Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDRV2GB1DMQFA29PXANGB

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Duration:
43.7s
Cost:
$0.037356
Provider:
Anthropic

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora shivered as she crossed the boundary into the Fae Grove. The transition was subtle—one moment she was walking among the ordinary oaks of Richmond Park, and the next she had passed between two ancient, twisted trees that seemed to bend toward each other like guardians at a gate. The air changed, becoming sweeter and heavier with fragrance. "Did you feel that?" she whispered, touching the Heartstone Pendant at her throat. It remained cool against her skin, offering no warmth to indicate a Hel portal nearby. This was different—Fae territory. Nyx moved beside her, their shadowy form rippling like ink in water. "The Veil is thin here," they said, voice barely a whisper on the breeze. "We walk between worlds." The third member of their small party, Isolde, stepped forward with practiced grace, her silver hair catching what little sunlight filtered through the canopy. She moved without disturbing a single leaf, leaving no footprints on the soft moss beneath them. "My home," Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes surveying the grove with familiar affection. "Few mortals have seen it." A pause, then: "Fewer still have left." Rory wasn't sure if that was a warning or simply a statement of fact. With Isolde, it was difficult to tell. The half-Fae seer spoke in riddles, and though she couldn't lie—a compulsion of her heritage—she could certainly mislead. "It's beautiful," Aurora said, because it was. The further they ventured into the grove, the more otherworldly it became. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion despite the December chill outside the grove's boundaries. Blues and purples dominated, but here and there, brilliant reds and golds punctuated the landscape. Butterfly-like creatures with wings of gossamer flitted from bloom to bloom, trailing luminescent dust. "Are we... still on Earth?" Aurora asked, reaching out to touch a flower with petals that seemed to be made of glass. It chimed softly at her touch, a delicate musical note that hung in the air. "Yes and no," Isolde replied, moving ahead of them. "The Grove exists in the spaces between. Like our shadow friend." She nodded toward Nyx. "A fold in reality where Earth and the Fae Realms overlap." Nyx drifted toward a pool of water so still and clear it looked like polished obsidian. When they leaned over it, their reflection showed not the shadowy form they currently wore but a man in 17th-century clothing—Aldric, their human form from long ago. "The waters remember," Isolde said softly. "They see beyond the Veil of time as well as realm." Aurora approached the pool cautiously. Her own reflection wavered and shifted, showing not just her present self but glimpses of... something else. Someone else. A woman with her face but adorned in crimson robes that seemed to flow like wine. "What am I seeing?" she asked, touching the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist reflexively. "Possibilities," Isolde answered, "or perhaps memories not yet made." Nyx pulled back from the water, their violet eyes glowing more intensely. "We should continue. The solstice approaches, and the Veil thins further with each passing hour." They moved deeper into the grove, following a path that seemed to appear before them and vanish behind them. Aurora noticed that the trees were changing, becoming taller, more ancient. Their bark glittered with embedded crystals that caught the light in prismatic bursts. The canopy above had shifted too—what had seemed like ordinary daylight filtering through leaves was now revealed to be an amber sky, reminiscent of descriptions she'd heard of Dymas. "The grove is responding to our presence," Isolde explained, seeing Aurora's confusion. "It shows us what we seek... or what seeks us." The air grew warmer, heavier with the scent of ripe fruit and fermenting wine. Aurora touched the Heartstone Pendant again, and this time it pulsed with gentle warmth against her palm. "Dymas," she whispered. "I can feel it through the pendant." "The realm of Gluttony bleeds through here," Isolde confirmed. "Prince Belphegor's influence reaches far. The Fae Courts and Hel have long maintained... agreements." Aurora's hand moved to the Fae-Forged Blade secured at her hip, a gift from Isolde that she was still learning to use. Its moonsilver surface was cool even through the leather sheath. "Will we need this?" she asked. "One always needs protection when walking between worlds," Isolde replied cryptically. They came to a clearing where standing stones formed a perfect circle. Unlike the stones at the grove's entrance, these were not oak but something crystalline, embedded with what looked like frozen flames. At the center of the circle stood a table laden with a feast—fruits Aurora had never seen, wines in decanters that shifted colors like mood rings, and pastries that steamed despite there being no obvious source of heat. "Do not eat," Nyx warned sharply. "Accepting Fae hospitality without understanding the terms is dangerous." Isolde's lips curved in a smile. "Wise counsel from one who exists between states," she said. "The feast is not meant for consumption but for communion. It is how we will speak with the Emissary." "Emissary?" Aurora asked. "From where?" "From Dymas," Isolde replied, approaching the table. "You seek knowledge of the Helrealms' intentions as the solstice approaches. The Emissary can provide insight—for a price." Aurora felt uneasy. Her experiences with Hel's representatives had rarely ended well. She remembered the crimson-robed reflection in the pool and wondered if it was a warning. Nyx seemed to share her concerns. They moved closer to Aurora, their shadowy form solidifying slightly as if preparing for confrontation. "What price would this Emissary demand?" Aurora asked. "That depends on what you ask," Isolde said, arranging items on the table in some pattern that made sense only to her. "But it is always proportionate. A small secret for a small truth. A great