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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMD7PPCPN83H59B54K6MSV
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
35.8s
Cost:
$0.000678
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The rain pounded against the pavement in heavy sheets, the night sky flickering with distant lightning. Detective Harlow Quinn blinked the water from her eyes, her sharp gaze locked on the shadowy figure darting through the slick, deserted streets. The suspect, a young man with an olive complexion and short, curly dark brown hair,
seemed to
melt into the darkness between the infrequent streetlamps. Quinn's sensible flats splashed through the puddles as she pursued, her worn leather
watch
strapping her fitness tracker to her wrist. She
was getting
too old for this, she thought bitterly, the sharp pains in her joints agreeing with the sentiment. But she couldn't let this lead go. Not when she'd finally found a thread connected to the case that had haunted her for years. The file on the late DS Morris was still open on her desk, a cold case that never stopped bleeding chill into her heart. She'd lost her partner, her closest friend in the department, to something she couldn't understand. Something with claws dipped in the supernatural. And now, finally, she had a scent. She followed the suspect down the twisting alleys, heart pounding in her chest. He
seemed to
know exactly where he
was going
, never hesitating as he
navigated
the maze of wet cobblestones. They came to a stop in front of a green neon sign, buzzing and flickering in the rain, advertising 'The Raven's Nest'. The suspect glanced back at her, his warm brown eyes flashing in the light, before disappearing inside. Quinn gritted her teeth, weighing her options. She could call for backup, but by the time they arrived, the thread would be gone. No, she had to do this herself. She had to know what lay at the end of it. She pushed through the door, stepping into the dimly lit warmth of the bar. The walls
were covered
in old maps and black-and-white photographs, the air heavy with the scent of stale beer and cigarette smoke. She scanned the room
quickly
, looking for the suspect. He was nowhere to be seen. Quinn approached the bar, keeping her voice low and urgent. "The man who just came in? Where did he go?" The bartender, a grizzled man with more beard than hair, just shrugged. "Haven't seen anyone." Quinn's patience snapped like a twig under a boot. "Don't waste my time." She glanced around, looking for any other exit. Her gaze landed on a bookshelf. She strode over to it, running her fingers along the spines of the ancient tomes. Headlines screamed of war and disaster in languages dead and living. Her fingers found a switch hidden in the dust, a click sounding in the quiet room. The bookshelf swung open with a creak, revealing a hidden staircase leading down into darkness. Quinn hesitated for a moment, then drew her gun from her holster. She had a feeling she
was going
to need it. The stairs led to a tunnel, old railway tracks running along the floor.
The air was thick with
the stink of mildew and something else, something Quinn couldn't quite place. Something that made her nose wrinkle in disgust. She followed the tracks, the only light coming from the flickering bulbs strung haphazardly along the walls. The tunnel opened up into a cavern, the abandoned Tube station bustling with life. Stalls and tables lined the walls, selling everything from enchanted weapons to alchemical concoctions. Quinn kept to the shadows,
watch
ing as the suspect moved through the crowd, his medallion
glint
ing in the dull light. He spoke to a few of the vendors, exchanging coins and tokens for small packages. Quinn's
heart raced in her chest
, adrenalin flooding her system. This was it, the underground market she'd heard whispers about. The Veil Market. Where anything could be bought for the right price. Where secrets
were sold
like cheap perfume. She had to get closer, had to hear what was
being said
. She pulled her jacket tighter around her shoulders, tucking her gun into the waistband of her trousers. She stepped into the light, moving through the throng of people. She kept her eyes on the suspect,
watch
ing as he handed a bone token to a vendor. The vendor, a tall woman with hair like snakes, handed him a vial in exchange. Quinn's
eyes widened
. She knew what that was. She'd seen it before, in the file on DS Morris. Her partner had been investigating the same thing before he died. Before he
was torn
apart by something that shouldn't exist. Something that lived in the shadows and fed on fear. Quinn's hand inched towards her gun as she approached the vendor. She had to
get that vial
. She had to know what was in it. What had killed her partner. She drew her gun, leveling it at the vendor. "Metropolitan Police! Step away from the table and put your hands where I can see them!" The vendor laughed, a sound like the hiss of a thousand snakes. "You have no power here, detective. You are not in your world anymore." Quinn's finger tightened on the trigger as the crowd around her
started to
grow restless. She could see the
glint
of weapons in the shadows, the flash of teeth and claws. She was in over her head. She knew it. But she couldn't back down. Not now. Not when she was so close to finding the answers she'd been seeking for years. She glanced at the suspect, seeing the fear in his eyes. He held up his hands in surrender, the vial clutched in his fist. "I can help you," he said, his voice barely audible over the murmurs of the crowd. "But we have to go, now." Quinn hesitated for a moment, then nodded. She kept her gun trained on the vendor as she backed away, the suspect leading her through the crowd. They ran back through the tunnels, the sound of pursuit
echoing
behind them. They burst into the night, the rain still falling in sheets. Quinn holstered her gun, coughing as she
tried to
catch her breath. The suspect handed her the vial, his hand shaking. "It's everything you need to know," he said, his voice thick with exhaustion. "To find out what happened to your partner. To find out what's been happening in this city." Quinn took the vial, tucking it into her jacket. She looked at the suspect,
really
looked at him for the first time. He was young, younger than she'd thought. His face
was lined
with stress, his eyes shadowed with fear. She reached out, placing a hand on his shoulder. "Thank you, Tomás," she said, using his name for the first time. "I promise I'll find out what happened. I'll make it right." He nodded, a small smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. "I know you will, detective. I know you will."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
22.2222%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
3
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"he said, his voice barely audible over the murmurs of the crowd [barely]"
82.5784%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1148
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
1
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
1
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
65.1568%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1148
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"glint"
count
1
1
word
"glinting"
count
1
2
word
"echoing"
count
1
3
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"glint"
1
"glinting"
2
"echoing"
3
"navigated"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
2
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart raced in her chest"
1
"eyes widened"
2
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
88
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
88
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"started to"
2
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
96
matches
0
"get that vial"
61.0121%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
29
mean
39.52
std
14.37
cv
0.364
sampleLengths
0
64
1
65
2
53
3
32
4
80
5
51
6
20
7
15
8
27
9
42
10
37
11
38
12
45
13
35
14
39
15
40
16
50
17
31
18
30
19
25
20
25
21
31
22
31
23
46
24
50
25
51
26
40
27
32
28
21
95.4545%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
5
totalSentences
88
matches
0
"were covered"
1
"were sold"
2
"being said"
3
"was torn"
4
"was lined"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
174
matches
0
"was getting"
1
"was going"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1046
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
26
adverbRatio
0.0248565965583174
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.010516252390057362
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
96
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
96
mean
11.94
std
4.99
cv
0.418
sampleLengths
0
16
1
23
2
25
3
21
4
20
5
7
6
17
7
24
8
15
9
7
10
7
11
13
12
19
13
22
14
17
15
7
16
16
17
7
18
11
19
14
20
22
21
9
22
6
23
10
24
10
25
12
26
3
27
9
28
12
29
6
30
15
31
11
32
16
33
15
34
12
35
10
36
13
37
17
38
8
39
17
40
14
41
14
42
20
43
15
44
10
45
10
46
3
47
9
48
7
49
12
36.4583%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
13
diversityRatio
0.28125
totalSentences
96
uniqueOpeners
27
91.6667%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"she said, using his name for the first time (say, use)"
81.6401%