| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1213 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1213 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tapestry" | | 1 | "dance" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "beacon" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "charged" | | 8 | "palpable" | | 9 | "kaleidoscope" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "gleaming" | | 14 | "sentinel" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "solitary" | | 17 | "encounter" | | 18 | "testament" | | 19 | "pulsed" | | 20 | "echoing" | | 21 | "weight" | | 22 | "navigate" | | 23 | "enigmatic" | | 24 | "racing" | | 25 | "warmth" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 78.70% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "a thrill of fear" | | 1 | "felt a thrill" | | 2 | "d with determination" |
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| 10.58% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1207 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.75% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1030 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.17 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 12 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Isolde | 5 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 4 | | Fae | 9 | | Grove | 5 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Veil | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.917 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "rhythm that seemed to align with the beating of her own heart" | | 1 | "melody that seemed to harmonize with the whispering winds" | | 2 | "It was as if every plant, every stone, was alive with a quiet, ancient magic" | | 3 | "It was as if the grove was a mirror reflecting the essence of that distant realm, a taste of its opulence and excess" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1207 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 27.17% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 57.48 | | std | 14.09 | | cv | 0.245 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 77 | | 8 | 90 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 70 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 54 |
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| 59.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "were enveloped" | | 1 | "was carpeted" | | 2 | "was drawn" | | 3 | "was laid" | | 4 | "was drawn" | | 5 | "was lined" | | 6 | "was shrouded" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 2.34% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "As they ventured further, they encountered creatures of myth and legend—a parliament of owls whose eyes held the wisdom of ages, a sprightly procession of fauns playing delicate pipes, and a solitary unicorn that watched them with a regal, discerning gaze." | | 1 | "The Fae Grove was a place of balance—light and darkness intertwined, joy and sorrow in a delicate dance." | | 2 | "With the Heartstone Pendant and the Fae-Forged Blade, she had the tools to navigate these paths, to explore realms beyond her wildest dreams—or her most harrowing nightmares." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 907 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.012127894156560088 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006615214994487321 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 77.02% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 19.79 | | std | 6.78 | | cv | 0.343 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 50.27% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.36065573770491804 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "They had been walking for" | | 1 | "She could feel its faint" | | 2 | "she said, her voice a" | | 3 | "It was as if every" | | 4 | "they murmured, their voice the" | | 5 | "She knelt beside it, cupping" | | 6 | "She moved with the confidence" | | 7 | "she said, gesturing to a" | | 8 | "It was as if the" | | 9 | "They came upon a circle" | | 10 | "they said, their voice echoing" | | 11 | "she said, her voice a" | | 12 | "She could feel the weight" | | 13 | "she said with determination, her" |
| | ratio | 0.259 | |
| 52.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The path beneath Aurora's boots" | | 1 | "The sky above was a" | | 2 | "They had been walking for" | | 3 | "Aurora's hand instinctively reached for" | | 4 | "She could feel its faint" | | 5 | "The air grew heavy, and" | | 6 | "Isolde paused, her pale lavender" | | 7 | "she said, her voice a" | | 8 | "Aurora exchanged a glance with" | | 9 | "The air shifted around them," | | 10 | "The world outside seemed to" | | 11 | "The trees here were impossibly" | | 12 | "The ground was carpeted with" | | 13 | "Aurora reached out to touch" | | 14 | "It was as if every" | | 15 | "Nyx moved with a grace" | | 16 | "they murmured, their voice the" | | 17 | "Aurora's attention was drawn to" | | 18 | "She knelt beside it, cupping" | | 19 | "The water was cool and" |
| | ratio | 0.815 | |
| 92.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, despite the beauty that" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "They had been walking for hours, the air growing denser with the scent of earth and the subtle, sweet perfume of flowers that bloomed out of season." | | 1 | "As they approached the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, time itself seemed to hesitate, caught in the threshold between wo…" | | 2 | "The trees here were impossibly tall, their leaves a vibrant kaleidoscope of colors that shimmered with an inner light." | | 3 | "The ground was carpeted with wildflowers that glowed with a soft luminescence, casting the grove in a dreamlike radiance." | | 4 | "Nyx moved with a grace that belied their solid form, their fingers trailing over the bark of a tree, leaving behind a faint trail of shadow." | | 5 | "Aurora's attention was drawn to a small brook that cut a winding path through the grove, its waters clear and sparkling, as if flecked with stardust." | | 6 | "It was as if the grove was a mirror reflecting the essence of that distant realm, a taste of its opulence and excess." | | 7 | "As they ventured further, they encountered creatures of myth and legend—a parliament of owls whose eyes held the wisdom of ages, a sprightly procession of fauns…" | | 8 | "Yet, despite the beauty that surrounded them, there was an undercurrent of unease that tugged at the edges of Aurora's consciousness." | | 9 | "Here, the Veil was at its thinnest, a gauzy curtain that shimmered with the possibility of other worlds." | | 10 | "The path to the right was shrouded in darkness, the air heavy with the scent of earth and growth, hinting at untamed wilderness and the untold dangers that lurk…" | | 11 | "The Veil shimmered in response, a silent acknowledgment of their choice, and the adventure that awaited was as vast and wondrous as the realms themselves." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, their voice echoing with the weight of centuries" | | 1 | "she said, her voice a soft chime in the stillness" | | 2 | "she said, her voice cutting through the silence of the grove" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |