Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMD6A8TFHSVK09RNBHAQ7Z

Run Details

Duration:
9.1s
Cost:
$0.001870
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory's heart pounded as she opened the door to her flat, revealing the last person she expected to see on her doorstep. Lucien Moreau stood there, immaculately dressed in a charcoal suit, his platinum hair slicked back. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, pierced into her. They had history — a complicated, tangled history of attraction and hurt, of things left unsaid between them. "Lucien," Rory breathed, her fingers tightening on the doorframe. "What are you doing here?" "May I come in, cherie?" he asked, his voice low and rich. Rory hesitated, caught off guard by his sudden appearance. Part of her wanted to slam the door in his face, to avoid the complicated emotions he stirred within her. But another part, the part that had never truly gotten over him, ached to let him in. After a moment's deliberation, she stepped aside, allowing him to enter. His presence filled the small flat, and Rory couldn't help but notice how his tailored suit accentuated his lean, muscular frame. She closed the door behind him, the sound of the deadbolts sliding into place echoing in the tense silence. Lucien's gaze swept over the cramped space, taking in the scattered books and research notes that covered every surface. His mouth curved into a faint smile as he caught sight of Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, curled up on the sofa. "Still living above Silas' bar, I see," he murmured, his eyes finally settling on Rory. She crossed her arms over her chest, a defensive gesture. "What do you want, Lucien?" "I..." He paused, a flicker of uncertainty crossing his features. "I needed to see you, Rory." Rory's heart stuttered at his words. "After all this time, you just show up on my doorstep?" She shook her head, a bitter laugh escaping her lips. "What, did you think I'd welcome you with open arms?" Lucien's brow furrowed, and he took a step closer. "Non, I... I know I have no right to ask that of you. I've hurt you, and I've regretted it every day since." Rory felt the familiar sting of tears in her eyes, but she blinked them back defiantly. "Then why are you here? Why now?" "Because I can't stop thinking about you," he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper. "Because no matter how hard I try, I can't move on." He reached into his suit jacket, pulling out a small, velvet-covered box. "I have something for you." Rory eyed the box warily, her heart pounding in her chest. "What is it?" Lucien extended the box towards her, his hand trembling slightly. "Open it." Hesitantly, Rory took the box, her fingers brushing against his. The contact sent a spark of electricity through her, and she had to suppress a shiver. Slowly, she opened the lid, her breath catching in her throat at the sight of the delicate silver necklace inside, the pendant a crescent moon adorned with small, sparkling stones. "Lucien..." she breathed, her eyes lifting to meet his. "I saw it, and it reminded me of you," he said, his voice thick with emotion. "The strength and resilience of the moon, the beauty in its imperfections. I... I wanted you to have it." Rory's fingers traced the intricate pendant, her mind racing. This was the Lucien she remembered — the one who could be tender and thoughtful, the one who had once captivated her heart. But she also remembered the hurt, the betrayal, the way he had vanished from her life without a word. "Why are you doing this?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "After all this time, why now?" Lucien stepped closer, his gaze unwavering. "Because I never stopped loving you, Rory. I've tried to move on, to forget you, but I can't. You're... you're a part of me, and I can't bear the thought of living without you in my life." Rory felt the tears she had been holding back finally spill over, cascading down her cheeks. "That's not fair, Lucien. You can't just waltz back in and expect me to forgive you, to welcome you back with open arms." "I know," he murmured, his own eyes glistening with unshed tears. "I know I don't deserve your forgiveness, and I'm not asking for it. I just... I needed you to know how I feel. That's all." Rory stared at him, her heart warring with her mind. The pain and hurt he had caused her still lingered, a raw wound that had never fully healed. But the pull of his presence, the way he could still make her heart race, was undeniable. Slowly, she closed the box, clutching it tightly in her hand. "I... I don't know what to say." Lucien nodded, his shoulders slumping slightly. "I understand. I'll leave, but..." He paused, his gaze searching hers. "If you ever want to talk, you know where to find me." He turned to leave, and Rory felt a pang of... what, she couldn't quite say. Regret? Longing? Before she could stop herself, she reached out and grabbed his arm, stopping him in his tracks. "Lucien, wait." He turned back to her, his eyes hopeful, and Rory knew in that moment that she could never truly let him go.
