths
081
167
257
354
458
567
663
777
890
950
1057
1154
1257
1343
1443
1551
1670
1739
1845
1930
2054
46.9136% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences54
matches
0"were enveloped"
1"was carpeted"
2"was drawn"
3"was laid"
4"was drawn"
5"was lined"
6"was shrouded"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1051
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.011417697431018078
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005708848715509039
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
77.0154% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean19.79
std6.78
cv0.343
sampleLengths
033
124
224
327
420
520
627
730
813
926
1015
1114
128
1317
1419
1519
1619
1714
1815
1926
2022
2115
2226
2311
2415
2525
2614
2728
2827
2921
3027
3123
3241
3316
3421
3515
3618
3720
3819
3918
4013
4117
4213
4310
4433
4512
4612
4727
4818
4922
50.2732% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.36065573770491804
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners22
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she said, her voice a melody that seemed to harmonize with the whispering winds (say, voice seem harmonize)"
1"they murmured, their voice the rustle of leaves, the gentle whisper of the wind (murmur)"
2"she said, gesturing to a clearing where a grand banquet table was laid out, laden with fruits and pastries that looked too perfect to be real (say, gesture lay look too be)"
3"they said, their voice echoing with the weight of centuries (say, echo)"
4"she said, her voice a soft chime in the stillness (say, voice)"
5"she said with determination, her voice cutting through the silence of the grove (say cut)"
73.2833%