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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMD4AMJX03RE8KDQQEQ5C9
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
56.0s
Cost:
$0.001036
Provider:
DeepInfra
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
Rory took a deep breath, steeling herself as she stepped over the weathered oak threshold into Isolde's Grove for the first time. The scent of wildflowers enveloped her, an aromatic brew that seemed both familiar and hauntingly exotic. She glanced back at Nyx and Silas,
nervously
adjusting the deep crimson Heartstone Pendant dangling from her neck, a recent gift from an unknown benefactor. Its faint glow and warmth were oddly comforting against her skin. "You good?" Silas asked, concern
etched
on his rugged features. The bartender turned unlikely ally had proven to be a steadfast presence in her recent tumultuous life. Rory nodded, her black hair whispering against her shoulders as she turned back to the grove. "As good as I can be, considering we're following the cryptic advice of a half-mad Fae Seer into a place that defies all logic and reason." Nyx drifted forward, their shadowy form flickering between solid and incorporeal. "Fear is the minds' greatest illusion," they whispered, a voice that always sounded like secrets carried on the wind. "Trust in yourself, Aurora Carter, and in the path before you." "Easy for you to say," Rory muttered under her breath. "You're not the one who's had to upend their entire life and sanity to chase after magical pendants and ancient prophecies." "True," Silas interjected with a wry smile. "But I'm willing to bet my bar that this is more interesting than another day delivering Chinese food or mixing drinks." Rory couldn't help but snort a laugh at that, the tension easing — if only
slightly
. "Fair enough." She took another step forward, the grass beneath her feet surprisingly soft and lush. "Into the breach then, shall we?" The grove itself was mesmerizing, bathed in an
ethereal
light that seemed both natural and
otherworldly
. Wildflowers b
loomed
with indigo and violet petals that Rory was certain did not exist in the mortal world. The air hummed with a gentle thrum, both comforting and unnervingly alien. As they ventured deeper, the standing stones
loomed
larger, ancient oak trees twisted into
sentinels
that bristled with an almost
palpable
power. Rory could feel the thrum intensify, the hairs on her arms standing on end as if charged with static energy. She ran her fingers along the gnarled bark of one of the
sentinels
, her bright blue eyes widening. "Do you
feel that?" she
breathed, marveling at the warmth that
seemed to
flow from the wood itself, pulsing like a heartbeat. "It's like... it's alive. Or maybe more than alive." Silas placed a hand on the stone next to Rory's, his eyes flaring with sudden realization. "It's the same energy that surrounds the rift points, but it's... stronger. Healthier. Like the difference between a sapling and a full-grown tree." Nyx's form
shimmered
, coalescing into a more solid state as they approached the next stone in the circle. "These are not mere markers," they mused, reaching out to touch the oak with shadowy fingers. "They are conduits. Anchors that tether this place to... somewhere else." "So we're not just in a pocket between realms," Rory said, piecing it together. "We're... what? In a conduit between them?" "In the heart of it," Nyx agreed. "Isolde did not merely escape the Fae Courts. She created a nexus. A place of power where the Veil is thinnest and most malleable." The implications of that
sent a shiver down
Rory's spine, a thrill of possibility and danger. She glanced around, taking in the astonishing beauty of the Grove with
newfound
wonder
. "Why here though? Why Richmond Park of all places?" "Perhaps because it is a liminal space in its own right," Silas suggested. "A borderland between the urban sprawl and the untamed wilds. A place where the edges of our world already fray and blur." Rory
considered that, the
idea settling into her bones with a kind of
uncanny
rightness. "Then... the Grove isn't just a refuge or a
sanctuary
. It's a weapon. A tool." "The question is," Nyx whispered, "what is it meant to be used for?" The trio exchanged an uneasy glance, the
weight
of that question settling over them like a shroud. Rory took a deep breath, steeling herself. "Only one way to find out. Let's keep moving." As they ventured deeper into the grove, the landscape
