Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMME0E8RBVEWGJCG7FZ33S3

Run Details

Duration:
34.2s
Cost:
$0.000555
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the edge of the abandoned Tube station platform, the toes of her sensible leather boots just shy of the yellow caution tape. Her sharp gaze swept over the scene, cataloging details. The stench of decay and musty air filled her nostrils. Below, nested in the tangled realm of tunnels and tracks, lay the body. Or what remained of it. The flash of forensic cameras punctuated the gloom as the crime scene techs worked. But it wasn't the grim tableau that had brought Harlow to this forgotten corner of the Underground. It was the phone call. The one from her CI, whispering desperate words of forbidden magic and cover-ups. Her partner, or rather, the detective who'd been assigned to babysit her, clattered up, his breath coming hard. Good ol' Detective Morris. The brass thought if they paired her with the Boy Scout, some of his obedience might rub off. If only they knew. "Quinn," he panted, bending to rest his hands on his knees. "What's this about a ... what did you say? Secret underground market?" She didn't acknowledge him, instead pulling on a pair of latex gloves and crouching to examine a shred of cloth caught on a rusting nail. "The Veil Market," she corrected, her voice finding that flat affect she reserved for aftermaths and morons. "And this isn't it. This is where it was." "What do you mean 'was'?" Morris asked, uncertainty twitching in his tone. Rising, Harlow glanced at the markings on the wall, a series of arcane symbols carved deep. "The market moves every full moon. Which is tonight." She checked her watch. "In about two hours." "And you know this because...?" "Because," Harlow said, easing down the ladder bolted to the wall, "unlike you, I do my homework." She landed on the ballast with a crunch of gravel, very aware that Morris hadn't followed. Bending, she opened her satchel and retrieved a small brass compass. The face was etched with protective sigils, the needle trembling as it sought the nearest supernatural rift or portal. With a practiced flick of her wrist, she released it, the patina of verdigris lighting up with an eerie glow. "Quinn," Morris called down, his voice edged with nerves and something else. Something oily and ingrained. Fear, she realized. The man was scared shitless. "What the hell are you doing?" "Looking for the truth," she murmured, but not for him. For herself. For the screams buried in her marrow. For the eyes that had seen too much and the hands that had done worse. Ignoring Morris's squawking and the shouted warnings of the forensics team, she followed the needle, winding through the maze of tunnels. The comms on her vest started to glitch, static washing through the feed. Typical. Up ahead, a shimmer—not like a heat mirage but its opposite. Harlow unsnapped the holster on her belt, resting her palm on the worn grip of her pistol. She resisted the urge to call out for Morris. He wouldn't come. Not here. Not where the shadows ate the light and left behind the barely tasted remains. She stepped through the rift, her body convulsing as her nerves shorted out. Dropping to one knee, she breathed through the electric pain searing up her spine. A coppery taste filled her mouth, the air thick with the stink of ozone and something older. More primal. More... "Detective Harlow Quinn," a voice purred, and the hair on the back of her neck stood on end. "We've been expecting you." Sharia/resources * WARNING: SPOILERS AHEAD * * The following scene uses the provided codex entries to set up a mystery story. It hinges on a detective discovering clues pointing to a supernatural element to a crime scene. I don't know the full details of the backstory, but some key elements include: * - The setting is an abandoned Underground station that used to house an underground supernatural market * - The detective is following up on a tip from a CI about the market's involvement * - She is teamed with an uneasy partner who doesn't believe in the supernatural * - The detective uses a Veil Compass to navigate the supernatural energies and find a portal/rift leading to the market * - When she crosses through, she's met by someone (possibly the antagonist) who has been expecting her The goal would be to end the scene on this cliffhanger note, leaving the reader eager to know what happens next between the detective and whoever is running the Veil Market. The sensory details ground the reader in the eerie setting, while the interactions with her partner hint at a larger supernatural mystery.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount767
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount767
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"searing"
count1
4
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"etched"
2"electric"
3"searing"
4"navigate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences52
matches
0"was scared"
60.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"tries to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences58
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen109
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords780
ratio0
matches(empty)
97.22% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Dropping to one knee, she breathed through the electric pain searing up her spine."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount704
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Morris"
discoveredNames
Harlow5
Quinn1
Tube1
Underground2
Boy1
Scout1
Morris5
Rising1
Bending1
Veil2
Compass1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"Market"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
71.79% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.282
wordCount780
matches
0"not like a heat mirage but its opposite"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean43.33
std27.74
cv0.64
sampleLengths
064
149
244
323
451
512
633
75
833
950
1030
1134
1235
1356
1447
1522
16139
1753
85.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences52
matches
0"been assigned"
1"was etched"
2"is teamed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
44.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences58
ratio0.034
matches
0"Up ahead, a shimmer—not like a heat mirage but its opposite."
1"* - The setting is an abandoned Underground station that used to house an underground supernatural market * - The detective is following up on a tip from a CI about the market's involvement * - She is teamed with an uneasy partner who doesn't believe in the supernatural * - The detective uses a Veil Compass to navigate the supernatural energies and find a portal/rift leading to the market * - When she crosses through, she's met by someone (possibly the antagonist) who has been expecting her The goal would be to end the scene on this cliffhanger note, leaving the reader eager to know what happens next between the detective and whoever is running the Veil Market."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount178
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.016853932584269662
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences58
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences58
mean13.45
std15.59
cv1.159
sampleLengths
027
19
210
313
45
514
617
75
813
918
104
1118
124
1311
1412
1525
1617
179
1812
1916
2013
214
225
2333
2411
2519
2620
2712
284
293
305
316
3210
332
347
3515
3621
3713
381
3911
4017
419
423
432
4414
4513
4614
4717
482
491
89.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5862068965517241
totalSentences58
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences46
matches
0"Her sharp gaze swept over"
1"It was the phone call."
2"Her partner, or rather, the"
3"he panted, bending to rest"
4"She didn't acknowledge him, instead"
5"she corrected, her voice finding"
6"She checked her watch"
7"she murmured, but not for"
8"She resisted the urge to"
9"He wouldn't come."
10"She stepped through the rift,"
11"It hinges on a detective"
12"I don't know the full"
ratio0.283
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences46
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
1"Her sharp gaze swept over"
2"The stench of decay and"
3"The flash of forensic cameras"
4"It was the phone call."
5"The one from her CI,"
6"Her partner, or rather, the"
7"The brass thought if they"
8"he panted, bending to rest"
9"She didn't acknowledge him, instead"
10"she corrected, her voice finding"
11"Morris asked, uncertainty twitching in"
12"She checked her watch"
13"Harlow said, easing down the"
14"The face was etched with"
15"Morris called down, his voice"
16"Something oily and ingrained."
17"The man was scared shitless."
18"she murmured, but not for"
19"The comms on her vest"
ratio0.696
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"If only they knew."
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"* - The setting is an abandoned Underground station that used to house an underground supernatural market * - The detective is following up on a tip from a CI a…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he panted, bending to rest his hands on his knees"
1"Morris asked, uncertainty twitching in his tone"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he panted (pant)"
1"she corrected (correct)"
2"Morris called down (call dow)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.571
83.6260%