sacrifice for a great revelation." The air in the clearing began to thicken and swirl. The amber light intensified, and the standing stones began to hum at a frequency that made Aurora's teeth ache. She felt the Heartstone Pendant growing warmer against her skin, nearly hot enough to burn. "It begins," Isolde said, stepping back from the table. "The Veil parts." The space above the feast table shimmered like heat rising from pavement in summer. Colors bent and twisted, forming a tear in reality itself. Through it, Aurora caught glimpses of sprawling vineyards, magnificent feasting halls, and kitchens where chefs worked at massive stoves. Dymas—the realm of Gluttony—revealed in fragmentary images. A figure began to coalesce from the tear. At first just a silhouette, then gradually filling with substance and color. A tall, elegant person with skin the deep red-brown of wine and eyes that glittered like amber gemstones. They wore robes that seemed to be made from liquid gold, and around their neck hung a pendant that mirrored Aurora's Heartstone, though larger and more elaborate. "Ah," the figure said, voice rich and melodious. "Visitors from the mortal fold. And the exiled seer." They nodded to Isolde. "It has been some time since you called upon Dymas." "Circumstances demand unusual alliances," Isolde replied. The Emissary's gaze fixed on Aurora, studying her with unsettling intensity. "You wear our token," they said, gesturing to the pendant. "Yet you are not contracted to our realm." Aurora's hand closed protectively around the Heartstone. "It was given to me. I don't know by whom." "Interesting," the Emissary said, smiling to reveal teeth like polished carnelian. "Nothing from Dymas is ever truly given. It is always... invested. A transaction awaiting completion." Nyx moved slightly forward, placing themselves between Aurora and the Emissary. "We seek information, not entanglements," they said, their whisper-voice somehow carrying with unexpected authority. The Emissary laughed, a sound like crystal glasses clinking in toast. "Says the shadow bound by its own failed ritual." They gestured expansively at the feast. "Everything is an entanglement, dear Shade. The question is merely what terms you find acceptable." Aurora stepped forward, one hand still on her pendant, the other resting on the hilt of her Fae blade. The juxtaposition wasn't lost on the Emissary, whose eyes narrowed at the sight of the weapon. "What can you tell us about the solstice ritual?" she asked. "Why is Hel so interested in the weakening of the Veil this year specifically?" The Emissary's smile widened, revealing more teeth than seemed possible in a human mouth. "Ah, you ask the expensive questions, little mortal. What are you prepared to offer in exchange?"
created_at"2026-02-17T01:47:03.633111+00:00" 2/17/2026, 1:47:03 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
1"Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]"
2"Nyx warned sharply [sharply]"
3"They gestured expansively [expansively]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.588
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
71.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"intensely"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count2
5
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"cautiously"
2"intensely"
3"sharply"
4"slightly"
5"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"affection"
count1
4
word"otherworldly"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"wavered"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"crystalline"
count1
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"whisper"
2"familiar"
3"affection"
4"otherworldly"
5"chill"
6"wavered"
7"pulsed"
8"perfect"
9"crystalline"
10"shimmered"
11"intensity"
12"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences90
matches
0"felt uneasy"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1400
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions75
wordCount1018
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.96
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae5
Grove1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone5
Pendant3
Hel2
Isolde16
Rory1
December1
Nyx7
Aldric1
Aurora20
Dymas2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Gluttony1
Emissary6
persons
0"Hel"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
3"December"
4"Nyx"
5"Aurora"
6"Blade"
7"Gluttony"
8"Emissary"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Fae-Forged"
globalScore0.518
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount9
matches
0"trees that seemed to bend toward each other like guardians at a gate"
1"petals that seemed to be made of glass"
2"looked like polished obsidian"
3"robes that seemed to flow like wine"
4"path that seemed to appear before them and vanish behind them"
5"looked like frozen flames"
6"as if preparing for confrontation"
7"robes that seemed to be made from liquid gold, and around their neck hung a pendant that mirrored Aurora's Heartstone, though larger and more elaborate"
8"seemed possible in a human mouth"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.857
wordCount1400
matches
0"not the shadowy form they currently wore but a man in 17th-century clothing"
1"not just her present self but glimpses of"
2"not oak but something crystalline, embedded with what looked like frozen"
3"not meant for consumption but for communion"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"noticed that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean30.43
std16.63
cv0.546
sampleLengths
058
132
230
340
426
539
661
737
835
943
1017
1140
1215
139
1427
1572
1622
1731
1810
1923
2032
216
2211
2371
2415
2535
265
2725
2827
2921
308
3141
3244
3312
3450
3565
3631
376
3829
3917
4026
4125
4241
4335
4425
4530
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs196
matches
0"was walking"
1"was still learning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences110
ratio0.064
matches
0"The transition was subtle—one moment she was walking among the ordinary oaks of Richmond Park, and the next she had passed between two ancient, twisted trees that seemed to bend toward each other like guardians at a gate."
