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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDD28AMN0ZM21YWD0PX6S
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
1m 47s
Cost:
$0.002162
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn charged through the rain-soaked streets of London, her heart pounding in her chest as she pursued the suspect. The man, a former paramedic named Tomás Herrera, had
been spotted
leaving The Raven's Nest, a dimly lit bar in Soho known for its association with members of the supernatural underworld. Quinn had been investigating the clique for months, and Herrera's sudden appearance at their haunt confirmed her suspicions. As she ran, pushing past revelers and late-night wanderers huddled under awnings, she kept her focus on the man's dark jacket, bobbing and weaving through the crowded streets. The rain plastered her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair to her skull, and her leather
watch
, worn with age, chafed against her wrist as she pumped her arms. She refused to let the discomfort distract her, instead drawing upon her years of training and experience to keep her target in sight. Herrera turned into an alley, and Quinn followed, her
footsteps
splashing through puddles as she closed the distance. The alley was dark and narrow, the walls on either side seeming to press in. Herrera abruptly stopped and shoved against a door on the left, disappearing inside. Quinn reached the door and hesitated for a moment. She knew this was the entrance to The Veil Market, a hidden supernatural black market that operated beneath the city. She had a bone token she'd confiscated during a raid, the entry requirement to gain access to the market, but she had never used it. She considered her options, knowing the dangers that awaited her below. With a deep breath, Quinn pushed open the door and stepped into the tunnels. The air was cool and damp, the walls slick with condensation. She could hear the distant rumble of trains overhead, punctuated by the pounding of her own heart in her ears. She followed the winding path, bone token clutched
tightly
in her hand as she
navigated
the twists and turns. The tunnels grew wider and more crowded as she approached the market, the sounds of haggling and laughter
echoing
off the walls. Quinn scanned the throngs of people, searching for any sign of Herrera. She spotted him across the way, handing over a stack of bills to a vendor in exchange for a small vial of iridescent liquid. She moved closer, weaving between stalls to keep him in sight. As she drew near, Herrera
suddenly
turned, his warm brown eyes widening as he caught sight of Quinn. He
quickly
pocketed the vial and took off, pushing past bystanders as he fled deeper into the market. Quinn followed, adrenaline surging through her veins as she pursued her suspect through the bustling underground market. The air grew thick and hazy from alchemical fires as she ran past stalls hawking enchanted trinkets, illicit substances, and dark knowledge. Herrera darted into a narrow side passage, and Quinn followed, determination
etched
into the sharp lines of her jaw. The path twisted and turned, branching into a warren of tunnels that made it impossible to track her movements. She emerged
suddenly
into a dimly lit chamber, the walls lined with old maps and black-and-white photographs. In the center of the room stood Herrera, his scarred forearm illuminated in the flickering light of a single bulb swaying overhead. Quinn hesitated, her hand hovering over the cold metal of her concealed sidearm. Herrera
watch
ed her
warily
, the small vial clutched in his fist
glinting
as it caught the light. "You shouldn't have followed me here, Detective," Herrera said, his voice
echoing
off the damp stones. His olive skin
seemed to
gleam with an
otherworldly
pallor in the dim light. "I'm not letting you leave until I get some answers." Quinn kept her gaze locked on Herrera's,
watch
ing for any sudden movements or tells. "What were you doing at The Raven's Nest? And what's in that vial?" Herrera glanced down at his closed fist, a small, humorless smile pulling at the corners of his mouth. "Surely you've realized by now, Detective, that the world is not as simple as you've been led to believe." Quinn's
eyes narrowed
. "What are you talking about?" "The Veil. Magic, monsters, realms beyond mortal comprehension." Herrera took a small step forward, his Saint Christopher medallion
glinting
in the light. "A war waged in darkness for centuries, with humanity caught in the middle." Quinn's mind raced, trying to make sense of Herrera's words. She thought back to the cases of her career, the strange occurrences and unexplained phenomena. The death of her partner, the confusing circumstances surrounding his demise. Could it all be connected to this hidden world? She shook her head, chasing away the thoughts. "I don't know what you're talking about. All I know
is that people
are dead, and you're involved. I'm bringing you in, Herrera. Come quietly and you'll only be charged with resisting arrest." But Herrera just laughed, a harsh, grating sound. "Oh, Detective. You have no idea what you've stumbled into. You can't stop this. It's bigger than you, bigger than me, bigger than your whole bloody department." Quinn's hand twitched towards her weapon, and Herrera's eyes tracked the movement, his amusement fading into something harder, more dangerous. He took a small step back, his gaze locked with Quinn's. "I won't let you bring me in," Herrera warned, his grip tightening on the vial. The iridescent liquid
seemed to
pulse with an
otherworldly
light. "Not now. Not when there's so much at stake." Quinn lunged forward, but Herrera was faster. He threw the vial to the ground, the glass shattering and releasing a blinding burst of light. Quinn shielded her eyes, momentarily stunned. When the spots faded from her vision, Herrera
was gone
. Quinn cursed, spinning around and scanning the room. But the only evidence that the former paramedic had ever been there was the shattered glass on the damp stone floor. Quinn stood alone, her mind reeling with questions. She knew she had stumbled onto something far bigger and more dangerous than she could have anticipated. But she would not be deterred. As she turned to make her way back through the winding tunnels of the underground market, Detective Harlow Quinn set her jaw and
steeled
her resolve. She would uncover the truth, no matter the cost. Or die trying.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
52.4263%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1051
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
2
2
adverb
"tightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"warily"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
1
"suddenly"
2
"tightly"
3
"warily"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
4.8525%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1051
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"glinting"
count
2
1
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
2
word
"steeled"
count
1
3
word
"footsteps"
count
1
4
word
"echoing"
count
2
5
word
"etched"
count
1
6
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"glinting"
1
"otherworldly"
2
"steeled"
3
"footsteps"
4
"echoing"
5
"etched"
6
"navigated"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
59
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
59
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
66
matches
0
"is that people"
29.7734%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
27
mean
38.7
std
9.84
cv
0.254
sampleLengths
0
52
1
46
2
50
3
46
4
65
5
45
6
41
7
47
8
36
9
39
10
38
11
39
12
30
13
30
14
37
15
37
16
8
17
35
18
45
19
41
20
35
21
31
22
34
23
30
24
39
25
31
26
38
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
59
matches
0
"been spotted"
1
"was gone"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
165
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
900
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.024444444444444446
lyAdverbCount
13
lyAdverbRatio
0.014444444444444444
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
66
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
66
mean
15.83
std
6.79
cv
0.429
sampleLengths
0
21
1
31
2
18
3
28
4
27
5
23
6
18
7
15
8
13
9
9
10
20
11
25
12
11
13
14
14
11
15
20
16
19
17
22
18
12
19
24
20
11
21
18
22
18
23
17
24
22
25
19
26
19
27
17
28
22
29
13
30
17
31
16
32
14
33
24
34
13
35
18
36
19
37
3
38
5
39
22
40
13
41
10
42
15
43
11
44
9
45
8
46
33
47
8
48
27
49
20
46.9697%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.3181818181818182
totalSentences
66
uniqueOpeners
21
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"Herrera said, his voice echoing off the damp stones (say, echo)"
1
"Herrera warned, his grip tightening on the vial (warn, tighten)"
78.4719%