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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDNQJTC5X8JR7TTWZZ87F
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
2m 2s
Cost:
$0.002439
Provider:
DeepInfra
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The sharp rap of knuckles against wood cut through the quiet of the flat. Aurora glanced up from the tome she'd been poring over, surprised by the sudden interruption. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, meowed plaintively from his perch on the windowsill. Rory set the book aside and rose from the threadbare sofa, her bare feet whispering against the scuffed hardwood as she crossed to the door. Cautious, she pressed an eye to the peephole. The man outside towered over the peeling paint of the doorframe, his silhouette unmistakable. Even hazy through the fisheye lens, Lucien Moreau cut a striking figure, all sleek lines and effortless elegance. His charcoal suit fit him like a second skin, the tailored seams hugging the breadth of his shoulders. One lean hand rested atop the ivory head of his ever-present cane. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" Rory called, striving for a coolness she didn't quite feel. Her fingers hovered over the locks, tension singing through her tendons. "That's no way to greet an old friend, chérie," Lucien drawled, his smoker's rasp muffled by the barrier between them. "Aren't you going to invite me in?" Rory's
eyes narrowed
. She hadn't seen him in months, not since their falling out over a job gone sideways. They'd parted on fraught terms, leaving a glossy sheen of ruffled feathers and hurt feelings in their wake. The sight of him now sent an instinctive prickle down her nape. She debated leaving him in the hall. But curiosity and a
pang
of something more dangerous whittled away at her resolve. With a sigh, she unlatched the locks and tugged open the door. Lucien's mismatched eyes glinted, amber and obsidian both, as he swept an assessing
look
over her. Warmth followed in the wake of his regard, spilling over her skin like sunlight. His grin was slow and sharp, all tooth and trouble. "I'd almost forgotten what a vision you are when you're cross," he said, propping one shoulder against the jamb. "How've you been keeping, chère mine?" The casual endearment made her bristle. She folded her arms, hip cocking to one side. "I'm not your anything, Luc. What do you want?" Before he could answer, Ptolemy wandered over to twine around Lucien's ankles. The mercenary stooped to scratch between the feline's ears, something boyish and unguarded softening his features. Ptolemy purred, nuzzling into his palm. "Some guard cat you are," Rory muttered. She heaved another breath and stepped back. "Fine, come in. But only because it's cold out there." "How hospitable of you." Lucien straightened, the wry slant of his mouth belying the dryness of his tone. He sauntered past her into the cluttered warmth of the flat. Rory closed the door behind him, the locks tumbling home with a snick. She turned to face him, leaning against the wood. "You didn't answer my question." Lucien's gaze roamed the familiar jumble of books and baubles, his lips quirking. "Ah, but I did, chère. I've missed our little chats." The admission sent an irrational flutter through her ribcage. She flattened it, keeping her expression neutral. "You could have called." "Where's the romance in that?" He prowled deeper into the room, one finger trailing idly over the spines of her collection. Dust motes scattered in his wake. "I thought we could do with a more personal touch." "I'm not paying for any information you think I need." She hoped he couldn't see the way her hands had balled into fists. Lucien arched a pale brow, the corners of his mouth tugging upward. "I'm wounded, chèrie. Can't a man visit an old friend out of the goodness of his heart?" "No," she deadpanned. He chuckled, the sound rough and warm against the quiet. He settled himself on the couch with feline grace, hands resting atop the curve of his cane. His eyes never left hers, some
unspoken
challenge
glinting
in their dichromatic depths. "Sit with me a while?" Rory considered refusing on principle. They'd said all they needed to say to one another. There was no reason to prolong his visit, reopen old wounds scratched raw by misunderstandings and incompatible ideals. She should send him away, maintain what little distance she'd
managed to
