| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1080 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1080 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "beacon" | | 6 | "tapestry" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "symphony" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "stark" | | 16 | "fleeting" | | 17 | "raced" | | 18 | "stomach" | | 19 | "tracing" | | 20 | "peril" | | 21 | "testament" | | 22 | "pulsed" | | 23 | "delve" | | 24 | "resolve" | | 25 | "echoing" | | 26 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1079 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1012 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 7 | | Grove | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 2 | | Rory | 15 | | Nyx | 6 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 9 | | Evan | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Aurora | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Evan" | | 7 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.759 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "beacon that seemed to resonate with the energy of the place" | | 1 | "murmur that seemed to harmonize with the rustling foliage" | | 2 | "colors that seemed to shift and change with each movement" | | 3 | "seemed hesitant their shadowy form undulating with a hint of caution" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.927 | | wordCount | 1079 | | matches | | 0 | "not as a fugitive from her past but as a warrior for her future, her path illuminated by the con" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 52.96% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 53.95 | | std | 18.09 | | cv | 0.335 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 101 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 67 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 77 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 66 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 37.04% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "She had faced down the specter of her abusive past and the uncertainty of her future; she would not be cowed by the mysteries of the Fae Grove." | | 1 | "The world around her seemed to brighten, and for a moment, she saw herself not as a fugitive from her past but as a warrior for her future, her path illuminated by the connections she had forged—with Nyx, with Isolde, and with the world that lay hidden beneath the veneer of the mundane." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1020 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.016666666666666666 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0058823529411764705 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 54 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 78.99% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 54 | | mean | 19.98 | | std | 6.94 | | cv | 0.347 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 53 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 62.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3888888888888889 | | totalSentences | 54 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 65.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a rustling sound drew" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "She could feel its faint" | | 1 | "She moved with purpose, her" | | 2 | "She had faced down the" | | 3 | "They ventured deeper into the" | | 4 | "Its fur was a tapestry" | | 5 | "It regarded the trio with" | | 6 | "She felt alive in a" | | 7 | "she said, her voice a" | | 8 | "She bit into the pear," | | 9 | "She looked to Nyx and" | | 10 | "She was Aurora Carter, Rory" |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 87.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The trio stood at the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 2 | "Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer," | | 3 | "Rory's hand instinctively went to" | | 4 | "She could feel its faint" | | 5 | "Nyx, their guide, moved with" | | 6 | "The sounds of the park" | | 7 | "Rory's scarred wrist tingled, a" | | 8 | "Isolde led the way, her" | | 9 | "She moved with purpose, her" | | 10 | "Rory watched her, a sense" | | 11 | "The seer spoke in riddles," | | 12 | "Isolde intoned, her words hanging" | | 13 | "Nyx's whispering voice carried on" | | 14 | "Rory nodded, her cool-headed nature" | | 15 | "She had faced down the" | | 16 | "They ventured deeper into the" | | 17 | "The trees here were ancient," | | 18 | "The air shimmered with a" | | 19 | "Rory's fingers brushed against the" |
| | ratio | 0.745 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 18.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Beside her, Nyx's violet eyes glowed faintly, their gaze piercing the veil of shadow that clung to the grove's boundary." | | 1 | "Nyx, their guide, moved with a fluidity that belied their solid form, their humanoid silhouette cutting through the dusk like a knife." | | 2 | "Rory watched her, a sense of unease mingling with the wonder that filled her senses." | | 3 | "The air shimmered with a faint luminescence, a subtle reminder of the Veil that separated this place from the mundane world outside." | | 4 | "In the center of the clearing stood a feasting table laden with exotic fruits and delicacies that tempted the senses with their intoxicating aromas." | | 5 | "Rory's stomach growled, betraying her hunger, but she held back, wary of the enchantments that might lurk within such enticing fare." | | 6 | "Isolde, however, approached the table with a knowing smile, her fingers tracing the contours of a shimmering pear that glowed with an inner light." | | 7 | "She bit into the pear, its flavor an explosion of sweetness that filled her mouth with a warmth that spread through her entire body." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde intoned, her words hanging in the air like a mist" | | 1 | "she said, her voice a lilting song," |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |