| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 767 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 767 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "implication" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 17 | | markdownWords | 123 | | totalWords | 760 | | ratio | 0.162 | | matches | | 0 | "\"You should not have come,\"" | | 1 | "someone" | | 2 | "\"You seek the Veil,\"" | | 3 | "\"But the Veil does not give. It takes.\"" | | 4 | "\"What do you mean?\"" | | 5 | "\"The Veil weakens here. It’s a rift. And rifts…\"" | | 6 | "\"You are bound by something. By a promise. By a hunger.\"" | | 7 | "\"The Heartstone. It pulses when you’re near Hel. But Hel is not just a place. It is a hunger. And this place…\"" | | 8 | "\"…is a window. And windows do not stay open forever.\"" | | 9 | "\"What do you know?\"" | | 10 | "\"You should not have followed me here. You should not have taken the blade. You should not have—\"" | | 11 | "\"You should not have looked.\"" | | 12 | "seen" | | 13 | "hungry" | | 14 | "\"The Veil is not just a barrier,\"" | | 15 | "\"It is a door. And doors do not stay open for long.\"" | | 16 | "changed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.52% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 636 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.73 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 3 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 11 | | Seer | 3 | | Nyx | 4 | | Dymas | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Veil | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.635 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 21.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if bracing against something unseen" | | 1 | "quite make out" |
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| 68.42% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.316 | | wordCount | 760 | | matches | | 0 | "Not as a shimmering barrier, but as a tear, a jagged rip in the fabric of reality" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.96% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 54.29 | | std | 26 | | cv | 0.479 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 104 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 76 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 44 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 116 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 60 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath came shallow, her fingers tightening around the dagger Isolde had given her—a Fae-forged blade, cold as winter’s breath—before she’d vanished into the mist." | | 1 | "The wildflowers bloomed in hues that shouldn’t exist—lavender that shifted from violet to rose, petals that whispered when the wind stirred them." | | 2 | "Instead, she turned to the others—Isolde stood before a circle of standing stones, her silver hair catching the light like broken glass, her hands pressed to her sides as if bracing against something unseen." | | 3 | "Her fingers closed around something—no, *someone*—a flicker of light, a whisper of a soul." | | 4 | "She’d felt the pendant’s warmth before—when she’d been near Dymas, when she’d thought she’d seen glimpses of the realm’s excess." | | 5 | "And then she saw it—the Veil." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 644 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.029503105590062112 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 60 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 60 | | mean | 12.67 | | std | 8.39 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 43.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.25 | | totalSentences | 60 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she turned to the" | | 1 | "Instead, she stepped forward, her" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 57.04% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath came shallow, her" | | 1 | "It was a pocket of" | | 2 | "She glanced down, then back" | | 3 | "they murmured, though their lips" | | 4 | "She’d spent too long listening" | | 5 | "They held the weight of" | | 6 | "Her fingers closed around something—no," | | 7 | "She’d seen enough of the" | | 8 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 9 | "They trailed off, leaving the" | | 10 | "She turned her head toward" | | 11 | "She gestured to the grove" | | 12 | "She’d felt the pendant’s warmth" | | 13 | "It was a whisper, a" | | 14 | "She turned to Nyx." | | 15 | "Their breath hitched" | | 16 | "She hadn’t looked." | | 17 | "She hadn’t *seen*." | | 18 | "It pulsed, like a heartbeat," | | 19 | "she said, her voice dropping" |
| | ratio | 0.407 | |
| 34.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward, the" | | 2 | "Her breath came shallow, her" | | 3 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 4 | "The grove wasn’t just Richmond" | | 5 | "It was a pocket of" | | 6 | "The wildflowers bloomed in hues" | | 7 | "Aurora’s scar on her wrist" | | 8 | "She glanced down, then back" | | 9 | "Nyx was already here, their" | | 10 | "they murmured, though their lips" | | 11 | "Aurora didn’t flinch." | | 12 | "She’d spent too long listening" | | 13 | "The Seer’s eyes were pale" | | 14 | "They held the weight of" | | 15 | "Aurora said, her voice steady" | | 16 | "The Seer didn’t answer right" | | 17 | "Her fingers closed around something—no," | | 18 | "Aurora’s pulse jumped." | | 19 | "She’d seen enough of the" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae Grove hummed with something older than the trees, something that coiled beneath their boots like a living thread." | | 1 | "Aurora’s scar on her wrist prickled, as if the scar tissue itself remembered something she hadn’t." | | 2 | "Nyx was already here, their form a shifting silhouette between the trees, their voice a whisper that slithered into her mind before she could react." | | 3 | "Instead, she turned to the others—Isolde stood before a circle of standing stones, her silver hair catching the light like broken glass, her hands pressed to he…" | | 4 | "She glanced at Nyx, who stood motionless, their form flickering between solid and shadow." | | 5 | "It was a whisper, a pull, something that made her skin crawl." | | 6 | "The Shade’s form rippled, their voice a whisper that slithered into her ears like smoke." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, though their lips didn’t move" | | 1 | "Aurora said, her voice steady despite the creeping dread in her chest" | | 2 | "she said, her voice dropping to a whisper" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |