| 85.7143% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Harlow said, easing down the ladder bolted to the wall, She landed on the ballast with a crunch of gravel, very aware that Morris hadn't followed [very]" |
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| 86.9792% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 768 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.9375% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 768 | | totalAiIsms | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "searing" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "navigate" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 43.33 | | std | 27.74 | | cv | 0.64 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 139 | | 17 | 53 |
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| 94.8718% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "been assigned" | | 1 | "was etched" | | 2 | "is teamed" |
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| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 696 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.015804597701149427 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005747126436781609 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 58 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 58 | | mean | 13.45 | | std | 15.59 | | cv | 1.159 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 89.0805% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.5862068965517241 | | totalSentences | 58 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he panted, bending to rest his hands on his knees (pant, bend rest)" | | 1 | "she corrected, her voice finding that flat affect she reserved for aftermaths and morons (correct, find reserve)" | | 2 | "Harlow said, easing down the ladder bolted to the wall, She landed on the ballast with a crunch of gravel, very aware that Morris hadn't followed (say, ease bolt land does not follow)" | | 3 | "Morris called down, his voice edged with nerves and something else (call down, edge)" | | 4 | "she murmured, but not for him (murmur)" | | 5 | "a voice purred, and the hair on the back of her neck stood on end (pur, stand)" |
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