created_at"2026-02-17T01:46:10.014762+00:00" 2/17/2026, 1:46:10 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.414
leniency0.828
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
36.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount872
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"truly"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
2
adverb"warily"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"hesitantly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count2
6
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"warily"
3"slightly"
4"hesitantly"
5"slowly"
6"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount872
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"furrowed"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"pounding"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"unwavering"
count1
12
word"cascading"
count1
13
word"glistening"
count1
14
word"race"
count1
15
word"pang"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"silence"
2"flicker"
3"furrowed"
4"familiar"
5"whisper"
6"velvet"
7"pounding"
8"traced"
9"intricate"
10"racing"
11"unwavering"
12"cascading"
13"glistening"
14"race"
15"pang"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"couldn't help but notice"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords874
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
35.62% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount612
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.29
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Rory14
Ptolemy1
Eva1
Lucien7
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.356
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount874
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"notes that covered"
99.66% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean29.13
std14.53
cv0.499
sampleLengths
022
144
214
312
446
551
640
715
815
916
1037
1132
1223
1343
1414
1512
1656
179
1835
1951
2019
2143
2239
2336
2445
2518
2629
2734
282
2922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs113
matches(empty)
56.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences66
ratio0.03
matches
0"They had history — a complicated, tangled history of attraction and hurt, of things left unsaid between them."
1"This was the Lucien she remembered — the one who could be tender and thoughtful, the one who had once captivated her heart."
88.84% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount611
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, velvet-covered box."
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03927986906710311
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.02618657937806874
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean13.24
std7.25
cv0.548
sampleLengths
022
115
211
318
49
55
612
79
820
917
1011
1121
1219
1319
1421
1515
1610
175
1810
196
206
2121
2210
239
2423
2516
267
2715
2823
295
3011
313
3210
332
3410
3516
3630
379
3816
3919
409
4123
4219
4313
446
456
4637
4716
4823
4911
63.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4090909090909091
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences47
matches
0"Hesitantly, Rory took the box,"
1"Slowly, she opened the lid,"
2"Slowly, she closed the box,"
ratio0.064
58.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences47
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
1"They had history — a"
2"he asked, his voice low"
3"His presence filled the small"
4"She closed the door behind"
5"His mouth curved into a"
6"he murmured, his eyes finally"
7"She crossed her arms over"
8"He paused, a flicker of"
9"She shook her head, a"
10"he admitted, his voice barely"
11"He reached into his suit"
12"she breathed, her eyes lifting"
13"he said, his voice thick"
14"she asked, her voice barely"
15"he murmured, his own eyes"
16"He paused, his gaze searching"
17"He turned to leave, and"
18"He turned back to her,"
ratio0.404
55.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences47
matches
0"Rory's heart pounded as she"
1"Lucien Moreau stood there, immaculately"
2"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
3"They had history — a"
4"Rory breathed, her fingers tightening"
5"he asked, his voice low"
6"Rory hesitated, caught off guard"
7"Part of her wanted to"
8"His presence filled the small"
9"She closed the door behind"
10"Lucien's gaze swept over the"
11"His mouth curved into a"
12"he murmured, his eyes finally"
13"She crossed her arms over"
14"He paused, a flicker of"
15"Rory's heart stuttered at his"
16"She shook her head, a"
17"Lucien's brow furrowed, and he"
18"Rory felt the familiar sting"
19"he admitted, his voice barely"
ratio0.809
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"Before she could stop herself,"
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"Rory breathed, her fingers tightening on the doorframe"
1"he asked, his voice low and rich"
2"he murmured, his eyes finally settling on Rory"
3"He paused, a flicker of uncertainty crossing his features"
4"She shook, a bitter laugh escaping her lips"
5"he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper"
6"he said, his voice thick with emotion"
7"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"he murmured, his own eyes glistening with unshed tears"
9"He paused, his gaze searching hers"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"he admitted (admit)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.345
79.9177%