began to
shift and change, colors bleeding together in a way that defied natural laws. Here the grass
was tipped
with frost that sparkled like diamonds, there a tree b
loomed
with iridescent
flowers that gave
off a faint, intoxicating scent. The air grew colder, thinner, and Rory found herself shivering despite the warmth of her leather jacket. "What is this place?" she breathed, awe and
trepidation
mingling in her voice. "It's like... it's like nothing I've ever seen. Like e
very
thing and nothing all at once." "It's the spaces between," Silas murmured, sounding equally affected. "The places that aren't quite Earth or Hel or the Fae realms. The... the edges of existence itself." Nyx's form
flickered
, edging forward with an almost cautious gait. "We must be careful. The laws of nature do not hold here in the same way. The
very
fabric of reality is... more fragile." Rory nodded, reaching out to clutch the pendant at her throat almost reflexively. Its warmth flared, pulsing like a living heart, and she felt an answering thrum of power that sang along her bones. "I think... I think the pendant is reacting to this place. Or maybe it's reacting to the Grove itself." "Then let it guide us," Nyx breathed. "Let it be our compass in this... chaos." Slowly,
carefully
, the trio ventured further into the ever-shifting landscape of the Grove, guided by the faint, insistent pulse of the Heartstone at Rory's throat. They skirted the edge of a dark, still pool that reflected not their own faces but a field of stars and nebulas, the light of other worlds entirely. They passed through a glade where the trees sang with voices like clarion bells, a haunting melody that spoke of ancient lore and forgotten knowledge. And all the while, the air grew colder, the light more diffuse, the edges of the Grove blurring and bleeding together until Rory wasn't sure if they were even
truly
moving anymore, or if the world around them was simply shifting and changing of its own accord. She clung to the Heartstone like an anchor, a lifeline tethering her to some semblance of reality and sanity. "I... I think we're getting close," she said after what felt like hours but could have been mere moments. "The pendant... it's pulsing faster. Hotter." "Then let us hope we are ready for whatever we find at the end of this journey," Nyx whispered, and Rory could swear the shadows that comprised them grew darker, more dense with
apprehension
. "We will be," Silas affirmed, his voice a rumbling, steadfast promise in the shifting chaos of the Grove. Rory closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and let the Heartstone guide her forward. The thrum of power grew to a crescendo, a song that vibrated through e
very
fiber of her being, and then— E
very
thing stopped. The Grove was still, the landscape
suddenly
solid and unyielding beneath their feet. Rory's eyes snapped open, her breath catching in her throat as she took in the sight before them. They stood on the edge of a vast, barren plain, the sky above a swirling miasma of color and light. And in the center of that plain... a structure. A building. No, Rory realized with a start. Not a building. A temple. Its spires reached for the heavens, crafted from some material that
shimmered
like mother-of-pearl, iridescent and
otherworldly
. Stained glass windows depicted scenes of myth and legend, heroes and monsters locked in eternal struggle. And at the top, the tallest spire crowned by a crystal that pulsed with an inner light, a
beacon
that sang in harmony with the Heartstone at Rory's throat. "The Temple of Veiled Truths," Nyx breathed, sounding stunned. "It... it should not exist. Not here. Not this far beyond the edges of our reality." "But it does," Silas said,
wonder
and awe coloring his voice. "And I think... I think it's been waiting for us." Rory swallowed hard,
the weight of that realization
settling over her like a mantle of power and responsibility. She looked down at the Heartstone, then back up at the Temple that
seemed to
call her name, a siren's song that thrummed in her veins. "Then let's not keep it waiting any longer," she said, and with a deep breath, she stepped forward into the unknown.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
54.9020%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
17
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"they whispered, a voice that always sounded like secrets carried on the wind [always]"
1
"Silas murmured, sounding equally affected [equally]"
2
"she said after what felt like hours but could have been mere moments [like]"
3
"Nyx whispered, and Rory could swear the shadows that comprised them grew darker, more dense with apprehension [more]"
51.2195%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1435
totalAiIsmAdverbs
7
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"nervously"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
4
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
5
adverb
"truly"
count
1
6
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"nervously"
2
"slightly"
3
"slowly"
4
"suddenly"
5
"truly"
6
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1435
totalAiIsms
19
found
0
word
"palpable"
count
1
1
word
"ethereal"
count
1
2
word
"beacon"
count
1
3
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
4
word
"sentinels"
count
2
5
word
"flickered"
count
1
6
word
"shimmered"
count
2
7
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
8
word
"uncanny"
count
1
9
word
"loomed"
count
1
10
word
"newfound"
count
1
11
word
"trepidation"
count
1
12
word
"apprehension"
count
1
13
word
"weight"
count
2
14
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"palpable"
1
"ethereal"
2
"beacon"
3
"sanctuary"
4
"sentinels"
5
"flickered"
6
"shimmered"
7
"otherworldly"
8
"uncanny"
9
"loomed"
10
"newfound"
11
"trepidation"
12
"apprehension"
13
"weight"
14
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
1
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"the weight of that realization"
1
"sent a shiver down"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
69
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
69
filterMatches
0
"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
91
matches
0
"feel that?\" she"
1
"considered that, the"
2
"flowers that gave"
91.5960%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
40
mean
35.78
std
16.84
cv
0.471
sampleLengths
0
74
1
27
2
42
3
41
4
31
5
28
6
38
7
46
8
60
9
31
10
39
11
45
12
21
13
31
14
39
15
35
16
30
17
13
18
33
19
66
20
28
21
27
22
34
23
53
24
15
25
78
26
66
27
25
28
34
29
18
30
35
31
2
32
31
33
31
34
11
35
62
36
25
37
21
38
44
39
21
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
69
matches
0
"was tipped"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
162
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
987
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
38
adverbRatio
0.03850050658561297
lyAdverbCount
19
lyAdverbRatio
0.019250253292806486
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
91
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
91
mean
15.73
std
7.49
cv
0.476
sampleLengths
0
22
1
16
2
25
3
11
4
10
5
17
6
16
7
26
8
11
9
19
10
11
11
10
12
21
13
7
14
21
15
16
16
16
17
6
18
16
19
18
20
12
21
22
22
20
23
18
24
22
25
9
26
16
27
23
28
18
29
16
30
11
31
14
32
7
33
7
34
24
35
16
36
14
37
9
38
13
39
22
40
15
41
15
42
13
43
17
44
7
45
9
46
24
47
25
48
17
49
13
67.0330%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.42857142857142855
totalSentences
91
uniqueOpeners
39
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
17
fancyCount
16
fancyTags
0
"they whispered, a voice that always sounded like secrets carried on the wind (whisper, always sound like carry on)"
1
"Rory muttered under her breath (mutter)"
2
"Silas interjected with a wry smile (interject)"
3
"they mused, reaching out to touch the oak with shadowy fingers (muse, reach out touch)"
4
"Rory said, piecing it together (say, piece)"
5
"Nyx agreed (agree)"
6
"Silas suggested (suggest)"
7
"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
8
"Silas murmured, sounding equally affected (murmur, equally affect)"
9
"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
10
"she said after what felt like hours but could have been mere moments (say feel like be)"
11
"Nyx whispered, and Rory could swear the shadows that comprised them grew darker, more dense with apprehension (whisper, swear comprise grow)"
12
"Silas affirmed, his voice a rumbling, steadfast promise in the shifting chaos of the Grove (affirm, rumble)"
13
"Nyx breathed, sounding stunned (breathe, sound)"
14
"Silas said, wonder and awe coloring his voice (say, wonder coloring)"
15
"she said, and with a deep breath, she stepped forward into the unknown (say, stepped forward)"
80.2794%