| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1113 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1113 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "unspoken" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "navigating" | | 8 | "treacherous" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "testament" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "ensure" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "desire" | | 17 | "beacon" | | 18 | "navigated" | | 19 | "complex" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | matches | | |
| 83.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1106 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.59% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 862 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.51 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 3 | | Lucien | 7 | | Moreau | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | April | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Marseille | 1 | | East | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "April" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" | | 3 | "Marseille" | | 4 | "East" |
| | globalScore | 0.746 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 43.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "click that seemed to echo through the room" | | 1 | "sigh that seemed to release years of pent-up longing, Rory stepped into his embrace, her head resting against his chest" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.68% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 48.09 | | std | 13.89 | | cv | 0.289 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 78 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 84 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "was dampened" | | 1 | "been forged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 58 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "The flat was a cluttered menagerie of Eva's esoteric interests—books and scrolls strewn about, notes pinned to walls like the wings of studious butterflies." | | 1 | "The three deadbolts engaged with finality, a barrier against the world outside—and a cage for the tension that now filled the small space." | | 2 | "She saw the half-demon, the fixer, the information broker—but more than that, she saw Lucien, the man who had once made her believe in the impossible." | | 3 | "The steady beat of his heart was a reassuring rhythm that spoke of second chances and the promise of a future where they could be whole—together." | | 4 | "In that moment, nothing else mattered—not the supernatural underworld he navigated with such ease, nor the human world that Rory called home." | | 5 | "They were two souls, bound by a history that was as complex as it was beautiful, ready to face whatever the future might hold—so long as they faced it side by side." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 873 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.030927835051546393 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0057273768613974796 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 58 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 80.33% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 58 | | mean | 19.07 | | std | 6.69 | | cv | 0.351 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 66.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.43103448275862066 | | totalSentences | 58 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes, once" | | 1 | "he said, the surprise in" | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes, one amber," | | 3 | "she replied, her voice cool" | | 4 | "he said, his eyes drifting" | | 5 | "His platinum blond hair, usually" | | 6 | "He leaned his cane against" | | 7 | "he inquired, his accent a" | | 8 | "They stood there, two ships" | | 9 | "It was a testament to" | | 10 | "he began, his voice softening" | | 11 | "she echoed, the word tasting" | | 12 | "He took a step toward" | | 13 | "he said, the sincerity in" | | 14 | "he said, his voice barely" | | 15 | "He looked at her then," | | 16 | "he admitted, his voice thick" | | 17 | "He moved closer, close enough" | | 18 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 19 | "he said, the conviction in" |
| | ratio | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "The door creaked open, and" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, with her straight" | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes, once" | | 3 | "he said, the surprise in" | | 4 | "His heterochromatic eyes, one amber," | | 5 | "Rory's gaze flickered to the" | | 6 | "A gift from his demon" | | 7 | "she replied, her voice cool" | | 8 | "he said, his eyes drifting" | | 9 | "His platinum blond hair, usually" | | 10 | "Rory stepped aside, an unspoken" | | 11 | "The flat was a cluttered" | | 12 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, darted" | | 13 | "Lucien entered, the familiar scent" | | 14 | "He leaned his cane against" | | 15 | "he inquired, his accent a" | | 16 | "Rory said, closing the door" | | 17 | "The three deadbolts engaged with" | | 18 | "They stood there, two ships" | | 19 | "The silence stretched, filled with" |
| | ratio | 0.958 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, with her straight shoulder-length black hair framing a face that had often starred in his more private, more restless thoughts." | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes, once a refuge from the chaos of his life, now held a storm that matched the unpredictable April weather behind her." | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, betrayed nothing of the tumultuous history that swirled between them." | | 3 | "It was a testament to her resilience, a quality that had drawn him to her from the start." | | 4 | "Rory crossed her arms, a defensive posture that did nothing to diminish the fire in her eyes." | | 5 | "He looked at her then, really looked at her, and saw the strength that had carried her through the abandonment, the same strength that had once made him believe…" | | 6 | "Rory looked at their intertwined fingers, at the man who stood before her, vulnerable and earnest." | | 7 | "She saw the half-demon, the fixer, the information broker—but more than that, she saw Lucien, the man who had once made her believe in the impossible." | | 8 | "With a sigh that seemed to release years of pent-up longing, Rory stepped into his embrace, her head resting against his chest." | | 9 | "The steady beat of his heart was a reassuring rhythm that spoke of second chances and the promise of a future where they could be whole—together." | | 10 | "Lucien wrapped his arms around her, holding her close as the world outside continued on, oblivious to the truce that had just been forged in the heart of East L…" | | 11 | "They were two souls, bound by a history that was as complex as it was beautiful, ready to face whatever the future might hold—so long as they faced it side by s…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "he began, his voice softening," | | 1 | "he said, his voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "he admitted, his voice thick with regret" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he inquired (inquire)" | | 1 | "he admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |