| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 77.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 890 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 890 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "lilt" | | 2 | "sanctuary" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "otherworldly" | | 8 | "crystalline" | | 9 | "echoes" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "charged" | | 15 | "potential" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 896 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.18% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 716 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 11 | | Isolde | 11 | | December | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Fae | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Courts | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.732 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift in the failing light" | | 1 | "purples that seemed to pulse with their own light, blues that shimmered like captured starlight, whites so pure they hurt to look at directly" | | 2 | "figure that seemed to be made of light and mist, walking a parallel path before fading away" | | 3 | "symbols that seemed to move when viewed directly" | | 4 | "felt like standing in the eye of a stor" |
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| 88.39% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.116 | | wordCount | 896 | | matches | | 0 | "not stars but swirling patterns of light" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 38.96 | | std | 20.2 | | cv | 0.519 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 82 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 60 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 30 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 122 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 54 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition was subtle at first – a change in the quality of light, as if the sun had moved position in the sky." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors – deep purples that seemed to pulse with their own light, blues that shimmered like captured starlight, whites so pure they hurt to look at directly." | | 2 | "As they watched, the crystals chimed softly and changed color, shifting from deep amber to pale lavender – the same shade as Isolde's eyes." | | 3 | "As if in response to her words, Aurora caught a glimpse of movement in her peripheral vision – a figure that seemed to be made of light and mist, walking a parallel path before fading away." | | 4 | "Through the gaps between the stones, she caught glimpses of other landscapes – sun-drenched vineyards under an amber sky that might have been Dymas, crystalline forests that had to be the Fae Courts, and places she had no names for." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 717 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.03905160390516039 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01394700139470014 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 54 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 54 | | mean | 16.59 | | std | 8.02 | | cv | 0.483 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 40 |
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| 85.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5370370370370371 | | totalSentences | 54 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the very air seemed" | | 1 | "Somewhere in the distance, wind" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Their whisper-voice seemed to blend" | | 1 | "They followed a path that" | | 2 | "she started to ask, but" | | 3 | "They pressed deeper into the" | | 4 | "Her gaze flickered to Aurora's" | | 5 | "It felt like standing in" | | 6 | "she said, understanding dawning" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 79.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant against Aurora's chest" | | 1 | "Nyx moved like liquid shadow" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her voice carrying" | | 3 | "Aurora's fingers found the crescent" | | 4 | "The air between the stones" | | 5 | "The transition was subtle at" | | 6 | "Aurora's ears popped, and when" | | 7 | "The grove opened before them" | | 8 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 9 | "The trees here were ancient" | | 10 | "Aurora whispered, surprised to find" | | 11 | "Each breath carried notes of" | | 12 | "Nyx drifted forward, their violet" | | 13 | "Their whisper-voice seemed to blend" | | 14 | "They followed a path that" | | 15 | "Aurora noticed that while her" | | 16 | "The Fae-forged blade at Aurora's" | | 17 | "Nyx said, indicating a cluster" | | 18 | "Isolde explained, though her tone" | | 19 | "The pendant at her throat" |
| | ratio | 0.762 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant against Aurora's chest grew warm as they approached the ancient oak stones, their weathered surfaces etched with spiraling patterns that seemed to s…" | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors – deep purples that seemed to pulse with their own light, blues that shimmered like captured starlight, whi…" | | 2 | "They followed a path that hadn't been visible until they stepped upon it, stones that gleamed like mother-of-pearl appearing beneath their feet." | | 3 | "As if in response to her words, Aurora caught a glimpse of movement in her peripheral vision – a figure that seemed to be made of light and mist, walking a para…" | | 4 | "Above them, the twilight canopy seemed to part, revealing not stars but swirling patterns of light that might have been another world's sky." | | 5 | "Through the gaps between the stones, she caught glimpses of other landscapes – sun-drenched vineyards under an amber sky that might have been Dymas, crystalline…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice carrying the lilt of centuries" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered, surprised to find it true" | | 2 | "Isolde explained, though her tone suggested there was more she wasn't saying" | | 3 | "she said, understanding dawning" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 2 | "she started (start)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.45 | | leniency | 0.9 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.3 | |