1"This was different—Fae territory."
2"The half-Fae seer spoke in riddles, and though she couldn't lie—a compulsion of her heritage—she could certainly mislead."
3"When they leaned over it, their reflection showed not the shadowy form they currently wore but a man in 17th-century clothing—Aldric, their human form from long ago."
4"The canopy above had shifted too—what had seemed like ordinary daylight filtering through leaves was now revealed to be an amber sky, reminiscent of descriptions she'd heard of Dymas."
5"At the center of the circle stood a table laden with a feast—fruits Aurora had never seen, wines in decanters that shifted colors like mood rings, and pastries that steamed despite there being no obvious source of heat."
6"Dymas—the realm of Gluttony—revealed in fragmentary images."
98.58% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1033
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.041626331074540175
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.01936108422071636
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean12.73
std6.44
cv0.506
sampleLengths
011
138
29
313
415
54
612
714
84
924
1016
1114
1212
1314
147
1518
167
1712
1813
1915
2014
2122
2215
239
2415
2511
2616
2727
286
2911
305
3115
322
332
3416
3515
369
3712
3815
3919
4011
4113
4229
4312
4410
4514
4617
473
487
499
77.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4909090909090909
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences79
matches
0"she whispered, touching the Heartstone"
1"It remained cool against her"
2"they said, voice barely a"
3"She moved without disturbing a"
4"It chimed softly at her"
5"She nodded toward Nyx"
6"Her own reflection wavered and"
7"she asked, touching the crescent-shaped"
8"They moved deeper into the"
9"Their bark glittered with embedded"
10"Its moonsilver surface was cool"
11"They came to a clearing"
12"Her experiences with Hel's representatives"
13"She remembered the crimson-robed reflection"
14"They moved closer to Aurora,"
15"She felt the Heartstone Pendant"
16"They wore robes that seemed"
17"They nodded to Isolde"
18"they said, gesturing to the"
19"they said, their whisper-voice somehow"
ratio0.266
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences79
matches
0"Aurora shivered as she crossed"
1"The transition was subtle—one moment"
2"The air changed, becoming sweeter"
3"she whispered, touching the Heartstone"
4"It remained cool against her"
5"This was different—Fae territory."
6"Nyx moved beside her, their"
7"they said, voice barely a"
8"The third member of their"
9"She moved without disturbing a"
10"Isolde said, her pale lavender"
11"A pause, then"
12"Rory wasn't sure if that"
13"The half-Fae seer spoke in"
14"Aurora said, because it was"
15"The further they ventured into"
16"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion"
17"Blues and purples dominated, but"
18"Butterfly-like creatures with wings of"
19"Aurora asked, reaching out to"
ratio0.924
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The transition was subtle—one moment she was walking among the ordinary oaks of Richmond Park, and the next she had passed between two ancient, twisted trees th…"
1"They moved deeper into the grove, following a path that seemed to appear before them and vanish behind them."
2"At the center of the circle stood a table laden with a feast—fruits Aurora had never seen, wines in decanters that shifted colors like mood rings, and pastries …"
3"They moved closer to Aurora, their shadowy form solidifying slightly as if preparing for confrontation."
4"They wore robes that seemed to be made from liquid gold, and around their neck hung a pendant that mirrored Aurora's Heartstone, though larger and more elaborat…"
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"they said, voice barely a whisper on the breeze"
1"the figure said, voice rich and melodious"
2"the Emissary said, smiling to reveal teeth like polished carnelian"
3"they said, their whisper-voice somehow carrying with unexpected authority"
57.41% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags27
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde explained (explain)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"Isolde confirmed (confirm)"
4"Nyx warned sharply (warn)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.529
leniency1
rawRatio0.185
effectiveRatio0.185
66.3971%