claw out for herself these last few months. But fondness and familiarity made her hesitate. He might be a consummate rogue, but he'd never steered her wrong. He'd been there when she'd needed him, steady as stone, even when she hadn't particularly wanted him there. Biting back a sigh, she crossed the room and perched primly on the edge of the cushion. "There better not be any ulterior motives this time, Luc." "I'm hurt, chère," he said, splaying a hand over his chest. "When have I ever given you reason to doubt my intentions?" "Repeatedly and with great relish," she replied tartly, but there was no real venom in it. They'd played this game too many times to count, the familiar push and pull of their shared history stretching between them like a thread. Lucien laughed, low and honeyed, and her traitorous pulse thudded at the sound. "I've missed you, Rory." He leaned in, conspiratorial, and dropped his voice to a stage whisper. "Admit it — you've missed me too." "Like a hole in the head," she drawled, but the effect was somewhat ruined by the smile tugging at her lips. He grinned, something impossibly tender softening the sharp lines of his face. "Liar." They held there a moment, gazes tangled like limbs, warmth seeping into the space between them. Ptolemy wandered over to drape himself across Lucien's feet, a purring, boneless heap. Rory caved first. She always did. "What brought this on?" she asked, when the quiet stretched taut between them. Lucien's cane traced idle patterns against the floor, the scratch of metal on wood oddly soothing. "A man can't visit a friend?" "You only ever come to me when you need something." She tipped her head, considering. "Or when you think I need something." He glanced away, profile cut in
marble
and moonlight. "I don't much like how we left things. I was hoping we could... start over, of a sort." Her brows lifted. "Start over," she
echoed
flatly. He grimaced. "It sounded better in my head." "I'm sure it did." She sighed, pinching the bridge of her nose. "What exactly are you proposing here, Luc?" "I'm not entirely sure." He shifted, restless energy skating through his long limbs. "You're the only real friend I've got, chère. I don't want to squander that." She regarded him for a long moment, weighing her words before she spoke. "You're asking me to trust you again. To let you in." His eyes found hers,
searing
in their intensity. "I know it's a lot to ask. But I mean it, Rory. Let me make things right." It was tempting, achingly so. Some traitorous part of her wanted to let him back in, to sink into the familiar sanctity of his presence and forget the world outside. The rest of her knew better than to fall for pretty words and prettier smiles, no matter how earnest they seemed. "I'll think about it," she said finally, the offer hanging between them like smoke. Lucien's grin was sudden and sharp, bright as the edge of a knife. "I'll take it."
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2/17/2026, 1:48:18 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
22.2222%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"she replied tartly, but there was no real venom in it [tartly]"
1
"she drawled, but the effect was somewhat ruined by the smile tugging at her lips [somewhat]"
2
"she echoed flatly [flatly]"
3
"she said finally, the offer hanging between them like smoke [finally]"
100.0000%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1215
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
50.6173%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1215
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"pang"
count
1
1
word
"searing"
count
1
2
word
"glinting"
count
1
3
word
"marble"
count
1
4
word
"unspoken"
count
1
5
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"pang"
1
"searing"
2
"glinting"
3
"marble"
4
"unspoken"
5
"echoed"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
80
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
80
filterMatches
0
"look"
hedgeMatches
0
"managed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
103
matches
(empty)
80.8382%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
44
mean
27.61
std
11.95
cv
0.433
sampleLengths
0
41
1
33
2
62
3
27
4
27
5
49
6
33
7
40
8
25
9
24
10
34
11
24
12
29
13
27
14
23
15
20
16
37
17
23
18
29
19
13
20
35
21
53
22
37
23
27
24
22
25
40
26
36
27
21
28
13
29
29
30
6
31
13
32
22
33
22
34
27
35
8
36
8
37
19
38
27
39
24
40
25
41
51
42
14
43
16
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
80
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
160
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
918
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.027233115468409588
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.010893246187363835
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
103
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
103
mean
11.8
std
5.5
cv
0.466
sampleLengths
0
14
1
15
2
12
3
25
4
8
5
14
6
18
7
18
8
12
9
16
10
11
11
20
12
7
13
3
14
16
15
18
16
12
17
7
18
14
19
12
20
16
21
14
22
10
23
19
24
6
25
6
26
9
27
9
28
12
29
16
30
6
31
7
32
7
33
10
34
18
35
11
36
13
37
9
38
5
39
13
40
10
41
9
42
7
43
4
44
21
45
6
46
10
47
23
48
12
49
17
63.4304%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.39805825242718446
totalSentences
103
uniqueOpeners
41
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
10
fancyTags
0
"Lucien drawled, his smoker's rasp muffled by the barrier between them (drawl, muffle)"
1
"he said, propping one shoulder against the jamb (say, prop)"
2
"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3
"she deadpanned (deadpan)"
4
"he said, splaying a hand over his chest (say, splay)"
5
"she replied tartly, but there was no real venom in it (reply tartly, does not be no)"
6
"she drawled, but the effect was somewhat ruined by the smile tugging at her lips (drawl, somewhat ruin tug)"
7
"she echoed flatly (echo flatly)"
8
"sighed (sigh)"
9
"she said finally, the offer hanging between them like smoke (say finally, hang)"
83.3593%