| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1430 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "nervously" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "carefully" | | 5 | "truly" | | 6 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1430 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "loomed" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "palpable" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "charged" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "newfound" | | 13 | "uncanny" | | 14 | "sanctuary" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "trepidation" | | 17 | "flickered" | | 18 | "pulse" | | 19 | "apprehension" | | 20 | "vibrated" | | 21 | "structure" | | 22 | "crystal" | | 23 | "pulsed" | | 24 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of that realization" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 60.04% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1431 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.40% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 985 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.13 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Nyx | 9 | | Silas | 8 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Slowly | 1 | | Temple | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Temple" |
| | globalScore | 0.434 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like secrets carried on the wind" | | 1 | "warmth that seemed to flow from the wood itself, pulsing like a heartbeat" | | 2 | "felt like hours but could have been mer" | | 3 | "Temple that seemed to call her name, a siren's song that thrummed in her veins" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.699 | | wordCount | 1431 | | matches | | 0 | "not their own faces but a field of stars" |
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| 93.41% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "considered that, the" | | 1 | "flowers that gave" |
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| 91.60% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 35.78 | | std | 16.84 | | cv | 0.471 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 78 | | 26 | 66 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 62 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 44 | | 39 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "were oddly comforting" | | 1 | "was simply shifting" |
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| 80.06% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory couldn't help but snort a laugh at that, the tension easing — if only slightly." | | 1 | "The thrum of power grew to a crescendo, a song that vibrated through every fiber of her being, and then—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 987 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03850050658561297 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019250253292806486 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 15.73 | | std | 7.49 | | cv | 0.476 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 67.03% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.42857142857142855 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, carefully, the trio ventured" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at Nyx" | | 1 | "Its faint glow and warmth" | | 2 | "they whispered, a voice that" | | 3 | "She took another step forward," | | 4 | "She ran her fingers along" | | 5 | "she breathed, marveling at the" | | 6 | "they mused, reaching out to" | | 7 | "She glanced around, taking in" | | 8 | "she breathed, awe and trepidation" | | 9 | "Its warmth flared, pulsing like" | | 10 | "They skirted the edge of" | | 11 | "They passed through a glade" | | 12 | "She clung to the Heartstone" | | 13 | "she said after what felt" | | 14 | "They stood on the edge" | | 15 | "Its spires reached for the" | | 16 | "She looked down at the" | | 17 | "she said, and with a" |
| | ratio | 0.295 | |
| 33.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory took a deep breath," | | 1 | "The scent of wildflowers enveloped" | | 2 | "She glanced back at Nyx" | | 3 | "Its faint glow and warmth" | | 4 | "Silas asked, concern etched on" | | 5 | "The bartender turned unlikely ally" | | 6 | "Rory nodded, her black hair" | | 7 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadowy" | | 8 | "they whispered, a voice that" | | 9 | "Rory muttered under her breath" | | 10 | "Silas interjected with a wry" | | 11 | "Rory couldn't help but snort" | | 12 | "She took another step forward," | | 13 | "The grove itself was mesmerizing," | | 14 | "Wildflowers bloomed with indigo and" | | 15 | "The air hummed with a" | | 16 | "Rory could feel the thrum" | | 17 | "She ran her fingers along" | | 18 | "she breathed, marveling at the" | | 19 | "Silas placed a hand on" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of wildflowers enveloped her, an aromatic brew that seemed both familiar and hauntingly exotic." | | 1 | "The grove itself was mesmerizing, bathed in an ethereal light that seemed both natural and otherworldly." | | 2 | "As they ventured deeper, the standing stones loomed larger, ancient oak trees twisted into sentinels that bristled with an almost palpable power." | | 3 | "As they ventured deeper into the grove, the landscape began to shift and change, colors bleeding together in a way that defied natural laws." | | 4 | "Here the grass was tipped with frost that sparkled like diamonds, there a tree bloomed with iridescent flowers that gave off a faint, intoxicating scent." | | 5 | "They skirted the edge of a dark, still pool that reflected not their own faces but a field of stars and nebulas, the light of other worlds entirely." | | 6 | "They passed through a glade where the trees sang with voices like clarion bells, a haunting melody that spoke of ancient lore and forgotten knowledge." | | 7 | "The thrum of power grew to a crescendo, a song that vibrated through every fiber of her being, and then—" | | 8 | "Its spires reached for the heavens, crafted from some material that shimmered like mother-of-pearl, iridescent and otherworldly." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 12 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Silas interjected (interject)" | | 3 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" | | 5 | "Silas suggested (suggest)" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 8 | "Silas murmured (murmur)" | | 9 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 10 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 11 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.405 | | leniency | 0.81 | | rawRatio | 0.706 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |