| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.789 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 71.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1039 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "warmly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1039 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "enigmatic" | | 1 | "anticipation" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "dancing" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "sanctuary" | | 6 | "tangible" | | 7 | "tapestry" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "stark" | | 13 | "otherworldly" | | 14 | "grappling" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "familiar" | | 17 | "warmth" | | 18 | "crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1039 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 838 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.31 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Fae | 3 | | Aurora | 8 | | Rory | 6 | | Isolde | 4 | | Courts | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.844 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "it was as if they had stepped into another world, where the rules of reality bent and twisted under Fae enchantments" | | 1 | "not quite believing the evidence of her senses" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1039 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 37.96% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 51.95 | | std | 14.7 | | cv | 0.283 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 58 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 73 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 64 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 60 |
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| 98.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 56 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's breath caught as she surveyed the expanse; it was as if they had stepped into another world, where the rules of reality bent and twisted under Fae enchantments." | | 1 | "\"Mortals would call it magic; we call it life.\" The shade's hand, insubstantial yet somehow tangible, brushed the moss, and it shivered as if in response." | | 2 | "Rory's curiosity piqued; she felt a heightened sense of otherworldliness as if she stood on the precipice of discovery." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 840 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.02023809523809524 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005952380952380952 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 56 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 56 | | mean | 18.55 | | std | 8.88 | | cv | 0.479 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 44 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 35 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 86.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5178571428571429 | | totalSentences | 56 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form shifted from solid" | | 1 | "they breathed, their voice carrying" | | 2 | "She recalled Isolde's words about" | | 3 | "she whispered, not quite believing" | | 4 | "She stood, brushing dirt off" | | 5 | "She frowned, concentrating, but beyond" | | 6 | "she began, frustration edging her" | | 7 | "She turned away from the" | | 8 | "she asked, her mind grappling" | | 9 | "Her fingers sought the familiar" | | 10 | "Her heart beat faster as" |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 48.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient grove lay hidden" | | 1 | "Aurora, guided by the enigmatic" | | 2 | "Leaves rustled overhead, as if" | | 3 | "The air felt different here," | | 4 | "Rory's breath caught as she" | | 5 | "Nyx, a whisper of shadow," | | 6 | "Their form shifted from solid" | | 7 | "they breathed, their voice carrying" | | 8 | "Aurora, known to her friends" | | 9 | "She recalled Isolde's words about" | | 10 | "The very air was heavy" | | 11 | "Aurora knelt, running her fingers" | | 12 | "she whispered, not quite believing" | | 13 | "Nyx's form solidified nearby, kneeling" | | 14 | "The shade's hand, insubstantial yet" | | 15 | "Rory grinned, the thrill of" | | 16 | "She stood, brushing dirt off" | | 17 | "A sense of calm permeated" | | 18 | "Nyx said, their form rippling" | | 19 | "Rory approached the pool, gazing" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 98.04% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "As if to illustrate their" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Leaves rustled overhead, as if the forest itself breathed a sigh of anticipation." | | 1 | "The air felt different here, thick with a subtle magic that made her skin tingle." | | 2 | "Rory's breath caught as she surveyed the expanse; it was as if they had stepped into another world, where the rules of reality bent and twisted under Fae enchan…" | | 3 | "In the center, a shallow pool shimmered, its surface rippled by the same ethereal light that suffused the grove." | | 4 | "The sky above, seen through the canopy, had taken on an even more vivid purple hue, as if the day was fading into twilight despite the mid-morning sun outside t…" | | 5 | "Her fingers sought the familiar warmth of the pendant, her hand curling around it as if in silent acknowledgment." | | 6 | "As she turned to face Nyx, the shade's eyes held a hint of sympathy, as if they understood the questions that lingered in Aurora's mind, questions that Isolde, …" | | 7 | "Rory's curiosity piqued; she felt a heightened sense of otherworldliness as if she stood on the precipice of discovery." | | 8 | "As if to illustrate their point, a group of fae creatures, no taller than Aurora's knee, flitted through the air, their laughter chiming like crystal bells." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "they breathed, their voice carrying on a soft breeze" | | 1 | "she whispered, not quite believing the evidence of her senses" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their form rippling like the pool's surface" | | 3 | "Nyx prompted, their voice serene and curious" | | 4 | "she began, frustration edging her voice" | | 5 | "she asked, her mind grappling with the possibilities" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.421 | |