Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMD83MPCNSR6CS3JMEERM2

Run Details

Duration:
34.9s
Cost:
$0.044844
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora's hand froze on the doorknob as she stared through the peephole. The familiar silhouette on the other side of the door made her stomach clench. Lucien stood in the dim hallway, his platinum hair catching the weak overhead light, one hand resting on his ever-present ivory cane. She considered pretending she wasn't home, but he'd likely heard her footsteps through the thin walls. Besides, if he'd tracked her to Eva's flat, he probably already knew she was inside. With a deep breath, she undid all three deadbolts and opened the door. "Bonsoir, chérie." His voice was exactly as she remembered – smooth as aged cognac, with that slight Marseille accent that had once made her knees weak. Still did, if she was honest with herself. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" She kept her tone flat, professional, though her heart hammered against her ribs. His mismatched eyes studied her face, and she fought the urge to smooth her hair, conscious of how disheveled she must look after her delivery shift at the Golden Empress. "May I come in? This isn't a conversation for hallways." Aurora glanced behind him, checking for threats – a habit she'd picked up during their time together. The hallway was empty except for the curry house's persistent aroma. After a moment's hesitation, she stepped aside. Lucien entered with his characteristic grace, the tap of his cane marking each careful step. He looked out of place in Eva's cramped flat, his perfectly tailored charcoal suit a stark contrast to the organized chaos of books and scrolls covering every surface. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, arched his back and hissed from his perch atop a stack of ancient texts. "You're not welcome here," Aurora said, closing the door but leaving it unchained. "Eva would have a fit if she knew you were in her flat." "Eva's in Prague, tracking down a grimoire. She won't be back for another three days." He turned to face her, and the amber eye seemed to glow in the flat's dim lighting. "You've been avoiding me, Aurora." "Can you blame me?" She crossed her arms, careful to keep the crescent scar on her left wrist hidden. He'd always had a way of fixating on it, tracing it with his thumb when they'd lay together in quieter moments. "The last time we saw each other, you were knee-deep in demon politics and about to start a war." "A war I prevented, if you recall." "By making deals that could have gotten you killed." The words came out sharper than she intended, heavy with remembered fear. "By keeping me in the dark until it was almost too late." Lucien's grip tightened on his cane. "I was protecting you." "I never asked for your protection." She moved deeper into the flat, needing distance between them. "I asked for your trust." "Trust?" He laughed, but there was no humor in it. "Like you trusted me with the truth about Evan? About why you really left Cardiff?" Aurora's breath caught. She turned to face him, her back pressed against Eva's cluttered desk. "That's different." "Is it?" He closed the distance between them, each tap of his cane like a heartbeat in the quiet flat. "You lecture me about trust while keeping your own secrets. Your ex-boyfriend's name isn't even Evan, is it? It's Marcus." She felt the color drain from her face. "How did you—" "I'm an information broker, chérie. Did you think I wouldn't look into the man who hurt you? The real reason you abandoned your law degree and fled to London?" His voice softened. "Why didn't you tell me?" "Because it wasn't your problem to solve." Her voice shook. "Because I knew exactly what you'd do if you found out, and I couldn't have that on my conscience." "Ah." He was close enough now that she could smell his cologne, something expensive and French that made her think of late nights and tangled sheets. "You thought I would kill him." "Wouldn't you have?" Lucien didn't answer, but his silence was confirmation enough. He reached out, his fingers brushing her wrist where the scar curved like a pale smile. "You don't have to carry everything alone, Aurora. That was always your problem – you'd rather run than let anyone help you bear the weight." "Says the man who tried to face down half the demon realm of Avaros by himself." Despite her words, she didn't pull away from his touch. "Perhaps we're more alike than we care to admit." His thumb traced the familiar path along her scar, and Aurora felt the last of her defenses crumbling. "I can't do this again," she whispered, but she was already leaning into him, drawn by the gravity that had always existed between them. "I can't watch you risk everything for your schemes and games." "No games this time." He lifted his free hand to cup her cheek. "I'm here because after six months of watching you avoid me across London, I've realized something rather important." "What's that?" "That I'm tired of pretending I can live without you." His eyes – amber and black – held hers. "That every deal, every scheme, every victory feels hollow if I can't share it with you." Aurora's heart thundered in her chest. She should push him away, should remember all the reasons they'd fallen apart. Instead, she found herself rising on her toes, her lips meeting his in a kiss that felt like coming home and stepping off a cliff all at once. Ptolemy meowed in protest and knocked over a stack of books, but neither of them noticed. Some things, Aurora realized, were worth the risk of falling.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she whispered, but she was already leaning into him, drawn by the gravity that had always existed between them [already always]"
78.7911% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount943
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
80.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.1866% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount943
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"weight"
2"footsteps"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences43
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
93.7744% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean30.52
std14.59
cv0.478
sampleLengths
048
144
234
319
440
535
660
726
837
959
107
1133
1210
1321
1425
1517
1640
1711
1837
1929
2032
213
2250
2326
2427
2535
2631
272
2835
2947
3026
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount593
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03035413153456998
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006745362563237774
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean14.78
std7.88
cv0.533
sampleLengths
012
114
222
316
415
513
626
78
819
930
1010
1117
1211
137
1415
1528
1617
1713
1813
1932
205
2119
2221
2319
247
2521
2612
276
284
2916
305
3110
3215
333
3412
352
3620
3720
388
393
4032
415
4210
4319
4426
456
463
479
4816
4925
77.6042% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.53125
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners34
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora said, closing the door but leaving it unchained (say, close leave unchain)"
1"laughed (laugh)"
2"she whispered, but she was already leaning into him, drawn by the gravity that had always existed between them (whisper, already lean draw always exist)"
83.5634%