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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDCAV3S0PJ9ZG8HDM28SH
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
28.6s
Cost:
$0.001830
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape, her gaze sharp as a hawk's as she took in the crime scene.
The air was thick with
the musty scent of decay, a
stark
reminder that the underground had claimed another soul. The walls of the abandoned Tube station, once
echoing
with the hurried steps of commuters, now bore witness to a more
sinister
kind of passage. Her colleague, DS
Thompson
, was already there, his notebook in hand, a furrow
etched
between his brows. He looked up as her shadow fell over him, relief visible for a moment before his professional mask slid back into place. "Quinn," he greeted, his voice
echoing
faintly off the worn tiles. "Glad you're here. This one's a bit of a puzzle." Harlow's eyes swept over the scene. The victim lay sprawled on the ground, their lifeless eyes staring up at the graffiti-scarred ceiling. The body was strangely unmarked, save for a peculiar symbol branded into the flesh of their forearm—a circle intersected by a cross, with strange runes inscribed within. She crouched beside the body, her leather
watch
brushing against her wrist as she reached out to examine the symbol without touching it. It was precise, deliberate—the work of someone who knew exactly what they
were doing
. "What do we know?" Harlow asked, her voice low and even.
Thompson
flipped a page in his notebook. "Vic's name is Leonard Carter, a known frequenter of the black market that operates beneath Camden. No immediate signs of violence, but the brand is unlike anything I've seen before." Harlow's mind raced. The Veil Market—a place that existed in whispers and shadows, a haven for those who dabbled in the occult and the arcane. She stood, her gaze traveling over the scene once more, taking in the details that
Thompson
had missed. A brass compass lay a few feet away from the body, its needle spinning wildly. She recognized it immediately—a Veil Compass, a tool used by those who sought to
navigate
the unseen paths between worlds. But why was it here, discarded and seemingly broken? "Have you checked the compass?" Harlow asked, gesturing toward the object.
Thompson
shook his head. "Just another trinket from the market, far as I can tell. Probably belonged to the vic." Harlow stepped over to the compass, her movements as measured and precise as her military-honed bearing demanded. She reached for the compass, her fingers brushing against the cold brass, the sigils
etched
into its surface a
testament
to its arcane purpose. As she picked it up, the needle settled, pointing unerringly toward a section of wall that appeared no different from any other in the station. Harlow's sharp
jaw clenched
. There was more to this place than met the eye. She approached the wall, running her fingers over the bricks, searching for what her instincts told her was there. Her fingers found a hidden seam, and with a low click, a section of the wall swung open, revealing a hidden alcove. Inside, a collection of bone tokens—the entry requirement for the Veil Market—gleamed in the dim light. Harlow's mind raced. The tokens were not just currency; they were keys, each one imbued with the power to open portals to other realms. "
Thompson
," she called out, her voice steady despite the adrenaline coursing through her veins. "I think we've been looking at this the wrong way."
Thompson
joined her, his eyes widening as he took in the hidden cache. "What the hell is all this?" "It's not just about what was taken," Harlow said, her gaze fixed on the tokens. "It's about what was left behind." She explained her theory, her words painting a picture of a crime that was more than just a simple murder. The symbol on the victim's arm, the discarded compass, the hidden tokens—they all pointed to something far greater than they had imagined. As she spoke,
Thompson
's expression shifted from confusion to understanding, and finally, to a grudging respect. "So, what now?" he asked. Harlow straightened, her resolve hardening like the set of her sharp jawline. "Now, we find out who—or what—killed Leonard Carter. And we start by learning e
very
thing there is to know about these tokens." --- After leaving the crime scene, Harlow made her way to the British Museum, the
weight
of the brass compass heavy in her pocket. She needed answers, and there was only one person she trusted to help her find them. Eva Kowalski
was buried
in a stack of ancient tomes when Harlow found her in the museum's restricted archives. Her curly red hair
was pulled
back in a haphazard bun, and her round glasses perched precariously on the bridge of her freckled nose. "Harlow," Eva greeted, her voice laced with surprise. "It's not often that a detective graces these halls. What brings you here?" Harlow placed the compass on the table,
watch
ing as Eva's
eyes widened
at the sight of it. "I need to know e
very
thing about this—where it comes from, how it works, and what it's doing at a crime scene." Eva's gaze
flickered
from the compass to Harlow, curiosity piqued. She reached for the compass, her fingers tracing the sigils with a scholar's reverence. "This is a Veil Compass," she murmured, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "A rare artifact, indeed." As Eva
delved
into her research, Harlow recounted the details of the case, her words painting a grim picture of the underground market and the mysterious symbol branded onto the victim's arm. Eva listened intently, her nervous habit of tucking her hair behind her left ear on full display. When Harlow finished, Eva leaned back in her chair, her expression thoughtful. "The symbol you described," Eva said
slowly
, "it sounds like an ancient ward, used to protect against—or contain—supernatural forces." Harlow's brow
furrowed
. "Contain? You mean, like a prison?" "Precisely," Eva confirmed. "And the tokens, they're not just keys. They're anchors, binding the portals they open to our world. Without them, the portals could collapse, or worse, become unstable and tear through the fabric of our reality." A chill ran down Harlow's spine. The pieces of the puzzle
were falling
into place, revealing a picture that was far more dangerous than she had anticipated. "So, whoever killed Leonard Carter," Harlow mused, "they weren't just after his life. They were after something much bigger." Eva nodded, her green eyes serious. "This wasn't a simple murder, Harlow. It was a message—a declaration of war against the
very
barriers that keep our world safe from what lies beyond." Harlow's mind raced with the implications. A war
was brewing
in the shadows of London, a war that could spill over into the streets above, innocent lives caught in the crossfire. She stood, her resolve as unyielding as the sharp gaze that swept over the ancient texts and artifacts that surrounded her. "Then we have no time to waste," she said, her voice
echoing
with the
weight
of her responsibility. "We need to find out who's behind this before it's too late." Eva pushed her glasses up her nose, her expression determined. "I'll do e
very
thing I can to help, Harlow. We'll uncover the truth, no matter how deep it's buried." With a nod of gratitude, Harlow turned to leave, the worn leather of her
watch
band a comforting presence against her skin. She had a lead to follow—a trail that would take her into the heart of the Veil Market, where the line between ally and enemy was as thin as the veil itself. As she stepped out of the museum and into the bustling streets of London, the brass compass heavy in her pocket, Harlow Quinn prepared herself for the battle that lay ahead. She was no stranger to the darkness that lurked in the city's hidden corners, and she would not back down now, not when the stakes were nothing less than the fate of the world.
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2/17/2026, 1:46:35 AM
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tokens_completion
2005
native_tokens_prompt
1017
native_tokens_completion
1934
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(null)
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
50.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"he greeted, his voice echoing faintly off the worn tiles [faintly]"
1
"she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
2
"Eva said slowly [slowly]"
69.9474%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1331
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"precisely"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
3
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"precisely"
1
"slowly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
3
"very"
80.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
0
"Thompson"
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1331
totalAiIsms
15
found
0
word
"testament"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"sinister"
count
1
3
word
"stark"
count
1
4
word
"furrowed"
count
1
5
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
2
7
word
"delved"
count
1
8
word
"echoing"
count
3
9
word
"etched"
count
2
10
word
"navigate"
count
1
highlights
0
"testament"
1
"flickered"
2
"sinister"
3
"stark"
4
"furrowed"
5
"jaw clenched"
6
"weight"
7
"delved"
8
"echoing"
9
"etched"
10
"navigate"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
2
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"jaw clenched"
2
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
68
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
68
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
83
matches
(empty)
79.9772%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
40
mean
32.88
std
14.13
cv
0.43
sampleLengths
0
66
1
39
2
21
3
49
4
37
5
11
6
37
7
43
8
44
9
11
10
20
11
41
12
39
13
41
14
40
15
24
16
19
17
21
18
42
19
21
20
33
21
1
22
39
23
43
24
21
25
38
26
41
27
32
28
29
29
19
30
9
31
38
32
27
33
19
34
32
35
31
36
51
37
28
38
53
39
65
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"was buried"
1
"was pulled"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
158
matches
0
"were doing"
1
"were falling"
2
"was brewing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1023
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
28
adverbRatio
0.02737047898338221
lyAdverbCount
15
lyAdverbRatio
0.01466275659824047
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
83
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
83
mean
15.84
std
8.08
cv
0.51
sampleLengths
0
21
1
20
2
25
3
17
4
22
5
11
6
10
7
6
8
16
9
27
10
23
11
14
12
11
13
7
14
30
15
3
16
22
17
18
18
15
19
20
20
9
21
11
22
4
23
16
24
17
25
24
26
25
27
4
28
10
29
19
30
22
31
16
32
3
33
21
34
14
35
10
36
13
37
6
38
15
39
6
40
20
41
22
42
16
43
5
44
12
45
21
46
1
47
23
48
16
49
19
61.3821%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.3902439024390244
totalSentences
82
uniqueOpeners
32
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
9
fancyTags
0
"he greeted, his voice echoing faintly off the worn tiles (greet, echo faintly)"
1
"she called out, her voice steady despite the adrenaline coursing through her veins (call out, course)"
2
"Harlow said, her gaze fixed on the tokens (say, fix)"
3
"Eva greeted, her voice laced with surprise (greet, lace)"
4
"she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper (murmur)"
5
"Eva said slowly (say slowly)"
6
"Eva confirmed (confirm)"
7
"Harlow mused (muse)"
8
"she said, her voice echoing with the weight of her responsibility (say, echo)"
74.9788%