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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDYD2YT0WRQS4SN906RKJ
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
15.7s
Cost:
$0.001350
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape, her sharp jaw set against the chilled underground air. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden was a far cry from the bustling markets it once hosted. Now, it served as the
clandestine
meeting point for those who dabbled in the arcane, a place known as the Veil Market. But tonight, it was a crime scene, the air heavy with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic and foul. Her worn leather
watch
ticked methodically on her left wrist as she descended the staircase, each step
echoing
in the hollow space. The walls
were lined
with graffiti, a chaotic
mosaic
of tags and symbols, some of which sent an unsettling shiver down her spine. She had seen enough in her 18 years of service to know that not all of it was mere vandalism. At the bottom of the stairs, the platform was a hive of activity. Uniformed officers milled about, their faces a mix of curiosity and unease. In the center of it all was her colleague, Eva Kowalski, Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher. Eva's curly red hair
was tied
back, highlighting her round glasses and freckled complexion. She
was speaking
with an officer, her voice steady despite the nervous habit of tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear. Harlow approached, her bearing that of military precision, a
stark
contrast to the disarray around her. "Kowalski," she greeted, her brown eyes scanning the scene. Eva turned, relief washing over her face. "Quinn, thank goodness. I wasn't sure who else to call." "What have we got?" Harlow asked, her gaze falling on the body sprawled on the ground, a bone token—the entry requirement for the Veil Market—clutched in the victim's lifeless hand. "Male, late thirties, no identification," Eva began, her satchel of books a
testament
to her expertise. "Cause of death is unclear. No visible wounds, but there's a strange patina on his skin—verdigris, like on old brass." Harlow crouched beside the body, her keen eyes tracing the contours of the greenish hue that
seemed to
radiate from the man's pores. She had seen something similar once, years ago, on her former partner, DS Morris, the night he vanished. "Anything else?" Eva hesitated, then reached into her satchel, producing a small brass compass. "This was found near the victim. It's
etched
with protective sigils, and the needle points... well, it doesn't point north." Harlow took the compass, feeling the
weight
of its significance. "A Veil Compass," she murmured,
watch
ing as the needle
quivered
, oscillating between two points. "It leads to supernatural rifts." "Exactly," Eva said, her green eyes reflecting the grim understanding between them. "I think whatever happened here is beyond our usual scope." Harlow stood, her mind racing. The evidence was scant, yet the implications were staggering. She turned to the officers. "I want this entire station canvased. Look for anything out of the ordinary." As the officers dispersed, Harlow's attention returned to the compass. She followed its erratic movement, her instincts guiding her along the deserted platform to a wall marred by a fresh scar in the graffiti. It was a portal, she realized, the edges still pulsing with a faint,
otherworldly
light. Eva joined her, her eyes wide behind her glasses. "You see it too, don't you?" Harlow nodded, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "This is where he came through. Or where he was meant to go." She turned to Eva, a
newfound
resolve hardening her features. "I need you to help me understand what we're dealing with. Can you do that?" "Of course," Eva replied without hesitation. "I'll start cross-referencing the symbols in the graffiti with the archives. There might be a connection." Harlow's gaze lingered on the body once more. The supernatural origins of this crime were unmistakable,
echoes
of a case long thought buried. But now, with the Veil Compass in her hand and the rift at her back, she
was beginning
to see what others had missed. The Veil Market was more than a black market—it was a nexus, a convergence of worlds that could no longer be ignored. She took a deep breath, the
weight
of her responsibility settling on her shoulders like the worn leather of her
watch
band. detective Harlow Quinn was no stranger to the darkness that lurked beyond the veil of the ordinary, and she would not rest until she uncovered the truth, not just for the sake of the victim, but for the partner she had lost, and the city she had sworn to protect. The investigation had taken a turn into the shadows, and as Harlow Quinn stepped forward, it was
clear that her
journey had only just begun.
created_at
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2/17/2026, 1:46:41 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
87.3737%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
792
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
792
totalAiIsms
12
found
0
word
"testament"
count
1
1
word
"mosaic"
count
1
2
word
"quivered"
count
1
3
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
4
word
"clandestine"
count
1
5
word
"stark"
count
1
6
word
"newfound"
count
1
7
word
"weight"
count
2
8
word
"echoes"
count
1
9
word
"echoing"
count
1
10
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"testament"
1
"mosaic"
2
"quivered"
3
"otherworldly"
4
"clandestine"
5
"stark"
6
"newfound"
7
"weight"
8
"echoes"
9
"echoing"
10
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
40
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
40
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
50
matches
0
"clear that her"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
19
mean
41.37
std
20.75
cv
0.502
sampleLengths
0
78
1
65
2
80
3
25
4
17
5
30
6
36
7
43
8
32
9
29
10
22
11
32
12
49
13
15
14
46
15
22
16
69
17
71
18
25
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
40
matches
0
"were lined"
1
"was tied"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
98
matches
0
"was speaking"
1
"was beginning"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
644
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
16
adverbRatio
0.024844720496894408
lyAdverbCount
5
lyAdverbRatio
0.007763975155279503
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
50
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
50
mean
15.72
std
8.14
cv
0.518
sampleLengths
0
17
1
17
2
22
3
22
4
22
5
23
6
20
7
13
8
12
9
18
10
14
11
23
12
16
13
9
14
7
15
10
16
30
17
16
18
20
19
23
20
18
21
2
22
12
23
20
24
10
25
14
26
5
27
12
28
10
29
5
30
9
31
5
32
13
33
10
34
24
35
15
36
9
37
6
38
8
39
23
40
15
41
6
42
16
43
8
44
15
45
24
46
22
47
21
48
50
49
25
83.3333%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.5
totalSentences
50
uniqueOpeners
25
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"she greeted, her brown eyes scanning the scene (greet, scan)"
1
"Eva began, her satchel of books a testament to her expertise (begin, book)"
2
"she murmured, watching as the needle quivered, oscillating between two points (murmur, watch quiver, oscillate)"
3
"Eva said, her green eyes reflecting the grim understanding between them (say, reflect)"
87.0024%