Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDVYW1CH80NTD3QZPDBAH

Run Details

Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.003005
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the shimmering portal, her boots sinking into the soft moss beyond the ancient oak standing stones. The air felt different here—charged and alive, like the moment before a summer storm. Her eyes widened as she took in the alien beauty of the Fae grove. Ropy vines snaked up the gnarled trunks of hoary ash and elder trees, their silvery leaves whispering secrets to the cool breeze. The sky above swirled with hues of lavender and pearl, an ethereal twilight that seemed to breathe with a luminance all its own. Wildflowers in jewel tones of sapphire, emerald, and ruby carpeted the grove, releasing a heady perfume. Nyx emerged from the portal behind her in a swirl of shadow, coalescing into a roughly humanoid form. "This place... it's not quite Earth, is it?" they mused, their voice like a murmur carried on the wind. "A fold between realms, if I'm not mistaken." Aurora nodded, still absorbing the wonder of it all. Her hand strayed to the Heartstone pendant that nestled beneath her shirt, its crimson depths pulsing faintly with warmth. "I've never seen anything like it. Not even in my dreams." As they ventured deeper, the unearthly landscape shifted and changed. Glowing fungi studded the bark of the trees, shedding an eerie bioluminescence that dappled the forest floor. The very air seemed to thrum with latent magic that tingled across Aurora's skin, making the fine hairs on her arms stand on end. A sound floated through the trees then, a lilting melody that wove through the whispering leaves. It was achingly beautiful, the song of the grove given voice. Aurora found herself drawn inexorably towards it, her feet moving of their own volition. Nyx flowed alongside her, an inky shadow that slipped over roots and stones with sinuous grace. They emerged into a hidden glade where wildflowers grew in riotous abundance, tended by the figure at its heart. She sang as she worked, her voice twining with the magic that saturated this place. Hair like spun moonlight cascaded to her waist, shimmering in time to the haunting aria. As the song faded, the woman turned towards them, her pale lavender eyes finding Aurora's unerringly. They were bottomless, those eyes, shot through with whorls of starlight and secrets. There was a soft chime of magic and then she was before them, uncanny and ageless. "Welcome, Aurora Carter and Nyx of the Shadows," she greeted, her voice like honey andgetIntsteel. "I am Isolde Varga, keeper of this sacred glade. What brings you to my domain?" Aurora exchanged a glance with Nyx before replying. "We seek answers. The Veil weakens and darkness stirs in the spaces between. I was given this—" she revealed the Heartstone pendant, "—and told to find you." Isolde's eyes flickered to the pulsing gemstone, something ancient and knowing passing through her gaze. "The Heartstone of Dymas. I have not seen its like in many a mortal lifetime." A slender hand emerged from the folds of her cloak to gently touch the pendant, and for a heartbeat, the crimson light within flared like an ember fanned to life. "You have been chosen by forces unseen to walk this path, Aurora Carter. A nexus point upon which the fate of many will turn." The seer's voice took on a singsong cadence, the words tumbling from her lips in a waterfall of prophecy. "Two paths lie before you: one of shadow, one of light. The blade will guide your hand, the whispered secrets shape your fate. Beware the Craven King and seek the nightwhisper's aid." Isolde reached into the depths of her cloak, withdrawing a moonsilver dagger that seemed to ripple and dance in the dimness. She held it out to Aurora hilt-first, the blade gleaming like liquid starlight. "Take this, child. You will have need of it in the times to come." Unsure what else to do, Aurora wrapped her fingers around the hilt, nearly hissing at the biting cold that seared her skin. Beside her, Nyx drifted closer, an intangible darkness edged in faintly glowing violet. "The nightwhisper," they murmured. "Me." Isolde inclined her head in affirmation. "The Shadow that walks between worlds. A guide to light the darkness." Aurora shook her head, overwhelmed by the weight of it all. The prophecy. The blade. The implications that her life was no longer her own. "I'm just a delivery girl from London," she protested weakly. "I'm not... I can't be who you say I am." The seer's expression softened then, and she reached out to brush a strand of raven hair from Aurora's face with a gentleness that ached. "We are more than the sum of our past, child. More than the boxes the world tries to place us in. You will find your path in time—of that, I have no doubt." With those parting words, Isolde began to fade, her form dissolving into eddies of moonlight and petals until only the grove remained. Aurora stood there for a long moment, staring down at the dagger in her hand as though it were a snake poised to strike. Nyx drifted around to face her, an undulating shadow against the riot of blooms. "She speaks in riddles," they said slowly, "but the Fae cannot lie. There is truth in her words, even if the meaning is obscured." Aurora nodded jerkily, slipping the blade into her jacket with care. It felt as though it had been forged of ice, burning against her skin even through the layers of fabric. Her gaze strayed to the pendant nestled in the hollow of her throat, its crimson depths pulsing with a heartbeat all its own. "We should go back," she said at last, the words heavy on her tongue. "I need... I need time to process all of this." Wordlessly, Nyx flowed towards the oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove. With a shiver of magic, they slipped between the cracks of the world, emerging once more into the mundane tranquility of Richmond Park. Aurora followed in their wake, each step a leaden thing. As the portal closed behind them with a breath of cold starlight, Aurora turned her face to the night sky. The stars were diamond-bright against the void, an ocean of distant fire undimmed by the lights of the city. Somewhere up there, beyond the Veil, the Fae Courts waited and watched. And on Earth, unbeknownst to mortals, the threads of a prophecy began to weave themselves around one Aurora Carter—a nexus point in the tapestry of fate.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she protested weakly [weakly]"
1"they said slowly [slowly]"
63.4703% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1095
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"inexorably"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"inexorably"
2"slowly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.0731% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1095
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"tapestry"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"uncanny"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"tapestry"
2"flickered"
3"gleaming"
4"uncanny"
5"weight"
6"dance"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
29.5686% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean43.56
std11.04
cv0.253
sampleLengths
047
161
245
339
451
557
649
745
830
935
1060
1143
1232
1348
1440
1518
1645
1757
1846
1938
2054
2124
2248
2351
2426
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"been forged"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount836
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03110047846889952
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.01674641148325359
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean16.5
std8.15
cv0.494
sampleLengths
019
114
214
322
423
516
618
719
88
99
1019
1111
1210
1317
1424
1516
1611
1714
1816
1919
2015
2115
2216
2313
2416
2515
2615
278
2827
2915
3045
3143
3232
3321
3413
3514
3622
3713
384
391
406
4112
4211
432
442
4510
4610
4710
4824
4933
68.6869% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4393939393939394
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners29
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she greeted, her voice like honey andgetIntsteel (greet)"
1"revealed (reveal)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"she protested weakly (protest weakly)"
4"they said slowly (say slowly)"
77.6483%