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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMD9H4VRNRQW5KHWD49KP3
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
24.2s
Cost:
$0.002126
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The trio stood at the threshold of the Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones
looming
like silent
sentinels
in the twilight of Richmond Park. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, felt the cool, late-autumn air tug at her jacket, her bright blue eyes reflecting the last traces of daylight. Beside her, Nyx's violet eyes glowed faintly, their gaze piercing the veil of shadow that clung to the grove's boundary. Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer, lifted her silver tresses from her waist, where they threatened to catch on the underbrush, and stepped forward with an air of
ethereal
grace. Rory's hand instinctively went to the Heartstone Pendant nestled against her chest, its deep crimson hue hidden beneath her clothing. She could feel its faint pulse of warmth, a silent
beacon
that
seemed to
resonate with the energy of the place. Nyx, their guide, moved with a fluidity that belied their solid form, their humanoid silhouette cutting through the dusk like a knife. As they crossed into the grove, the air grew thick with the scent of wildflowers, a fragrant
tapestry
that defied the season's chill. The sounds of the park faded, replaced by a
symphony
of whispering leaves and the distant call of creatures unseen. Rory's scarred wrist tingled, a phantom
echo
of the life she'd left behind in Cardiff. Isolde led the way, her
footsteps
leaving no imprint upon the soft, mossy ground. She moved with purpose, her pale lavender eyes seeing beyond the mortal coil. Rory watched her,
a sense of unease
mingling with the wonder that filled her senses. The seer spoke in riddles, her voice a melodic murmur that
seemed to
harmonize with the rustling foliage. "Beware the shadows that
dance
on the edge of sight," Isolde intoned, her words hanging in the air like a mist. "For not all that is hidden wishes to remain so." Nyx's whispering voice carried on the wind, a sound that seemed both within and without. "Fear not, Rory Carter. The shadows here are kin to me. They will not harm you." Rory nodded, her cool-headed nature asserting itself. She had faced down the specter of her abusive past and the uncertainty of her future; she would not be cowed by the mysteries of the Fae Grove. They ventured deeper into the grove, where the light of the setting sun struggled to penetrate the dense canopy above. The trees here were ancient, their gnarled branches intertwining to form a living cathedral. The air
shimmered
with a faint luminescence, a subtle reminder of the Veil that separated this place from the mundane world outside. Rory's fingers brushed against the moonsilver Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its touch always cold, a
stark
contrast to the warmth of the Heartstone. The blade had been a gift from Isolde, a tool to aid her in the trials that lay ahead. As they moved through the grove, the dagger
seemed to
hum with a latent power, its leaf-shaped form aglow with a soft, moonlit radiance. Suddenly, a rustling sound drew their attention to a thicket, where a creature the size of a fox emerged. Its fur was a
tapestry
of shimmering colors that
seemed to
shift and change with each movement. It regarded the trio with intelligent, curious eyes before darting away, its presence a fleeting reminder that they were not alone in this strange realm. Rory's heart raced with the thrill of disco
very
. E
very
step took them further from the world she knew, into a place where the rules of reality were merely suggestions. She felt alive in a way she hadn't since before her ex, Evan, had
tried to
extinguish her light. As they journeyed onward, the group came upon a clearing bathed in the warm amber light of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony. The sky above was a canvas of swirling hues, a
stark
contrast to the twilight they had left behind. In the center of the clearing stood a feasting table laden with exotic fruits and delicacies that tempted the senses with their intoxicating aromas. Rory's stomach growled, betraying her hunger, but she held back, wary of the enchantments that might lurk within such enticing fare. Nyx, too, seemed hesitant, their shadowy form undulating with a hint of caution. Isolde, however, approached the table with a knowing smile, her fingers tracing the contours of a shimmering pear that glowed with an inner light. "In this place," she said, her voice a lilting song, "the fruit of Dymas offers a taste of its realm. To partake is to experience both pleasure and peril." With a graceful motion, Isolde plucked the pear from its place and held it out to Rory. "Eat, and see the truth of your heart's desires." Rory's gaze lingered on the pear, its allure undeniable. Yet she remembered the compulsion that bound Isolde, the inability to lie coupled with the penchant for misdirection. With a deep breath, Rory reached out and took the fruit, its surface cool and smooth against her palm. She bit into the pear, its flavor an explosion of sweetness that filled her mouth with a warmth that spread through her entire body. The world around her
seemed to
brighten, and for a moment, she saw herself not as a fugitive from her past but as a warrior for her future, her path illuminated by the connections she had forged—with Nyx, with Isolde, and with the world that lay hidden beneath the veneer of the mundane. As the vision faded, Rory found herself standing in the clearing, the half-eaten pear in her hand. She looked to Nyx and Isolde, her companions on this journey, and
knew that whatever
trials awaited them, they would face them together. The Fae Grove held many secrets, a
testament
to the ancient magic that pulsed through its
very
soil. But as the trio prepared to
delve
deeper into its wonders and terrors, Rory felt a steadfast resolve building within her. She was Aurora Carter, Rory to her friends, and she was no longer bound by the fears and pains of her past. With the Heartstone Pendant pulsing
gently
at her chest and the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, Rory stepped forward, her eyes alight with the fire of determination. The Fae Grove would reveal its mysteries in time, and she would be ready. For now, she walked onward, her
footsteps
echo
ing the rhythm of a heart that beat in time with the ancient,
otherworldly
pulse of the grove.
created_at
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2/17/2026, 1:46:28 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
72.4011%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1087
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"gently"
count
1
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"gently"
1
"suddenly"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1087
totalAiIsms
18
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
1
1
word
"symphony"
count
1
2
word
"tapestry"
count
2
3
word
"testament"
count
1
4
word
"beacon"
count
1
5
word
"sentinels"
count
1
6
word
"shimmered"
count
1
7
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
8
word
"looming"
count
1
9
word
"stark"
count
2
10
word
"dance"
count
1
11
word
"footsteps"
count
2
12
word
"delve"
count
1
13
word
"echo"
count
1
14
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"symphony"
2
"tapestry"
3
"testament"
4
"beacon"
5
"sentinels"
6
"shimmered"
7
"otherworldly"
8
"looming"
9
"stark"
10
"dance"
11
"footsteps"
12
"delve"
13
"echo"
14
"echoing"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"sense of foreboding"
count
1
highlights
0
"a sense of unease"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
51
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
6
narrationSentences
51
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
54
matches
0
"knew that whatever"
52.9604%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
20
mean
53.95
std
18.09
cv
0.335
sampleLengths
0
101
1
63
2
58
3
60
4
31
5
31
6
35
7
56
8
67
9
61
10
48
11
65
12
58
13
29
14
26
15
46
16
77
17
40
18
61
19
66
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
51
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
136
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1020
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
17
adverbRatio
0.016666666666666666
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.0058823529411764705
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
54
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
78.9860%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
54
mean
19.98
std
6.94
cv
0.347
sampleLengths
0
25
1
27
2
20
3
29
4
20
5
21
6
22
7
23
8
20
9
15
10
14
11
13
12
15
13
18
14
21
15
10
16
15
17
16
18
7
19
28
20
20
21
14
22
22
23
24
24
19
25
24
26
19
27
17
28
25
29
8
30
21
31
19
32
22
33
19
34
24
35
21
36
13
37
24
38
29
39
17
40
9
41
9
42
18
43
19
44
24
45
53
46
17
47
23
48
18
49
21
62.9630%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.3888888888888889
totalSentences
54
uniqueOpeners
21
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"Isolde intoned, her words hanging in the air like a mist (intoned, hang like)"
1
"she said, her voice a lilting song (say, voice)"
80.4300%